Phir Milenge - SHAADI update pg 34 (MJHT FF)

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Dhruv

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Day 35

Restaurant

-Before entering the restaurant, Karan takes Shruti's hand in his-
Karan: Shall we?
-Shruti nods, and together they enter the place-
-Karan holds the chair open for Shruti, and she gets seated-
Karan: Khana khay ab?
Shruti: Ek minute Karan…
Karan: Sure..kya hua Shruti
Shruti: Mujhe tumse baat karni hai…
-Then suddenly!! The violins start playing loudly, and the lights centre to Shruti and Karan-
-Suddenly, Karan pulls out a beautiful diamond ring-
-Shruti is shocked-
Shruti: Kitni pyaari hai…
Karan: Lekin tumse bahut kam…
Karan: Miss Shruti Bhushan..will you… -before he could continue Shruti interrupts him-
Shruti: Nahi…-and she pulls her hand back-
-Karan is shocked-
Karan: But I love you…
Shruti: But I don't deserve you….dekho Karan mein tumse pyaar nahi karti….hum dost hain, aur mein chahti hoon ki woh rishta bana rahey…please mujhe maaf kardo…lekin yeh tikh nahi hai…please meri baat ko dil par mat lena…
-Shruti starts crying and leaves from the restaurant-
Karan: Lagta hai ki I don't deserve you…isliya God ne bhi mera saath nahi diya….kyun God…why?...sirf meray saath hi kyun hota hai yeh?....
-Karan falls to his knees in sorrow…-

Bhushan house

Shruti: Di…di!!!!
Nisha: Kya hua Shruti?
Shruti: Di!!! –She starts crying on Nisha's shoulder-
-Nisha tries calming her down-
Nisha: Shruti dekho…idaar behto..aur paani piyo..
-She settles Shruti down a bit-
Nisha: Okay, ab mujhe patao ki kya hua…kya Karan ne kuch kaha?
Shruti: Di…he..Karan ne mujhe propose kiya....
Nisha : Kya!!! Wow!! Yeh toh kush hone ki baat hai…lekin tumhne kya kaha?
Shruti: Na…
Nisha: Lekin kyun Shruti….Karan toh tumhara acha dost hai….tumhare liya bahut acha hai…!
Shruti: Lekin…mein uske liya tikh nahi ho…di please ab aur sawaal mat karna mujhe se…-she begins crying more-
-Nisha lies Shruti in her lap and starts patting her head-
Shruti: Di…?
Nisha: Haan..bolo Shruti..
Shruti: Kya mein Mumbai chorke ja sakte hain?
Nisha: Mumbai! Lekin kyun…?
Shruti: Di..mujhe yahaan par bahut ghutaan hoti hai…aur waise bhi mera final year bhi khatam hogaya….
Nisha: Nahi!!
Shruti: Di….mein yahaan se bahut door jana chahati hoon….please di..-she continunes crying-
-Nisha rises-
Nisha: Tikhe…agar tu jana chahti hai, toh meh bhi teray saath jaongi…!
Shruti: Tum meray saath nahi aa sakti di!!! Ansh ka kya hoga?
Nisha: Mein itni selfish nahi hoon, ki apni behaan ko chorke, apni sochon!!!! Kabhi nahi!!!!
Shruti: Lekin Ansh…!! Tum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte ho!!!
Nisha : Pyaar ka matlaab sirf saath nahi hota, vishwash, bharosa, bahut emiyaat rakhte hain!!
-Nisha picks her phone and dials Ansh's number-
-Ring..ring..ring..Ansh doesn't pick up..!-
-Nisha dials again.!!-
-Ring..ring..ring..no response..!..Answering machine!-
Nisha decides to leave a message..
Nisha: Ansh..mein jari hoon Shruti kay saath Mumbai se bahut door..please humare piche maat ana…mein tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon..aur hamesha karti raoning –she begins crying-….lekin ab humara jane ka waqt agaya hai….agar humara pyaar sacha hai, agar humara rishta pavitra hai…toh hum tum phir milenge…-she hangs up-
Shruti: Di mujhe toh apna pyaar nahi mila, lekin tumhne apna pyaar kyun mera liya kurbaan kardiya?
Nisha: Shh! Aisa nahi kehta Shruti!! This is not the end...it is the beginning of a new story....agar yeh judaii ka waqt aya hai, toh ek din humara milan ka din bhi ayaga…..
Shruti: Kissi ne sach hi kaha hai….agar end tak sab kuch tikh nahi hai, then its not the end, but the mere beginning! –Nisha hugs Shruti tightly and kisses her forehead, and they leave for the train.-

Day 36

Ansh: Ma...mein college se abhi aya hoon…kya mera koi phone aya tha?
Aunty: Nahi….Anshu tum messages check karlo…
-Ansh checks his voice mail-
-Operator: 1 New Message- Ansh plays it - ..and he listens to Nisha's message-
-Ansh drops the phone to the floor, and rushes to Rohit's home-
Aunty: Kya hua..??
-Ansh slams the door in a hurry-

Rohit's house

Ansh: Rohit open the door!!
-Rohit opens it immediately-
Rohit: Kya kya hua?
Ansh: Nisha aur Shruti…!!!
Rohit: Kya hua unko?? Bolo!!
Ansh: Woh dono Mumbai chorke jari hain!!!
Rohit: What!!! Chorke jari hain!!! Kyun?
Ansh: Mujhe nahi pata….
Rohit: Then what are we waiting for, lets go to the train station!!!! We have to stop them!!!
Ansh: Ruko Rohit!!! Nisha chahati thi ki mein uske piche mat ayaon!!!!
Rohit: Lekin Shruti ne toh nahi ka na??!!!!
-Ansh slaps Rohit right across the face-
-Rohit is shocked-
Ansh: Apne hosh mein ao Rohit!!! Jab Shruti thi, tumhne usko bahut dard diya, ab woh jari hai, toh usse jane do. Waise bhi yeh sab tumhari waje se hua hai!!!!
Rohit: Meri waja se? Maine kabhi bhi Shruti ka bura nahi chaha!!!! Never!!!!!
Ansh : Jo tum nahi dekh sakte they, woh hum sabne dekhliya tha...yahaan tak ki Benji, Tamana Mam, Nisha, mujhe, CJ, sabko pata tha ki Shruti ko tumse pyaar hai!!!!!
Rohit : WHAT!!!!? Shruti mujhse pyaar karti thi?
Ansh: Karti thi nahi, hamesha karti rahegi!..bahut..bahut zaada!!!
Rohit: Kya Sheena ko yeh baat pata thi?
Ansh: Mujhe nahi pata…
Rohit: Mujhe sach sach patao Ansh..! Kya yeh baat Sheena ko pata thi?
Ansh: Haan!!!!! Woh toh hamesha Shruti ko dukh deti rahi!!!!! Tumhare samne Parvati, aur baki sab ke samne janvar say bhi batar!!!!
-Rohit falls to his knees, and starts crying..!!!-
Rohit: Mein kitna stupid hoon!!!!! My best friends, meri Shruti!!! Mujhse itna pyaar karti hai…ki usne meri kushi ki liya apna pyaar sacrifice kardiya!!!!! –He starts banging his head on the wall-
-Ansh reaches in time and stops him-
Rohit: Mein aaj apni ankhon ki samne bahut girgiya hoon…pata nahi yeh sab kaise hogaya…!!! Sheena ki liya maine ek angel ko bahut dard diya!!!!!! Lekin ab aur nahi!!! Main Sheena ka chapter ko once in for all khatam kar doonga!!!!
-Ansh and Rohit leave for Sheena's home-
-Sheena opens the door-
Sheena: Ansh..Rohit tum yahan? Iss waqt? Kuch hua kya?
-Rohit starts yelling-
Rohit: Kuch hua? Tum mujhe pooch rahi ho!!!!!
-Sheena puts her hands on Rohit's face..but Rohit pulls it off-
Rohit: Ab tumhare asli chehra meray samne agaya hai!!!! Tum kitni egoistical, selfish aur giri hui ho!!!! Tumhe pata tha ki Shruti mujhe se pyaar karti hai, lekin phir bhi tumhne mujhe andher mein rakha!!!!!
Sheena: Main tumhe khona nahi chahati thi Rohit!!! Isliya maine yeh sab kiya!!!!
Rohit: Mujhe khona nahi chahati thi? Yeh kaho ki tum mujhe jeetna chahati thi!!!!! Tumhe toh apni pride aur ego jaada pyaari hai!!!!!! Tum meri zindagi ki sabsi bari bhool ho!! Tumhari waja se Ansh ka pyaar khogaya, Shruti ka pyaar shuro hone se pehla hi mardiya, lekin ab mein ek aur galti nahi karonga!!!
-He pulls of his engagement ring, and throws it to the Sheena-
Rohit: Rakho apni ring!!!!!! Agay se mujhe apna chehra kabhi mat dikhana!!!!
Rohit: Ansh, here are the car keys! Lets go dude!!!
-Ansh speeds through traffic trying to reach the train station. There is a traffic jam on the street though!!-
Ansh: Bhagooo!!!!
-Ansh and Rohit begin running through cars and trucks trying to reach the trains-
-Ansh spots Nisha's dupatta, and races with Rohit towards it, but it turns out to be someone else-
-Unfortunately, the instructor gives the trains the signal for take off and the all start going-
Rohit: Ab konsi train mein hongi yeh dono!!!!!
-Ansh and Rohit starts running to all the windows trying to search for Shruti and Nisha!-
-Ansh finds Nisha, and is running after the train!!-
Ansh: Please Nisha ruk jao!!! Please meri khatir!!! Please!!!
-Nisha begins crying, and turns away..her duppata goes flying out the window, and settle on Ansh's face-
-The train leaves the station-
-Ansh drops to the ground, and kisses the duppata-
-Rohit come over-
Ansh: Zindagi abhi bahut lambhi hai….
Rohit: Agar aaj woh jari hain…
Ansh: Toh kaal, who khud dhorkay humari bhaoon mein ayangi!!!!!

PRESENT DAY: MUMBAI MILITARY ACADEMY (MMA)

In the park, sitting beside the lakeshore…remembering the past, to live the present, and build the future.

-Shruti hugs Rohit tightly, and Nisha hugs Ansh firmly also!-

Shruti: Past humara jaisa bhi ho…
Nisha: Humara aaj bahut acha hai…
Rohit : Aane waala kal kaisa bhi ho...
Ansh: Agar tum saath ho…toh jaise jahaan bhi khadmon mein hai….

Everyone has tears in their eyes...for once again they are all together...
-Group hug-

Edited by Dhruvii - 15 years ago

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Marukh Zia

@MoNaYaRoX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

FANTASTIC UPDATE!!!
aww the ending was so sad of the flashback =(
but it was a great update they finally found each other!!!!
plzz continue soon!!!
THANKS for the PM!!!!
=D =D =D =D =D =D

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jyotika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

it ws awesomeeeeee...
fabulous..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzzz continue soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

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finnie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

too cool n nice ud, lovely

thnx 4 d pm

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

gr8888

thanxxxxxxx 4 d pm

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

Hey Dhruv,
it was lovely, awesome update.
It was too good.
Loved it.
thanx a lot 4 ur nice update.

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Dhruv

@Hot-Stud

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: MoNaYaRoX
FANTASTIC UPDATE!!! aww the ending was so sad of the flashback =( but it was a great update they finally found each other!!!! plzz continue soon!!! THANKS for the PM!!!! =D =D =D =D =D =D

thank u that meanz a lot to me.. no prob for da pm.. :)!