{...Beyond the limits...} - AR [Part27 - page 137]

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GoldenPanda.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#921

Originally posted by: suzzane14

hehe......no its just a typical american accent that they speak out on the streets..! just tryin ta give ye a little feel of boston...where the fic is set...thanks a lot, loved yer comment....i will add ye to my pm list...no worries....i am glad ye are liking the fic! 😊

Oh, I see, so you live in Boston?

Anyways the last part ended just when it got exciting, when can we expect the next part?😳

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Sonia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#922

Originally posted by: suzzane14

omg....thank ye so much....like srsly ye are a true friend gal....just luv the way ye appreciate me...thanks a lot....ill update the part soon...! loved yer comment....i cant believe ppl like my writing skills! sigh...hehe

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u wont ever stop thanking me, wil u? 😆

and since u r never gonna stop, U R MOST WELCOME babe 😉

n its high tym u start beleiving tht u r worth all the comments, actually u r worth more 😊

oh yeah! i am desperately waiting for the next updateeeeeee, excited as hell!!! heehee

better get ur hands typing FAST 😆

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karans_angel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#923

i jst completed reading it...it is superb yaar......awesomeeeeeeeeee....
amazing ff......😳
eagerly waiting 4 d nxt part.....hope armaan realise dat he loves ridz....
update superrrrr sooooon n do pm me plzzzzzz......😃

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suzanne

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Posted: 15 years ago

#924

Originally posted by: karans_angel
i jst completed reading it...it is superb yaar......awesomeeeeeeeeee....
amazing ff......😳
eagerly waiting 4 d nxt part.....hope armaan realise dat he loves ridz....
update superrrrr sooooon n do pm me plzzzzzz......😃

great! i am glad ye liking the fic! thanks 😊

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Nruti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#925

we want updat yaar...how long are you gona make us w8.....

cont soon

love

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Sonia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#926

when r u updating sweetheart?

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suzanne

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Posted: 15 years ago

#927

PART 26

'this is great...dinner time', billy beamed, he caressed a glum ridhima's hair and plopped down the chair, getting an eyefull of her dragged, muffled state, low in the spirits.

Armaan lifted his gaze, glancing at his beaut, his heart bucked an afflictive beat seeing her down in the mouth. he broke his trance,

ananya glared at her crabbed, dispirited son in anger, pata nahi mei kahan galat hogayi thi isse values dene mei. she passed a bowl to ridhima. 'bache aapke tickets aagaye hai....', she smiled, trying to cheer her up.
Armaan shot his head up as his hushed mind cued in, befuddling him, his heart hollered out the tender, lovesome, sad nixes, 'woah.....where is she goin', he buzzed, looking at a cheerless ridhima, her eyes bedewing emotionally on the news. his souls unconciously took the plunge, praying for positivity, his mind ringing those chafing bells, she hearked her gaze at the bertil coloured placement, not wanting to create a scene. concaved under that gutsy mask.

'BACK HOME ARMAAN....', ananya panned crisply, his heart thumbed hearing the news. his hoggish feelings relenting away from his soft, passionate ones. his heart dampened with ardor seeing her on the verge of pouring out her emotions, again.

'ridhima', he mumbled, astonished with the news, she wants ta LEAVE, his tender loving care smited.

She closed her blinders, mending her busted cocksure mask, stopping her tears. his peepers lamped at her, their hearts yammering out at each other, frisking for ardency, for amour, she
sighed, 'thanks...mum.......i....ill just be back from the kitchen.....left...left a dish in there', she murmured and scurried towards the kitchen as that lone tear finally jerked out of her eyes.

those riling questions piqued his ailed, saddened cognizance, she is goin. he bit his lip in dismals and perked up from his chair, getting away from the bugged, addled oldsters in the house, his hushed mind, his wakened heart stewing over what he has done.

'bhayi aisa bhi kiya hogaya hai ke ridhima wapis jaana chahti hai....usko bhi samajh na chaiye ananya', Bi moaned, pitying her chapfallen grandson.

'maa....kuch bhi ho...ye maamla armaan aur ridhima ka hai....aap dono is tarah beech mein aake aur problems create karrahe ho.....ananya tumne mujhe sab bataya tha aur maine tumse kaha tha wait karo tumne phir kyun ridhima ki tickets book karwayi', billy questioned, infuriated with this new crunch in their house,

'billy main ridhima ko aur rota hua nahi dekhsakti wo dono balle hame apni problems na bataye lekin main bhi koi bewacoof nahi hoon......this time armaan is at fault and we know that...', she argued and cocked up, heading towards the kitchen....

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He pursed his lips in a dander, exasperated with the stiffness in their relationship, impassioned with his fond feelings, her confession, nettled at her questions, her decision to go back to her home, how can she just decide it all on her own, his inner turmoil yowled for his rights as a husband, as her man. his doting, erotic emotions hankering to have her near him. close to him. his heart sickened at the thought of not having her beside him. agonizing over her decision.

he yearned to fondle her in his arms. 'ridhima', he closed his peepers, taking a gander of the bright city lights illuminating the harbour.

why the hell is it buggin me, why do i want ta just hold on to her, he carped, crabbed with the day's events, exhausted from his long day.

i love you armaan, he recollected her heavyhearted, affectionate words. his passion steaming up, pining to buss her dainty, hot skin, kiss her madly and heat her sensations, stimulate her desires, her itch. he clenched the husk of his workplace in a choler, egged on her decision.

she lumbered out of the closet, her eyes caterwauling as she took in the sights of his sopped eyes staring at her. 'arm...',

his heart blubbed in ardor, in sadness, seeing her arrayed in an ivory nightshirt. his lewd, risque thoughts exciting his urge to coddle her glistening slender legs. i wont get to see her anymore, the lovesome emotion deepened in him, his souls quavering in the searing, sharpened air.

'ye goin home ridhima', he uttered, taking a step towards her. lessening the distance between them. tamping her to the closet door. she heaved as he mugged her waist. his fingers cosseting her maw.

her eyes dissolved in tears. her heart craved to be in his arms, to hug him and let it all out. 'that....thats what....ye wanted', she sniffed. looking in his nestled, passionate greys.

her words abraded him. coursing the fury, the displeasure back into his systems.

'yer life is a mess with me.....', she puffed as his hand grazed the bruise on her convex. the ivory satin slathered against her smooth haunch line, dazing her.

he closed his eyes in regret, dropping his gaze. cursing himself for grousing such abusive remarks. his piths disgusted at his acts. 'but i',

she careened her neck, resting it on the wall, loving his frisks that were palming her carnal tush. his breath stopped when his fingers bussed her upper hock. his rakish amour overpowered his soft feelings, pining to shuck her shirt and feel her denuded skin.

'i'll live your life....and you can live.......yours', she sobbed, racked on her decision, but she had to go, what could she do, she couldn't be somewhere she is not wanted.
'ye can do....what', her throat clammed up, her mind not wanting to voice his lewd desires.

he looked in her greens, recalling his words at their wedding night. hunching the pain she had to go through since the time he has griped her feelings, whacking her emotions, her sentiments away. why was his heart agonizing over her dolor.

'this marriage....is...a mistake', she murmured. her love conking out by the prolonged dull pain in her heart. his heart shattered at her words, his emotions piling up on top of eachother, to see a hope, a flash of love.....love

she wiped her tears, 'its better if i.....', she sighed, annealing her grit, her firmness, 'i should just leave', she eased out, parting away from him. her throeing heart embogged as she sat down beside her idylle bag, her belongings.

he took a gander of her bags, bemused with the new voice his heart shouted, the new emotion that deepened down, the amore that turned into a heavy emotion. having a seat of affections. her decision galling his senses.

he walked towards her, their affection cloying up. she looked straight, ogling the black of her suitcase. he grabbed her tickets, peering at her flight time, his tenderness wanting to tear it in two and bunt it away from his sight. his heart panging as he caught a glimpse of the gourmette he had slipped in her tenuous finger.

'why am i.....comin to know about this thing the day before yer departure', he asked collectedly, calming the fury, the agony in him.

she made a wry, pained face, controlling her love, her mended hardness leading her sensations, 'you just failed to notice my pain armaan......my wishes....as you keep doing.....', she pursed her lips, hating her harshness.

his heart twitched, he reamed his peepers to scrub the grief away.

'i asked mum to book my tickets.....i didnt want to live here.......my emotions dont affect you armaan.......', her eyes blubbered, 'then why........why should i bother tellin ye about what i want ',

he bit his lip in agitation, contemning her stinging heart's voice. mauled by her gutsy attitude. he loured at her and went out of the room in frustration. slamming the door shut after him.

she delved her face in the pillow, bursting into snivels....

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'yo mate......hows it goin with ye', rahul patted his shoulder casually, looking out the window.

Armaan rubbed his eyebrows, his friend's cool, chipper expressions enraging him. he's the freakin reason why ridhima is goin today, his heart blamed, the tender loving care calling him to rout at rahul. to latch him on the can of worms that he has let out in their life.

'man ye know from the time ye have joined business ye seriously have become one boring man......like seriously......i cant believe i am standing here infront of the same ammy who used ta just party hard all the time', rahul grinned, gladsome after his walk with muskaan, she's crazy, he thought, bringing to mind those hearty events of the evening. she had bumped into him on the street. goddddd.

Armaan stared at him icily. his frustration, the new intensated feeling, her decision to go back home, away from him, seethed his senses.

'wha', rahul uttered, taken aback by her friend's glower. 'dude i haven't seen ye after that day at the office which was like eh.....two....no three......no two days ago....jesus',

Armaan pursed his lips, controlling the rage in him, he rubbed his pate, 'man....i am not really in one of the best moods today...',

'aa', rahul mumbled, 'what ye so angry about', he asked kindly. its somethin defo related ta ridhima,

he shook his head. 'no....its....its nathin', he looked away. wanting to just let it out and say it.

'ammy....ye gonna lie ta yer bro',

he hissed, 'man i dont always have to tell ye things especially when they are related ta my personal life.....jesus, i cant tell ye everything', he bawled, his amour tarrying his gaze at the
memory room, how tardily they both lied close to eachother, looking at his photographs, their intertwined hands. he dropped his gaze, feeling the loss.

rahul knitted his brows, 'okie....jesus what ye freakin out for', he carped, not liking the attitude. 'ye show me the cheek everytime.....i get the frustration bit buh dont take it all out on me',
he griped, troubled by his best friend's mien.

'dude ye are the f**kin reason why i am so pissed off....', he clamored. wanting to beat him black and blue.

'WHAT....WHAT DID I DO', rahul pryed. in a tizzy

'what did ye do.....ye were the one givin me that shitty suggestion ta marry her and then live my life my way and not care about her......and now she is really upset with the way i have treated her, what were ye thinkin.....she is not a fool', he bawled. his heart lamenting on his beaut's throe, her dolor.

'huh...what the f**k.....thats what ye wanted too......i helped ya.....ye should've thought about it before ye agreed ta marry her.....and why did you agree to marry her in the first place......yer maa yer daa...they werent forcing ye.....', rahul lashed out, perplexed with the betiding events in his friend's life.

'thats coz i had ta marry someone anyway......she was there......so i married her', armaan reasoned, stopping his heart from mumbling the nixes, his heart questioning the very fact, she was a friend, i could've married anyone, why did i put her into all this, his shushed mind didnt roll out, admitting the defeat, the loss in regret.

'woah......what a reason.....ya right dude stop f**king with ma head........ammy ye are not a fool......ye can make decisions on yer own.....ye didnt have to listen to my suggestion, why did ye......and we all know how ye were so into her......i just chose not ta say anythin....so dont blame me', he groused, not taking up the rap. 'and...', he stopped, catching a sight of his friend's numbed face. the remorse, the passion, the love in his eyes shoutin that he has fallen for ridhima. 'yer bleedin whipped', he sighed and walked out of the house.

Armaan banged his fist on the wall, affronted with rahul, he isnt even takin up the blame, his mind raved, letting his mistake fall between the cracks, his affection, telling him to try and settle things instead of mangling the matter and making it even worse......

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She touseled her hair, her mind going back to his mushy kisses, her heartrate stimulated by her passionate thoughts, pacing up. she touched her shoulder that he had bussed ever so gently. she rubbed her eyes, wiping the tear away. aisa sab kab tak chalta rahega, kab tak main is tarah aik hope mein.......ghar jaakar bhi kiya kahoongi mein sabse, her heart sang the blues. she closed her eyes. her cocksure, gutsy mask, her strengthened mind, feelings broaching an idea, her heart shattered as she mused over her thought, her love shedding bitter tears, par wo to yahi chahta hai, i have to give him what he needs before i go from here, i dont want to come here again. she cried, looking around the dimmed room that discomfited her, unsettling her cognizance, mein kab tak is tarah ro ti rahungi, i need to stand up for myself and tell people what i want, her heart agreed, repining on the love, her foiled love.

ye aren't going to be proud of me mum, but i have to do this, she bursted into tears......

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ok guyz thats part 26, yes a short one...well next one is going to be a long one for sure...!!!! like i am saying it....well again comin back to the update....there has to be this much....i cant just
jump to the confession itself.....these things are neccessary.....well i know yous are all waiting impatiently for the big thing so i am gonna say this....we are there! yaah well that would just give
yer souls a rest.....coz well i gave ye a hint! lol, yaa.......i read all yer comments, they were just amazing.....like all of them.....please dont forget to comment or criticize! thanks for all them sweet
words....😊

Edited by suzzane14 - 15 years ago

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Aishwarya sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#928

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man i really loved it.. hate seeing AR like this..........

please update soon

Edited by ishuKSGKAJEN - 15 years ago

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Nidha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#929

woah dear its really rocking one superb i m waiting to see his reaction when he came to know she is leaving him and u made it rocking one wohhhhhh hats of to u cool one let see what he is going to do now stop her & confess or let her go and den go to get her back in his life plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Nruti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#930

hey suzzz

that was very heart breaking part......god i cant belive that ridhima is leving him and not comming back....god i hope that armaan stopes her on time or go to india to get her back.......

for the first time i like rahul in this FF....i agree about what he said that it was armaan's desicition to go with the idea to marry ridhima.............and he is also right that he was never forced by anyone to marry ridihma....he could have said no if he was not intrested...........

i dont like bi and billy....as why dont they understand that been in another country with the husdand that want his life back and she is not getting anything from him...not even few nice words....in a way i liked it when ridhima did not called her friends on reaching home...at less she get to know what kind of man she had married............

i am at less happy that ananya is with her.........i was not expecting billy not saying anything to armaan......i was thinking that he wud give him some pice of his mind....but i was wrong.......

lets see now how armaan is gona confess.....he does have a feeling for her but stupid man just dont konw it yet.........

i feelt every heart broken when ridhima thought that she is not gona make her mom proud....but its not her fault....one bit she did nothing...she is right that she cant wait there forever for him to accept her as his wife and love her..........

now i just hope that at less her parents suport her and help her...........i hope they dont turn out to be one of those parnets for whome their reputation is everything............

its gona be very very hard to read the comming part.....as in if she left then how are her parents gona react and armaan realization and all......

thanks a lot for the pm

even though it was sad part i know it was very much needed.........

i cant say i loved it but i can say i like it...

now cont soon

cant wait for the next part......

updat soon

lods of love

nruti

Edited by arluver15 - 15 years ago