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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurarti


Hey Mahak

do it soon dear

I'm waiting

luv

Nidzy




just wait for a second.........

it's almost done...........
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Posted: 15 years ago


piche part mein aapne ek bahut hi zyada romantic part dekha.....mayur kiss each other on their lips!!!!!
ab aage!



thank u all for ur love showered!

it really means a lot to me!

and keep commenting even if u dont like anything..........

plzzzzzzzzz.......






Nupur- chodiye mujhe…..

Mayank- kyun?

Nupur- mujhe jaana hai

Mayank- nahi chodoonga

Nupur- please………

Mayank- I loved ur kiss…I felt my body burning…….what about you?

Nupur intended to go…..

Mayank- tumne bataya nahi…….

Nupur- me too……..

Mayank- so liked our kiss? Right?

Nupur blushes and turns to go…….but mayank does not let her go…….

he firmly holds her by her hand….he could not let her go atleast not now…...

not without getting an answer………

Mayank- I didn't got my answer..

Nupur releasing his hand and rushing out of the door – yes





present-

Do you remember Nupur?

We loved each other so much.........

we loved each other simply..........

we prayed to god that we should never get separated but what happened???

We got separated.......

aur ab tum so rahi ho.......tumhe uthna hoga.......hoga tumhe uthna........

tumhe mere pyaar ki kasam........

hamare pyaar ki kasam...........

plz Nupur utho na.............

plzzzzzzzzzzzz I love you Nupur.....

mere nahi to kam se kam us kasam ki khatir uth jao........

jo humne khaayi thi.......

ek saath nibhaane ki...........

hum ek saath kitne khush than na???????

hum kitna romance karte tha.......aur us raat?????

Yaad hai........

hum us raat do se ek ho gaye the??

Yaad hai?????

Utho na..........




Now Nupur and mayank were ready to go to honeymoon.......

they had spend many days together but they were ready to go to honeymoon to canada......



During the flight-

Nupur looks out side the window of the plane.......mayank is watching her adorably.....

Mayank- kya hua angel?

Nupur- hum kab pohochenge?

Mayank- kya baat hai, badi jaldi hai?

Nupur blushes and says- aisa nahi hai......it's just that main bahut excited hoon.....

Mayank- honeymoon ke liye?

Nupur gives him a "I will kill you" expression and says- mayank

Mayank- ok baba.....hum log do ghante mein pahonch jayenge.....



They reach the Canada hotel.......

Mayank- tum yahin ruko.......main keys le kar aata hoon......

Nupur- ok



Mayank goes away to the counter and sees gunjan.......

oh no.......

he thought to run away from there but he couldn't......

He becomes all nostalgic and flashes back in his past......




Mahak to readers-
hey guys.....let me tell you first of all that this is now the starting of the story that how mayur got separated....and this is mayank wondering abt what happened in his past with gunjan....this is mayank's flashback in past...on seeing gunjan....past mein bhi mayank ke liye gunjan pehle se hi known thi....unka koi rishta tha....woh rishta maine yahin par dikhaya hai.....don't get confused.....yeh sab kuch past mein hi ho raha hai...



Flashback-

Gunjan and mayank were just friends.......

mayank never took her seriously.....but she loved him a lot....

she was the one who loved him......

woh mayank ke papa ke best friend ki beti thi......

although she wore short skirts......yet mayank's papa loved her like her own daughter......

mayank's papa had even decided their engagement........

it was a time when mayank hadn't met Nupur......



Scene 1) Mayank- tum bhi na gunjan......

Gunjan- mayank maine tumse kitni baar kaha hai ki main tumhe kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakti hoon...



Mayank was on his shoot that day and gunjan had come to see him.......

but on seeing a girl drooling over mayank......

she just got angry.......

she made the security guard throw the girl out of the shoot.......



Mayank- par who sirf ek fan hi toh thi

Gunjan- fan ho ya koi aur.....main bas yeh nahi dekh sakti......

Mayank- theek hai baba......chalo coffee nahi ice cream khane chalet hain......kyunki already tumhara dimaag bahut garam hai......

Gunjan just smiles but she gives "I will not leave you" expression to the girl.....on going outside.....



Scene 2 ) Mayank got up from his usual timetable.....

today was his birth day and he had no shoots today......



mayank goes to the balcony and says- hi papa

m dad- hey mayank.....happy birthday beta......hamesha khush raho

mayank- thank dad

m dad- beta aaj shaam ko party hai......tum apne saare friends ko bula lena.....

mayank- ok dad



mayank gets ready for the party in the evening.......

he wore a dashing cream sherwani........

he was looking like a star....he was a star......

the sherwani he wore was complimenting his beauty......

he goes down to the party......



m dad- jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain ki aaj mere bete ka janamdin hai.....so please enjoy.....

everyone enjoys the party whole heartedly.....

then gunjan entered the party......

for a change she was not wearing a mini skirt......

she was wearing a lehenga......she was looking very beautiful.....

she was wearing a white coloured lehenga which was complimenting her white skin.......

she was very fair by complexion.....

she was very nice girl.....

but she was extra possessive about mayank......

she wore a nice necklace around her neck.....



gunjan- hi mayank

mayank- kya baat hai gunji? Aaj to tum bahut achi lag rahi ho.....

gunjan- thanks darling.....

mayank- tum sirf Indian kapde pehena karo.......u will look good in them........

gunjan- no ways! Main aur Indian dresses? Na baba na.......woh to maine aaj aise hi pehen liya par ise sambhalna kitna mushkil hai.......

mayank- ok tumhari marzi



mayank always loved good clothes.....

i mean clothes which actually cover something......

mayank loved Indian traditions and dresses......

he was a star yet he was ground to earth.....

he was a true Indian....



gunjan kissed mayank on his cheek and said- happy birthday......

mayank- thanks....

after some time......mayank's dad asked everyone to pay attention to him.....



m dad- hey everyone.......plz pay attention......i have to say something......

everyone was looking at him.....

he called mayank to the stage to him......

he was looking very happy indeed......

m dad- aaj ke is shubh avsar par main apne bete mayank ki engagement gunjan se karna chahta hoon.......taaki mere dost ki beti meri beti ban jaaye.......



everyone was happy.......they clapped.....

but as for mayank......

he was not happy......

uske papa ne uski life ka itna bada faisla usse bina pooche kaise kar diya?

Uske papa ne ek baar bhi usse nahi poocha.....

he did not loved any one else but he was sure that gunjan was not the one in her dreams........

woh dono to kitne alag the.....

mayank was very angry......

he wanted to clear out the doubt here only.......



mayank- dad mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai

m dad- beta pehle gunjan ko ring to pehena do....

mayank- dad.......

m dad- bolo

gunjan- kya hua mayank? Kuch problem hai kya?

Mayank- dekho.....



But no one was listening to mayank.......

he was trying hard to maintain his cool but now he lost his cool.......

he shouted......."bas karo"



M dad- kya hua beta? Is everything all right?

Mayank- nahi paap........main tabse aapse kehena chahta tha ki main yeh engagement nahi karna chahta hoon.......



Everyone was awestruck.......

they were staring at him.......

gunjan had tears in her eyes.....

she went near mayank.....



Gunjan- par kyun mayank?

Mayank- kyunki main tumse pyaar nahi karta hoon......

Gunjan- toh phir tum kisse pyaar karte ho?

Mayank- kisi se nahi........par main tumse shaadi nahi kar sakta hoon.....

Gunjan was crying- kyun? Mujh mein aisi kya kami hai?

Mayank- aisi baat nahi hai gunjan......i m sorry.....but I can't marry you.....main tumhari life barbaad nahi karna chahta hoon.........and I know that I can never love you......



And saying this he left........

as for gunjan.......

she was left behind.....

she was weeping.......

she had not got her love......

she loved her best friend but he didn't and now after confessing her love to him......

she had lost him......

she had lost even his friendship......

which was very important to her...

she lost everything....

her friendship just because of her love....

she fell to the ground....

on her knees.....



Gunjan- kisi ne kaha pyaar anda hota hai
koi kahe pyaar sirf gham deta hai
kisi ki na maani aur kar liya maine pyaar, sajna
ro rahi hoon tabse jabse kiya hai tune inkaar, sajna
And she cried and cried........



And uske baad mayank na hi gunjan se kabhi mila......

and na hi kabhi usne usse koi baat ki.......

because he knew that gunjan usse kabhi khush nahi rehene degi.......

kabhi nahi....

she had always told mayank " agar tum mere nahi ho sakte ho to main tumhe kabhi kisi aur ka bhi nahi hone doongi.......yeh yaad rakhna ki agar tumne mere alawa kabhi bhi kisi aur se shaadi ki toh main use maar doongi....."

Flashback ends





And now today when he saw her....

she was standing all alone.....

she was also busy taking the keys......



mayank thought that......

agar isne nupur ko dekh liya toh kahin yeh Nupur ko hurt karne ki koshish na kare......

yeh kahin mujhse sach mein badla na lena chahe......

kash yeh phir se sirf meri dost ban sakti.....

i always liked her.....

par isne kabhi bhi mujhe dost ki nazar se nahi dekha hai.....

ab main kya karoon? Nupur ko mere saath dekhkar kahin yeh over react na kar jaaye.....



Mayank's thoughts were interrupted by nupur's voice......

Nupur- mayank......kya soch rahe ho?

Mayank- kuch nahi......



As soon as gunjan heard "mayank",

she turned back to see mayank and Nupur standing together.....

she was surprised to see mayank with some other girl wearing a beautiful yellow saree.......

she went towards mayank......



Gunjan- hi mayank...

Mayank- hi gunji...

Nupur- mayank yeh kaun hai?

Gunjan- yeh kaun hai?

Mayank- Nupur, yeh hai gunjan meri friend.........

and gunjan, she is Nupur.......my wife....




that's it for today........

i can't type anymore.......

vaise bhi i will come and update my other ff "arrange marriage" today itself but in the night.......

coz my fingers are paining........

not because of this........

i can type more than 50 pages a day in one go.......

but because i had to write my project too.......

therefore i stopped here......

but hope u did liked it.......

coz now its so humble of u to comment......

so comeon........

give me ur feedback..........

i am waiting.........

and silent readers don't be silent.........

i want my reviews/.........

and hope u will not kill me for stopping at this point 😉

and i love u all for ur special comments.........

i have replied to each one of them...........

hope u like them.........


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys,.........

that's it for today!

now plzzzzzz press the like tab

and plz do post ur comments........

and don't forget that its also updated on my site......

http://mahak-goel.webs.com/apps/blog/show/2093156-life-in-a-movie

now there is no need of u to sign up on it.......

do check it out.......
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Yipie I'm first to comment

Awsome update wonderful dear
So that's the story behind Gunjan
I hate her for separating Mayur
I just loved this part
We loved each other so much.........

we loved each other simply..........

we prayed to god that we should never get separated but what happened???

We got separated.......

aur ab tum so rahi ho.......tumhe uthna hoga.......hoga tumhe uthna........

tumhe mere pyaar ki kasam........

hamare pyaar ki kasam...........

plz Nupur utho na.............

plzzzzzzzzzzzz I love you Nupur.....

mere nahi to kam se kam us kasam ki khatir uth jao........

jo humne khaayi thi.......

ek saath nibhaane ki...........

hum ek saath kitne khush than na???????

hum kitna romance karte tha.......aur us raat?????

Yaad hai........
Aur yeh kya hai Mahak iss ke aage ka kitna tadpa ke dalne ka irada hai
I'm definitely going to kill you for stopping at this point
On the whole lovely update dear
keep it up
Luv
Nidzy



Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago


hey mahak,

It was very very nice update.

Loved mayur as usual.

They were so understanding.

Oh so u revealed the past of gunji and Mayank

So gunji love mayank but Mayank didn't.

Hmm that's why gunji try to hell mayanks life.

Oh GOD so gunjan gave poison to Nupur.

I hate gunjan.

i loved the emotional scene of mayank in hospital.

it was really very touching.

Plz plz bring mayur close together.

Plz dear do it for us.

Awesome update mahak.

Just loved it.

Keep updating.

.
Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey thats so undone

Less of Mayur and more of Mayu gun

But anywyas jitna Mayur ka tha i loved it

Atlast we'll knw the reason why they left each other

Hop Gun dosent hurts Nups yaar

Waise liked the way Mayu teases Nups in Flight

Update soon but more of Mayur

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey honey nice update liked it 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was very nice update dear..
eagerly waiting for the next part...
continue soon..
Edited by zummi03 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

loved the update mahak..

it was superb...

and gunjan and mayank??? plz ab present mein aake mayur ko together kardo plz...

there past was so romantic muaah........

and i feel to cry watching there present..

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Posted: 15 years ago
I hav edited my comment on page 42

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