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FragranceOfLove thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

<br>Hi mahak,<br>tune dekh liya iv.<br>hmmmmm so now u r on cloud9.<br>



cloud nine is a smaller word sweety.......

now i will write a one shot showing my happiness......

it will have only and only happiness......

and u know what?

after seeing this.......

i am soooooooooooo happy that i wont update the promo of life in a movie today.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Omg what can I say,I'm just speechless after reading the update.
It's just superb update dear.And u said right there are huge difference.
I guess,mayank love nupur but he drunk and did the mistake(Hopefully,I'm right,if not then it's very sad)
At the nupur point of view is right.She said true things to mayank.
If u love someone then it's connect to ur mind,soul first and that's called love.
I just say u wrote this part beautifully and I agree with u dear.
Thanks for the pm.
Sorry for late comment.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Love has a positive affect on a relationship because when love exists in a relationship both partners hold the happiness of the other in a high esteem and place the happiness of their partner ahead of their own desires. Love affects relationships in a myriad of ways including how the couple interacts, the leisure activities they participate in and the longevity of the relationship. In a loving relationship the couple behaves thoughtfully towards each other and is mindful of their partner's feelings. In this type of relationship, each partner places their partner ahead of themselves and they strive to treat each other lovingly and with respect. Also, in a loving relationship the leisure activities that the couple participates in are based on a mutual love and respect. Activities are chosen with careful consideration to the partner's feelings. In a loving relationship the partners typically engage in activities that they either either strongly agree on or those that are a compromise. While a couple in a loving relationship may not always be in complete agreement regarding leisure activities, they strive to compromise to ensure that both partners have the opportunity to engage in their preferred activities. Finally a relationship that is based on love is usually long lasting. The presence of love in the relationship enables a couple to work through any problems or difficulties that arise in the relationship and helps the relationship to endure. The thoughtfulness and caring that exists in a loving relationship helps the relationship to grown and endure.

Conversely a lustful relationship may not necessary have a negative affect on a relationship but it also may not be as positive as a loving relationship. Similarly to love, lust also affects a relationship in regard to how the couple interacts, the activities the couple participate in and the durability of the relationship. The primary difference between a lustful and a loving relationship is that while in a loving relationship the partners place a high value on the happiness of their partner, a lustful relationship is one in which the partners are consumed by their own desires. The partners in a lustful relationship place their needs and wants ahead of their partner's desires. This alone is enough to make their partner feel disrespected and to not place a high value on the relationship. The fundamental selfishness that exists in a lustful relationship trickles down and affects the activities in which the couple participates. While those in a loving relationship strive to compromise and find activities that they both enjoy, those in a lustful relationship are more prone to insist on participating in activities that they enjoy regardless of whether or not their partner will also enjoy this activity. One final characteristic of a lustful relationship is that it is typically short lived. A lustful relationship is driven by passion and desire and once a goal is reached the partner becomes no longer desirable. With nothing else to drive the relationship it soon begins to wane and the couple often separates. Lustful relationships are characterized by a selfishness and lack of respect that typically results in a short and tumultuous relationship.

Complicating the issue of separating love and lust is that it is often possible for lust to exist within a loving relationship.


okay this is my analysis on your topic .. these facts are soooo not to be missed!!!!!!!! it's an interesting topic for writing...
BTW i have a question for you How old are u???? i am just asking because you write sooooo well & tht too on mature topics like these!!!
u said right there are huge difference b/w Love & Lust


I am sooooooooo sorry for commenting late it is just tht I have been busy lately ....
OH yes I forgot to say this was A Splendid OS


mahi one more thing Never feel that people will not like your work Be POSITIVE
.
positive attitude is a really good Virtue to have I hope ke you are understanding what I wanna say to you...... Oi don't take this to heart I am just saying it as a friend. An advice frm 1 frnd 2 another.....
this work of being a writer must be a tedious Job for you also ... But also an emotional for the readers tooo
Remember these few things
  1. be positive . even though hard work has been put in .. Be Positive for good comments
  2. Always keenly observe your reader's reaction to your work & how many mistakes of your has been pointed it really helps
  3. Read Re- Read & review ur work

this was just to motivate you ... hope you did not mind this 😊
Sorry once again 4 da late comment sweety
Lekha



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Omg what can I say,I'm just speechless after reading the update.

It's just superb update dear.And u said right there are huge difference.

I guess,mayank love nupur but he drunk and did the mistake(Hopefully,I'm right,if not then it's very sad)

At the nupur point of view is right.She said true things to mayank.

If u love someone then it's connect to ur mind,soul first and that's called love.

I just say u wrote this part beautifully and I agree with u dear.

Thanks for the pm.

Sorry for late comment.





thanks di.......

wahi toh!!!!!!!

there's a huge difference.........

yup u r right......

but being drunk doesn't gives him a privilege to do that when she wasn't agreeing...........

thanks for agreeing to my point of view.......

thanks.......

its ok......

i dont mind late comments........

atleast it came........

that's enough for me........

but i loved it......

thanks.............
FragranceOfLove thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

<p align="justify"><font color="#0033cc"><font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Love
has a positive affect on a relationship
because
when love exists in a relationship both partners hold the
happiness
of the other in a high esteem and place the happiness of their
partner ahead of their own desires. Love affects relationships
in a myriad of ways including how the couple interacts, the
leisure activities they participate in and the longevity of
the relationship. In a loving relationship the couple
behaves thoughtfully towards each other and is mindful of their
partner's
feelings.
In this type of relationship, each partner
places their partner ahead of themselves and they strive
to treat each other lovingly and with respect. Also, in a loving
relationship
the leisure activities that the couple participates in are
based on a mutual love and respect. Activities are chosen with
careful consideration to the partner's feelings. In a loving
relationship the partners typically engage in activities that
they either either strongly agree on or those that are a compromise.
While a couple in a loving relationship may not always be in
complete agreement regarding leisure activities, they strive
to compromise to ensure that both partners have the opportunity
to engage in their preferred activities. Finally a relationship
that is based on love is usually long lasting. The presence
of love in the relationship enables a couple to work through
any problems or difficulties that arise in the relationship
and helps the relationship to endure. The thoughtfulness and
caring that exists in a loving relationship helps the relationship
to grown and endure. </font>
</font></p>
<p align="justify"><font color="#0033cc"><font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Conversely a
lustful relationship may not necessary have a negative
affect on a relationship but it also may not be as
positive as a loving relationship.
Similarly to love,
lust also affects a relationship in regard to how the couple
interacts,
the activities the couple participate in and the durability
of the relationship. The primary difference between a lustful
and a loving relationship is that while in a loving relationship
the partners place a high value on the happiness of their partner,
a lustful relationship is one in which the partners are consumed
by their own desires. The partners in a lustful relationship
place their needs and wants ahead of their partner's desires.
This
alone is enough to make their partner feel disrespected and
to not place a high value on the relationship. The fundamental
selfishness that exists in a lustful relationship trickles
down and affects the activities in which the couple participates.
While those in a loving relationship strive to compromise and
find activities that they both enjoy, those in a lustful relationship
are more prone to insist on participating in activities that
they enjoy regardless of whether or not their partner will
also enjoy this activity. One final characteristic of a lustful
relationship is that it is typically short lived. A lustful
relationship is driven by passion and desire and once a goal
is reached the partner becomes no longer desirable. With nothing
else to drive the relationship it soon begins to wane and the
couple often separates. Lustful relationships are characterized
by a selfishness and lack of respect that typically results
in a short and tumultuous relationship. </font>
</font></p>
<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0033cc">Complicating the issue of separating love and lust is that
</font><font color="#0033cc">it is often possible for lust to exist within a loving
relationship.<br></font><br><br>okay this is my analysis on your topic .. these facts are soooo not to be missed!!!!!!!! it's an interesting topic for writing...<br>BTW i have a question for you How old are u???? i am just asking because you write sooooo well & tht too on mature topics like these!!!
</font> u said right there are huge difference b/w Love & Lust
<br><font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><br>I am sooooooooo sorry for commenting late it is just tht I have been busy lately ....<br>OH yes I forgot to say this was A Splendid OS<br><br><br>mahi one more thing Never feel that people will not like your work Be POSITIVE <br>.positive attitude is a really good Virtue to have I hope ke you are understanding what I wanna say to you...... Oi don't take this to heart I am just saying it as a friend. An advice frm 1 frnd 2 another..... <br>this work of being a writer must be a tedious Job for you also ... But also an emotional for the readers tooo<br></font><font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"> Remember these few things </font>

  1. <font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">be positive . even though hard work has been put in .. Be Positive for good comments</font>
  2. <font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Always keenly observe your reader's reaction to your work & how many mistakes of your has been pointed it really helps</font>
  3. <font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"> Read Re- Read & review ur work</font><br>
<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><br>this was just to motivate you ... hope you did not mind this 😊<br>Sorry once again 4 da late comment sweety <br>Lekha<br><br><br><br></font>





wow!!!!!!!!

thank u soooooooooooo much for the analysis.........

my age? i am 16

thanks......

i know i am a kid but i have a very mature thinking.........

i know my values....and for me......my values r my reason to live......

i don't know abt others but i am a truly traditional at heart........

i believe in arrange marriage.........

i aspire to become a doctor as my parents want that........

and i can do anything for my family............

thanks........

i am happy that u loved it.........

and i thank u from the bottom of my heart to give me suggestions.......

i will consider them from next time........

next time i will be positive abt my work.........

and the other too suggestion r what i always do............

i always see to my reader's reply and answer back..........

it helps me to know my mistakes.......

and i don't mind for ur comments........

infact,

i love them to the core.........

thanks a ton for the sweetest analysis.........

and the sweetest suggestions.........

thanks a ton.....

love u a lot.....

Mahak
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ lekha- one more thing........

i always love to write os on such matters........

matters which our society is facing.........

but never thought that anyone will love it........

or even like it.....

but i am very happy that u loved it......

thanks for that,..........

it gave me courage to write more...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
MAHI
dear it shows how truthful & pure your heart is
FragranceOfLove thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

MAHI <br>dear it shows how truthful & pure your heart is<br>



thank u so much......

its so sweet of u to say that....
tehzeeb25 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8888888 os
thanxxxx 4 d pm
do rite more
FragranceOfLove thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

gr8888888 os

thanxxxx 4 d pm

do rite more





thanks,.....

i am happy that u felt it was grt........

i will write more..........

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