{...Beyond the limits...} - AR [Part27 - page 137] - Page 21

Originally posted by: tarm

The onli character i like in dis FF is probz Nikki,Muski and wel ders onli been lil of Anjali bt she sounds like a great friend😊. To tel u da truth Ridz constantblushin wud start 2 luk weird 2 me😕 bt i guess she cnt help it. And Armaan is jus a prick and Rahul is jus a lil behind and oh yh Atul wel ders been a lil of him bt he also sounds great😊.

Anywayz tnx for the pm i liked how u described hw Armaan's friendly side was fightin widhisignorant side. Can't wait for after the weddin im guessin he's probz gan2 blank her wen he gts 2 da states...u knw night clubbin etc....anywayz im sayin 2 much - tnx agen bye.

Tahmina😉

hey lovely update

Had so much fun reading it

the dresses choice was excellent

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: huda14

Hey Huda!

Oh crap Huda wat hav i done!?😲😆 I was in such a hurry dat i didnt phrase my comment properly - my comment wasnt a criticism it was jus hw i felt about da characters...i luv ur FF ders nowt wrong and nowt wrong wid ur charaters. im sorry about da misunderstandin. U'v explained and narrated it perfectly nowt wrong...im nt confused i jus confused u😆

Wat i was tryin 2 say was rite now Armaan is seen as da bad guy(didnt knw wat else 2 describe him as lol) - meanin spoilt etc - dats y i named him a prick bt since u sed dat dis is onli for the time bein im guessin dat he wil change (lukin forward to it!) Im cool wid da characters - dis is ur FF and u made ur characters 2 be either annoyin, shy, friendly etc. I assure im not confused about the FF i knw dat he has misunderstood bt he's stil a spoilt brat for me lol wich is hw u intentionally made the character rite....?

And Ridz blushin yes u hav explained why she blushes so much😊 and i dnt blame her....weird wasnt the rite word ermmmm its jus funny hw she was mkin da situation worse lol.

And wen i tlked bout RM and AA i didnt mean dat u didnt put enough of dem in - i mean i knw dis is an AR FF. I meant dat i was judgin dem mebe a bit 2 quickly coz obviously der nt da main characters so we wont knw dem as much bt i knw der genuinely gd characters. But i wanted to assure u dat i knw dis is an AR FF so i shudnt be judgin da other characters so quickly since we wnt knw as much bout dem as AR....do u gt wer im goin.....

To sum it up ur an excellent writer and this is a great FF😃 and...i jus confused u wid my stupid comment - which nw dat i luk bck at it i dnt blame u for tinkin i was confused😆

P.S. Realli did i sound formal..? dis is da longest comment iv ever wrote😆

Tahmina😉
aaaaa u neednt be this formal, buh see i guess u have to look back over part 10, well dats coz armaan hates her because HE thinks dat its all coz of her buh i being the omniscient kinda narrator can tell u dat obviously dats nt what the case is, ridz is totally unaware of all dis, and this blushing of hers upto somewhat extent get her in little problem...lol, i know buh keep readin, you'll get me, i aint goin off the tangent from anyway...hehe, all of this acts like u knw them stepping stones...well yeah for now u can use the word prick for our man here, lol, buh he'll turn into something completely unexpected later on, and as far as the RM and AA track is concerned, it wasnt a complete dmg ff anyway, my ff only has AR as its main focus...buh dat doesnt mean i wont include them at all, i love rm and aa and i guess we'll have to wait till we get to states, their track will start mainly from there....i dont know buh i really find that u r a bit confused about this whole ff, which makes me feel dat i aint explanin things as it should be explained, so um plz comment on this thing and tell me what u dont feel rite about...it wuld really help....i love all ur criticisms buh i am confused with this one, i hope i have answered all ur questions that is if there were any...lol, buh do tell us what u feel after readin this comment....it means a lot,


k luv u all, thanks for your comment by the way, it really helps 😊

Originally posted by: tarm

AR gtin married....but he hates her nah....so...wats up in ur mind suza.....anyways will hav fun readin d next parts...do cont soon...!!