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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww, thaats so cute! :D
why doesnt Mac having achild suprise me? hehe! :D
loved Yuvi arjun talk..how cute! and what a matire kid, its kinda sad :(
great job, it totally did not suck! :D ^_^
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey spl suma
lovely again
gosh where do u get these ideas from
arjun was macs child..hmm..thats a twist,,wow!!
so yunas together n so r mac-arjun..
aww..i love happy endings..
"Are you two married?"
Yuvi looked at his soaking shirt...
"What are you talking about?"
"My parents fight like this as well...so I just thought..."😆
good wishes
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it sumi👏..it's just AWESOME👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

a kid completes a MAN!!! hence proved........

Arjun is way toooooooooooo cute n so the story gal
i think sneha is way happier n u anyways d'nt give a damn right 'coz ur more interested in curly hair....................lol*hug*
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Posted: 15 years ago
LOL, sumiii. that was hilarious.. i loved it!! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Its fantastic Sumi.........just awesome.........the way you have portrayed Yuvi's fear and Arjun's pain and anger is great......Yuvi-Naina's last part was shoo cute........and even the part where Mac hugs Arjun is really sweet.......loved it completely. And sneha as Mac's girlfriend whom he has supposedly fallen in love with....🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Its fantastic Sumi.........just awesome.........the way you have portrayed Yuvi's fear and Arjun's pain and anger is great......Yuvi-Naina's last part was shoo cute........and even the part where Mac hugs Arjun is really sweet.......loved it completely. And sneha as Mac's girlfriend whom he has supposedly fallen in love with....🤣

i knoweee eh? only after one date 😆
sheesh now i really need to find this type of person
but since sumi has created this situation she will
help me find a guy as well
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Posted: 15 years ago
ROFLMAO! It took a bit before "sneha" sank in. I was like... I know a Sneha... funny.... OH WAIT! Sumi's getting back at SNEHA for the whole MaSu/SuMac thing! ROFL!

That was a cute little thing you had going on Sumi. I liked the ending where there was one person talking in both settings. Poor little kid! I really really liked this one. Yuvi had this strange unexplainable bond with Arjun... but then again, he is technically Arjun's chachoo. lol. Very sweet!


love ya!

komz
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

aww if only Tammy come back!

nicely done partner!
Who is Ridz?
your fiance 🤣some habits are hard to break eh 😛
he is still the same old sid but maybe
he is not so immature anymore
he did change w/o tammy
maybe thats what was needed in his life
someone to push him, someone he loved
more than anything( maybe not more than his joystick and gadgets lol) to make him change and be more responsible and serious
and stop thanking me woman -its your os, your idea. i am sure
you would have done fine w/o me. mite have taken bit longer
but it would still have been brilliantly written

lol he has to stay a bit immature :P....and lol and I want to thank you :P...thanks!!

Originally posted by: wilfen

I LOVE YOU SUMA!!! LOVE U LOVE U LOVE U!!! Did I ever tell you that?

I was actually in tears myself when Sid says that he's getting married to Ridz and also the place where Tammy touches him for the first time.
If only the creatives would take some pains to read these ff's. Gosh! it is the most poignant and heart-felt outcome of my beautiful SidNa.
Cv's you better get Moulshree BAAACKK!!! Grrrrrrr!!!

aww thanks Madhu!! lol glad you liked it!!

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey special suma

great one
tams back n they both confessed,,awwa,,so lovely..
"Who is Riddhima?" 😆
hope that happens in real..
we definetly dont realise the importance of people when they r around..whether its in a serial or real life..
good wishes..dear.. :)
sri:-)

thanks sri!! and ya true we really don't realize their importance if they are near us

Originally posted by: *Adorable_Anu*

Ahh sumi!! you made my day! LOVE the SidNa one. Thank you! how i wish this really happens!

Oh and reallyyy sorry haven't had the time to read the previous YuNa ones. promise will read them soon! love ya!

aww thanks anu!! lol so do I ! and it's kk take your time!!

Originally posted by: koolaries4

Awwww Sumi... i loved the internal turmoil sid was going through.. it was amazing.. And Aniket dead? lol..this OS reminded me on Hum tum except that Sid has changed!! hehe.. i loved it though!!

aww thanks MJ!!! lol I know it was bit like HT...but I couldn't think of anything else...lol I need to be inspired as well :P

Originally posted by: Jenifer.

That was cutilicious!

Sorry, I'm in a rush so that's all I have time for. I would've commented later you know my about my goldiness *sigh*

fine!! lol thanks!!!

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

sumi sumi sumi sumi sumi sumi ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sumi mujhe mac ke behen ke bachhe wala aaj chahiye hmmmmmmmmmmmmm plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hmmmmmmmmmm plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i knw am besharam only alia knws tht very well ............lol take ur time babes tamana aa gayiiiiiiiiiiiiiii chalo tammy waaalo kuddi pat gayi ab bhangra karo nice update sweet heart luvd it but i was laughing dnt knw y i think am high 2day ................lol *hug*

lol alia knows you are beshram hawww!! and lol thanks!!

Originally posted by: miss_precious

sumi.............both your OS were great..........the oreview for the next one is awesome..........i guess will be reading lots about mac in this one.........hold on im confused..........do u like mac more than yuvi!!!

do update the next one.......i'll also throw in a request for a OS later.... be prepared!!!

thanks! lol kk throw in one...you haven't yet :P....lol

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That was so cute and simple.........loved it.......the way you have described their agony is too good. The preview is also great.....update that soon.

lol thanks!! I am such a simple writer :P...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

how about a 2-3 shot wher eyuvi-nainas marriage is taking place.we can have sm flashback scenes. with him trying to get her to accept her love and hin trying to woo her parents and a little courtship period where yuvi does everything he never would have thought he would.

oo kk will do aanchal!! that's a good idea!!

Originally posted by: anut

Sumi...That was very touching....Life perhaps gives you multiple opportunities to get your love but you love....only once. Nicely done and I hope creatives take pointers from this because frankly speaking the Sid Ridhima track is not cutting it for me...

aww thanks anut!! and true it's not cutting for me either...ughh no opinion on it!

Originally posted by: anjananazir

Loved it sumi like always..Love your one-shots

thanks anjie!!

Originally posted by: Sofna

Lovely.....Unique.....Beautifully written....Hugs 2 both u n sneha 4 such a wondrful OS!!

P.s This was THE BEST!!! (:

lol I can't believe you liked a SidNa shot :P...lol thanks!!

Originally posted by: twinkle94

lol! i so miss SidTam! i wish she cumes back! thnx!

me too!! I so wish she comes back too and welcome!

Originally posted by: -Grace-

Sumaya!!

im here again to request one more and you know who it is....lol
please write one on them ..*ehem* *says the secret couple name*
LOL
Thanks!

lol kk IQ...your request is in process :P....lol now go study :P

Originally posted by: KSG2

sumi- i totally loved it....its great.....just love the way u are writing these stories...loved every part of it....u rock sumz.....lolz....keep on writing

sanju*

lol thanks sanju!! I miss talking to you!! thanks...lol I will :P

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

and here comes the sweet revenge :P

aww he is in love with me ❤️
stop telling me this is crappy cause its not!!
i love it! i am saving it lol
yay i got macy whacky *does pigeon dance*
lmao one date and he is goner - now this is what i call tru love😆
Sumi: gosh woman....aren't you sad that you're stealing someone else's husband
Me: decided it woman once and for all. do you want him as your husband or my potential
future boyfriend? 😉

lol it's not something to be happy about....you're with Macky Wacky!! and lol why are you replying to all my comments :P...kidding *hug*....lol and he is your potential bf...I don't want him eww :P

Originally posted by: Jenifer.

Wow, already done? I thought I would have to wait aaaages since I was one of the last to request. You really want that hug, don't you? Well, number 1, remember?

"So what are we going to name our kid? I am so excited! You know what I have already chosen what colour the room is going to be!"
ROFL! I thought Naina was saying this!
"You need to tell Sneha your feelings first...sheesh...you're already naming the kids!"
Do I smell revenge? lol
This was super duper cute, Sumi. So aww'able. Arjun is one of those kids you'd wanna call when Dear Diary isn't working or the local Agony Aunt doesn't except anything but your proper name! Thanks so much but my PM demand still stands!

lol see Jen I love you soo much!! :P....now give me a hug...you kow you want :P...and lol yes it was revenge :P....damn that PM :P...thanks!!

Originally posted by: sunena2293

lol....wow sumi.....you finally got your revenge on sneha...lol
The Story was SOOOOO CUTE!!!
I loved how Arjun and Yuvi helped each other face their fears...😊
You really are an awesome writer....I just love your stories....😊

lol thanks nena!! and this revenge wasn't as bad :P....lol thanks!!

Originally posted by: Sofna

Awww Sumi u leave me SPEECHLESS!!!

R u n sneha gna b fightin ova Mac n evry ff nw??...rofl

lol thanks sofna!! and no we are not going to fight over him...she can have him... :P

Originally posted by: pari_smile

sumi that was awesome
how can u write such beautiful stories everytime
i really luved it, esp the convo between arjun and yuvi
actually who am i kidding i luved every single part of it
great job👏

thanks pari my fairy!! lol aww!!!

Originally posted by: miss_precious

mindblowing as usual.... arjun and yuvi were so cute together!!!

i guess it was pay back time for sneha.......lolz.........

love ur OS............keep updating..............btw was up wid ur unforseen circumstances!!!

thanks safina!! and lol I will update it don't worry about it :P....lol and it was payback time for sure :P

Originally posted by: *Adorable_Anu*

hahah! this one was really cute.. especially the end. Yuvi & Arjun are really cute.. i can actually sense this kinda situation in YuNa's future. LOL! Gr8 work sumi!

lol thanks anu!! lol hopefully the CVs listen to us on this one :P

Originally posted by: *payal_15*

Aww, thaats so cute! :D

why doesnt Mac having achild suprise me? hehe! :D
loved Yuvi arjun talk..how cute! and what a matire kid, its kinda sad :(
great job, it totally did not suck! :D ^_^

lol thanks superman!! and yes it doesn't surprise anyone :P...

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey spl suma

lovely again
gosh where do u get these ideas from
arjun was macs child..hmm..thats a twist,,wow!!
so yunas together n so r mac-arjun..
aww..i love happy endings..
"Are you two married?"
Yuvi looked at his soaking shirt...
"What are you talking about?"
"My parents fight like this as well...so I just thought..."😆
good wishes
sri:-)

thanks sri!! lol....my brain is an overworking machine....lol it has too much garbage in it :P

Originally posted by: anjananazir

Loved it sumi👏..it's just AWESOME👏

lol thanks anjie!!!

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

a kid completes a MAN!!! hence proved........

Arjun is way toooooooooooo cute n so the story gal
i think sneha is way happier n u anyways d'nt give a damn right 'coz ur more interested in curly hair....................lol*hug*

lol yes I want curly hair!!! lol she can have straight hair Macky :P...thanks *hug*

Originally posted by: koolaries4

LOL, sumiii. that was hilarious.. i loved it!! :)

lol thanks MJ!!!

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Its fantastic Sumi.........just awesome.........the way you have portrayed Yuvi's fear and Arjun's pain and anger is great......Yuvi-Naina's last part was shoo cute........and even the part where Mac hugs Arjun is really sweet.......loved it completely. And sneha as Mac's girlfriend whom he has supposedly fallen in love with....🤣

thanks pri!! and lol Macky can't ever fall in love...he can think so :P

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

ROFLMAO! It took a bit before "sneha" sank in. I was like... I know a Sneha... funny.... OH WAIT! Sumi's getting back at SNEHA for the whole MaSu/SuMac thing! ROFL!

That was a cute little thing you had going on Sumi. I liked the ending where there was one person talking in both settings. Poor little kid! I really really liked this one. Yuvi had this strange unexplainable bond with Arjun... but then again, he is technically Arjun's chachoo. lol. Very sweet!


love ya!

komz

lol gosh woman you're slow :P...and yes it was revenge :P....lol yes he is technically his chachoo and now both of them know that :P...lol love you too!!

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