It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10 - Page 86

bheegi, I might be the only reader who felt this part a bit boring.. but sorry to say dear, U are actually dragging this whole story now.. i didn't understand that why you are giving so much detail of each and everything, each time..🤔

where is ur world famous 2-3 years leap???

Originally posted by: annu127

bheegi, I might be the only reader who felt this part a bit boring.. but sorry to say dear, U are actually dragging this whole story now.. i didn't understand that why you are giving so much detail of each and everything, each time..🤔

where is ur world famous 2-3 years leap???

Originally posted by: bheegi

bhai annuji, har kahani Ekta style twists and turns waali nahin hoti😃 Prom is an important part of american HS,so it was imp to highlight it here.

Let me see how i can expedite the pace 😊

yeah, they make a good couple .. no doubt😳

and I liked her khadaa dupatta which she has worn in this pic

choodi ka joda and kaali pouth ka lachchha are missing though.. without them, a hyderabadi dulhan looks incomplete..🤔

Originally posted by: annu127

bheegi, I might be the only reader who felt this part a bit boring.. but sorry to say dear, U are actually dragging this whole story now.. i didn't understand that why you are giving so much detail of each and everything, each time..🤔

where is ur world famous 2-3 years leap???

Originally posted by: humrahi2

hey bheegi nyc updt
i enjoyd f8in /razor scene n last dancing scene vry well writtn
thnx 4 d pm
Qurat

Originally posted by: annu127

hmm, kuch yaad aa raha hai mujhe..
😆

Originally posted by: vallanki

😆Annu, looks like you are eager to see the end😆

bheegi is giving detailed transcription, probably because after the end of biography, or autography of Angad, or whatever you say to the narration of the story from Angad's side, there is nothing but confessing to each other and saying the three magical words to go forward to tie knots!!!!

Actually, the story is going bit by bit without scenes but autography/biography...

Yess, Im.. Im .. I swear to God Im eager to read the epilogue 😆

bhai, mujhe ye seedhe seedhe comments dene ki aadat nahin.. missing Pehchaan and prithvi so much..😆

see, nothing wrong with bheegi's narration, nothing wrong with her characterization.. wo sab theek hai, but from reading POV, this feeling shouldn't come into the mind that whatever was told in half update, that could have been said in 2,3 para.. coz, acc to me.. story wise, nothing much happened in that prom.. wo prom aaya aur aa ke guzar gaya..

btw, have u ever noticed vallanki that, angad never said once in this entire narration that.."oops, i forgot what exactly kripa/mom/dad, had said at that time".. or did he ever look bemused in remembering of any event of his childhood/adulthood.. u tell, does it look real?? after all, this is all angad's memories.. i feel, just for giving the realistic touch to the story, bheegi should skip few imp things of his life.. just my 2 cents 😊