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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

dear freind jenni i think your tomorrow is not come
where is the update
this time i am very angry with you
and want to kill you right now
jenni where are you
you are going lazy day by day

i will kill for not updating so long
if you will not update today



ha ha adi sweety...actually yesterday was my farewell party sooo..ok
i know i always give silly reasons........
sorry sorry sorry dont get angry buddy.....and ya you no am typing plz dont kill me (i no u wont am ur chweet frnd nah) 😉
thats right am very very lazy fellow...i will post the next part in the evening itself
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur



ha ha adi sweety...actually yesterday was my farewell party sooo..ok
i know i always give silly reasons........
sorry sorry sorry dont get angry buddy.....and ya you no am typing plz dont kill me (i no u wont am ur chweet frnd nah) 😉
thats right am very very lazy fellow...i will post the next part in the evening itself

well
don't give me any reason
i just need the update
but your are my swwetest friend so i will leave you 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

part 11(a)😉

"Happiness is what I feel when I am with you and complete is what I feel when you are with me."

nupur what have you done?

Bhaya..i haven't done it with my own knowledge

Isnt that reason, you cant find it silly of your own in front of all you are you have gotten up your worst words nupur

Bhaya she looked around where he could find her brother silently tears were flowing on her cheeks

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Nupur tried to make the situation easier tried to make a call to mayank just than she realized she is not having his contact number till next day she should wait.she know it was her fault she should make it right

Next day

Nupur went to the principals office were she found samrat, mayank and gunjan together ,She entered in with the principals permission

princi-So nupur what have you decided

Sir actually

Mayank continued before she could finish..sir I would prefer dia?and me Sammy and gunjan are going sir,is that okay for you Sammy..he asked looking at nupur

Haan mayank but

gunjan-Hey guys wait let nupur answer

I will go with them sir I will participate in this competition

princi-Are you sure,Yes sir so you 4 are going to attend this meet for 1 week its overall colleges going to participate good luck to you guys

Thank you sir all said in chorous...were nupur were struggling out of her own fear...

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All came out of the office, nupur went straight to her brother..he never left her come alone to the college , but today he came without even bothering about her..

Bhaya..

He who continued turned to see her said look at nupur and said am bit busy so lets talk later bye she saw 3 of them moving to their classes?she was feeling lonelier

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nupur was seated alone in the back stage holding on her books thinking on how to make them understand..its not the talk of , she was disturbed out of her thoughts..hearing a voice nearer her,

Mayank she said louder in a bit surprised to see him there

so what were you planning for nupur
what ??planning ??i cant get u mayank
whom are going to hurt...who is in your next list
mayank she said with a shock and tears forming unkowingly, she went behind him as he went started to move from there she ran behind him said mayank listen...am..am really sorry...She tried to maintain his speed while walking said just listen to me mayank..once try to listen please

Nupur listen seeing you i just want convey a message, thats what i stand here seeing you , am not gonna disturb you and haa listen we are not even asking you to come but I cant guess what made you change your mind I will not disturb you anymore, you can take back your name,we can take dia with us...

Mayank please she hugged him as she was feeling more hurt,she cried loudly in his arms,mayank panicked a few minutes made her feel better by moving his hands on her shoulders,he stopped himself hardly from his action...he forcefully made himself move away from her...

went on keeping bigger steps ,without even turning back to have a look at her

She know gunjan is very much closer to him..the way she had mentioned it was different?she slowly opened her mouth said" am sorry mayank",but he was not there, he not even tried to console her..the way he moved her away from him made her guilty,she broke down crying badly on the place where were she was standing

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Almost after some 10 minuted there came gunjan who saw nupur crying badly sitting there went to her holded her shoulders

Nupur are you alright

She looked up with teary eyes to see gunjan asking her with full concern

She just hugged her tightly and cried out her heart for some long time?the way of her brothers behavior and mayanks rejection of her asking sorry made her feel so much?

Nupur common stop crying

She came out of the hug said with crying am sorry gunjan actually those were not to hurt you

That's ok baba just stop crying

But bhaya is not even talking with she said very childishly

I will make him understand dear..now common wipe off your tears,

they will talk with me ah
ofcourse they will talk with you dear... ok , now just Smile ?you know you look cute when you smile dear

With a smile she asked really am i looking good

Both smiled and hugged each other

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next part...2mrw i will upd 2mrw...hold on...to be continued...



Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
jeniiiiiiiiiiiiii

i m first to comment
😃 😃
but what is this yaar
ye update hai ya promo?
itna chota????????????
itna wait karwaya or itna chota update
its not fair yaar
but i loved this update
i m so angry on sam and mayu
at lest they would listen to her na?
pls sab kuch thik kar do
or kaal pakka update karogi na?
i m waiting
love u

😃
Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Jeni itna bada update- mujhe do din lagegi ye padne main.

i will comment later dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Jeni itna bada update- mujhe do din lagegi ye padne main.

i will comment later dear.

woow atlast i have given a biggg part...hi hi hi hi hi hi
sure i will wait for ur chweet comment honey
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Posted: 15 years ago

No its not small
its big enuogh.
i told u na- may be it will take 2/3 more days to read
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey jeni dear

awsome part

and have to agree farii

man i took me soooooooooooooooooo long to read it😆😆!

updft soon

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

jeniiiiiiiiiiiiii,
accha hua mujhe jaida comment likhna nehi hoga.lol
itna bada update dekh kar main tou khushi se pagal ho rahi hoon.
mere dil main tumhare liye itna sara pyar jag gaya itna bada update dekhkar.😡😡😡
oK now coming to ur update.
it was very nice and wonderful.-h very big also
so nups felt guilty for her behavior.
and she decided to go with them
She tried to apologize to all but nobody listen to her.

Maynk also ignore her.ye Mayank ko to main------ 😡😡

She cried badly.

Oh poor nups.

But what's the reason behind of her fears?

Waiting 4 ur next update.

And next time try to make it ---------------okkkkkk I think u understand it

take care buddy

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Posted: 15 years ago
am angry with sam and mayu..atleast they should hear our nupzi...nice updatedear...pls continue soon....

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