MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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res...got some work to do will read and comment..
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its nice and will want to read it.. do keep me in the pm list 😊
Edited by arss - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
plzzzzzzzzzz continue and add me to yur pm list..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Congo Daksha!
You really rock jani!
Sound interesting!
Looking forewerd to it=)
-Aisho
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
i am really excited ...continue soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Updated:
Scene: Gunjan-Nupur in a shop in the evening

Nupur:.

Bhaiya koi accha shawl dikhao. Haan, wo waala. (said to the shopkeeper)

Dekh Gunjan ye waala kaisa rahega kal bauji ka Janamdin hai to hum unko ye denge. (said to Gunjan.)

Gunjan:

Haan Di ye waala accha rahega.(said to Nupur)

Bhaiya isse pack kar do. (said to the shopkeeper)

Now, coming out of the shop and moving to their house.

Nupur: Maa-Bauji aaj raat tak aa jayenge. Aur kal subah hum Bauji ko surprise denge.

Gunjan: Haan mere khyal se raat 10 baje tak pahunch jaayenge.

Nupur: Haan chal ab jaldi ghar chal. Bohot saari tayari bhi karni hai'.

Scene: Gunjan and Nupur in house

Both of them are cleaning the house and Nupur making food in the kitchen.

Nupur: Chal, khana to ban gaya ab thoda aaram ho jaye. Remote dena Gunjan. Thodi news dekhi jaaye.

Gunjan: Haan di

Both of them opens the TV and the news channel states: Aaj Delhi se Morena jaane waali Indrani express ki ek bogie palat jaane ke kaaran poori train mein aag lag gayi. Ghayal yatriyon ko bachane ki poori koshish ki jaa rahi hai aur ye khabar aayi hai ki 300 se zyada logon ki maut ho gayi hai.

Remote falls from Nupur's hand and she becomes stunned.

Gunjan(with tears in her eyes): Di, kuch nahin hua hai. Sambhaalo apne aap ko. Hum abhi Maa-Bauji ke ticket no. se pata lagate hain.

Nupur is stunned and tears are coming out of her eyes.

Gunjan calls the helpline no. and finds that her parents are no more. Phone fells from her hand. Nupur asks Gunjan and she told that they are no more.

Both of them incline towards the table starts crying.

Scene III: Gunjan-Nupur's house and dead body of their parents is lying.

Both are crying.

Nupur: Aaj Bauji ka janamdin hai aur aaj hi'''.(starts crying more)

In the gloomy atmosphere enters their cousin brother Uday (a lovely, understanding but strict person)

Gunjan: Uday Bhaiya, ye kya ho gaya. Aisa kyun hua''

Uday: Gunjan, koi baat nahin main aa gaya hoon na ab sab theek ho jaayega'.

Then they take the body for cremation. After returning back from there.

Uday: Tum dono ko apne aap ko sambhalna hoga. Chalo hum sab Mumbai chalte hain aur phir se ek nayi shuruat karte hain.

Gunjan and Nupur: nahin hum kahin nahin jaayenge.

Uday: Tum dono yahaan akeli kya karogi. Chalo mere saath'

With sad mood all three of them leaves for Mumbai'''..

Edited by dakshaalg - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear good going just keep it up you have a potentialities so don't waste it 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
hey u starting with a sad news.
but any way it was nice update.
so now they leaves 4 mumbai
hmm great part dear.
keep it up
Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
OMG! Funny part!
Loved so much !
U rock daksha!
-Aisho
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Karan.P.Rocks

OMG! Funny part!

Loved so much !
U rock daksha!
-Aisho

Why do u think its funny......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hey u starting with a sad news.
but any way it was nice update.
so now they leaves 4 mumbai
hmm great part dear.
keep it up

I started with it b'coz my story demands it. You must wait to see the whole story

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