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Posted: 15 years ago
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Day 17:

Evening

Shruti: Oh no..sirf 1 hour bacha hai dance competition ki liya...mein konsi dress pehno??? -She opens her closet, and starts shuffling through- Hmm..yeh..nah..haan yeh wali..nahi colour bahut dark hai..yeh!..no too light..ughh! Mujhe kya hora hai?? -she sits on her bed-
-Nisha comes-
Nisha: Shruti!? Yeh kya tum tyaar hi nahi hoye!! Jaldi karo...!
Shruti: Di..it's impossible..mujhe pata nahi mein konsi dress pehno??
Nisha: Bas itni si baat?? Ruko, mein help karti hoon! -she walks over to Shruti's closet- Hmm..yeh..nah..haan yeh..nahi..-someone's knocks on the door-
Nisha: Kon hai bay!
Shruti: Dii!! Nahi Shruti yeh Excel waley bhi naa..har waqt pareshaan karte hain!
-knock gets louder-
-Shruti opens the door-
Ansh: Finally!
Shruti: Ansh, tum yahaan??
Nisha: Ansh?? -she turns towards the door, and holds her head- Oh yea! Mein kaise bhul sakti hoon...hume toh Mumbai waapis jane ki tyaari karni thii...chutiyan katham hone wali han..chalo chalte hai
Ansh: Chalo! Atleast tumhe yaad to hay...!
Nisha: I'm sorry na, ab chalo bhi!!
-they both leave Shruti alone-
Shruti: Ughhh!!!! -she cuddles on a chair-
-Rohit enters the room, and there is pin drop silence. The windows are open and are rocking back and forth.-
Rohit: Kya mein maadat karsakta hoon tumhari?
-Shruti looks up, and is shocked to see Rohit in her room-
-A wide smile appears on her glum face-
Shruti: Haan...
Rohit: Well, hmmm..lets see..yeh nah...-he searches her closet, and picks out a beautiful white dress, with red lining.-
Rohit: Shruti..kya tumhe pata hai tum white mein bahut pyaari lagti ho..
-Shruti is speechless, she doesn't know how to react. When she reaches out to grab the dress from Rohit. Snap. She wakes up. It was all a dream. A beautiful dream which came to an end. Shruti walks up to her closet, and pulls out an exact looking dress, and decides to wear it tonight, for the dance competition.

Meanwhile...

-Ansh and Nisha are driving in a car on the crowdy streets of Goa-
Ansh: Toh..Nisha..tumhe Goa kaise laga?
Nisha: Goa! Amazing! Yahaan par kitna alaag hai..pata hai ek din kya hua..
Ansh: Bas bas Nisha, meray kaano par reham karo!!
Nisha: Huh??? Tikh hai..agar meri baatein tumhe itni chubti hain, to mein tumse bilkul baat nahi karti..!
Ansh: Kya mein saro hoon?
Nisha: Haan!
Ansh: Kya mein ulo hoon?
Nisha: Haan!
Ansh: Kya mein stupid hoon?
Nisha: Ofcourse!!
Ansh: Tum mujhe hate karti ho?
Nisha: Haan! Haan!
Ansh: Kya tum meray saath ek date par chalo gi?
Nisha: Haan! Haan! Haan!
-She suddenly falls silent..because she responded too quickly and didn't hear what Ansh really said. Her face turns red.-
Nisha: Woh..um..mera matlab tha nahi. -she says quietly-
-Ansh has a huge smile on his face-
Ansh: Yeh date tum hamesha yaad rakho gi..!
-The both turn towards each other, and gently drive both sitting hand in hand.-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
loved the part
it was kind of short
so my review will be a little shorter
loved how you described the Shruti/Rohit scene
very well done!
I was smiling when I read the part where Nupur said yes
to the date
it was so cute
and funny how she was embarrassed
anyways continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
hey dhruv,
nice update.
rohit-shruti convo was good.
and nisha-ansh convo was really very sweet and lovely.
Ansh is so smart😆😆
loved it.
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
heyyy dhruv
really nice update
loved the scene where ansh asked for date
plzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
awesome,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ansh and nisha going on a date........... yippie...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

gr888 prt

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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hey dhruv,<br>nice update.<br>rohit-shruti convo was good.<br>and nisha-ansh convo was really very sweet and lovely.<br>Ansh is so smart😆😆<br>loved it.<br>keep it up<br>



Thank u very much Fariaa!! glad ur loving it! thxx

Dhruv
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyyy dhruv

really nice update

loved the scene where ansh asked for date

plzzzzzz continue soon

n thanx for the pm



Thank u Seemaaa loadzz!!!! Haha..I knoww..that part was nice..no probb..thankzzz for commenting! meanz a lot

Dhruv
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

awesome,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ansh and nisha going on a date........... yippie...



Glad ur happyy Pari..thxxxxx!

Dhruv!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

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No prob at all..thxxx so muchhh!

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