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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sheel_dmgdiva

a wonderful ff and thanxx for the PM ..i personally enjoyed reading it n i am glad dat u like da promo of ma ff n yea it is a huge name but it suits ma ff rite 😉

coming to ur ff ..i havent read all the parts coz i just checked ur pm .i have been inactive a lot because of studies. i hope u understand. i read the intro and the part 1 and i am simply hooked to it. the concept is amazing , a simple yet interesting concept which makes you wanna read more and more.

thanxx for this awesome ff and do add me to ur pm list that is if ur ok with it

love sheela




omggg....i loved ur comment, aah its grand with me, thanks a lot, and yeah i have added you as a buddy, love ur ff like anything and take your time, you can read it anytime wen u r free...hehe...!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tarm

hey hudamy name is tahmina cal me tarm. i cme across dis FF of urs jus 2day nd read it al in one go coz its dat gud!😊

its realli gd nd realli Armaan's disrespect 2wards his family was gtin 2 me nd his attitude towards his homeland urgh😡 bt thank god he's changin nw.


I luv Ridz nd Nikki's friendship nd wats up wid Rahul and Muskaan??? And obviously il av 2 wait 4 Atul 2 mke his entry (im a great AA fan😃).


Can i ask u 4 a request plz: wel since u write such big parts wich im glad u do bcoz i gt carried away readin dat wen it suddenly stops it irritates me lol.

so keep da long parts bt u knw readin hindi is hard so plz, if u dnt mind, start new paragraphs between da hindi dialogues so dat i dnt gt confused on who's sayin wat. Imsorry if i sound rude bt dat wud mke it way easier 2 read da hindi dialogues.




Anywayz update soon! Tnx bye😉





aaaa no its grand, infact i loved what u said, srsly, like it helped me and yeah i myself found it a bit weird but thought to just go with the flow and see if yous r okay but yeah part 7 will have a bit of space between every hindi dialouge, hehehe, and yeah m updating superrrrrr soooon....lol, rahul muskaan's lovestory is different form the actual one, you'll know it soooon, they dont interact that much...and yeah no anji without atul...he is gonna be there...!!! and the big long part thing is the same with me, when it stops it annoys me like hell too, hehe...thanks once again

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey....dis is radhika...d writer of It Ends Tonight.....finally read all d parts.....n d only word dat is cumin to my mind is awesome....i mean u write so well......dat makes dis ff more n more interesting.....watin for d next part....do continue soon....n thanks for d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kash_sajan

hey....dis is radhika...d writer of It Ends Tonight.....finally read all d parts.....n d only word dat is cumin to my mind is awesome....i mean u write so well......dat makes dis ff more n more interesting.....watin for d next part....do continue soon....n thanks for d pm



awww thanks alot....loved ur comment and believe me these little words of appreciation mean a lot to me...and yeah the next part is gonna be updated superrrrrrrrrrrrr sooooon lol infact just now...hehe
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ok guyz here is part 7...have fun..!


PART 7

Ridhimma woke up startled, by the sudden ringing of her alarm, 'arre, itni jaldi 10 baj gaye..main to theek se soyi bhi nahi', ridhimma stretched herself, her eyes closed, she kept sitting on the bed for few minutes, suddenly opened her eyes, remembering the guests, 'ohh wo log pata nahi uthe ke nai, main check karti hoon, phir nikki ke saath boutique bhi jaana hai', ridhimma got up and went in the bathroom to freshen up herself...

'ahh man, this place is roastin, its freakin boilin in here', armaan came down the stairs, moaning and cursing the indian weather, he started sweating, 'ahh thats what i was waitin for...ahh i am just after takin the shower..', armaan fetched a tissue from the near by table and wiped his face, cursing the paki weather, nikki came over to him, 'hey look at you, sweating like a pig', she started laughing at him,
'nikssss stop it how do you survive here....omg', he mumbled but nikki heard it and chuckled, 'armaan ab bas bhi karo, itni bhi garmi nahi hai, chalo', bindi took armaan to the breakfast table in between narrowing her eyes at nikki, 'tujhe kiya hua hai..kyun tang kaarrahi hai usse chal ab..phir tujhe riddhu ke saath boutique bhi jaana hai', bindi went into the kitchen to get the breakfast ready, 'riddhu, now who is that', armaan asked rolling his eyes at the unusal name, 'armaan, ridzy...ridhimma, thats her pet name', nikki smiled, armaan started laughin at the weird choice of this pet name, 'omg thats crazy..that is so freshy..riddhhu', 'why is there any problem...'
ridhimma came down, folding her hands against her chest, 'ehhh no ridddhu, the name is amazing', armaan teased and went towards the breakfast table, leaving an annoyed ridhimma behind, 'i thought he was a sweet person', ridhimma complained, 'ridzzyy he is messin, cmon...chal, hame jaana bhi hai', nikki took ridzy over to the table with her,
'areeeey haaan, bacho main to batana hi bhul gayi, atul aaraha hai', bindi came out holding dishes in her hand, 'yaaay, seriously, mom, main wahi sochoon meri like meri wedding pe atul na aaye aisa ho hi nahi sakta', nikki clapped her hands in excitement, 'omg, atul ko main pure 1 saal baad dekhoogi, uske parents ko bhi na bhej na tha usse england, internship ke liye', ridhimma moaned, 'haan yaar, kitna ro raha tha bichaara us din, mujhe bhi rula diya tha gadhe na..aur abhi, he cried buckets when he was leaving us', nikita's eyes went moist, remembering the day when he last saw them, and how abhi cried, she couldnt see him crying, be it on the most stupidest thing ever..!!
Atul Joshi, is a great friend of ridhimma, abhi and nikki, infact Abhi and Atul are bestfriends, they all met in ridhimma and nikki's freshman year in college, but atul was later sent to england for his internship in one of his dad's company, being a son of a rich businessman is always an advantage, and they soon became unseparable...aaa good old days, ridhimma thought, 'yaah and can you believe it usne is pure 1 saal mein mujhe sirf teen baar call kiya, what a moron', nikki spoke a bit loudly, 'tujhe to teen baar kiya na, mujhe to sirf 2 baar hi kiya, aur tere abhi se to roz baate karta hai, infact hamein to bataya bhi nahi ke kab aa raha hai, bindi aunty ko bataya', ridhimma folded her hands in anger and started heading towards the breakfast table..

'hey wats wrong with you', armaan saw rahul with his head down on the table, his hair messed up, 'ehh nuthin, m jst sick of this place, its so bleedin hot..armaan, wat you doin here, lets go back to states bro', rahul requested, 'oye koi kahin nahi jaa raha, tum log mere liye itna nahi karsakte, meri shaadi hai or', nikki came over to them, banging on the table, while everyone shot their heads up from the food, 'nikki bete, kiya hogaya hai, abi aayein hai ye log, thora to problem hoga na adjust hone mein', roy calmed her down, 'yaah nikki, relax we aint goin anywhere', anji came upto her huggin her, while muski nodded, 'nikki, kiya tubhi hyper hui wi hai, ab beth bhi jaa', ridhimma said looking at nikki, who was looking at rahul angrily, while he grinned, 'riddhu, wat you havin for breakfast', armaan decided to tease her again, ridzy glared her anger at him, he winked at her, not affected and chuckled, 'ridhhuu...dont tell me dats ur nickname ridhimma', anji rolled her eyes, aghh why is everybody making a big deal out of it, lots of people have funny pet names, riddhu isnt even funny, it sounds sweet to me, ridhimma thought, looking down, embarrassed, 'ab bas bhi karo, riddhu itna bhi weird nahi hai', nikki defended her, the poor girl is so embarrassed now, she has only met all of them yesterday, and they were already making fun of her, 'ahh hum joke karhi hai', armaan started speaking in hindi, giving ridhimma a side hug, ridzy shot her head up, he speaks hindi, omg, i thought he didnt know even a single word from that language, but wait thats not hindi, he is ruining it, 'aree hamara beta to hindi bhi bolta hai', roy laughed, 'noo uncle thats not hindi, thats just some other language armaan has made up, rahul looked at anji, remembering the time he first spoke hindi, in states, they both had a faint smile on their face...'are, per mera armaan bara cute lagta hai, hindi bolta hai jab, wo bhi un angrezon ki tarhan', anny commented, while bi agreed,'haan bhai, ham isse gussa hote hain aur ye jaan much ke hindi bolta hai, taake ham pigal jaaye', armaan smiled, he didnt mind people commenting on his accent at all, who cares, why do they have to discuss about it, its not a big deal, he thought,

ridhimma kept looking down, feeling her heartbeat speeding up, he still had his arm around her back from the side hug, armaan looked at her, noticing that red colour creeping upon her cheeks, is she blushing, oh god, why the hell does she blush so much...armaan thought, he glanced at her neck, it was so long..ahh how i just wanna dig my face in it, and kiss that nape of hers, she was wearing a sleeveless silver top, with casual jeans, her hair tousled on the other side, ridhimma slowly looked up and saw ananya noticing them, armaan's arm around her back, he checking her out, while she blushing, oh my god, ridzi she'll kill you, cmon get up, 'emmm..um nikki chal hamein boutique jaana hai, wahan se dresses uthane hai', she got up, breaking armaan's lustful thoughts...'aree haan chal', nikki got up immediately, looking at bindi, nodding her head 'haan tum log to pehle jao, acha hua isse yaad aagaya', she kissed ridhimma's forehead,'aunty mom dad thori der mein aate hi honge, aap logon se milne, ridhimma said, 'i would love to meet ur parents bache', billy carressed her hair, he loved this girl, she was so sweet, har kisi ka inta khayal rakhti hai, billy thought ananya smiled...'ridzi we'll cum too, afterall we have to select a dress for the engagement party as well', muski and anji got up, 'haan bilkul tum log jao, baaki hum sab ke liye to designer khud ghar aaraha hai, armaan aur rahul, tumhare liye maine abhi ka jo designer hai wahi appoint kiya hai, bohut acha hai, abhi ki to zabardast sherwani banayi hai usne, bohut talented hai, bindi asked, 'nooo i aint wearing anything indian, its gonna be real hot tomorrow, i am gonna melt, armaan refused, 'well too bad, mister, that is just what you are wearin', nikki folded her hands, 'ahh nikki why the hell are you so bossy, finnnne', armaan sighed, which brought a smile on ridhimma's lips, he is a rebel, she thought...while rahul was all the more happy to wear the sherwani, he knew he looked hot in that, and loved to wear it...'acha nikki chal', muskaan asked impatiently, she wanted to see those dresses in boutique, rahul finding this a perfect chance to talk to her added, 'yeaaah niks we r cumin too, you can show us mumbai', nikki agreed and started talkin to anji about the places she would take them to, 'yeaaah afterall i wanna see how bad can this place get', armaan smirked, ridhimma looked down, hurt, i cant believe someone would say this much to their country, rahul noticed this and came over to ridzi, giving her a side hug, 'cmon ridz, dont mind him he is a shit, lets go', she smiled at him, he is a great friend, i guess thats why armaan is rahul's best friend, he is an amazing person, she concluded, 'ridzzzz, anji chalo', muskaan asked impatiently, she wanted to see those dresses, 'haan', she agreed and went outside, followed by others, leaving the
elders to catch up with each other after a long time...

'omggg, look at those dresses, yaaar, anji they are so pretty', they were in the boutique, muski and anji went towards the lengha section, ridhimma smiled at them, 'ridzy tu unke paas jaa, mein wo dress ka phuch ke aati hun', nikki went towards the salesman, ridzy looked back at the two men, checking out girls, and they going gaga over him, acting like sluts, ridhimma thought, she looked at armaan, who was smiling at one of the girls, winking at them, she felt a pang in her heart, ye kia tha... she thought..ahh i dont know; sighing, she went over to anji and muski who were admiring the wonderful work of the designers, 'did you guyz like anything,,', she asked politely, 'yeah we love all of them...but i dont knw which one to chooose..help us girl', ridhimma looked around, woah there are lots of them, all so pretty, 'ummm, check that out', she smiled and pointed towards one outfit, 'i think that one will suit you, you'll look awesome, muski and anji looked towards the direction where she was pointing, 'omgggg, that one is amazingggg, i mean its gonna look so nice on me..ill go over and check the fittings, ridzi smiled, 'what u gals doin here, you left us alone there', armaan came over to them, while rahul was just looking for muskaan from the corner of his eyes, 'oh um, they were just selecting outfits for themselves..anji u havent picked anythin..cmon, meri to pehle se hi sab tayaari ho chuki hai', ridzi said, 'ohhh i was wonderin that why arent you buyin anythin...ok you help me then, nd these boys will help us', anji looked at them, 'ahh m out of here', armaan was just about to go, anji caught hold of his collar, 'eh no u r nt..cmon help us', anji ordered..'ahhh man anji cmon, i know nothing about them, where is nikki, ask for her help, or ridhimma, seems like she knows a lot about them', armaan saw ridhimma busy admiring those dresses, 'armaan, u r a boy, whats better than a boys advice, you just tell me how i look, pretty, beautiful, sexy, hot..cmon ammy..rahul chal,', anji pleaded, 'ahh ok come..ridhimma lets go, u can stare at them later', he took her with him to where anji went with rahul, 'ooowwww, calm down armaan, i am not running away', ridzi jerked his hand, caressing her shoulder moaning in between, 'ehh sorry, i didnt know i was hurting you..here let me have a look', he caught of hold of her hand, gently blowing on that red area, Ridhimma's heart started pounding, she loved his touch, 'armmm...arm m o..ok', she stuttered, armaan looked up at her, sensing that she was feeling a bit uncomfortable with him touching her shoulder, he carried on, grinning to himself, aghh man she is one thick bird man...'anjiii, ridzii', nikki called out coming into that section holding dresses in her hand, she saw armaan holding ridhimma's shoulder, caressing it..she knew this was going to happen, 'ridhimma..ahem ahem guyz', nikki came towards them, 'yup nikki, wait where did you go', armaan asked looking up at her for a second and then carrying on with his 'work', nikki rolled his eyes, mere aane pe bhi ise koi fark nahi parraha, or ye ridz 'ridzzzi, tu kia karrahi hai..em chal na mere saath anji ke paas', ridhimma who uptill now had her eyes closed, blushing beetroot red, immediately opened her eyes when nikki called her, 'haan haan, chal, em armaan mera haath', she looked at him, 'ok, ridhimma, it looks fine to me now, i think you were just pretending', armaan said not paying any heed to nikki's constant blabbering, 'main..main omg i cant believe you just said that, mujhe sachi dard horaha tha..i wasnt pretending alrite', ridhimma came near him, clenching her teeth in anger, she just wanted
to get away from these blushes and goosebumps, kyun uske kareeb aane pe main aise kaanp utthi hun..she thought questioning her heart, i think i am ill..ridhimma concluded, armaan looked at her, 'i was only messin, chill', armaan gave her a strange look, 'waitt per tum dono idhar kar kiya rahe the', nikki questioned folding her hands, 'aaa umm, wo mujhe thora sa lagg', ridhimma stumbled, she didnt know what to say, she herself didnt know what was happening to her, 'aa niks, look i was draggin her to this section, where our dear anji has gone to check out them outfits, and riddhimma got hurt coz of my grip on her arm, so i was just looking at her shoulder to see if there is something major, aaa why the hell are you guyz so conservative, armaan started explaining, in between cursing the whole indian mentality, 'woah bro chill, i was jst askin', nikki kept a hand on his shoulder, and mumbled a sweet sorry, armaan smiled a bit, melting on her sorry, he would always make sure she is okay, i hope abhi keeps her happy, he thought...'ehh ya lets go', armaan and nikki moved towards anji, leaving ridhimma behind, who was in a deep thought wondering whats wrong with her...

'ok raool, now tell me which one will suit me', anji asked holding a sea green lehnga and yellow orange one in her hand, 'emmm...um i think...um...ahh this is so hard, where is muski, ask for her help', rahul sighed, anji glared at him angrily, impatient holding those dresses in her hand, rahul knew, a danger was just on his way, anji isnt gonna talk to him if he doesnt choose one, 'umm, ok what about this one, he pointed towards an orange one, 'this is so simple man, it will look good on muski, but our muski has already decided a dress, she is in the fitting room', anji blabbered, pouting, sad that she cant decide a dress, what if i dont get any dress, what if all them turn out to be suckish, ahh what am i gonna wear, she started biting her nails, 'aah anji babes, stop getting worried here, wait', rahul hugged her, looking for nikki or ridzi, ye muski kahan rehgayi, i cant wait to see her in that outfit, i knw she is going to look extremely beautiful, his eyes searching for muskaan, he wants to talk to her in private, but he just doesnt get any chance....'anji, kiya hua tujhe, why are you so tensed', nikki and armaan came towards her, a bit worried, 'eh i cant find any dress for myself..niks what if i dont find anything for myself..m scared', nikks laughed out, 'anji yahan pe kitne dresses, hai ok wait ill help you', nikki started looking for dresses, rahul helped her, suddenly anji remembered, 'guyz wait, ridz has such an amazing dressing sense, call her, where is she, wasnt she with you armaan',
anji looked at him impatiently, 'ehhh ya where is she niks', armaan turned to nikki, 'tum logon ki wajah se main apni pyaari dost ko neglect karrahi hun, wait', nikks slapped her head, and decided to go back, 'ehh ill get her, but i dont know, your friend, my dear is a bit of a weirdo', he commented and went back to that section to get her, leaving the rest making a face at armaan 'heeey you, where are you lost', armaan came upto ridhimma, clicking his fingers at her a bit angrily, godamn, he was worried, and this girl is standing here in her dreamland, Ridhimma shot her head up, 'ohh um, haan yes armaan where were you', she started fidgeting with her shirt, 'where was i, whereee are you; somewhere in some dreamland innit, we all were so worried about you, we all are there', he pointed towards the party wear section and started giving out to her, 'oh umm, i am sorry, i was just', ridhimma looked at him, hurt..whats wrong with me, why do i feel so jittery around him, ahh i might as well just quit it and stop acting like a child, 'acha ab chalo bi, i was just thinking of somethin', and with that she caught hold of his hand and took him with her, while he just rolled his eyes....this girl is seriously a weirdo, i mean she starts blushing, when i touch her, or come near her, does she like me...wait but its only the second day, who cares armaan she likes you, and besides this trip so far has been really boring, might as well just have some fun, he grinned, 'look here she issss', anji came towards her hugging her, 'where the hell did you go girl, we were so worried about you, this stupid niks started cursing us for the fact that she is neglecting you because of us', anji looked at her making a face, 'aww ridzi i am really sorry..acha chal tera dress tayaar hoke aagaya hai', nikki hugged her and passed her the designer dress, 'but ridhimma you have to help me select a dress', anji requested, 'sureee anji, wait..um ok i know just the thing come with me', and both went leaving armaan, rahul and nikki behind...i wanna see her designer dress..how will she look, she looks hot to me in everything...armaan thought thinking of ridhimma, he didnt know but he liked his new friend, she is a bit strange...ahh forget it', he moaned, 'niks what are we suppose to do, i am bored, 'heeey guyz, omg niks you have got to see this dress, ridhimma picked up for me, she is a legend, ok lets go i am done', muski took the three with her, 'ahh finally, i hate this place, never coming back here again', armaan sighed and went away..soon they were joined by an extra ordinary happy; anji and a smiling ridhimma, they all paid and headed to have a little tour on mumbai...!!!

'guyz, so this is the famous beach in india, everyone comes here, its beautiful isnt it', nikki asked, 'its shit, have you seen the beaches in miami, they are sandy white, with crystal clear water, this ones dirty, i aint walkin on it', armaan commented, and the 2 other desi americans agreed, 'yaah man its ewww, i am sorry guyz..but we dont like this thing', rahul remarked, muski was really angry now,
'oyee rahul this place is amazing, tujhe nahi aaana to mat aa, main jaa rahi hun, anji chal na', muski pleaded, 'no waaaay i am not putting my foot in that dirty water', anji refused, ridhimma looked down sad, and hurt, kiya wahan jaake sab aise hojaate hain, apni country ke liye koi respect nahi, i know that place is full of materialistic things, glamour, fashion but still do they not miss their nation, the people in the country, i mean i get fed up too but sometimes, otherwise this country is good, its not bad at all, 'its ok muski, let it be, agar unhe pasand nahi aaraha tu hum kiya karsakte hai, nikki i seriously think that we should stop this so called tour, they dont like this city at all, why should we drag them here and there', ridhimma explained, 'one sec, we went to the museum i liked it, with indian history and architecture', anji interrupted, 'yaah and we went to that famous cafe, i liked that', rahul shrugged, 'mujhe to yahan ki har cheez pasand hai, or isliye main yahan bhi jaarahi hun', she took of her shoes and went away running towards the beach area, 'ill be back', rahul followed her, this was the best time to talk to her..he thought, anji ran behind him..ahh muski is so annoying, she thought...'aur armaan..did you like anything', ridhimma asked him, 'ehh yeah, its good', armaan answered, checking his cell phone, clearly he wasnt interested, 'ahh ill go with them, ridzi you stay here with this boring brat', nikki said and went away leaving the two behind, ok ridhimma i know you have those goosebumps coming up again, just calm down, and talk to him as a friend..yaah thats better, she thought, 'umm armaan, did you not like anything here', she asked politely, he looked up from his cellphone, 'ehh no, this place is really dirty and hot, i mean i dont want you guyz to feel bad, but i just cant adjust..i mean', armaan started explaining her what he really felt about this country but stopped when ridhimma kept her hand over his, 'its ok armaan, just coz we like this place doesnt mean that you have to like it as well and believe me its ok', ridhimma smiled at him, he looked at her, ahh that was sweet, she is the first one who respects my opinion and doesnt actually go around imposing her ideas...'so tell me something about you', he asked looking at his friends in that beach, throwing splashes on each other, and laughing, 'umm..ok i have two cousins, teenagers..hehe..dia and amit, they are really sweet, and my mom and dad, chacha, chachi', riddhimma started telling him a little bit about her family, 'omg lots of people live in your house, you have a big family, like we only have four in our house', armaan said 'yeah..waise tumne kabhi hindi seekhne koshsish nahi ki', ridhimma asked, 'yeah i tried once, but then gave up..ridhimma i just dnt care, i mean its only a god damn language..who cares...i can understand it though', armaan answered, 'per, never mind...', she mumbled, she feels a bit relaxed around him now, but her heart beat hasnt subsided yet, suddenly an idea popped into her mind, 'stand up, tumne aik bhi jaaga teekh se nahi dekhi, ill take you somewhere', ridhimma stood up, 'yaah but where are we goin', armaan asked, 'ohho, tum chalo to sahi', ridhimma caught hold of his hand while he stood up and they started walking...

a couple of minutes later, she stopped infront of a paani puri stall, 'okkkk here we are', ridhimma announced, 'nooo ridhimma i aint eatin anythin from here, i am gonna get diarrhoea..you carry on', armaan knew this was going to come up, 'armaaaan, why do you have to act like a spoilt sport all the time, cmon, tum apna trip khudi boring bana rahe ho', ridhimma pleaded, 'nooooo ridhimma no', armaan refused, 'bhaiya aik plate dena, or full masala daalke', ridhimma ordered, 'omg its gonna be so spicy, no ridhimmma no, its not good for you either..u shouldnt eat it too', armaan suggested, 'jst shutup armaan, you are having it thats all', ridhimma decided waiting for that heavenly plate to arrive, 'no ridhimmma...look at this dirty water he is pouring in the bowl, that bucket, ahh its so dirty', armaan argued, 'armaan shutup...ok here we go come on have one', ridhimma ate one and she started moaning words like 'yummm, aaaa, this is great', savouring its taste, she looked at armaan who gulped, he wanted to eat it, but the water is not mineral or even pure for that matter, how can he eat it, if he gets diarrhoea at this moment, nikki will literally beat him up for getting sick at her engagement, 'ahh man...the thing looks delicious, eem i am having one, he decided, and looked at ridhimma who was nearly finished with the plate and on the verge of ordering one more, 'aik aur bhai', she ordered, 'ridhimmma calm down, we can come here after sometime', he explained but the fact was he couldnt keep himself away from that mouth - watering dish too, 'heyy tum ne abhi tak aik bhi nahi khaaya, wait have this one', she moved the plate a bit closer to him, so he can start eating too, armaan pursed his
lips and picked one, slowly putting it in his mouth, ridhimma saw that, 'ab khao bhi, kitna naatak karte ho tum', she remarked, he crunched the puri and shouted 'ahhhhh....water....give me...water', his throat was sizzling with the spices and he started coughing, ridhimma got a bit worried but luckily found a mineral water stall, she bought the bottle and gave it to him, rubbing his back vigourously, while he gulped down the chilled water, quenching his thirst, 'omg inti teekha hi', armaan sighed, 'i am sorry armaan, i didnt know it would have a really bad effect on you, i am really sorry', she looked down embarrassed...great ridzi, just when everything was turning good and fine, u ruined it...u r a waste of space ridz..she thought, 'naa thats ok, but itni teekha', armaan smiled slashing his dimples, ridhimma looked at him, and immediately kissed those dimples, lingering her lips there for few seconds, and then moved away...omg ridzi did you just do that, why in the world did u kiss his dimples...omg what will he think, she looked down, blushing slightly, smiling....armaan raised his eyebrows, grinning slightly 'umm wo you just look so cute when you speak hindi, and well...', ridhimma started mumbling, her eyes closed armaan hugged her, 'its ok ridhimma, relax, i know people love them dimples...hehe', he laughed making her a bit comfortable, ridhimma broke into a smile and mumbled a little thankyou in his ears, he didnt know but he felt a little different when she kissed his dimples, girls always kiss it, but why did i feel a bit...ahh i dont know, 'ok lets go', armaan held her hand and they both started walking back to where all of their friends were....

'woah we are here....look at them still in that dirty water, do you wanna join them', armaan asked on reaching there, ridhimma who was still blushing remembering the scene that happened at the pani puri stall, shot her head up, 'ohhhh umm eh yes lets go', armaan rolled his eyes at her, why the hell does she always blush, its ok if she kissed me, its not a big deal, anji and muski have kissed me too, infact all my girl mates have kissed me, aaa ya i forgot these bleedin indians, and their mentality, cnt believe my like my ancestors belonged to this freakin nation....
they started walking towards their friends, 'lo tu bhi aagaya na, naatak to koi tujh se karna seekhe', nikki kept a hand on her waist but then splashed water on him to tease him, 'nikkki, u bitch just wait till i get my hands on you, and with that he ran after her and lifted her up, and the rest hooted in laughter, ridhimma looked at him, mujhe kia hogaya hai, kyun main usse itna kareeb jaane lagi hun, should i talk to him...no ridzi dont, no just let it be, yeah but then..she kept battling with herself, 'ridzzzyyy, comeon, here, muski jumped from behind and splashed water on her,'nai no muskii', she took a step backwards and bumped into armaan, 'ehhh m sorry, ye muski na', she looked at him, 'aah thats ok, but did muski give you this', he threw some sand on her hair, which he had in his fist earlier on, ridzi opened her mouth wide, and annoyed with armaan, 'armmmman..no wait she didnt give me this, but she did do this', and she splashed water on him and ran away, armaan who ran behind her, suddenly caught hold of her waist to catch her, she stopped, breathing heavily, armaan's hands on her waist were arousing more feelings within her, she closed her eyes, armaan came close to her ear and whispered, 'gotcha babes', he grinned and kissed her hair, 'armm..arm', she stuttured, 'mm...', she turned towards him, looking at the gang cleaning up ready to go now, 'chalein..', she smiled, she hugged him as a friendly gesture and calmed her breath, while he just walked grinning to himself, his one hand around her waist and she leaning on his shoulder..u did it man one more chick for you..., he thought, omg i find solace in here..i wanna stay here forever, ridhimma sighed, tired from all the activity of the day, she just wanted to sleep now....


'lo aagaye, kitni der lagadi billy bhai or tere paapa tum logon ka intezaar kar ke aakhir bi ko leke bahar chale gaye mumbai ki sightseeing per, or ye kiya haal bana ke rakha hai, jao tum log sab sahi se neeche aao, phir ridzy hame ghar bhi jaana hai', padma came towards the gang, when all of them entered laughing over the day's events, teasing each other, today they had a great time...'haan pehle jao phir baatein karenge', bindi came over to them, sending all of them into their rooms...


'ananya tum se milke mujhe bohut acha laga, or ab hum milte rahenge, waise kitne dinon ka stay hai aap logon ka', padma asked, 'ji 2 mahine ka, nikki ki shaadi ke aik mahine baad hum nikal jaayenge, armaan ka doctoral programme start hone wala hai to jaana zaroori hai', ananya smiled, she liked this family a lot, infact what she noticed in the morning, with armaan sitting with an arm around ridhimma's back while she blushing, and he looking at her, she knew that she cant be mistaken, i knw its only the second day but main jaanti hun ke pyaar ko sirf aik lamhe ki zaroorat hoti hai, airport se dekh rahi hun, mera dil jaanta hai ke armaan ridhimma ko bohut pasand karta hai, or wo bhi..per main abhi kuch nahi kahoongi, i wont say anything not even to billy, her chain of thoughts were interrupted by someone laughing, there came ridhimma wearing a red knot top with jeggings, her hair tied up in a neat bun, she looked elegant, with armaan, his son loooking dashing as always wearing a black shirt, and causal jeans, they looked perfect, i just wish jaisa mein soch rahi hun waisa hi ho, 'hey mom', armaan greeted, 'hey mera beta kaisa hai, tere paapa ko tujhse kuch zaroori baat karni hai, wo aajaye tab bat karlena', ananya infromed while he sat beside her leaning his head on her shoulders, tired, ananya
kept a hand on his cheek, she missed this, billy sahi tha, armaan yahan aake shaayad sudhar jaaye..she thought, ridhimma looked at him a bit worried, 'i hope he is ok...ridzi tu phir shuru gayi, forget it...'heeey mom', ridhimma came over to her mom and hugged her, i am so tired', she pouted, 'aaa bete chal ghar chal', padma caressed her hair showering motherly love to her daughter after one whole day, she missed her, 'nahiiii aunty ridhimma kahin nahi jaarahi, dekhiye na hamare saare dost aaye hain, wo chali jaayegi to mazaa nahi aayega....plz aunty plz', nikki came over to her, hugging her, pleading in between, 'acha theek hai, waise bhi my daughter deserves a holiday, itne lambe exams hue tum logon ke', she kissed nikki's forehead while she smiled...ridhimma hi-fived nikita in excitement, 'ahh mom ye anjali or muskaan', my new friends, ridhimma went towards the two of them, coming down the stairs, 'acha.....its a pleasure to meet you, she kept a hand on their cheeks', padma knew that in todays generation, children need a lot of moral support, a lot of love from their elders to reach to a level where they deserve to be, 'aur mom ye rahul', she pointed towards him,while rahul came 'hello aunty', she gave a slight pat on his cheek, ridhimma moved to armaan, 'um ye ehh armaan, ananya aunty ka beta', she introduced armaan, blushing slightly, padma looked at ridhimma blushing, this one look and she knew what is going on, aik hi din mein baat yahan tak phunch gayi, maine sahi socha tha ye bacha armaan bara hi zabaradast personality ka bacha hai, 'heeeeey gorgoeus', he came over to her hugging her, padma was a bit suprised at the flirtacious tone, but this told her that this very mallik is a hearthrobe of millions out there....'hey baachhe how are you', she asked emphasizing on the word bachhe, armaan got the point and looked down embarrassed, while all laughed out loud, padma smiled and caressed his hair lovingly, eyeing ridhimma in between, who was fidgeting with her top, nervous and her heart pounding heavily...ananya saw this and came over to her, she kissed her forehead, both ananya and padma looked at each other smiling, both thinking the same thing....a new relationship might start here...!




ok guyz this was part 7, the next part will have the engagement moments....i hope you had a nice time reading this part..and well i hope u werent bored...if u were then tell me..lol...!!
Edited by huda14 - 15 years ago
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hey hon..sorry i've been busy and just read everything now..Armaan is adorable as usual😳..though he does tend to annoy me a bit with his white-washed opinions..but who can stay mad at him for long??..aww..n Riddhima is already falling for him..i really hope Armaan is serious about her too and the poor girl doesn't get her heartbroken..n lol..i can feel myself blushing too whenever she does☺️
and your writing is amazing👏.. the only thing is, im not indian..i mean i understand hindi n all but it takes forever for me to read..lol..😳..so if you could add some more english dialogues..that'll be great..i mean..only if you can that is..but otherwise..great ff...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hira5431

hey hon..sorry i've been busy and just read everything now..Armaan is adorable as usual😳..though he does tend to annoy me a bit with his white-washed opinions..but who can stay mad at him for long??..aww..n Riddhima is already falling for him..i really hope Armaan is serious about her too and the poor girl doesn't get her heartbroken..n lol..i can feel myself blushing too whenever she does☺️

and your writing is amazing👏.. the only thing is, im not indian..i mean i understand hindi n all but it takes forever for me to read..lol..😳..so if you could add some more english dialogues..that'll be great..i mean..only if you can that is..but otherwise..great ff...




yaaa ummm sure......i dont mind...but the thing is that they are in india, and i am showin the elders speakin pure hindi...hehe....but i will keep that in mind the next time...hehe...loved ur comment....i didnt mind at all...k keep readin😊
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reserved...jus gonna read d part now
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hey...so a really a lon part....gud goin.....now cumin to d part....aha....it was awesome....i think armaan has seroiusly lost it......but anyways dat brings a funny tadka to d story.....bechara armaan......hahaha.....waitin for d engagement party.....a grt part cumin up soon haan.....n ya i didn't got d pm....so plz pm me wenever u update....
wid luv
radhika
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hey
just read the part
really cool
so sweet
i just hope tht armaan doesnt hurts ridz
i'll really hate him
thanks for the pm
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hi

nice update........quick tooo......i didnt like what armaan said about india...😡............hmmm feelings are developing but i'am a bit confused about armaan ................

luv
kj

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