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...anshu...

@...anshu...

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#451

lol anything for u was fab cant u make it a full fledged ff

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#452

sheesh sumi my bad i have comments pending :( sorta busy having exams & all but ever the less It's good having a sober break reading your pieces
i'll bw backon jan 30 after my eggjams and will deffo leave my piece of mind on your shots .......

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Interstellar

@Interstellar

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#453

sumi... *hug u* u r a fantastic writer...

loved the sidtam... will be fine if tam returns...

luved yuvi- arjun... both understanding each other havin knwn how it feels wen abandoned..

lol mac n sneha... 🤣 seems sneha is quite happy with the arrangements here..

@sumi @sneha

lol..u both bring much more humor n add spice than the original....

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Supriya

@sups2222

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#454

Hey sumaya gr88 both shots of sid-tam and also YUVI-NAINA-MAC-ARJUN......
U have perfectly predicted tams entry...lolz sid n tam should have a good restart sigh kash tam wapas aaj jati this sidhima track crap.....

"But...what about Riddhima?"

"Who is Riddhima?"😆

"Your fianc, Sid?"😆😆

"Oh that Riddhima...don't worry she'll still get married on the same day?"🤣🤣🤣🤣.................

LOVED IT humour filled in the middle of tensious filled confession and then most awaited confession:

"I love you, Sid!"❤️❤️

"I love you too, Tamana"❤️❤️❤️

And then we hugged....😳
Aww such a cute reunion

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WHY WHY WHY SNEHA YAAAR🥺???????? plz plz mera naam likhana next time when u wanna introo mac's gf plz plz......❤️[P.S.: If u dunt noe I love mac😳 more than anything in ur fanfic heheh lolz]

"Di...stop scaring Jiju!! And don't worry this time I won't forget Arjun on the race track!" Mac grabbed the cookie from the plate that was placed in front of him. 😆😆😆
[WONDERING who would do such a headless move hehehe BUT dats our MAKKY MAC]

"Are you two married?" [What a quick thiner i must say]

"My parents fight like this as well...so I just thought..." Arjun walked into the kitchen with his head low🤣🤣🤣

Yuvi didn't know why but he felt a tinge of guilt toward the kid...actually he knew why...

"I am married...to someone else!" 😆 [So he though mac and yuvi are marrid hehehe lolzzzzz]

Loved arjun and mac's convo Yuvi ko naina jaisa not JUNIOR MALE NAINA mil gaya 😆

Sweet update with sweet ending......loved ur shot and waiting eagerly for ur next part plz update soon

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#455

Hey people...just wrote another one shot...lol was sulking so decided to write...lol here goes nothing!!

Running Away

"Are you leaving Mumbai?" Sid looked up to see Yuvi standing in front of him

"You? In my house?" Yuvi shook his head and with a smirk sat down on the chair closet to the door

"I invited myself in!" he displayed a safety pin

"Naina's?"

"Who else's?"

Sid smiled and went back to packing his bag....

"You didn't answer my question! Are you going back to Houston?"

"Hmm...maybe!!"

"Well, that's good! Tamana is in Canada...you can go see her then!"

"Yuvi, Houston is in Texas, USA....and Canada is its own country...I don't even know where she is in Canada!"

"Sid, I am not an idiot like you! I know where Houston and Canada are! And when you went to drop her off...didn't you see where her flight was going to?" Yuvi got up and opened Sid's mini-fridge

"Um...I...didn't notice!" Sid turned around to see Yuvi opneing a beer can. "Wait...you drink beer?"

"A. you're seriously an idiot and b. am I not a guy? Of course, I drink beer! And dare you say that to Naina and I'll make sure that you don't get to see the next morning's sun!" Yuvi walked back to the chair and sat down.

"You are scared of Naina?" Sid looked at Yuvi with the same grim expression that he had on for the past few hours

"Shouldn't that make you laugh?"

"I want to...but I shouldn't!"

"Sid, are you feeling okay?" You are not going to laugh? Wow, did Riddhima's incident change you or what!"

Sid didn't reply and went back to do his packing....they didn't speak to each other for the next several minutes. All one could hear was Sid putting his clothes in the suitcase and Yuvi sipping on his beer.

"What you did wasn't right!"

"I already know that Yuvi!" Sid let out a sigh

"Well then...stop running away from it!" Yuvi crused the beer can and threw it in the dustbin

"What the hell are you saying, Yuvi?" Sid got up with a frustrated look

"That's what Dr. Shashank told me! Not to run away from my mistakes! I didn't, Sid!" Yuvi got up as well

"But our situation is not the same...I played with a girl's honour!"

"And I played with her father's....set the dispensary on fire and not to mention broke my love's trust on me!"

Sid looked at Yuvi and shook his head as if to say "still not the same thing"

"Why are you here, Yuvi? Even you think that I deserve all the punishment!"

"Just like how you thought the same for me!"

"Can you please stop comparing our situation!"

"You started it! And I am not comparing...just informing you that even I let myself get carried away with revenge...it happens!"

"Fine! It happens! Does Naina know you are here?"

"She doesn't need to know that right now!"

"You're lying to her again!" Sid smirked at Yuvi

"N..no...just hiding!" Yuvi looked away ashamed as he remembered his past.

"You haven't changed, Yuvi!"

"And you have!"

"What do you want me to do?"

"For once, be a man! You were brave enough to admit your mistake, now be brave enough to listen to the taunt as well!"

"It is easier said then done!"

"I know that better than you, Sid!" Sid walked up to the window

"Yuvi..."

"Sid...I am no one to give advices...but a free advice nonetheless...don't run away!" Yuvi opened the door to leave.

"Yuvi...no one wants me there...not even my friends!" Sid turned around

"They don't right now...but if they are your true friends...they'll come around soon. If they can forgive a potential murder like me....well, they can forgive a potential rapist as well!" Yuvi turned around with a braod smile...which brought a smile on Sid's face too.

"Thanks, dude!"

"Mention not and I mean seriously mention this not to Naina!" Yuvi left the house with a wink

"You are right, Yuvi! I can't run away! I have already lsot my love and I can't lose myself by being a coward!" Sid walked up to his suitcase and threw all the clothes out.

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#456

awww nice bonding b/w 2

thats what was missing in friday's epi

lmao at the beer part - he is scared of naina

not lying...just hiding *rolls eyes*

now write part two where his friends forgive him and

the idiot has a slip of tongue and tells naina

that yuvi came over and had a beer - wanna saw the reaction

of all 3 of them

Edited by ilive2laugh - 15 years ago

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anut

@anut

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#457

Wow...I was expecting a Maa Da Laadla bigad gaya and I got Jane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai!

Nice work Sumi...

To Sid...

A friend is someone who will be your sunshine on a cold winter day
A friend is someone who will be by your side when everyone else walks away
A friend is someone who understands what you did not get to say
Admonish, berate and lastly tell you "Its going to be ok"

To Yuvi, Naina and JP [even though I think they behaved as they should have]

To be worthy of a good friend, one must behave like one first.

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priyanka

@priyanka4340

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#458

awsome sumi specially yuvi...................beer? tatz sounds gud

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Supriya

@sups2222

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#459

Awwwwwwwww SidRaaj.......missing badly sidraaj jodi jabse naina aayi hai tabse yuvi is ingnoring sid like hell yaar heheh lolz 😆, JUST WANT THIS TYPE OF CONVO IN SERIAL YAAR, so cute yuvi is back with teasing one liners n making sid realise that RUNNING AWAY is not only the one option available n we should deal with it openely....and our sid is back in sanjeevani well AGAR YUVI ITANAE PYAAR SE KAHAGA TOH KAUN NAHI MANAGA, ...LOVED SID TEASING TO YUVI ABT NAINA...
"A. you're seriously an idiot and b. am I not a guy? Of course, I drink beer! And dare you say that to Naina and I'll make sure that you don't get to see the next morning's sun!" Yuvi walked back to the chair and sat down.😆😆😆
"N..no...just hiding!" Yuvi looked away ashamed as he remembered his past.😆

loved the foll lines:

"Yuvi...no one wants me there...not even my friends!" Sid turned around😭😭😭[aWW POOR SID, YEAH NAINA N JP need to be punished]

"Thanks, dude!"..............😃

"Mention not and I mean seriously mention this not to Naina!" Yuvi left the house with a wink.😉[yuvi still naina se daratha hai hmmp well no way ab kya kare yuvi is back again a chichua...]
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WELL TO SID ONLY ONE THING:
A Frnd Is Like Viloin, Musik May Stop Now N Then But Strings Will Last Forever!😊...Well sumaya a gr88 shot yaar, dying to sidRaaj bonding.........