AR * Aphotic Amour * FINAL PART pg 23 ~15th feb~

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Saadia

@Rozain

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Hi ravz awesome dudde

like your talent huny keep it up

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Rucha

@frnd.of.frndz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Ravs..

waaooo.. Awesome scene lekin itna chota sa update..?

gosh I loved it really..

waiting to read more..

thanx for the PM nd update..

luv

Rucha

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

yaar it ws very nicely written
honestly i meant it
verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry WELL written!
i only have one confusion, i'd b thankful if u cud clear it...yaar whts this abt the lost angel? n who's pictures are there in riddhimas locket???
tc
thnx for thme pm
luv sonia

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

ohh wow this is really good! like seriously, what a different story! i really like it! i was a bit confused with the intro, but things are making sense now after the first part and im dying to read more! please update quickly!

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Hey rav m glad u contined sooo soon......awesome part.......soooo ther seems a connection btw Armaan n Riddhima wow interesting........continue soon thnx for the Pm......

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

Hey Rav,
The part was amazing, I loved it.
So I guess, Armaan knows Ridhima, when he was in orphanage and that Ridhima is Armaan's angel. That's great.
Keep it up, continue soon and thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

wow
the part was cool
i loved it

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susha

@susha11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

it was awesome dear
loved it to bits continue soon
love
susha

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#89

*reserved.. will be back :)

*edited*...

Heyyyy rav !!...

that was such a great update !!... wonderful penning hun :)

their actions and thoughts just seemed to flow easily through words :)

armaan gazing at ridhima and she gaining consiousness and then their little chat was nice to read..

the way he threatened her by mentioning abt physical assault and her fearless answer back to that threat... she is one strong girl... her calm head durng such a situation is really nice...

and armaan finding his angel.. aww.. thats such a nice twist in the tale.. wonder how he reacts to the whole situation now....

a very wonderful penned part hun :)

awaiting the next part !!...

continue soooooooooon :)

n thanks for the pm...

Edited by SunainaTM007 - 15 years ago

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Sanaya/Madhurima

@disisSanaya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#90

Holy Shit!!! That was so bloody amazing!! I jus can't express...Rav...you are so so so fantastic...this part..cud have been no way better..i mean...the last bit...oh my god!! I cud see the whole scenario taking place in front of my eyes..and my heart was pumping blood ten times faster!!

The ending was the best...But i feel like killing you for not writing more....but the excitement is kinda good...

Am sure the nest part's gonna be as amazing as this one..or maybe..even better!!

Love you so very much Rav!!

Muah muah muah!!

Take care..

Sanu 😃