U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#981

i m really sad as well unhappy dear.u finished this FF??i m really hurt...but must say such mindblowing finishing to a great a story...mayur reached their destination finally.😊loved it to bits yaar...start writing another xclusive one hun.

Edited by ghtk1 - 15 years ago

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surbhi tyagi

@EtherealRati

Trailblazer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#982

awesome dear................

actually awesome word is nothing for your work..............

you let me speechless.............................👏👏👏👏👏

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thenarcissist

@thenarcissist

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#983

Extremely wondeful part!!
i'm really happy that u ended it so well rabi!!
it was really mesmerising!!
congratulations!!

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#984

heyyy rabi
Wow yaar last part was just stupendo fantabulously fantastic
Just loved it to the core
But u ended the ff
M really gonna miss this ff
Thanx for pm

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#985

lovely update
rabi
i love both the part
sorry for short comment
but i lovle it nups scaret and everything is so sweet and the last part is so romantic

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#986

hey dear it was awesome
jus loved it..
iam speechless...
tumne ff end kardiya..
will miss ur ff..

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Aparajita

@aparajita.s

Navigator

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Posted: 15 years ago

#987

Rabi!!!!!! U finished this FF!? 😲😲And I'm SO late in my reply....:(( Sorry!!!

What do I say yaar... The end was just perfect....They way MayUr got engaged was awww, so cute! And den their one month anniv, the teasing, the cute fights, the romance...It was truly special!! And u ended wid a beach scene?? 😍 Awwww Man!!! I loved it!! :)

I'm really going to miss this FF...I specially loved the jokes between Sam, Benji and Mayank....Specially Benji's pakau shers...😆

U r a brilliant writer, Rabi...Keep up da good work...Hope u'll write another Fun-filled FF...Mera intezar Karna is the serious types, na? Anyway, Awesome FF!! Loved it...:) 🤗

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iHeartMoi

@iHeartMoi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#988

Ah! Gulab ka phool, just read all parts! It was marvelous dear!! 👏 But main aayi anf FF got over? 😭 😭
Anyways, write more FFs, please!
Thanx for the PM 😃

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#989

hey awesome end
loved every bit of it
that was mind blowing end
thanks for pm

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cute-kanwal

@cute-kanwal

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#990

hey it was a wonderful ff.read it in one go and i simply luvd reading it.there was a huge smile on my face while reading it.

it was cute, romantic, funny yet emotional at tyms....the earlier parts were damn funny enjoyed them to bits...hav never read a funny ff be4 in this forum so it was a great change to read sumthing different 4rm dat emotional stuff

as far as the last part is concernd it was beautiful their confession was really nyc. simple and sweet and i luvd the beach part....u r a really gud writer luking forward to read more of ur ff's😃