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Posted: 15 years ago
just got through all the parts..........
you pple are rocking
really good parts......great work!!!!!!the story is going really well 👍🏼



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Posted: 15 years ago
amber
loved ur part about the dowry lolz and loved rahul he isssss soooo adorable and there first night lmao mera bhoot kharaate le raha tha lolz and lore sunao phata hui awaaz mai lolzzz too goooood hmm ab to rahul thori kissi gf ke saath bhaage ka lolz

Great parts by Rapi, sab, saba, amber and sumi👏 hope didnt miss out anyone😃 loved them going for honeymoon that too Paris my dream city and his dad wants to see eiffel tower like me😆😆😆 luvly parts everyone, will post individual cmments tomorrow!
Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@shilpa - Awesome part shilpz...loved the awkwardness ...and all the feelings tat u described so beautifully

@amber -Awesome part amber....loved it....aur mai buhat maze se sara jala hua khana kha jata 😆😆

@namii .- awww very sweet part ....specially loved it when she said "ruk na ".

@payal - wow payal ...you were amazing ...just loved your part ....would love to read more from you


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Posted: 15 years ago
Finally read all the parts and they r awesome
u all rock!!!!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok me updating, utna cha part nahi hai, i jst worte what came to my mind, so plz bear with my part
At the party, rahul and muskaan were feeling more akward, seeing all the couples enjoying, dancing, they all seemed so happy with their life partner, but it wasn;t the same case with muski or rahul. well mostly muskaan.
M thinking: mera zindagi kitnaachi thi, kitne sapne dekhe the maine, ki mai doctor banungi and then spend my life hapily withthe person whom I love. par sab chaupat hogaya, life partner mila tho yeh bandar rahul jaisa, dikhne main handsome hai, nahi nahi main yeh kya bak rahi hn, dikhne mainbandar hai bandar, lekin cute bandar, kitna handsome dikhtha hai arghhh jo bhi ho, main ise pyaar tho nahi kartihun na. lekin phir jab bhi woh mujhse sweet se baat karta hai, why does my heart beat fast. she felt someone tapping her on her shouder. It was rahul
R: kaha kho gayi ho? pehle tho mujhe iss party main laaye ho, I mean kitna boring party hai, sab apne partners ke saath hai...
M: yeh couple ki party hai rahul, tho woh sab apne partners ke saath hi honge na
R: mujhe maloom hai ok, main tumhare jitna bewakoof nahi hun, tumhe iss party main aana tha na, enjoy karne ke liye tho karo na enjoy, yaha kadhe hoke kya soch rahi ho?
M: ha tho main enjoy karungi na, aurwaie bhi tumse baat karke mujhe mera mood kharab nahi karna.
she leaves thinking gadha hai gadha party main aaye hai, aur yeh hai ki couples ke party main mujhe akela enjoy karne ko bol raha hai. In her anger, instead of having a softdrink she drinks vodka and strts feeling dizzy.
A beautifu waitress seeing rahul alone startsflirting with him, hoping that he is a bachelor and by mistake came to the party.
W: hello handsome what ru doing here?
Rahul usually loved when beautiful girls flirted with him, but this time he felt like if muski would see him she would get upset, but e also remebered that muskaan never cared she herself told him to find a girlfriend, but everytime he heard her say that he felt sad. He jst put all the feelings aside, and jst thought of having some fun.
R: Hello gourgeous, nothing much ws jst feeling bored, but I think now since u r here i won't get bored anymore.
Muskaan whoobserved this frm a distance was boiling wid anger how dare that witch hold MY rahul.
she jst interrupted their conversation
M: Oye gadhi, apna shakal dekha hai, tu mere rahul ke saath flirt karrahi hai, teri itni himat bula apne boss ko mujhe usse baat karni hai
Rahul was happy seeing musi getting Jealous,
W: pardonez-moi i don't understand u?
M: oye angrezi kudi mujhe english aata hai, I am tellig u to stay away frm MY husband
Rahul felt as if he was on cloud nine hearing that, he didn't know why but he felt nice wen muskaan addressed him as her husband
The waitress jst left frm their before anyone else gets the attention, and rahul jst carried muskaan bck to the room.
M: oye kamine chod mujhe, mujhe chodoooooooo
R: acha baba chilla kyunrahi hai, le choddiya kush, he went closer to her acha muski tujhe jalan horaha tha
M: she had goosebums allover her having rahul so close to her Jalan aur mujhe aur waise bhi tu yeh apni hassi band kar, aur kya chal raha tha uss ladki ke saath, tu sabke saamne mera pati hai, agar kisne dekhliya hota tho agar pappaji ko pata chaljata tho
R: woah woah relax hum paris main hai aur pappa India main unhe kaise pata chalta, aur waise bhi tmhine th kaha tha find urself a girlfriend so i was dingwhat u told me.
M: ha ha agar woh India main hai tho unhone kissi detective ko bejha hoga....
R: muskan tum thik tho hona, detective hum koyi criminals nahi hai, tumne party main kuch piya kya?
M: ha piya tho what ab chalo wapis party main mujhe dance karna hai
R: what?? nahi aur kitna tamasha karogi tum chupchap sojao
M: acha aur main tumse orders kabse lene lagi maine kaha na I want to dance aur abhi!!!!!!!
Sorry guys plz don't get angry i jst got a bit carried away, agar yeh part doesn't go with the story line plz feel free to ignore it😃oh and it's upto next wirter if rahul takes her bck tothe party for the dance or not
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
PARI!!! loveloveloved it!!
her getting jealous, drinking ''vodka'' (yay, you used that!, lol) and then Rahul carried her back to the room!!
aww, the whole part was so cutee!!
thanks for updating!!
lots of love,
Sab
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Posted: 15 years ago
really awesum part pari
ppl i was thinking dat if i add a song sequence ...u ppl wont mind na?.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nope Amber!! kuch bhi chalta hai!! the point is, keep the thread going!! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shilps!good morning!..how r u?? sab bhala changa?
okay so will post my part soon after my breakfast
brb
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Posted: 15 years ago
haha tumhare liye good mornign hoga, mere like good night!! 11pm

ok lol will try to wait if i can!

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