U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#961

beautiful update rabi...👏..
i luvd it soooooooooooo much....
really very sad dat d ff ended...
But Happy dat it ended in such a good note..⭐️..
i wish Mayur wr shown like dis in d serial also..but all hopes dead...
thnx a ton 4 writin such a wonderful Journey of Mayur....😃
luv u lots..🤗.
-supriya

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Shivangi Singh

@shivangi278

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#962

WOW....WOW.....WOW...Rabi,
u rockkkk!!!!! ⭐️

it was a perfect ending....truly beautiful.... 😍
loved it to bits,

the first part was magical.....atlast he confessed his love,
and the hug.....haiiii...😳😳😳
then the garden scene.....ahhhh...it was fabulous... chooo chweet... 😍

then their first month anniversary....wow....kaash aisa kuch show mein bhi dikhate,
anyways it was marvellous... loved the song...wada raha...its truly meant for mayur.. 😍
the beach date was shoooo cute and sweet,
mayur are truly made for each other...😍 😍 😍

you have done a magnificient job,
keep writing more,
love you.... 🤗 🤗 🤗

Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#963

hey rabi...u rock yaar...⭐️⭐️⭐️ i can't tell u in words hw was the update

its awesome,amazing,mindblowing.....etcetc....👏👏👏👏

its a perfect start 4 MAYUR....😊😊😊dats it i could say.....

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#964

aww Rabi! such a perfect ending!👏
the song u used is one of my favs & suits Mayur 2 the core!
the 'roothna aur manana' b/w them is sooooo sweet!😳
at last, itz all's well that ends well!😊

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@-Ishita-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#965

awsome part enjoyed ur ff

thanx for the pm

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#966

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome prt rabi

im sooooooooooo going to miss this ff

thanxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm

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..pebo..

@..pebo..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#967

hey rabi di!!!!!!!!!!

wht an ending

just loved it

it was such a ggood endind

it was

fantabulous

awesome

terrific

superb

wonderful

all rounder

lovely

fantastic

sweet

fabuloys

di now there ar no more words to express how good it was

i wa veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy happy reading this part

but also very sad

that this ff is ending

this was one of my fav di😭😭😭😭

pls pls continue

dont end it

i love this story tooooooooooo much

or plzzzz make a sequel

it was just too good

am gonna missiit a lot

love u a lot

pebzzzii

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anju011

@anju011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#968

what an ending Rabi.
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
loved it to bitsssssssssss.
u have made it so special.
i don't know what to write as now im feel like crying bcoz one of my favourite ff's ending.😭 😭
hey dear keep writing more & more.
u are a very beautiful writer.
love u a loads.