It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10 - Page 87

Originally posted by: bheegi

jee haan...mujhey bhi yaad aa raha hai
I have to give u credit though because aapke comment ke baad mera dimaag phir chalne laga...i might change things around a bit to make it more faster paced😉

Originally posted by: annu127

Yess, Im.. Im .. I swear to God Im eager to read the epilogue 😆

bhai, mujhe ye seedhe seedhe comments dene ki aadat nahin.. missing Pehchaan and prithvi so much..😆

see, nothing wrong with bheegi's narration, nothing wrong with her characterization.. wo sab theek hai, but from reading POV, this feeling shouldn't come into the mind that whatever was told in half update, that could have been said in 2,3 para.. coz, acc to me.. story wise, nothing much happened in that prom.. wo prom aaya aur aa ke guzar gaya..

btw, have u ever noticed vallanki that, angad never said once in this entire narration that.."oops, i forgot what exactly kripa/mom/dad, had said at that time".. or did he ever look bemused in remembering of any event of his childhood/adulthood.. u tell, does it look real?? after all, this is all angad's memories.. i feel, just for giving the realistic touch to the story, bheegi should skip few imp things of his life.. just my 2 cents 😊

Originally posted by: bheegi

Vallanki, ur a true friend and annu is a true critic....loved ur debate on this ff

Annu, this ff is different from my other dramatic ffs where twista dn turns are more important. This ff is basically a narration by angad about his realization of his love for kripa....i have taken real life instances to write this narration and yes, we have to admire angad's memory but now that u have challenged me, i will write the next part in a slightly different way just to spice things a little bit :)

Originally posted by: ...anshu...

di,

first of all srry for replying late.my xams r jst around d corner. nd thanx for d pm

i dont understand is it dat angad dont think he is worthy of kripa or sth. mayb he thinks she is too good for me or is it that he doesnt want to risk the friendship.

i hope krips doesnt find out abt nishaant's car nd suryabhaan understands angad jst as gayatri do.

i noe dis ff is angad's pov, bt please jst once can we get krips pov

anshu

ps: di i m kinda missing i hate u angad

Originally posted by: vallanki

Thanks bheegi.

I supported your writing as I read this ff in writers' prospect. I understood what you wanted to tell the readers. It is purely Angad's memories about his feelings on kripa since his childhood. He definitely remember what both parents did but if they were related to him and kripa and only when they came in between AK..like the birthdays where Angad tried to get everyone's attention with his jumping and how it reflected his interest in sports; and similarly, rockfeller trip; kripa's b'day gift; and so on.

If you give the scenes of sarma couple n khanna couple Angad should also be involved into those scenes. Otherwise it looks like the narrator is changed from Angad to the writer.

I know annu is good critic. I always read what she felt in every part.

Originally posted by: sabzz

beegi i love the way you are writing this f-f !!

i just cant wait till you show some romantic scenes between angad and kripa .😊

Originally posted by: bheegi

thanks vallanki....yeah whenever we try something new, i am sure it doesn't appeal to everyone. Now with all the feedback, next chapter will be a bit different😉
UR right, angad remembers everything that pertains to Kripa...he hasn't mentioned much about his sister or other friends unless kripa is involved in that scenario...can we call him obsessed with her?😆