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bhoomikauttam thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Hope I am correct in assuming the request correctly. Here i try to give from my side to Hina's request. Hope u like it and enjoy.

Hina:

Theme : Music
Genre : Romance
Preferred Couple : Angad and Kripa



Anniversary night


Kripa upset with something looking at the time continuously

Kripa: Angad u have changed…

Angad: I… Ab kya kiya… flight got delayed.. and I am very tired so relaxing… jetlag u see.

Kripa: U forgot its our first anniversary. Its 12 midnight so it passed by without u wishing me at all. We had our reception at 8pm but we did our pheras at 12:15 midnight. And I thought we should celebrate our anniversary starting from evening to the other day morning. But ur flight gets delayed and u reach here 2 days late and as u arrive u relax but not even once hug me or wish me. I prepared so many things but ur flight delay spoilt all my surprise celebrations. And here I wonder u even forgot the date…

Angad: Enjoying her angry upset face, she rarely got upset with him … always quite to complain anything…

Angad: U r such a sweet heart Kripa. U r very understanding, have u ever complained about my late hours of work? U love me and U know I truly love u. Its our 'first night anniversary' as well right…(Trying to make her blush and feel shy and forgot her anger, taking her close looking at her lovingly)

Kripa holding him to be at distance, smartly smiling and showing her attitude.

Kripa: U can't fool me now with ur sweet talks. This guitar signed by ur favourite singers. This watch it has two diamonds on each strap with letter A & K, specially designed for this special day. U can have them. U get my affection my love but from a distance… no need to hug me … (she made a cute angry face)

Angad looked at them… and his happiness knew no bounds, the watch was huge and the A&K beautifully on the strap gave him the feel of they both been together forever. He felt like holding her close, kissing her and making her hear his heart which wants to give the warmth and the tight hug to make her feel deep inside his heart and reflect to her she means the world to him. But with Kripa becoming stern that she won't allow him to even hug her… he took the guitar and sang…

Angad:

U mean the world to me, Oooo My Love,

U mean my Life to me, Oooo My Love,

We got married, U became my destinyyyy,

Life is music, U are my symphonyyyy,

U ..my soul.. my heart ..My dear,

I wish ..could kiss u ..take u near,

I am sorry if I ever hurt u,

U have to know ..I truly loved u ..I missed u..

U mean the world to me, Oooo My Love,

U mean my life to me, Oooo My Love...

Kripa did feel the love reflecting from his eyes and music making it look awesomely romantic. Still she sat without showing that it touched her...

Angad continued with one more he made the light dim and kneeled down as he sang…

Did I ever tell U, U r so very beautiful..

Did I ever tell U, U made my life wonderful…

Ur eyes brown take the crown …

Ur eyes brown take the crown of taking away my heart,

Ur smile bright brings the light...

Ur smile bright brings the light of happiness through out,

When u say U trust me.. It's the most treasured thing for me,

When u say U love me.. it's the most sacred hymn for me,

Did I ever tell U, U r so very beautiful..

Did I ever tell U, U made my life wonderful…

Kripa was holding the tears in her eyes as the love had touched her deep… she managed to hold it back in her eyes but her smile was there… Angad knew and sang one more song to help her to know.. She belongs to him and he is hers for life time.

Happy Anniversary sweet heart,

U filled my life with love in every corner of my heart,

Happy Anniversary Wife u made me feel complete,

I love U .. Love u .. Says the heart with every heartbeat,

U belong to me and I belong to u,

U are part of me and I am part of u,

I kiss u to let u know the touch is for the soul,

I hug to let my heart assure I can never let u go,

I hold u as I feel I am lucky to have u in my life,

Ur presence is my biggest gift,

U r my wife and I am proud of it,

Our anniversary is the beginning,

Of a love story with not ending,

Love is forever and ever…

U r mine and I am urs ever..

Let me say ti one more time,

I love u and truly U r mine…

Happy Anniversary sweet heart,

U filled my life with love in every corner of my heart,

Happy Anniversary Wife u made me feel complete,

I love U... Love u... Says the heart with every heartbeat.

Kripa now couldn't hold back the tears, the tears of happiness made way and flowed away from her eyes and she was blushing smiling, and in love.. In love again. She has fallen in love with him.. Number of times...This anniversary night as well.. again she is happy she has him as hers and she is his. Angad too felt emotional .he just wants to see her smiling every time… he sang one more… taking out the huge bouquet of flowers from the carry bag and sang..

I Love U …darling I love u ,

I love u with my heart pure and true….

I love u as U are the best thing happened to me,

I love u as U are the only thing am sacred of loosing,

I wish and pray we be together in every birth we take,

I wish and pray I can bring every happiness to touch ur face,

As ur husband I feel happy I got to share my life with u,

As ur husband I feel I want to spend my entire life only with u,

Let's stay like this as we rnt just friends lovers but soul mates,

Let's stay like this in every step and journey in life that we take,

I Love U …darling I love u,

I love u with my heart pure and true….

He gave her.. and took out a lovely bracelet he had bought for her for this special day with A &K carved inside a heart. Its 12:15 and so the correct time to wish. He later took out a page from his pocket and showed her…

Angad: While sitting in the airport as the flight got delayed I did one thing ..Closed my eyes tried to capture your face from my heart's album and open my eyes towards the little sheet of paper and drew this…

Kripa looked at the sketch and she blushed her happiness doubled with it

Kripa: It's the best gift I could ever get.

She kissed him on his cheek… Angad showed he is disappointed and she smiled and blushed feeling to shy , yet jumped up to reach him and hugged him and slowly lifted her eyes to reach his gaze and looked at the lips coming close as they kissed each other wishing a Happy Anniversary.😳

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thanks Hina for giving me this opportunity to write with Angad and Kripa. I would want to pass this to Khubu as well. dear u have requested me many times to write with Angad Kripa in mind and hope u read this and enjoy. 😃


DMG4EVER thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Great topic
!!!

Theme:
Prom
Genre:
Love [&+] Mystery
Couple: EdwardBella [+&] ArmaanRiddhima



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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
hey di!

another of ur great work!

chalo let me study it first..............

and its on angad and kripa!

my second favourite couple after mayur.........

and its romantic!

chalo i will get excited later.......

let's read it up...........



so it was their anniversary and she told him why she was angry!

that's good......

its necessary to be open to ur life partner..........

anger without telling the reason destroys everything..........

what a gift!

how sweet of her to gift him such gifts..........

oh how sweet!

and what a song!

for sure u wrote it.........

its brilliant......

the next lines were too good too...............

aap bahut hi achi writer aur poet ho...........

next lines r tooo good too.........

do i repeat myself???????

well what can i do if u always write good things????????

its not my fault!

he sang once more?

di r u trying to make me faint???????

this is wonderful!

wow!

what lines!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved them to the core!

aap mere printer ki ink khatam karvadengi..........

for sure!

i knew he remembered that day too.............

i think that u r the best person to give gifts to anyone..........

u r awesome!

he drew her picture!

wow!

grt!



and this cake is for u showing how sweet ur story was!



it is different........

so are ur stories............

love,
mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
Sumi_162710 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Hey Bhoomi.....it was nice reading on AK....like them too. The story n concept was very cute.....such a sweet romance u showed!!! The lines were fantastic n so were the gifts....hehe....I cud imagine them. Gr8 work dear.....loved reading it. Thanks for the PM.
RadiantTreasure thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

wow/ hey hina that a great idea,!!loved it..

hey...bhoomi,,,
dear u r so good at it..loved the AK lovely anniversary gift..
loved the song too..so perfect!!!!aww!!
lovely oneshot..
thanks for PM
yeah will take some time to read u r stories a bit busy..
good wishes..
sri:-)
MyInspirationz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
Hey Bhoomi... Awesome dear.... and the poems were as usual mindblowing.... Toooooooooo Gooddddddddd....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17

Not a response to any request..'cause i believed (and do) that people are busy with the holidays...but thought...maybe i could walk over my own declaration and do something that i believe (again do) is not my cup of tea...:) its not typical ...but i hope you like it!

Christmas!! My slightest favorite holiday in my least favorite month of the year was approaching faster than the running clock on my side table. Waking up to the loud noise in the kitchen located below my room, I struggled to peep out from under the heaps of blankets loosely wrapped around me, each used for an attachment and reason of their own. Pushing away my doggie-bear to one side I switched my laptop on. It was my savior, a day without it seemed like a night without any peaceful sleep. Unwillingly, I stepped down from my bed and walked to the window to slide the curtains apart. It was just noon, but it felt like I'd slept for a lifetime. Ahh!..another dry day with sprouting green shreds scarcely visible in the thick white layers. I never, not liked snow 'cause it was the dropping temperature that gave my heart and body such daring shrills. Yet, it couldn't ever manage to cast its shine on my face. Only some simple and pretty lasting sight it was for me.

Lazily, I grabbed my phone and hit speed dial to call him. It had been days since I talked to him. Having known and been with him for three years now, I often thought he was a mysteriously complicated person. Oh well, he was that and much more.

"Hi it's me. There's an inflatated snow man and presents stacked outside the house opposite mine. It's giving me squiggly feelings Nay. Call me!" another voice mail. He is well aware of my December frets and still choose to be unavailable just when I need him. Idiot!

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

"When you say you love me....For a moment, there's no one else alive ...yeaaa yeaahhhhhhhh!!!" i was screaming while driving home. "Honk!Honk! you freako! Why does the state give these retards driving license when they clearly are unfit to even sit on the driver's side. Darn them!! Don't come in my way today..its Christmas dude!!" i yelled after nearly hitting the car in front of me who cut in my way from the wrong side....."ohh When you say you love meeeee....." Humming some more, I made it home without killing anyone. Thank god for that.

After a long hot shower I walked down to the kitchen, secure in my fleece bath robe. I am home alone today so maybe I could......"Aaahhhhhhhhh!What happened to the lights" I screamed. Running down the stairs and tripping on a few, I traced my way to the refrigerator. There were some candles here somewhere and I just had to find them. I looked in the drawers by the fridge and found none. I was starting to panic now. I remembered a warning my cousin told me before leaving home, "Be careful at home, holidays have high theft crimes." And even before I could think about anything else I felt a hand grab my stomach from under my right arm. Instantly another reached my mouth, avoiding me to scream. "Tsk tsk! It's Christmas....you are not allowed to be alone. Don't you know you're committing a desiring sin Middi." Reflexively, my body gave in to the alien touch within seconds of its contact. I habitually talked to him in my dreams and there was no way I could mistake that feel and voice for some burglar's. I was expecting a call from him, but it seemed like this year, Santa was trying a new technique to surprise his believers and so he decided to reply back in person. I surely didn't wish for the spot I was in but there was nothing I could recall I would have replaced this with. I set a new record of not being grumpy next morning after a long Christmas Eve.

Yes, I've always disliked Christmas because living in a country that doesn't celebrate this holiday with the same jest, I never got a chance to unwrap gifts under the three. As a child I'd exchanged gifts with friends from school but it never was the same. And since the past couple years, away from home, I've lived in a house with a lit Christmas tree with no one to celebrate the day with and neither to be receive gifts from. Today luckily didn't make a hat trick for me. I got my first gift from Nay (my personal Santa) that lay under the Christmas tree. It was a small gift wrapped box. The joy i felt in unwrapping it doubled after realizing its content 'cause in it i found a tiny white stone that now shines on my finger.


ps: I hope you guessed the couple here is AR... :) Those nicks were used only to let you picture anybody you like...
pps: This one goes for a close friend who loves December - snow month 🤗 ...me loves you h*b* ...And for the one who is crazy about this couple....🤗 me loves you *i*....Lastly for the creative mind who enjoys happy faces..🤗 me loves you **ni ....

Edited by missypatel - 15 years ago
spln thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
dec is not (and yes, still isn't) anything to not like.... even WITHOUT para two there *y*y :D and that (still) i believe.... and its not for christmas, its not for the snow... neither of which like u said are things that belong where we do! ... its just, being december!

anyways... obv, the couple i imagined was not AR :D and if i had you totally should kick me out of that window which looked over the neighbour's christmas tree ...

i liked Middi... the name i mean, and wonder where it comes from... i can't pin down, its some deja vu, maybe i read it in a book - long forgotten! and to not, not credit what i noticed despite the obvious distraction (called reality) and the obvious distraction two (called disagreement) was the ease of flow... the words were big and small, metaphors came along, and yet, it was one of THE most unaffected things u wrote... and that including your verses... perhaps expectation from verses, or all other creations u put urself to, can't completely hide the effort.... this was devoid any, in a very nice way... so flawlessly, that i can't pin nothing down!!

ps: the shinning stone can't not make way to ur words, whoever, wherever, why-ever the link :D

love you obv, ita patni vrata to koi genuine male bi ni hoga, :D
~h*b*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: spln



dec is not (and yes, still isn't) anything to not like.... even WITHOUT para two there *y*y :D and that (still) i believe.... and its not for christmas, its not for the snow... neither of which like u said are things that belong where we do! ... its just, being december! 😆 trust you to ignore my obvious reason to write this!

anyways... obv, the couple i imagined was not AR :D and if i had you totally should kick me out of that window which looked over the neighbour's christmas tree ... 😆😆 ....and you ought to know who it was here...:)

i liked Middi...😎 both the names were a last minute addition....ovb! the name i mean, and wonder where it comes from... i can't pin down, its some deja vu, maybe i read it in a book - long forgotten! and to not, not credit what i noticed despite the obvious distraction (called reality) and the obvious distraction two (called disagreement) was the ease of flow... the words were big and small, metaphors came along, and yet, it was one of THE most unaffected things u wrote... and that including your verses... perhaps expectation from verses, or all other creations u put urself to, can't completely hide the effort.... this was devoid any, in a very nice way... so flawlessly, that i can't pin nothing down!! 😉 yup..this piece in structure remains unedited...just a few little befitting language modification...it was after all...what you said..and i didnt...that it had to be done effortlessly....cause i didnt...have to think...or imagine! :)

ps: the shinning stone can't not make way to ur words, whoever, wherever, why-ever the link :D ☺️ yes yes

love you obv, ita patni vrata to koi genuine male bi ni hoga, :D
~h*b*



*edit*

I thought about this while watching crap "mumbai after hours" show on tv and eating yummy (*nods*) dahi-wada...that the background i started with was not needed but it helped...to get an effect for what i ended with...and now i realize...i've never hated december....it has been one of my favorite months...for the longest period...and i only want to say i do...cause i get to blame it all on a month and days rather than people including myself...:P I love december ( confused kali, am not!)
Edited by missypatel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

And am back again...!! :D heres mine..

Theme: Wine tasting party
Genre: Casual - entertaining
Couple: PriDa (Prithvi-Damini)


cheers!

~nijaL

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