mayur ff-every day is spcl...pt 16 pg 129! - Page 54

it was too good update

kia yr jeni

nice update
par bohot chotu hai :)
pls update with a bigger one:)

Jenni i wanna ask some thing?

How much it will take you to update a little bit just a little bit longer part yaar.............. you know what now even i am thinking to update a smaller part this time.............😆

But jo bhi ho i liked this part, Mayank's anger towards Nupur i actually liked this
now u'll have to update soon and a little bit longer.............😛

nyc update...
Thanx 4 d pm.

i am crying yaar tapoor muje first comment karna tha

but i will comment first in next part

jenni yaar itna long update tha ke meri train miss ho gayi

i love the update jenni
atleast nupur ready to go with them
yaar they have to support her
but they are doing exatly opposite
totally jerk maynk and sam
but i love gunjna atleast she support nupur
soon update the next part ok

hey jeni

kitna bada update

shaya mujhe 1 week lagega padhne ke liye

wat is this jeni

any way lovely part

and plz update tmrw

love pebbzzuu

hey tumne bataya ki nupur ki bday prep honge..............but what happened yaar?............anyways nice part....................

Part 11(b)

To be continued...

Nupur nodded her head as gunjan was the only one who stands as full support and so she clenched on her, anyway Sammy haven't remind without talking with her, not even for 1 hour, he himself would come and talk not wanting her trouble herself, not matter how much mistakes she does but this time he haven't talked with her for the whole 2 days, she was saying constantly asking for forgiveness, he wasn't even considering at all,yet he is talking with mayank the greatest enemy of him whom she thought to avoid only for him now both are somewhat troubling her a lot..

Nupur get inside the car, just then she realized that she was standing outside thinking she sat inside and shut the door. She saw her brother taking up the driving job, mayanks hand came back to check the door of her side, he once pulled on whether its closed properly, he gave his cute dimple to gunjan, he haven't even once glanced her.

Gunjan when will we reach nupur asked her, she doesn't even bothered where they were going on?

It takes hardly 1 day travelling nupur..

Ohh there was big silence where none tried to talk with each other

Samrat stopped the car after some long travel where she noticed mayank and him interchanging their drive.They had started at 5.00 clock in the evening now its some 8.30, she saw mayank stopping the car before restaurant.He and Sammy got down both glanced at the girls as if they should understand.

Gunjan turned towards nupur said come lets go , you should be hungry enough after this long travel.

No gunjan you go am not feeling hungry am sure believe am not pretending

Gunjan blankly looked at Sammy and mayank then turned fine you guys go I will sit hear with nupur and give a company to her

Nupur looked at disbelief gunjan youuu go I will sit here alone.

Am sure if you are not coming then am not going to go

Nupur said acha am coming come both got down smiilngly ,followed mayank and samrat ..Journey continued, Nupur couldn't keep on the silence she just closed her eyes went on to the sleep

Nupur! Nupur! Wake up

She came out of her sleep lightly opening her eyes it was like her dream, where she found gunjan standing in front of her,she opened her eyes as she called out her name once again

Nupur get up

Just then she realized they were travelling and gunjan is standing outside , she rubbed out her eyes forcefully opened her mouth asked

We reached out the place huh

Oh not yet nupur

Then let me sleep

Ohh nupur car is in repair we are in our half the way

What she looked up at her asking came out of her deep sleep,What we gonna do now, she asked getting out of the car

That's what we are thinking of nupur

Where is bhaya and mayank , they are not here

Both thinking of a solution

Better we will go asking a lift from here

Nupur are you kidding look around its almost gonna be 12 who will give us lift and haan its hard to find vehicle here we are in the middle some forest kinda place

What ? she just then noted how much dark the place was,She hunged on to gunjan holding her hands don't leave me alone

Arey nupur am here and what are you afraid of

Actually am afraid of darkness..well its like Myctophobia ( fear of darkness)

Common nupur grow up are you not a kid to get frightened of darkness,

Come lets move

But where gunjan

mayank and samrar had made a small tent opposite to here its some 5 mins walk we will reach up there come lets go, just hold on to me you will not get afraid

Well its not really bad idea yet we can stay here in the car itself nah

Just come it seems elephants will be moving round in the night so its dangerous to stay here

What? you are giving me big big shocks gunjan, who told these informations to you

Nupur in shaking tone asked you said they both are here but they are not here see its too darker here.

I guess they had went to check us to the place where we are

Why cant they lighten up the place they can use some sticksand fire to bring light nah

Nupur stop it stay here for a second I will come now

Gunjan don't go am gonna kill you if you leave me alone

Gunjan

Gunjan

No voice came around she turned with tears to find all 3 standing, mayank was holding the cake In front of him with the candles blowing on…a big smile said they were holding on a surprise..tent was blowing up with the bright light were she found Sammy and gunjan standing near her…

surprise

happy birthday all 3 shouted as she cried hugging her brother who is standing near her,

isn't that stupid surprise is really needed, why didn't you talk with for whole 2 days

common nupur you're my chweet sister,please dont cry, stop crying... how can I control myself from talking with you, it is just mayanks bad idea

she gave an angry glare to him

he smilingly asked her sorry through his eyes

just to surprise you nupur

2 guys said sorry holding on their ears..

Nupur kidishly said don't ever do this again, I don't even remember my b'day how bad…guys had made a prank, i was totaly out of mind you she made a warning rasing her hand,,,,

From now on you cant forget your b'day right common cut the cake else mayank will eat it see how eagerly he is waiting said gunjan holding on a smile

She turned to see her brother, she happily smiled and blowed out the candles,she cut the cake and gave to Sammy and gunjan and they both gave it to her, she stopped it there mayank looked at her as he is waiting for her

Samrat said common nupur what did mayank did, he the one organized your full b'day bash surprise party,It was thrilling nah…

Before mayank opened his mouth to say something she pushed the small cake piece on his mouth and most the cake were on his face fulled with the face she started to smile

Nupur your gone, he applied rest of the cake on her face, all 4 played throwing cakes on each other

Stop stop it guys that's enough said gunjan laughingly

just like you nupur

shut up mayank,its like you

mean time if then am very much happy that your hugging me like this he said that showing the way she was hugging the doll presented by her brother ...he said this in her ears as gunjan and Sammy was doing something else

am gonna kill u mr. mayank Sharma

nupur whats is this your starting again Sammy warned her as he came out of the serious discussion with gunjan

bhaya nothing like that he only

gunjan hugged and gave her small pendant as a gift

wow it looks too cute gunjan ….

She turned to mayank and said see they have given my gift you the one continuing with your stupid talks

Ha ha ha ha ha I can give it now itself,but your brother would kill...I guess you should wait for my gift

what that he will give wait for my surprises…hope u all enjoyed with this b'day bash….hey many blamed on a shorter part right, how about this one, that too I had updated sooner…do comment on it friends

its awesuumm anu dii
:D:D