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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: Starry_night
Sumiii.......thanx !!!🤗

I just loved it! It was simply awesome. Poor Raj......he could not decipher his feelings and to add to his frustration Yuvi punched him and Armaan too showed up with Sue taking his side....lolz.....and Yuvi hid his face in Naina's hair to suppress his laughter and their private dreamland....lmao.....and in the end.....Sue went up to Raaj and there they kinda expressed their feelings....and that pull.....me loves it! And Sid and Riddhima were also watching all this...and Ridzi stopped Sid from saying anything......lolz....it was a great one-shot! Everyone was there....even JP and Jiggy......amazing!! It was far better than what I had expected.......love you!

thanks!!! lol I am glad you liked it! love you too!! *hug*

Originally posted by: flamingo_aries
lol....sumi...nice one....make more of SuRaaj.......imao going to private dreamland!!!.......raaj saying m not interestd in naina ANYMORE....lol....!!!!......update this os plzz.........:)

lol thanks! and it's just a one shot...lol I need a new theme for SuRaaj :P

Originally posted by: bornalee
woww nice oneshot.......u r too quick........what can i say...as usual it's superb👏...loved every bit of it .....yuna's romance aww😳.nw want more suraj one shot....it reminds me the golden times of yuna...i felt i was reading a yuna os😍n sid wowww😆he was very much annoyed........loved the ending......write more...it's my demand😛

lol thanks bornalee!! lol i know they totally do remind us of YuNa :P

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
shoot i forgot to comment :P

it was pretty well written

emotionally. things like

this can happen in real life

and you have described it

really well.

and once you lose yourself - ridz in

this case - you got two choice : find the

person you used to be or lose that person

completely! but people have hard time

choosing one of the two.

damn i sound too smart and thats not good :P

lol as usual :P

thanks!! and ya lol sounding way too smart is just not right :P

Originally posted by: aish_punk
hey sumi di..controversial? yes! sad? yes!

Sid wanted Ridz to meet Armaan..but when armaan came there..she held his arm..she told him the bitter truth..n armaan felt so hurt..aww!..

Sid asked her to make the right decision...but she had chosen him..he had expected her to leave like Tamanna did..again that was sad!..but she didn't..

they just sat close..triyng to discover whats up in their relationship..it wasn't love..yet.

thnx 4 d pm

do write more

-aish

thanks aish!!! true it's not love yet but it's getting there!

Originally posted by: moviebuff05
Suma.....this/"Reality" is so touching... I really hope this is what happens...👏👏👏👏

thanks buffy!!!! ya lol not happening as we can see :P

Originally posted by: rosette80
its beautiful...loved it urmi!

thanks!!!

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo
🤣🤣 i loved da boy's nigh out one 4r me da star of das tory was shanky js gt reminded of madness he did in AR's roka fab 1 sweets i had gud laugh!!!

thanks sana!!! lol I know I tried to make Shanky be all light and stuff :P

Originally posted by: miss_precious
sumi dear great update!!!

i am liking this ..........reminds me of YuNa in the good olden days.......

lol raj the aym........so hawt!!!

anyways looks like ur really bored and have nothing to do......hw abt updating dkc nw!!

love this one shot.......want more suraaj!!!

lol I'll update dkc when Lana sends me the next concept :P....lol thanks!!

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

woah totally loved that shot...i am adding that to our suraaj forum :P

private dream lmao...that reminded me of private jet, dont ask me why :P

over grown brats? hmm nice way to describe it

oh btw loved the ending "i didnt say i wasnt going to DO anything" lmaooo

keep writing more of them

lol thanks snehu :P...i'll try writing another one...though they keep reminding me of YuNa :P

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#662

lol alright so I have decided to go through my request and start writing them...so here is the first one on the list!! This is for Elo and Sri since they requested pretty much the same thing! Enjoy! lol sorry it's so extremely late that you both have lost interest in them already :P

Fear and Change

"You have changed a lot since the first day at Sanjeevani"

Sid turned his face to see Yuvi walking toward him with two ice creams in his hand. He smiles at him as Yuvi hands him a cone.

"So, you want to talk about it?" Yuvi stared ahead...looking at the world go by as he sat on the bench with Sid.

"About me changing? Well, you have changed as well!"

"True!"

They both silenlty licked their ice cream until there was nothing to eat anymore.

"How did you know Drumsticks are my favourite ice cream?"

"We are soul mates, remember?"

Both of them started to laugh as they remembered the nurse who was convinced that they both were dating. Their laughter suddenly came to a halt as they realized that it was the first time in months since they last lauged like this.

"I...I heard about the divorce!" Yuvi didn't know how to start the conversation but thought direct approach was the right way.

"Yeah..um.." Sid did not speak again for few minutes because he wasn't sure what he was supposed to say. "I..."

"Don't worry about it, dude! I can...or rather I can try to understand!"

"There is nothing to understand..."

"All this time I thought you had changed since you aren't the crazy hyper boy-man anymore!" Sid shook his head with an amused smile as Yuvi's face reflected the same amusement in his smile.

"So...you think I have changed!"

"I hadn't completed my thought yet...no you haven't changed...but yes you have matured up though!"

"I don't get it!"

"You have never admitted how you really feel...unless someone provoked you to admit. Do you remember the time when everyone teased you about Tamana...only then did you admit that you loved her. Well you certainly liked her for sure!"

Sid didn't say anything for few minutes while Yuvi continued to stare ahead...thinking about himself and how much he himself had changed...his thoughts were interupted when Sid spoke up.

"You are right! I can never admit to my feelings until I am forced to confront them. Even recently, Armaan had to abuse me before I let my guard down for a minute to admit that I did, indeed, love Riddhima!"

"You know that you love Riddhima then why don't you go and tell her that?"

"Because...she loves Armaan!"

"Maybe...but it won't hurt to try"

"You won't understand, Yuvi! Becuase the first girl that you ever loved...happened to love you back. But I...I've never been lucky in love!"

"True...but does that mean you will never try?"

"Yes!"

Yuvi couldn't say anything..or rather think of saying anything that wouldn't sound like him abusing Sid.

"I know you're thinking that I am an idiot!"

"Believe me...that's exactly what I am thinking!"

"You won't understand!"

"Will you quit saying that I won't understand? Bloody hell, Sid! I might have been lucky in love but not in life! You have gotten everything in life...maybe that's why you expect people to love you back without you freaking opening up your mouth! That's not how the world works! Sometimes...sometimes you have to man up!"

"Yuvi...no one needs me!"

Yuvi had to constrain himself from punching the daylights out of Sid.

"You're right! No one needs you!"

They both went silent again for few minutes until Yuvi decided that his conversation with Sid was of no use. He got up and was about to leave when Sid spoke up again.

"I fear rejection!"

"Everyone does! But the one who act on their desires despite the fear are the ones who are worthy of this life!"

"But..."

"I am not saying that Riddhima loves you but what really matters is that you love her! Just go and tell her, man! Let her know how you truly feel...and then leave it up to her for her to decide!" saying that Yuvi left...leaving Sid to think.

He sat there all night long...thinking...just simply thinking. As he saw the sun rising...a small smile crept up on his lips. Shutting off his mind from thinking any further...he got up and headed toward his destiny.

"Riddhima...I don't care what happens...I don't care if you love me back or not! All I care about is that I love you! And you should know that!"

Edited by -bhootni- - 15 years ago

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#663

Yay! Im the first one!!!🥳😆😳

Another wonderful shot!

"How did you know Drumsticks are my favourite ice cream?"

"We are soul mates, remember?" <<< LOL, imagine Yuvi saying that in the show...😆

Anyways loved the whole Sidraaj conversation! Sid, seemed so very depressed and down and Yuvi propelling him was really sweet. Loved the friendly bond between them.😊

Cant wait to read more, do post another one soon.

Anjali

Edited by *angel94* - 15 years ago

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#664

sheena!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol sorry I just missed you too much :P

and haww spammer award!!!

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#665

Wow!! I actually got to read it today.......lolz :P

That was sooooo good!! Just fabulous! It was so well-written sumi! The whole convo they had was so sedate. The way Yuvi explained to him....Sid's pondering over it and deciding to profess his love, Yuvi's being reflective about his changed self.....his propelling Sid to tell Riddhima how he feels.......everything was awesomely penned! I just loved it!

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-Aicha-

@-Aicha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#666

Sumi Deeee.

Yet again, lovely OS..very well written =) I liked their convo and how Yuvi explained everything to him..it was very meaningful and true :D loved it!

-Sneha

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#667

lovely one shot bhootni :P

yuvi wanting to punch the daylights out of sid........were is that yuvi gne?

hmm and where did ur macky whacky go........he is not in this shot!!!