hey guys.......
i know i know ki aap log soch rahe honge ki mere paas aur koi kaam nahi hai kya?and when will i update my ffs?
i will do that soon and thanks a ton for loving me unconditionally.......
well this os is not actually an os.......its a three-shot story.....this was asked by my dear frd zoah (ansh_arti)....i love her too much.........she asked me to write a story abt mayur.........and gave me the outline of the story.......
i will take her story only but will add my own effects in it and try to give it a new dimension......and also i will try to add a different minute details......but the plot will be hers.....
and at the end of this story........ie. after the third part......i will make sure to quote her words....saying the outline of the story she gave me.....coz if i did't did that.....then it would be injustice to her.....and i wont ever do that.......
this story is dedicated to Ansh_arti my dear frd......and regarding my os you wanted to continue that is "first time jab we met" actually i cant continue it....its becoz its based on my life....i am nupur in that....."first time we met" was not at all fictional story....actually i am nupur....
my best frd who loves mayank is simmi
and mayank is achintya - the one who is loved by my best frd simmi......the one who asked me to write abt what i felt when i first met him.....therfore i am not continuing it as i cant show love between mayur....but if u still want it to be continued then tell me......coz i know how to make the plot of a love story.......
part 1 out of 3this is a long story cause i loved its concept so i was bust adding minute details which i love.....therefore i have divided it into three parts......
Nupur's POV-
Aaj to main poori tarah se toot chuki hoon......kyun? kyun? Kyun? Kyun mayank....tumne mere saath aisa kyun kiya? Maine tumse itna pyaar kiya aur tumne mere saath yeh kiya?
Kya tumne mujhse kabhi bhi pyaar nahi kiya? Agar nahi kiya toh phir tumne mujhe woh sapne kyun dikhayae? Kyun kaha ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho? Kyun? I hate you for coming in my life.....She then curses the day when mayank had proposed her......the day which she always thought to be the most beautiful day in her life....was nothing but a day full of regret for her today.....
Flashback-
She walked on the path full of roses.....she walked into the dark....she was shocked to see all that beauty....it was truly a marvelous scene...everything was sooooo beautiful.....she had never seen such a beauty in her life....
A walk on the roses.....a room lit up by the dim light of the candles.....a platform set for her to step on.....and as soon as she reached that spot....a spotlight was shot on her...and another spotlight on mayank.....
Mayank came closer to her...until the two spotlights merged into one......
Nupur- mayank yeh sab kya hai?
Mayank- shhhhh......nupur......aaj tum kuch mat bolo.....aaj sirf tum mujhe bolne do aur tum suno....
Nupur- par....
Mayank- plz Nupur...
Nupur- theek hai.....
Mayank- Nupur....aaj main tumhe kuch batana chahta hoon.....batana toh bahut pehle se hi chahta tha lekin...keh hi nahi paaya...kabhi himmat hi nahi huyi....shayad ho sakta hai ki main darta tha....darta tha ki kahin is baat se hamari dosti par koi aanch na aaye....darta tha ki kahin mere is confession se hamari dosti...jo ki mere liye sabse zyada important hai....woh kahin na toot jaaye....nupur waada karo ki chahe jo bhi ho tum hamari dosti nahi todogi?
He lends his hand before her....asking her to promise that she won't break their friendship....and she puts her hand in his hand...and he envelops her hand in his hand...
Nupur- mayank main waada karti hoon....chahe jo bhi ho jaaye...hamari yeh dosti kabhi bhi nahi tootegi....par baat to batao....
He then moves back.....the two spotlights become distant...and then turned around....he didn't wanted to say seeing in her eyes...
Mayank- Nupur....mujhe nahi pata kabse...nahi pata kaise...par mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya hai....i am in love Nupur.....in love with u....bata nahi paaya kyunki darta tha ki kahin tum hamari yeh dosti bhi na tod do....main apne is naye ehsaas ki vajah se hamare rishte mein kabhi bhi koi bhi daraar nahi aane dena chahta hoon....but today I wanna say that...i, Mayank Sharma, the stupid, idiot, and not-so-handsome looking guy loves you a lot....main tumse itna pyaar karta hoon ki tum soch bhi nahi sakti ho...
When he turned around....he saw that Nupur had tears in her eyes....and had anger clearly visible in her big black beautiful eyes....
He thought that now she will slap him.....he thought that now he has lost his friend too...
As soon as Nupur came closer to him.....his heart beats kept on increasing....but she had a fast pace...not like the slow-movie types.....she was walking fast...
She neared him and hugged him....
Nupur- itni der kyun laga di mayank? Main kab se intezaar kar rahi thi....is din ke liye maine bahut itezaar kiya hai...i love u too....
They broke apart and mayank saw tears of joy in her eyes....he looked at her lovingly....
Mayank- tumne kabhi kyun nahi kaha?
Nupur- woh...yeh sab baatein to ladke pehle kehte haina?
She smiled......and mayank looked at hr affectionately.....
Nupur- aur sach kahoon toh mujhe bhi darr tha ki main kahin apna dost na kho doon....
Mayank- yeh dekho....hum dono ek doosre se itna pyaar karte hain aur hum dono ne hi sach nahi bola kyunki hum dono hi apni dosti kho dene se darte the.....agar aaj main confess na karta to mujhe kabhi pata hi nahi chalta that u love me too....aaj to bach gaye....pata nahi kitne log honge jo ki yeh sochkar confess nahi karte hain ki isse unki dosti na toot jaaye....woh yeh bhi nahi sochte hain ki ho sakta hai ki saamne waala aaphi ke ikraar ka intezaar kar raha ho....
and they both hugged each other........
It's true that today no one confesses their love even though they love each other just due to the fear of denial....comeon....take the risk...u never know that during this process u may even win your true love....what's the problem in taking the risk when this could make u win ur true love??? Risk...cause nothing comes without a cost....
Flashback ends. Nupur's POV-
Nahi....tumne mere saath sirf pyaar ka natak kiya....tumne mujhse kabhi bhi sacha pyaar nahi kiya hai.....agar kiya hota to mere saath kabhi bhi yeh nahi karte....tumhare liye hamare pyaar se zyada to tumhara career tha...aur kehte the ki tum mujhse sabse zyada pyaar karte ho....jhoothe kahin ke! I hate u mayank....i hate u....Flashback-
A girl who was wearing a pink frock style suit goes towards a boy wearing the same coloured shirt.....both looking stunning......
Nupur- mayank...aaj hamare college ka aakhiri din hai....
Mayank- haan I know....iske baad hamare sapno ko sach karne ka din hai....
He puts his hand on her shoulder and hugs her....then after breaking apart......he puts his hand on her waist and then sways with motion.....
Mayank- Nupur....
Nupur- hmm....
He whispers in her ears.....
Mayank- Nupur...tum jaanti ho na that I love you?
Nupur- haan mayank....main jaanti hoon.....i love u too.....
He then leaves her....and comes in front of her....
Mayank- nahi Nupur....kya tum yeh jaanti ho ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon?
Nupur- bahut saara....
She spreads her hands as much as she could....she does that like a kid... he smiles at her adorably....
Mayank- nahi...i mean kitna....tum batao.....tum mujhse kitni mohobbat karti ho?
Nupur- mayank......pyaar ko koi bataya thodi na ja sakta hai ki kitni mohobbat hai....bas mohobbat hai....
Mayank- nahi Nupur....batao na ki kitni mohobbat hai?
Nupur- ek pal ke liye duniya de doon...itni mohobbat hai....khush? ab tum batao ki kitni mohobbat hai?
Mayank- ek pal ke liye zindagi de doon....itni mohobbat hai.....
Nupur was awestruck....she never thought that anyone can love her so much....she just spread her arms and envelops him in her arms......
Flashback ends. Nupur's POV-
Kyun mayank? Tumhare liye to main tumhari zindagi thi na? to phir kyun? Kyun tumne aisa kiya mere saath? Kyun mujhe is daur par laakar chod diya? Kyun tumhare liye mujhse zyada tumhara career important ho gaya? Kyun? Kyun tumne us din mujhe mana kar diya? Kyun meri zindagi barbaad kar di? Kyun? Kash maine tumse kabhi bhi pyaar hi nai kiya hota....i wish ki tum meri zindagi mein kabhi bhi na aate....
why is nupur cursing mayank? what happened between them? where is she right now?????? how come? why the hell does she hates mayank? what has he done? why is she crying?
to know this.......
do read the second part of this three part story........
do comment.......
silent readers.....it hurts when u dont get the comments when u work so hard.....and now i am frankly telling u that i will pm only those who comment.....
thanks a lot to all the people who comment and make my day beautiful and even appreciate my work......
thanks a ton!
do comment.......
and zoah i think i did keep up to ur expectations.......sorry this is not what u have said.....but i wanted to make the story look more wonderful......
love,
Mahak
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