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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ammygurl
haha....You have ACTUALLY developed fondness for Vikram , as you said! haha...This part was cute and funny! Though at some points of time I couldn't understand, I confess! But a nice part overall....
And i would be waiting for the day when Riddhima attempts to murder vikram...hahaha!!!! 😆
Would be waiting for more of your work!
The thing 1 and Thing 2 concept was coool...:)
Ananya

Thanks Ananya. I updated again.

Thank you for liking this part.

Originally posted by: spln
oh sure!!!expect the girl with big words, bigger mouth and a gargantuan cynical craze to come back on a request (which by the way was given by someone only a slight step backward in all those A grade traits) with something such!!! - ghostbusters peed in their pants? *shocked* (sigh! i grew up being a phan firl :( ... pity!) and thing 1 shocked, thing 2 insulted... or the other way... lol! sure sure sure! ' as fun, quite! the break must be some good, after all!!! why have i not see more writing around???

cheers,
nj

NJ! But writing it was so much fun! I remembered you when I wrote that part. I do know that you are phan and haven't I told you, I am NOT? :D So, there you go. Dr. Seuss - is a brilliant man. Thing 1 and Thing 2 are his, of course. Hmm...I should have put in a disclaimer, no?
Err...I have written only you haven't got then time to get around there :-)

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey sookie.,,,

loved it yaar its so funny,,😆do we have another part to it,,i would love to read more of it please😃

bechara armaan hes so scared and rids is so courages..

please do update u r other fics too..!!😳

i was thinking(just thinking)to write something on this concept but i know even how much i try i cant be so funny(and reasonable) as u..

u just wrote a perfect one dear..👏

good wishes,,'

sri:-)

Hey Sri,
You should have given it a shot, nonetheless. this is very much on Grimm level and I had the same characteristics in mind when I wrote this.
Thanks for liking it.

Originally posted by: olive_green

my first thoughts are completely off in a different tangent...why i have no clue..but the opening part made me think of this forum...and its happenings..😛

i will need to read this again...will be back in while..

i'm not done yet!

Edit 1:
This has to be one of my favs...of yours...

and no I am not done yet....

Really? Thats.....weird :D
And this is your favorite by me? 😕 I am a little surprised! :-)

Fine, fine. Come back. But when???

Originally posted by: missypatel

ahhahah!! that was awesome Sookie!...short and fun to read!! :P

Thanks Nij! Writing it was fun too :-)

Originally posted by: Pebblez

Sookie: First thing, thanks for writing on my request...it was a random thought that came to my mind, and um so glad it did :D dude, you are THE freak of this forum. No one else, bass. :P i loved it, it was so amazing, why does Armaan always have to be so girlish? :P this reminded me TONS of Grimm, itni xiada similarity hai! Thing One and Thing Two hahahahahaha....dude, come onl on gtalk sometime, we should have another one of our random cave-man talk sessions :) loved it! And yeah, as nj says, big mouthed and big-headed as we both are, me liked it...*opens arms wide* ita ziada :D guess its one of yours thats my fav...not till date, but in the list!
Kiran

Kiran! As usual, anything that pertains to you, you are fashionably late there. But you are here nonetheless so no matter, no matter. :-) Glad you liked. Yes, this is very much like Grimm and this is actually based on A-R characterizations in Grimm. :-)

Originally posted by: -Edelweiss-
@Sookie: Thing one and two were my favourite, and have just found the brothers grimm.. will be getting to it soon. Really liked this one, and fun read it definetly was.

Huma

Hello Huma,

Thank you for your comment. Am glad that you liked this :-)

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
@Sookie... Lady, back to form? I missed your work loads.

Neverwhere.. hahahaha....you only have the punk to make the characters sound so differently different :D. Enjoyed reading every bit of it. Grimm all the way, right?

Yeah, I am back to writing.
:-) Yep, Grimm all the way. Humor with A and R has somehow become associated to Grimm. Could not think of anything else!

Sookie.

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

@Sookie... Lady, back to form? I missed your work loads.

Neverwhere.. hahahaha....you only have the punk to make the characters sound so differently different :D. Enjoyed reading every bit of it. Grimm all the way, right?

Wind struck memoir....I can so see it in front of me. Amazingly written slow and beautiful tale it was. You took me back to those times when I visited the tomb. All I can say now is Loved It.

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Sookie

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Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey sookie*

i feel that i dont deserve to comment on such a beautiful story..

except to say that- i love it and it would be in my memories even i become old ,,,adding to u r other lovely stories.....

good wishes..

sri:-)

Hi Sri,

Thank you for your comment and liking this story.

Originally posted by: Pebblez

:) dude...its good you are back to writing! This one completely transported me into another world, the funny thing is...i dont even know what NJ requested! :D and i dont think that matters now, cuz watever you wrote was SO beautiful, in both the terms of writing and story, that i couldnt pull away! I think this has been one of the few times i could see everything happening in front of me...Um reading A Suitable Boy nowadays, it reminded me of that in someway...God knows why...but it did! :D This has to been, hands down, one of your most, what i can call, emotional piece of writing which was damn frikking beautiful. I loved it. :)

Yeah, I feel good to write too. And thank you very much for liking it. :-) Yeah...emotional piece. I think this is the only one which is as emotional as this. The narration is quite lengthy and I wanted it that way because I am talking about a place here and not many people know about it. But I had to introduce some meta physical elements to make it feel more real. Kind of blending history and metaphysics to achieve romance. (That sounded pretty cool in my head but as I typed, it did not make much sense :S)

Originally posted by: olive_green

Does beautiful do justice?

This was mesmerizing. After Death Talkies..you should start another series with a happier note...it transported me back to this village in India..walking its lanes...and by the banyan tree..next to the river...

you wont believe what just happened...but i wont freak you out here...i'm still amazed..with it..

but it was really beautiful..i don't know if these things really do happen in real life or not..but it sure was good reading about it..

I just have one qs...how did you think of this?

A

Aww Aria...Thank you!
Err...lets not get carried away. This is most definitely a one time thing :D
I have sober or cynical or downright morbid writing. This one was, lets say an anomaly?
This village/town is very much real and so are the places mentioned.

And you got to tell me what happened now...or on a scale of 1 to 10 of creepiness, where does it lie?

No, I don't believe these things happen in real life. But I had good time writing it.

And how I came to this - I was watching a korean horror movie and I got this idea by seeing a couple in the movie sitting next to river and eating noodles. Don't ask me how they are related, but that's the truth :-)

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Wind struck memoir....I can so see it in front of me. Amazingly written slow and beautiful tale it was. You took me back to those times when I visited the tomb. All I can say now is Loved It.

Thanks Prasanthi.
Ah, of course you have visited this place, now I remember you mentioning it before. Thank you very much for your comment. Glad you liked it :-)

Sookie

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Hey Hinu!!

All I want for Christmas this time is Peace. :D

OMG! I missed so much stuff.

Thanks for this awesome thread. And yes, thanks again for the rollback of one of my favourite story though in a different version. I still enjoy reading it. :D

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

@Nijal...I am so glad to be able to read this sweet chota one from you :D. Don't know why or yeah may be coz of your status messages I see on chat, that I could see you as Middi. :D. Simple and Sweet writing Nij. Can I get some more to read from your pen?

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Pebblez

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Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: missypatel
 I was thinking of posting another request..but now that i read this....i feel..🤔 i dunno like a little big mouth like you (which am not) trying to jump line to make it to the top spot.....only to realize it was a line for dirty/disgusting/dramatic and drastic rotten sink of losers ...😳 Afterall isn't it all the more shameful to be talked down by your own kid eh! 😒

hahahahhaha....MMY, its okay :D as they say, kids are a reflection of who you are SO...:D kabhi kabhi bachay bhi sahee baat bol dete hai! *winks*

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

wow this is an awesome idea hina!..loved ur scene..

will post my scene for Ananya soon..

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

@hinajust read part 3 and its just great piece..

u have shown the emotions of angad very nicely..

loved the whole christmas dinner which have gone so sweet ...

waiting for next part..

good wishes..

sri:-)

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

When the words come true

I walked into the lounge silently, it was definately peaceful. I could see a bunch of people bent over their piece of paper and some reading books from famous authors. I dropped my bag on the table and sat down. I took out my paper and held my pen in my hand. I waited for ideas but did'nt get any. So i closed my eyes and inhaled. I snapped open my eyes and began writing whatever came to my mind.

" i was closing my eyes when i hear the door open. "

Cheesy, but i did hear it open! Eh, whatever.

" the wind blows and a sweet fragnance fills the room"

I close my eyes and smell it. It was so beautiful.

" The wind tickles my nape and blows my hair. "

I pick up my bag to find a hairband and tie up my hair. Better!

" i hear someone pulling a chair and it creaks.."

I turn to look at that person, i can see his back and i think it was his hair which smelled good.

" i turn my thoughts back to what i was doing, oh yeah writing an essay about drug abuse but too bad i was in a library where i kept getting distracted"

I turn to look at him again, having no reason to do it. He turns around but thankfully, i turn away a bit too soon.

" what was that? anyway, i illustrate about how it was harming teenagers, when..i can feel someone really close to me"

I turn around to face a pair of ocean blue eyes staring down at me. I must be looking really vulnerable to him, because i feel really awkward.

" the guy smiles at me, when i realize he's the same guy who's been disturbing me all along.."

'i saw u looking at me' he says questiongly.

" I gulp. So he had seen that, but i wonder how? He was facing the other side all the time..."

'eh no, why would i do that?' i ask him in a tone which was supposed to be obvious.

" he just looks at me intrested and has this crooked smile. It looked so cute on him"

' never mind' he says.

" I breathe a sigh of relief, hoping he'll go but what he does next surprises me"

He pulls the paper from front of me and i stare back at him. I was sort of embarassed too because i had written all nonsense there which i did'nt want him to read.

" ' can i get the paper back?' i ask him"

He does'nt give it to me. Woah, woah, woah! How can everything happen? It seems like such a dream. I pinch myself awkwardly. Eh eh, filmy i know.

" He tries to hide his smile, too bad i notice it. I pout in a cute manner."

'thats not gonna work' he teases. I put on a straight face.

" He reads through the whole thing, while i cover my face. I had written nonsense, not really related to the topic"

I cover my face and close my eyes. He chuckles, to which i open them. He smiles down at me while i have an embarassed look.

" 'its good' he says."

'Eh, thanks..' i say awkwardly.

" ' do u mind if i take it?' he asks"

'Sure, but i might need it back' i say.

" 'we'll have to meet again for that..' he winks"

I smile inwardly, and accept his proposal. He walks out while i stare at his retreating figure.

....

okay, that was it. It is really confusing i know. The " " part is what she writes for the book, but the irony is that it actually happens to her!

The setting for the character is a library and an essay but for her its a lounge and a book.

this is written for ammygurl aka ananya..i hope i stuck to the theme, n the couple is AR though i did'nt mention the names. I was imagining them all along, n i hope u do too.

It was'nt a dream, but a major coincidence.

hope u like it :)..do leave ur comments..

-aish

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-Edelweiss-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

@ Sookie:

This comment is for NJ's request. This is definetly one of my favourite amongst the few that I have had a chance of reading from you. Most of what I have read of your work have been the one shots on AR and this is a complete contrast from those in terms of writing and flow. Most of those have always seemed to have had a bit of a cynical edge to it, with a sort of gothic touch to it. I don't know if that makes any sense, but it sort of reminded me of this book I read a while ago 'shadow of the wind', not the concept or writing as such. Just one of those things I drew parallel with your writing. I think I should write about this one, I seem to digress a bit too much, so coming to this one. It was one of those writing, that you know its very unlikely to happen, though you wish it would have happened in reality.

It was absolutely beautiful, the main protagonist was a lot more emotional than all your other characters. This is one of your work which was easy for me to visualise and it actually did transport me back to an unknown village. I say easy to visualise, because I was just going through a photo album of a mate of mine, who has just been on a recent exploration. I wish it had been me instead..oh well.

I don't know if you've read William Dalrymple's work, but for some reason the dairy entry really reminded me of some of his work. I think that may be due to the fact that most his work is about travels to India and the Mughal empire. But seriously this is my absolute favourite for now, may be till I manage to read other work from you or who knows this might remain as my favourite.

Thanks to NJ for requesting and to you Sookie for writing this.

Huma

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