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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG guys sooooo many parts😲😲😲

Wow okay it's gonna take me sum tym😆😆 i've printed them so give me another hour to go through😆😆

I see amber is rocking this one mate... were wer u all this time😆😆 sooo many parts very good, will comment on each jst now😉 and what do i see rapi has also written two very good very very good😉

jabse goats banne hain kuch zyaada speed aagayi hai😆😆😆 Mamamamamama-Dadadadada😆😆
Mye-dye aka BYE😆😆 for now😉

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Sumi:
You are here Me sooo happy... and what was that😆😆 very short but loved the description😳 good😊
Saba:
WOW saba awesum start babes👏 totally loved how you made RM meet and the casual and awkwardness😳😳 and AR ki arrange marriage😳 but without seeing kuch zyaada hogaya😆😆 but totally loved muski-ridzi chat about life and marriage and also rahul-armi "abey ghadey" 🤣🤣🤣
Awesum
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Amber:
OMG amber u are awesum yaar👏 First time reading your writing and im loving it😊 totally loved muski's screaming😆😆 and the cotton buds😆😆😆 and then her in the park blabbering🤣🤣🤣 uss bandar ka mun thorne ki saazish🤣🤣🤣 OMG loved rahul "WITCH"🤣🤣🤣🤣 and mera zyaada bara hai HUH🤣🤣🤣🤣 OMG amber Tussi great ho👍🏼
Aish:
Awesum👏 Lolz armaan was out of the room🤣🤣🤣 he was feeling guilty now🤣🤣🤣 loved rahul annoyed and muski also😆 Great👍🏼
Appy:
Awesum👏 Wow totally loved it muski refused😆😆 and rahul angry wit her and his chat with atul🤣🤣🤣 chill dude abhi aayegi teri life me bhi indian girl😉 that too arranged marriage😆😆😆 loved the potrayal of there thoughts and rahul thinking he is american😆😆 Awesum one👍🏼
Amber:
Awesum👏 OMG the ladka waala's coming😆😆 loved muski getting irritated and ramu kaka😆😆 loved how she reacted on seeing rahul😆😆😆 OMG "ghungraale balon waali churael" 🤣🤣🤣 "imported monkey" 🤣🤣🤣 You are too good girl, wow🤣🤣🤣 and AR giggling😆😆😆 Muskaan was reli rude that day and again😆😆 and his repeated dialogues😆😆 wow aakhri ikshaa😆😆 okay now no arguements😉 shaadi teh hai😳 Too good👍🏼
Will edit more later on
Guys u all are going great, i havent been able to read the whole thing yet so will finish tonite and update sumtym 😆😆 hopefully tonite😊 Totally rocking WWRM keep rocking
👍🏼

Luv
Nadz😳


Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww, Amby!!
i loved your part, thye got carried away pretending...soo cuteeee!!
Nadz- your continuing? yayyy!! and you printed them so you could read and go over them and then continue? wow, thats awesome!!
your parts rock!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sab93

awww, Amby!!

i loved your part, thye got carried away pretending...soo cuteeee!!
Nadz- your continuing? yayyy!! and you printed them so you could read and go over them and then continue? wow, thats awesome!!
your parts rock!!



aww thanx sab thats sooo sweet of u to say, actually i havent followed it so i have no idea where its going😆😆 i'm busy reading it when i'm done i'll continue but anyone comes can continue coz when i will start typind will put eidting😃 taht will take time😆😆

thanx once again😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanx ppl for appreciating😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy cuute part nadzz :)

anyone continueing or i can continue right now.. ?
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Posted: 15 years ago
After Rahul moved away..

Rahul: Aur phir jab khana khatam ho jayega tum sum dishes clean kar lena aur main room mein jaake tv dekhunga.

Muskaan: Abhey oyee.. mujhe bhi tv dekhna hai, pata hai abhi agar main paris mein nahin hoti toh main apne serials dekhti.. hamesha main 3 ghante apne serials dekhti hoon, lekin tujhse shaadi kar ke main woh bhi nahin kar sakti.

Rahul: Koi baat nahin.. hum kuch dino mein wapas ja rahe hai tab dekh lena.. i dont really care.

Muskaan: Haan lekin mummyji care karti hai

Rahul: Oye woh koi typical saas nahin hai woh khud serials dekhti hai tujhe kyun nahin bolegi.

Muskaan: Hmm.

Rahul: Anyway.. wapas hotel chalein?

Muskaan: Nahin rukh na, tujhe hotel jaane ki itni jaldi kyun hai?

Rahul: Nahin koi jaldi nahin hai..

They continued to sit there for hours and hours talking about random stuff not acting like husband and wife at all...



Heyy sorry it was so short and took so long.. ill write a longer part next time sorry again :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great JOb veryone!! loving the story!
im trying my had at this for the first time ever! hope you guys like it, sorry if i made any mistakes 😳
Rahul: "Ab cahle? bahot der hogayi hai"
Muski: "Theek hai, chal"
-They cat a cab and head towards the hotel, they arrive in a few short minutes and muski gets out and enters the hotel, and Rahul stays back to pay the Cabby.-
Muski goes to the counter to fetch her keys, the manager greets her with a warm smile on his face.
"Hello Ma'am"
Muski: "Hello, my keys please"
Manager: "Sure, aap aaj ki party mein aa rahi hai?"
Muski: Flashes a big smile "Party? Kaisi party?" she gets exited.
Manager: Humara staff saare honeymooning couples ko ek party de raha hai, as a gift...aap ka invitation aap ke room me bhej diya hei, aana zarror...apni pati ke saath/"
Muski: "Sure..." and she trails off, "With my husband?"
Manager: "Yes Ma'am, its a couples only party."
Muski: (to herself) "Phir toh me aa chuki party me! Woh sadiyal kabhi nahi jayega mere saath!"
Manager: "What Ma'am?"
Muski: 'Kuch nahi, good night"
Manager: "Good night Ma'am"
-She turns and bumps into Rahul.-
Muski: "Eh Rahul, geuss what! yaha ek bahot bade party hone wali hai!"
Rahul: "Toh mein kya karu?"
Muski: "Tu chalne mere sath plzz" (she throws out her cutest face)
Rahul: "Nahi muskaan, tere beach ke chakkar mein, mein bahot thak gaya hoon, and sona hai mujhe"
Muski: KYA?! tujhe paris me ake sona hai? Tu ek number ka ghadha hai, ghada! paris me soke tu paris ki insult kar raha hai!"
Rahul: "Im sure paris ko koi problem nahi hogi, problem sirf tujhe hogi! mere bina to tu jaa nahi sakti na" (he puts on a smirk on his face)
Muski: "Tujhe pata hai to chalna mere saath, plzz. Bas last time, phir tujhe bother nahi karoongi puri trip mein!"
Rahul: "Yeah rite!" (and he walks off leaving a huffing and puffing muski behin him).
He takes a few short steps and
"Hi!"
Rahul looks up and sees his friend infron of him.
Rahul: "Abhi?"
Abhi: "Heyy yaar! tu aa raha hai na aaj raat ko? pehle ki tarha party sharty karte hai! bahoit maza ayega!"
Rahul; "Nahi yaar, me nahi aa raha"
Abhi: "Kyun?" he steals a sneaak behin Rahula nd sees Muski all red with anger."Bhabhi jee ne mana kardiya kya? (he starts laughing!)
Rahul: "Kya? woh kyun mana karegi?"
Abhi: "Tum dono ko
dekh kar to yahi lag raha hia ke jhagda hua hai, aur tu usse darke ane se mana kar raha hai" (he laughs ven harder)
Rahul: "What?! me usse daroonga!" (getting mad!) "mein kisi se nahi darta"
Abhi: "Acha, to aaja party mein!"
Rahul: "Fine! mein aaoonga!"
Abhi: "Toh raat ko milte hai" he looks at muski "Bhabhiji! raat ko milte hai!"
Muski makes a confused look and walks up to them.
Muski: "Kya?"
Abhi: "Aap dono arehe hai na? rahul ne bhataya"
Muski: (Her face gives a million watts glow, and her mouth curves into a huge smile!) "We are?"
Rahul; "Yeah! Jaa jake ready hoja, warna party khatam hone ke baad pohchenge!"
Muski makes a face at him and leaves,
Abhi leaves, and
Rahul: (To himself) kaha phas gaya mein!"
-hope you guys liked it-
Edited by *payal_15* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Nam & Payal..great job job girlies!!! loved it!

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum part payal n namrata👏👏👏! =D
Edited by xXAngeliCXx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice Part Nami!!

WOW Payal!! You are a natural yaar!! Write more often for sure please!!

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