mayur ff-every day is spcl...pt 16 pg 129! - Page 37

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
loved ur update
cont soon
want sayank to be friends and mayur to get together but i loved today's mayur update
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update dear....i was sooo waiting 4 ur update since so long..loved it.totally!!🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey it was really sweet one
thanx for so much of Mayur😊
Thank God its clarified that Sammy is Nups Bro
Mayu's joy Knew no Bounds haina😆
Mayu has wild imagination jana😆
He imagines a lot😆
Liked the whole
Thank God Sajan clarified the thgs whole heartedly
Matalb both couples are frnds now
Hop Sayank becum fnds soon
Loved the update
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Posted: 15 years ago
jeni.....awesome update.....lovd all d mayur moments...n i'm w8in...still w8in...u plz make sure....3 parts se zyada mujhe na w8 karvaavo....😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part :) he he..finally mayank realised samrat is her bro :))
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

ohh dear....catch my upd soon



can never miss it
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 7-

commented on all three posts differently
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

Part 7

She moved ahead stopped by mayank holding her 'she turned shockingly looked around the crowd then glared strangely at mayanks stupid act

Mayank let me go , it looked like he had no intension of leaving her hand, she closed her eyes controlling herself from shouting as crowd around them may think too much😳😳(now sammy wer r u😃😆😆)' she counted up to ten controlling her anger'mayank just watched closing her eyes and muttering something, he was just mesmerized of her'he was truly crazy for her'he couldn't event ake his eyes from her.

Just then her mobile buzzed off , mayank left her hands from his hold'. she searched her mobile inside her handbag and looked at the display it was dia

Hello nupur, where are you?

Not leaving her to continue dia continued

My friends had been here , so I want to leave with them for party if you had finished your purchase' let us move

Dia no problem I will stay here you carry on' I will go by myself, just carry on will catch you tomorrow

Are you sure but sammy would kill me'

No he will do nothing like just cool

Ok then let me go to the party huh

Yeah dia you carry on

Bye babez
bye dia, she said smiling of dia afraid of her brother...
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She she looked for mayank around her, there was no sign of mayank she quickly moved from there and went out, she was looking for taxi to reach home

Let me drop you nupur

No thanks she know who it can be

Common nupur

Mayank what do you want?

Your too straight dear?

Cut off that dear, she said in a strange tone

Cool I will cut it, if you come and a cup of coffee with me

Don't you dare to ask

Ok its simple if your not coming am sure to give company to your house

My house, are you mad..she was really afraid samrat would get mad , If he saw him in their house that's it

Nupur your coming else

Just promise me you will not disturb me anymore after this

you think am disturbing you nupur?

Mayank please stop it I just want to know would you stop talking with me if I had a cup of coffee with you

I would better give a think of it, if you accept

i suppose we should make deal for tomorrow(instead of from she used for...totally meaning changed)...then i would come with you
he smiled cunnigly making a note of her sentence...said...yes..
then come lets go said nupur looking at the nearby coffee day shop,

*****wait am editing more******

look down to read more....




fabulous...........
fantastic...........
awesome...........
amazing........
bestest...........
simply love it............
enjoyed each and every nano second of it...........
was lost in your update...........
you are a mindblowing writer..........
editing more note was so nice..........

for you-





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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

Excuse me madam she turned looking at his gesture not here come with me he signaled her the back seat of his bike..


Mayank you ...nah ...see you only asked for the coffee

Nupur if you continue arguing then am sure lets go to your home itself'my deal is that you should come with me without arguing then I would never disturb you tomorrow....

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Mayank slow down she was shouting as he was flying enough in the bike,Oh my god this much speed is not good to travel, slow down nupur was sitting leaving a space not willing to hold him'

Mayank can feel her distance

She asked mayank... where are you taking me?

Nupur I told no arguments saying it he accelerated his speed on the bike, mayank was successful she was now catching his shoulders for the full support , absolutely no space between them'she closed her eyes balancing her face on mayanks back to fight back her fear of the fast drive(better to leave it to all of ur own imagination)people viewing can say they are perfect pair.

Nupur we had reached... he said slowly and gently..not willing break up their closeness

She quickly patted herself away from mayank and got down from the bike

He smiled at her and got down

Mayank noticed her panicking standing outside nupur believe me come inside' She was believing him without knowing herself else she wouldn't have sat in his bike

Nupur looked at the big house in front of her

She looked back at mayank

Mayank she called him

Come nupur

Whose house is this mayank?

Seeing her standing like a doll not moving ...he came near her bent down took her up from the ground ...nupur was in mayanks arms, he couldn't believe he is now carrying her in his own arms...she had no objection..both was just starring at each other

😉😉**Crap***😉😉

Mayank stop your own imagination, she would kill you , he continued with her trying to ignore the dream he had just before...Nupur I guess we had a deal of no argument right

but Mayank

Come in nupur 'house was really big..it showed mayank richness, yet he was simple enough'she once again looked at him

He took her to his room and went out saying an excuse'.she looked around the hall' '.his room was really big and she was totally scared for being alone. the place where she was standing was full of books'it was small library'she came outside searched for mayank looked at the big photo frame of mayank hanging on the wall'he was looking hot and handsome'it was his house'she was standing in his room'oh my goodness'just now it got'they were alone'in that big house'made her mind to think positively went in search for mayank

mayank

yeah coming he came back with 2 mugs of coffee'mmmh'so you were searching me'do you nooo how many time you called me 'my name was really beautiful nupur'

mayank just stop flirting


you think am flirting with you common have your coffee you may get tired of yelling my name'my mom is not here she is out of station soo I made it specially for you
well I didn't asked anything about it mayank

I am giving reason because i want to know how coffee tastes'drink and say he said with his cute dimple
she sipped and asked may i know why did you took me here...
Well he said in the lonely voice forwarding nupur inch by inch'well nupur you know what '

She stepped back of his sudden reaction

Now you and me are here

What?she was scared to hell to catch his sudden change in his character..

Catching her fear in her eyes said'Because no one can drink coffee made by me'

what nupur left out a big sigh of relief...rotating her eye balls cutely....


Both started laughing'

Mayank your books collections are amazing I loved it

Really , if you want you can visit it often

No thanks mayank, well your coffee is really best'I mean worlds best coffee...i mean threatening coffee too

He smiled at her'suddenly asked nupur,Nupur thanks for coming'what happened to your movie plan?

Not in a mood to watch a movie

Specially not going with that samrat'

Since she heard name samrat , nothing entered inside her brain
She moved mayank front saying bhaya 'gonna search me

Bhaya ?who nupur?

Sammy bhaya who else would search for me'she muttered slowly he would kill me seeing me with you god help me'

What? He couldn't believe her'he turned moving from her , he expressed his joy 'brother...oooh god'not allowing to catch her his expressions he avoided her glance

She moved fastly to the exit not waiting for mayank to reply...sorry mayank i should go

Wait nupur I will drop you, inside his heart well nupur your only mine'I guess samrat is my'he smiled as nupur called him back to his sense

He dropped her

Thanks for your coffee mayank

Your welcome , he smiled at her

Well you remember our deal nah? she confirmed to him

Of course he said with his shoulders raising up'in his mind don't ever think I would leave you that easily dear'yet you had your deal was for just one day..he smiled whole heartedly

Good night nupur

Bye good night,nupur went to her room not looking back as mayank left of viewing her fully'






it was a mayurtastic update...........
as usual enjoyed each and every nano second............
glad mayank got to know samrat is nupur's brother..........
loved mayank's plan of not leaving her easily...........
waiting for more flirting from mayank's side.............



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

Shift to sajan


Samrat handed her the popcorn and sat near her

Thanks samrat

Your welcome

Samrat was very careful with her, he cared for her a lot it was hardly they were close for 3 hours'it was most cheerful moments'they both enjoyed each others company'gunjan was feeling different with samrat'it was hard for her to find an answer

They both was walking after watching movie'silence was filled between them'it was samrat who broked it up


Gunjan you liked the movie huh'the question was just to break up the silence

I enjoyed a lot samrat, thanks samrat

Common gunjan stop saying thanks'you had said more number of thanks it makes me feel different

Well samrat you know what?... your not what I had known

What is your impression about me gunjan

I thought your different

Different like genius huh, he said mockingly

Ha ha ha ha very funny'.I mean if you will not scold me nah she hesitated to complete sentence

Common gunjan am ready to hear anything

I thought you were head weight

What he holding his stomach laughed

Seeing him reacting different instead of scolding ,why he is laughing she looked up at him'

He stopped laughing and said gunjan you know what our thoughts are same'

What you thought me as the same very bad raised his hands warning him

Both smiled

But your really chweet caring 'your opposite of what I thought? Gunjan said in sudden'

So you notice me huh? Samrat to gunjan looking into her eyes for an answer

Gunjan was feeling awkward yet felt herself hard to answer his sudden question

To lighten her samrat continued Gunjan am always like this well you the one busy with your bodyguard

Bodyguard said in a surprise

Mmmmmh 'mayank he turned all around searching him

Samrat that's too much he is my very good friend of mine she said smilingly

I know gunjan

Like you samrat

This is something new to know, he said free heartedly

well it would be difficult to meet you from tomorrow
gunjan raised her eyebrows

I guess 'I need an appointment to meet you from your bodyguard sooo

Samrat you nah'well better I will give you a small recommendation letter to mayank to allow you to meet me in special way

Oh that's great to hear its special recommondation

Both smiled as they walked making a special note of the moment in their heart

samrat and gunjan were friends'
Note- I want to dedicate this part to mahima'sweety this part is for you.

sooo nikki I promise to make our own buddies friends soon'.just wait for 2-3 parts to go'.. then we will see Sammy and mayu as best buddies I promise you'cindy, fariaa I hope this is longer one'this time of course am very fast in updating..




awesome.........
rocking.........
it is really long........
and i am really happy..........
waiting for sayank to become best friends.........

and thx a lot for dedicating this part for me.........





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