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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo
get AN married rite now n ask dem 2 start der family gosh i miss dat pagal nikki n dat gabru jawan man i mis those days guyz u gt me reminded of dem
now am definitely kidnapping u bth who cares abt ur folks!!!!

mission sneha n sumi is on !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*HUG* 2 bth of u

hahaha.......I miss those Susu/ Gabru Jawaan days!!!! 😆 😆
Susu's daadi said that to Niki didnt she???
"Mere Susu ke liye bhi aisa koi Ghabru Jawaan dhund ke la, na" 😳
🤣

Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 15 years ago

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Interstellar

@Interstellar

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#512

sumi..*hugs*... luved ur creation..

read sidraaj n abhi-niki all at a stretch...

seems every crooked minds hav become interns this time.. 'potential murderer', ' potential rapist' ...

n naina is no less than others drinking beer.. yuna in every ways are a perfect couple, be it crookedness or beer their combo rocks..

luved abhi-niki...

keep going sumi..

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
awww nice bonding b/w 2
thats what was missing in friday's epi

lmao at the beer part - he is scared of naina

not lying...just hiding *rolls eyes*

now write part two where his friends forgive him and

the idiot has a slip of tongue and tells naina

that yuvi came over and had a beer - wanna saw the reaction

of all 3 of them

lol thanks Sneha and we've already written the second part :P

Originally posted by: anut
Wow...I was expecting a Maa Da Laadla bigad gaya and I got Jane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai!

Nice work Sumi...

To Sid...

A friend is someone who will be your sunshine on a cold winter day
A friend is someone who will be by your side when everyone else walks away
A friend is someone who understands what you did not get to say
Admonish, berate and lastly tell you "Its going to be ok"

To Yuvi, Naina and JP [even though I think they behaved as they should have]

To be worthy of a good friend, one must behave like one first.

aww thanks anut!! and I loved what you wrote...it's so true....lol everyone was expecting maa ka ladla :P

Originally posted by: esharao
superb

thanks!!

Originally posted by: priyanka4340
awsome sumi specially yuvi...................beer? tatz sounds gud

thanks!! lol beer :P

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
sheesh sumi my bad i have comments pending :( sorta busy having exams & all but ever the less It's good having a sober break reading your pieces
i'll bw backon jan 30 after my eggjams and will deffo leave my piece of mind on your shots .......

woman come back soon!! lol how long are your exams will go on for??? Jan.30 is way too long

Originally posted by: Tushtih7
sumi... *hug u* u r a fantastic writer...

loved the sidtam... will be fine if tam returns...

luved yuvi- arjun... both understanding each other havin knwn how it feels wen abandoned..

lol mac n sneha... 🤣 seems sneha is quite happy with the arrangements here..

@sumi @sneha

lol..u both bring much more humor n add spice than the original....

aww thanks yami *hug*....lol sneha is way too happy and don't we :P

Originally posted by: ...anshu...
lol anything for u was fab cant u make it a full fledged ff

thanks anshu!!! lol i already have three full fledged ones that I never update :P

Originally posted by: sups2222
Awwwwwwwww SidRaaj.......missing badly sidraaj jodi jabse naina aayi hai tabse yuvi is ingnoring sid like hell yaar heheh lolz 😆, JUST WANT THIS TYPE OF CONVO IN SERIAL YAAR, so cute yuvi is back with teasing one liners n making sid realise that RUNNING AWAY is not only the one option available n we should deal with it openely....and our sid is back in sanjeevani well AGAR YUVI ITANAE PYAAR SE KAHAGA TOH KAUN NAHI MANAGA, ...LOVED SID TEASING TO YUVI ABT NAINA...
"A. you're seriously an idiot and b. am I not a guy? Of course, I drink beer! And dare you say that to Naina and I'll make sure that you don't get to see the next morning's sun!" Yuvi walked back to the chair and sat down.😆😆😆
"N..no...just hiding!" Yuvi looked away ashamed as he remembered his past.😆

loved the foll lines:

"Yuvi...no one wants me there...not even my friends!" Sid turned around😭😭😭[aWW POOR SID, YEAH NAINA N JP need to be punished]

"They don't right now...but if they are your true friends...they'll come around soon. If they can forgive a potential murder like me....well, they can forgive a potential rapist as well!" Yuvi turned around with a braod smile...which brought a smile on Sid's face too.👏[meRA YUVI JINADABAD..Loves when he explanins or rather makes one understand😳.]

"Thanks, dude!"..............😃

"Mention not and I mean seriously mention this not to Naina!" Yuvi left the house with a wink.😉[yuvi still naina se daratha hai hmmp well no way ab kya kare yuvi is back again a chichua...]
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WELL TO SID ONLY ONE THING:
A Frnd Is Like Viloin, Musik May Stop Now N Then But Strings Will Last Forever!😊...Well sumaya a gr88 shot yaar, dying to sidRaaj bonding.........

thanks!!!! lol I love your long comments :P...lol itna pyaar seh yuvi humme kuch kahega toh hai.... :P

Originally posted by: pari_smile
That was awesome yuvi
luved it

hahaha yuvi naina se dartha hai😆 he is jst not admitting it

luved how u showed sid and yuvi friendship

thanks!!! lol don't you know yuvi is a doggy :P

Originally posted by: wilfen
Wow! Sumi great FF and a much needed male bonding!! I wish Yuvi asked Sid why he did it in the first place???? But its your FF so maybe u can add that later. Or not , I'm only voicing my view doesn't mean u really have to. lol!!

But , yes, It cheered me up immensly. : ) God knows what awaits Sid's future in today's episode???

thanks madhu!! lol your view is great! but the only reason why i didn't make Yuvi ask Sid is because in friendship the reason should not matter!

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#514

@sana - aww thanks meh who care we will turn to like one of us

and then we will have blast lol

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#515

lol kk so my lappy was taken away today...tomorrow is the D-Day...so I wrote this shot yesterday and now i am going to post yay!!! lol this is for elo since she suggested this long long long time ago!! here goes nothing!!

Male Bonding

"Another Johnny Walker on the rocks!"

"Haven't you had enough?"

The guy drinking alcohol looked up to see another guy taking a seat beside him and ordering a Martini.

"Why are you here?"

"I am here with my friends...it's my bachelor's party! What are you doing?"

"Who's getting married to you, idiot?"

"I am not the one drowning my sorrow in alcohol!"

"I am not sad...I don't have any sorrow!"

"Sure...and you're just a regular heavy drinker!"

"Why do you care?"

"I don't really...this is my party and I don't want any problem to arise!"

"I'll leave then!"

He got up to leave but the groom-to-be forcefully sat him down back on the stool...

"Let's talk about it!"

"What? Have you given up medicine and taken up a shrink's job"?

"Wow! You are really drunk! A shrink is a doctor as well!"

"Whatever! I should leave!"

"She misses you!"

"I don't want to talk about her!"

"She loves you!"

"If she did, she would have accepted me for who I am, not for who she wants me to be!"

"She accepted you! She just didn't accept that fact that you either always lied to her or hid things from her!"

"I was just trying to protect her!"

"Yeah, you protected her alright! No wonder she ended up in the ICU!"

"I told her not to follow me!"

"Are you for real, dude? Are you actually blaming her for what YOU did to HER?"

"That's the best way I can forgive myself!"

"You're still lying...this time to yourself!"

"That's the way I know how to live!"

"You were never like this before! You were the most mature one of us all!"

"Of course I was mature! That's why I tried to burn the dispensary down, played with her feelings and when I

did get her...I lied to her repeatedly just to keep her with me for few more days!"

"When you know what you did was wrong...why don't you go talk to her?"

"What do I say to her? Believe me once more so I can lie to you again!"

"Why are you going to lie to her again?"

"Well, I can't go and tell her that I have a drinking problem now and might get fired soon because of it!"

The Groom-to-be started to laugh...while the drinker smiled...a small smile...

"Well...think about it! I am getting married tomorrow! She is going to be there as well...talk to her!"

"Why are you being so nice to me?"

"Because there was a time when you supported me as well! You brought my friends back to me! This is the

least I could do!"

"But you had already done me a favour for forgiving me the first time...and that time I supported you as a returned favour. You're doing me a second favour now!"

"Well...I guess if I make a mistake the next time...you can return this favour!"

"What if she doesn't listen to me?"

"She will...she might not forgive you yet...but she will try to at least!"

"Hm...well I'll come...if I remember this conversation by tomorrow that is!"

"Oh, don't worry about that! I have made sure that you will!"

"And how is that?"

"Well, I recorded it on my phone and I am going to send it to you right now...there!"

Beep

"Wow, you're not an idiot anymore!"

"Stop calling me that! And no I am not one!"

"Fine...by the way...who are you getting married to?"

"My first love...Tamana!"

"Wait...wasn't she married?"

"She got a divorced...I got a second chance...and you will get one too!"

"You mean a third chance, right? Because I have already gotten my second chance!"

"Whatever, Yuvi! I have to leave...my friends are waiting for me! Better come tomorrow...I don't want to hunt you down!"

"Like you ever can!"

Sid walked away with a smile after giving Yuvi a light shove...

"And that's how you get an invitation to a wedding! Naina...I am coming back...I have come back just for

you!"

Preview for the next one!!

Not Our Wedding

"But why do we have to work so much? It's not even our wedding!"
Naina stomped her foot in frustration

"A. I can't believe you just did that and B. You're the one who volunteered to help!"
despite wanting to stomp his feet in return as well...he just smiled at her antic

"But I want to get married!"

"Um...Naina...have you lost it? We are already married!"
Yuvi just shook his head...

Edited by princessuma - 15 years ago