U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131

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samira

@-Samira-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#941

oh my goddddddddd i'm speechless rabi i don't know wat 2 say

but ur fablous love u know i thouth i was really watching mayur

n it's so romanti sametime omotion with a beautiful words

n the way ur describe oh masha-allah i'll say hat's of t u honey

ur really amazing n the ending muaaaaaaaaaaah 🤗 hugs titly 4 u

u said it's my first ff but ur much better love love u that i'm proud of u wat story n beautifuly ending .

rabi i'm traying 2 write long but i can't 🤣 well done dear once again muaaaaaaaaaah

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Rabia

@.Rabia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#942

👏 👏 👏
great update
loved it
it was perfect ending
but sad you end it
but i must say it was sorry it will be one of the best ffs after its end
you wrote the ending so beautifully and perfectly
it was a indeed a treat for all mayurians
update was great
enjoyed every bit of it

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#943

beautiful last part I loved it very much

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#944

omg the confession was soo good!!
and mayur were magical!!!
amazing part!!

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Neha

@jamoshi2507

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#945

oh I am so sad that it ended .... but I loved every bit of it thanks dear

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kulsumd

@kulsumd

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#946

WOW..,Wonderful update dear..
1s part mayank cofess his love 2 nupur...den dey hug...cho chweet.
Mayur first month aniversry cute romantic movements...Omg den beach part vz Superb & so romantic..very beautifully written....
Im so sad dat ua ending dis ff anyways write new ff plzz....
Thanx 4 d pm...

Kulsum.

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#947

Rabi, what an update............perfect part, with a perfect ending.............

It was very sweet and endearing...............loved the way they had become a part of each other............

Amazing ff it was......................thanx a ton for this