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Chandni

@Chandni-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#701

Aww sumi this is so good ur amzing wow Such a touching OS really loved it hope u write more

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#702

lol kk this is just a short RM scene with no head or tail...meh :P

Mini RM Scene

"Muskaan, I really don't think that goes there!"

"Oye, kankhajure! Have you ever donet his before?"

"Jiase, you've been doign this all your life!"

*Thud*

"Great, now it's all the way in!"

"Oye chupkar ullu ke pathe!"

"Oye junglee billie watch your mouth!"

"Mouth watch karega tu!"

"Chal chal, thok abhi!"

"Will you do anything or not? How do I get this out now!?"

"You can't do anything...move...let me do it!"

After a few minutes

"Why...you can't do it now...ha!"

"Oye junglee billi stop mocking me at least I tried!"

"Like I didn't!"

"Whatever...let's try a new one!"

"No way, this has ruined the beauty!"

"What beauty!?"

"Rahul! How dare you?"

"Fine...nothing is working"!

"Fix it!"

Few minutes later...

"Let's try another one now!"

*thud*

"See! It's done! Because of you it took us two hours!"

"Whatever...move aside! Let me put it on!"

"Don't ruin my efforts!"

"Shut up, chimkadar! There! Pefrect!"

They both stepped back to admire their efforts...

"Aah...the picture looks perfect on this side of the wall!"

Fin

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#703

🤣 for RM

touching! for Maneet!

will come back with better comments soon 😆

Edited by sweet.melody - 15 years ago

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#704

ahhhhh you should have writen a scene where Maan whacks Dev lol

but still nice OS

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Nabila

@Tomiko

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#705

Gorgeous Maneet scene Sum!

I totally want to see one where Maan finds out that Gurvinder isn't her boyfriend ... and another one with Maan beating the crap out of Dev.😆

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#706

Whoa! Sumi and a Maneet shot.......that's surprising.....😛.....lolz......so have you started to like them ??

Coming to the OS......it was superb! Even though you don't watch the show anymore......you have portrayed the characters just the way they actually are! Toooo good! Loved it, loved it completely! The hug was the best part....😉😆😆.......you have written a fabulous Maneet OS, sumi.....seriously! Do write more on them. 🤗

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#707

welcome back 🤗 🤗 🤗

ur one shots are always awesome!!!

love maneet :)

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#708

princessuma wah wah OS comin 4rm ur pocket nice me likes gud 1

but i liked the rm one too miss them!!!!

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Girisha

@gimzy

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#709

Sumiiiiiiiiiiiii 🤗 love love love all your os!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im a fan now of your writing!!!!!! they were so well thought each and every one!!!!

ok so my requests are SR OS and YUNA OS!!!!! as soon as you get time,, get back to writing os!!!!!!!

and yep i nearly forgot, the maneet one was too good yaar,,, hoping it happens like this with maan coming to know everything

again great job sum!!!

keep writing, n i will keep reading!!!!!!!!!!!!

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flamingo_aries

@flamingo_aries

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#710

bhootniiiiiiiiii...*huggies*....hw u been..??? Maneet was superb....wow we r getting too much maneeet these days....RM was nice though...keep it up dear...!!