Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 30

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey i'm gonna read the parts dear

and then i'll post my comments on each part by part kk

dear

-sanam-

ohk......

i will wait for them............

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

awesome part yaar!!!!...<br>please update soon<br>pm me.😳<br>

thanks......

i will update soon..........

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Oho

Twist wala promo

Update soon

thanks.............

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

oh no!
ab kya hoga?

vaise ye Gunjan ab kyun aayi?

what was Mayu's relationship with her?

so many questions...

but all of my answers will be answered

on tuesday,

meri bhi chuti ab milli,

so I'll be updating soon

continue soon brilliant writer!

ab wahi hoga jo manjoore mere dil hoga........

gunjan kaa aana zarrori tha........

log keh rahe the ki they wanna see the present lives too.........

aur present mein gunjan to mayank ki fiance hai.........

to past mein uska role kya tha?????

aan tere sawaalon ke jawaab main de doongi............

thanks..........

i will continue soon............

Originally posted by: zummi03

sorry for the late reply..bcoz having exams..
the update was awesome....
and promo is very intresting..
will for ur update..

its ok........

i can understand..........

thanks.......

i will update soon............

Originally posted by: Lipsa_mjht

HEY!I'mLipsa! I Just read Your whole FF! I Have been intending to read it When It had like 10 Parts out in the First Thread! But I was Lazy! 😆 But I sure made a Mistake! The FF is fantastic! I love the way You describe Things and the Concept is Fantastic! I sure was surprised when he Said The doctor That they were Already married!

The Marriage Moments were Very well Described too. The scenes are Romatic <3! I would Have Given a Longer Update But I missed MJHT yesterday and I'm going to Catch up with it As Well as study For my Lit exam tommorow =(. Omg! Sometimes I'm sure a Chatterbox 😆. Dont worry You'll get Longer comments 😆

Anyways The promo is Great! i'm dying to Know What was Gunjan's(?) plan! Great Job! Good work!
Update soon!

Love,
Lipsa

and i am mahak......

ohk!

well to be very frank........

i too am very lazy except in writing...........

thanks 😳

i thought that no one will be surprised at this......

but i guess everyone was!

thanks........

well i described the marriage moments like i felt........

thanks for liking them too.........

i will wait for ur longer reviews..........

thanks 😳

u will know abt gunjan soon.........

i will update soon......

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey mahi hey sanam.....

i finally got time to sit down and read the part and then comment on each, first and far most I'm realli sorry for being late .chalo finaaly u got time.........i am very happy for this........its ok that u r commenting late.......i can understand........

I hope you understand my position and don't be angry please kk.nahi yaar..........i do understand.......and i am not at all angry with u........atleast u commented! this is all that matters to me........

Okay wow i have missed alot of parts and need to comment on them, this is going to take alot of my time but its okay when it is something you love the time does not matter.how sweet of u to say that!!!!!!!

Lets start from part 8, i have not read beyond that part. ohk.....u start.....

Part 8

awwwwwwww my mayu crying, yaar he is crying becoz nupur is unconscious....!

Hey mahi why are making him cry, its his mistake.....its in his destiny...!!

i hate it when he cry, he onli looks good with his all top smile😃i agree...he looks very handsome when he flashes his dimple smile....!

.aaww he was still holding nupurs hand while crying that was the sweetest part ever, thanks for liking it....u r the first one to mention it as sweet....

only if nupur woke up, please nupur wake up...she will wake up as i unfold the past...

He is soo sweet he went to meet her but found out she was getting engaged🥺.rona mat......abhi to best part baaki hai mere dost.....

.....but the best part i liked was that he realized he loved nupur and only that matters. .hmmm.......well yahi to baat hai....hum jise chahte hain use paa len.....yeh zaroori to nahi hai na.....it maters that we love him.....that's it......

Mahi janni amziing part i luved it like anything toooooooooooooo good..oh......i am very happy that u liked it......

this is how i feel exactly after reading this part😆😆😆

..how sweet! i love tweeties!.

tooo good mahi , you are a fab writer👏👏👏

.thanks..i am glad that u liked it.....coz u r a grt writer urself....

Part 9

Omgshh the poetry love itttttttttttt......thanks....chalo tujhe bhi pasand aayi...

so true for his situation. ..isis situation ke liye hi to likhi thi.....

hey mahi did u write it, cuz if u did *bow down to u*..haan yaar yeh maine likhi hain....bas logon ne ise copy karke net par upload kar diya....pata nahi logon ko copy karne se kya milta hai?.

⭐️⭐️. Awsome mayank go and get your love nupur!!!!!!!!!!!!,.he will go......

but wat he met samrat....yes sam is there too......the path of love never runs smooth...

oh oh some trouble coming up i guess😲😲..tu tension mat le....

.aaaaaawwwwww poor mayu, his best friend is getting married to nupur, .haan yaar......poor he! what can he do now..

he can't break that marrige..........obviously he can't..

he is such a sweetheart i know....mayank is totally my dream man....but not arjun....i mean his character...

😳...again love the shahyri....i keep on writing them.....

👏👏..........Good job mayank nupur is ur love, u need her not any1 else!!!!!!!!!!!! he proposed to her.................yes he had to......he couldn't stop even without telling him......

u idiot accept why r standing their silently................she is confused whether she can accept him or not....she does love him but she can't betray her family....

😲😲😲

amzing part mahi way to leave a person at a cliff hanger😆😆,..thank u thank u......aap hi se sikha hai...

i want to read moreeeeeee

..u can babu..

..how sweet!!!!! did i tell u that i love ur graphics??????.

i feel exactly liek this because of nupur!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-sanam-

Part 10

haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii main marjawan luved mayurssssssssss dailouge.........thank u thank u ji..

wish a guy wud say that to me, .i wish that for u too.....

par its okay !!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆 .kyun? koi na koi to hoga hi na...

YIPEEEEEEEEEEE she said yes..she had to.....she loved him yaar......

, join me in the dance if you please tooo. dancing with you....

itna sweet scene hai i can't even describe my feelings, ..well i can't even...

mahi you seriously know how to make a person feel beautiful!!!!!!!!!.thanks.....

😳😳. Par present mein mayu cry kar raha and that is making me sadddd... .mujhe bhi...par kya karen! rona uski kismat hai.....

That is awsoem that ppl understood the situation.........hmm.....har kisi ko samajhna chahiye that hum usi ke saath khush honge jisse hum pyaar karte hain...

but samrat.............bechaara!.

I guess he does have a right to be angry after all best friend!!! .thanks for understanding his condition.....

hello suppose to them everyhting!!!!!!!!!! .wahi toh! mayank to uska childhood frd hai!..

poor guy feels hurt...he is devastated......

aww sammy agreed how sweet. ..he is understanding.......

mayu climbed a pipe😆.... ..what else could he think?.

ANGEL.................kitna romantic hai mayu!!! .thanks..i love this word...and mayank to hai hi romantic...

😳😳😳. They got engaged , wonerful. ..thanks..

I like where the story is going soo far.. .i am happy that u liked it..

i feel like cuddling u for writing an amzing part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, .i feel the same for u...

akhir dost kis ki hai.........* proud smile .teri!.

😃*

-sanam-

Part 11

that sweet how they live in the same flat but diff apartments😳. .i hate live-in relationships....how can anyone do so?.

He asked for a date.. .itna to hak banta hi hai na?.

how cute can they get mahi , .i myself dont know how much i can imagine! .

you described the whole date scene soo well. thank u so much.....i right now wanna hug u....

the hug and he shyness aye haiiiiiiiii .aur nahi to kya...its their first hug ever...after confession....

😳 He made her cry but what he said about her...... .hmm.....kaafi touching speech ho gayi thi na? i guess kuch zyada hi likh diya maine...

kitna perfect hai mayank kash uske jaisa asal zindagi mein bhi koi hota kash..... .hmm.....asal zindagi mein mujhe aise hi characterstic waale ladke ki talash hai..hehehehe *shy*.

ur shahyri always leave me smiling!!!😃 i am flattered by now..and i am red....

😛 aye hai shahyri mein ek doosre ko reply de rahi hani kitna sweet haina dono!!!!!!!!!!😳😳

.unke liye to sweet hai....lekin meri band baj gayi hai...itni shayari to maine entire life mein kabhi bhi nahi sochi hai.....

i feel so shy after reading the part, the temparature just keeps on imcreasing😆

.temperature rise hona to abhi baaki hai......

-sanam-

part 12

THE KISS.omg they r going to kiss each other. .yes they r...

kitna cute haina they r nervousness and excitment at the same same time .its their first kiss after all!.

😳. THEY KISSED !!!!!!!!!!!!! .yes they had to...

wohooooooooooooooooooo......... .yeh!.

and wow for a long time too. nahi for a short time......

it is ok ofcourse u r gonna feel shy after just having ur first kiss. .aur nahi to kya! koi samjahta hi nahi hai.....

😆😆. My god mahi tu na ur r making me senti by all of mayu dialouge he is just so perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!! .i know! thanks...i like senti men....they r good at heart too....

. after the movie completion the decided to get married, .their love was true...and marriage purifies ur love......

FINALLY.....awwwwwww how sweeeeeeeeeeet........... .thanks..

finally there marrige day is here. and they r nervous its okay bachon hota hai.😆😆😆

.i know....main yaar jo bhi part likhti hoon usmein khud ko un characters ki jagah par rakh deti hoon to feel their emotions....and i am happy that mere yeh reactions tujhe pasand aaye....wait till u read my "arrange marriage" it has the super duper feelings dose.....

this is mayank and nupur, just perfect for each other!!!!!!!!!!!😳 .how sweet!.

-sanam-

woooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww mahi sweets congrats on the new thread so many congrats that i can't evne say it. .thank u so much......i am so happy that u liked it.....

Your ff is just to amzing and i'm gald ppl are reconizing it finally😳 .i am ion cloud nine by the amount of love people r giving me.....

😳

.thank u so much.....love u sooooooo much........

i hope you get many more threads like these and continues getting moreeeeeeeeee and more and moreee

thanks..par shayad yeh isi thread mein khatam ho jaaye....dekhte hain what can i do......

-sanam-

Part 14

their marrige day is here...... .yup.

wow the desciption of nupur and the moon , .hmm.....i felt like that only..

do you know how to write or what mahi!!!!!!! .thank u...yaar ab to main tomato ko red hone mein competition de sakti hoon... .

😲😲. it is just perfect. .thanks.

aww mayu could not look away and then they got married thank -godd .yes i am happy that now they r married......

🥳......................................

and then in their bedroom nupur was crying cuz she was missing her family .everyone does!.

awwwwwwwwwwwww mayu comforting her is just perfect!!!!!!!!!!! .he is her life partner....and a life partner always does help his mate...

👏👏👏. I loved it how they both gave time to each and respected each others wishes soo sweet. .i am glad that u liked this fact...

he gifted her a necklace how cute😳 .kuch to gift use milna hi chaiye na!.

flowers for the pretty lady for writing a wonderful part!!!!! .thank u! and i am so happy for ur comment....and do u think that i am pretty?????.

👏

-sanam-

Part 15

Hmmmmmmmm feeling kinda sad cuz its the last part that u have updated and i'm gona have to wait for u to update the other parts .sabra ka fal meetha hota hai..but i am happy that u commented!.

. okay now to the part awwww her magalsutar got stuck and mayu is being wayy too naughty at the moment😆😆. .he is! aakhir biwi hai uski!.

yes nupur please get up mayu needs u!!!!!!!! .haan yaar....i wonder why is she taking so long?.

.. I have shivers running up and down afte reading this part. .same here.....i had butterflies within me...i was red writing this part....i was mortified with shame on this part.....i still cant believe that i wrote it!.

Mahi r u sure u r a bacchi .. .na...i told u na,....that i am a kid at heart and a grown up in life affairs....and at writing...i don't know what i write...

i htink u have grown up sweety.... .me too.....

I have soo many butterflies in my stomach after reading this part. .i too had...

great job

.thanks.

WOW finally done commenting on all the parts..... thanks for that! i was waiting.......

i feel like reading more par its okay i'll wait

.main jaldi update karoongi.....

Promo

ohhhhh soooooo gunjan back, .yes she is in past.

cna't wait to find out the secret between them their past and what happened .neither can i....u will get to know that soon..

do con't soon hun kkk

.ohk sweety....

There i commented on all the parts i missed .yes i know....

happy now smile😃😃😃

.i am smiling....a big one.....

-sanam-

and i am lucky to have u in my life who knows what it means to me.........

when are you updating mahak
wating for ur update

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

when are you updating mahak
wating for ur update

i am updating right now aditi..........

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

i am updating right now aditi..........