U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131

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Part 16 (Last Part)

Climbing two steps in one stride he went to his room and was about to open the door but stopped there to catch his breath, he was so anxious to meet her but now his heart was racing with the thought of facing Nupur. "main usse kahon ga kya?" Mayank mumbled. "jo bi ho, I'll have to talk to her now." Mayank thought and first thought of knocking at door but then without even making noise he slowly opened the door and looked around as he came in, everything was same as he had left before one month and almost two weeks. He was looking around when finally he caught sight of world's most beautiful girl, his angel. He was simply lost looking her, though she was facing back to him but he could say how much beautiful, no elegent, no gorgeous, ahh he was struggling to thought a proper word to describe her. She was standing in balcony looking out in garden. Finally Nupur, for whom he was searching, was standing there that too in his own room. The place he never ever imagined to find her where, his own room. Mayank heaved a sigh and after mustering up some courage he almost mumbled her name, "Nupur...."

Nupur who was standing there oblivious to Mayank's presence in room, looking outside at greenery but thinking about what would be Mayank's reaction when he will come to know that she was that girl whom he was getting marry, what if he will again reject her, still there was doubt, a slight fear in her heart thinking about all. She will never be able to live after being rejected once more, but Gunjan had told her that now Mayank too loves her, but who knows what is truth. Nupur was confused standing there, with her mixed feelings. When she heard someone taking her name, Nupur held her breath as she could easily comprehend that it was only Mayank, her first and last love, though she never said that but she loved him, no she loves him and will ever do. Nupur slowly turned to face Mayank with her heart thumping against her chest insanely.

Mayank who was already finding it difficult what to say to Nupur but as she turned he actually lost not only his words but himself also. Nupur was looking breathtakingly beautiful in bright red lehenga with silver embroidery in the whole lehenga and along the border of dupatta which was set on her head with pins after styling her hair in a proper hair style, with light natural make over and matching jewellery. Mayank seemed as if had forgot to breath. He was simply staring at Nupur making Nupur even more confused and nervous.

Nupur was waiting Mayank to say something, standing there infront of him, she gulped and wait even more but Mayank was not saying even a word. She looked up to face him and saw him staring at her, Nupur first felt as if there was something wrong, was something there on her, she gestured him to say something but again no response. Fortunately she was standing right before the huge mirror on wall, she checked herself curtly and found nothing wrong and again turned to face him who still was staring at her. She faked a cough, which was enough to bring Mayank back to face reality now from his dreamland in which he was imagining himself with Nupur like always.

Again Nupur was standing there quietly, she actually wanted to hear what Mayank was to say to her, she just wanted to know what Gunjan told her was right or wrong, does he really love her or it's just nothing. Though she also loves him but boys are supposed to say first na.

"wo...... main...." Atleat he said something what if 'wo, main' only but at least he initiated.

"you want to say something" Nupur asked indirectly saying him to say something at least now.

"hmm? Nahi...... kuch nahi'." Mayank finished saying that he doesn't wanna say anything, what rubbish he chided himself.

"kuch nahi?" Nupur asked disappointed. She was waiting what and what was coming......what I could expect from Mayank after all. She said to herself.

"nahi, I mean.... I wanted to say that.......that......."

"that?" again a slightest ray of hope lit in her heart.

"that......that...." Please God help me...."that you are looking beautiful." Mayank heaved a sigh after saying this but he regreted why he didn't said gorgeous as she was looking just like a fairy, even more beautiful that that. Although this was not the thing actually he wanted to say but how to say the he loves him, it was not easy at the end.

"tum yeh kehna chahtey thy?" Nupur asked astonished. Though she was happy, every girl would be happy when someone said that she is looking beautiful, but this was not she wanted to listen. She was waiting him to say what she wanted to listen since a lot of years. He waited for her only some days but there was Nupur who was waiting for Mayank since almost 16 years. It was not a trivial thing. 16 years is a long, very long time span. But again being disappointed, heartbroken would be appropriate word, she finally spoke,

"sab nichey intazar kar rahe hain, tum bi aa sakte ho agar tum aana chahtey ho, but agar tum yeh engagement nahi karma chahte to....." words got struck in her throat as she was going to say the thing which she never wanted to say ever, never even dreamt to say that, she closed her eyes and spoke..... "to tum mana kar sakte ho..... I can understand" she said in a shaking tone and pace towards him to get out of the room as he was standing in her way to go out. She saw Mayank with teary eyes, but trying hard not to let them brim over.

Mayank was feeling terrible after listening those words from Nupur, why Nupur was saying this, did she want to see him dead or what? He loved her, he can't even think his life without Nupur. But Nupur was not aware of his feelings, she didn't know anything, after all what had happened in past she was definitely supposed to say this, but he actually felt his heart ached as he heard her saying those words. He loved her from the deepness of his heart, may he even wasn't aware of the depth of his love until Nupur went away without saying anything, it was indescribable, and ever has it been known that love knows not its own depth until the hours of separation. But after noticing tears in her eyes he forgot all his pain, all what he was going through, he was just looking Nupur and her tears, he was feeling as if a volley of arrows had pierced his heart. As Nupur crossed him, trying hard not to look at him and finally passed across him but stopped there, as she felt her hand in Mayank's grip. She closed her eyes tight, fearing with what was coming next, what Mayank was suppose to do now, what he wanted to say now, why he had held her hand now, why?

"Ma...... Mayank please, please leave my hand." Nupur spoke in shaking voice.

Still standing in that position, both's back facing, Mayank spoke, "I know Nupur maine tumhe buhat dukh diye hain, anjane main hi sahi lekin maine tumhara dil dukhaya hai, main janta hun main galat tha lekin, lekin..... Main nahi janta k kal kya hoa, main nahi janta k kal kya ho ga......main sirf itna janta hun k maine pyaar kiya hai, sirf aik larki se, main nahi janta kab se, kaise, kyon, main sirf itna janta hun k main uss se buhat pyaar karta hun......sab se zyada, apni zindagi se zyada..... main sirf itna janta hun k main......k main tumse pyaar karta hun, han Nupur..... I love you...... I love you and only you"
Nupur closed her eyes while tear brim over making their way through her soft cheeks, Mayank finally said what she wanted to hear since so long. Being loved back by the person whom you love is most blissful thing ever. She didn't know why these tears were flowing from her eyes, she didn't know what to say now, what to do now, her hands were shaking with happiness or what, she didn't know. She was feeling so much happy as if soon she would burst out of happiness.

Mayank left her hand and turned to face her, finally after confessing his love. Finally he had said that he loved Nupur and only Nupur. She was his first and last love. Mayank turned but Nupur was still facing her back, Mayank smiled through tears looking at her, but he too wanted to know her feeling, wanted to know what she feels. Mayank made her face him by holding her from shoulders. Nupur was looking down still tears flowing out of her eyes, tears of joy, tears of happiness, tear of getting the person whom we love dearly.

Mayank wiped off her tears, and tilted her face to look into her eyes. Nupur too looked at him, into his eyes, the eyes to drown in, the eyes where she could easily see the love, love which was only for her. She couldn't hold more and just hung her arms around his neck and hugged him tight. Mayank took her in his arms slowly drapping his arms around her, feeling her, feeling his love in his arms. He hugged her tightly as if trying to protect her from everyone, and slowly lifted her off her feet. He was finally having his love in his arms, his eyes were moist with unshed tears, tears of joy, tears of finding his love back. They were hugging each other tightly, wishing for the moment not to end ever. No one wanted to end this beautiful heavenly moment but darn their friends who always took entry at wrong time. Terribly wrong time as half confession was still to come. Nupur hadn't said those magical words to Mayank.

"woooooooooooooooooo...." all together....."yeh kya ho raha hai?"

Mayank and Nupur instantly broke apart, and looked at their friends embarrassed. Nupur cheeks flashed red as she saw them looking at both of them with teasing look. They both could easily think what was coming now. Mayank and Nupur looked each other as if asking what to do now.

"arey tum log, wo main aur Nupur bas aane hi wale thy nichey" Mayank said trying to behave normally.

"main bi issi liye aayi hun" Gunjan said smilingly coming towards Mayur. "lets go Nupur, nichy sab tumhara poch rahe hain, ya abi kuch dair aur...." She trailed off causing Nupur to look down with modesty.

Gunjan took Nupur out of room, Nupur turned to look back at Mayank smiling shyly and left, Mayank too was smiling his best smile looking Nupur smiling shyly at him, and gasped loudly but soon reality struck on him as he felt stares on him.

"what?" Mayank asked irritably as his friends were smiling mischievously looking at him.

"so kya batien ho rahi thien?" Samrat enquired smiling cheekily.

"pyaar bari batien aur konsi batien..... finally hamare Mayank ne Nupur ko purpose kar hi diya." Benji said as he hugged Mayank congratulating him.

Udhay and Samrat too congratulate him, as finally all their struggles proved fruitful. As they too have thought a lot of ideas when Mayank each time tried to propose Nupur, although those ideas never worked but they still tried a lot.

"Kash mujhy bi koi larki mill jaye" Udhay heaved a sigh. "kyon tension le raha hai main bi hon abi kanwara teri tarha, single and not at all ready to mingle" Benji told Udhay faking to wpe his tears off.

"kyon where is Dia?" Samrat asked.

"mat pocho hamari dukh bari dastan" benji started his melodrama......
"beth kar uski zulfon k saaye main meri wafaaon ko josh aaya" Benji again started hi poetry, rubish poetry is what all other think about it.

"wah wah wah" Udhay added praising him as he easily got these lines.

"beth kar uski zulfon k saaye main meri wafaoon ko josh aaya"

"phir?" udhay again added while Mayank and Samrat were being impatient to beat him well.

"phir kya."......benji added......"ussk bhai ne daikh liya aur hospital main jaa ka hosh aaya"

After beating Benji well, they all came down. Mayank was dressed in off white, cream colour's sherwaani looking absolutely handsome and dashing. Finally everyone was in hall now. Mayank and Nupur were standing together smiling whole heartedly as they both were gonna engaged now, they both were gonna tie a knot which will assign both to each other. They both will officially a couple after few minutes. Everyone was looking them and being amazed at how much, they both look good together, exactly defining the words "made for each other", completing each other. They were definitely a heavenly couple.

After few minutes finally Mayank and Nupur exchanged the rings and everyone broke into a huge applause congratulating both Mayank and Nupur. They took the blessings of elders, and hugged Samrat, Gunjan, Udhay, Benji, Adiraj and Suhaani (adiraj's wife and Nupur's childhood friend). Everyone was very happy for Mayank and Nupur. They were busy talking about random things while having fun. And then after sometime dinner was served and all got busy with it. Mayank wanted to have his dinner with his fiancee, Nupur, but she was no where to seen. Mayank looked around for her while Gunjan saw him and came towards him.

"she is in garden" Gunjan said standing beside him. Mayank turned to face her, "what, kaun?"

"very smart, but old one" Gunjan chuckled and added, "go, have fun" winked at her and went away leaving a smiling Mayank. He himself wanted to spend time with Nupur so quickly rushed towards Garden.

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Nupur was sitting on swing, enjoying heavenly amazing breeze while looking at her engagement ring, smiling to herself, oblivious of surrounding, completely unaware of Mayank's presence there, who was looking her smiling and swaying on swing, and adoring her. To make her realize his presence Mayank faked a cough. Nupur being startled instantly got up and looked towards Mayank who was smilingly staring at him. Nupur was feeling her cheeks turning red at Mayank's constant gaze over her. Trying to avoid his stare she talked.

"Mayank...Tum, tum kab aaye?" Nupur asked fumbling with words.

"jab tum kisi k khyalon main khoi hoi thi." Mayank replied while grinning widely.

"nahi to.." she lied.. "lekin tum yahan kya kar rahe ho, ander engagement party hai, sab guests ander hain, tumhe ander hona chahiye na." Nupur said trying to behave normally.

"yeh baat to main tumhe bi keh sakta hun...... Tum yahan kia kar rahi ho?" Mayank said while moving towards Nupur.

Today Nupur was really happy as she got her love. She was feeling as if was flying in air. Mayank came closer to Nupur making her going weak. She came there as Mayank since so long was asking her to reply him, to say him what he had said a while ago.

"tum ne bataya nahi, yahan kya kar rahi ho?" Mayak again asked finshing distance between him and Nupur.

"wo.....m...main.....wo" Nupur was stammering trying to say anything but Mayank was constanly coming closer her.

"wo.....main kya?" Mayank asked grinning widely as he could see the effect of his proximity on Nupur.

"k... kuch nahi" Nupur spoke and turned to run away from there but her bad luck, Mayank held her wrist and pulled her towards him, She was jammed to her chest. Mayank's hand on her waist was making her shiver. Nupur was looking into his eyes with her hands on Mayank's shoulder. Mayank pulled her even closer to him.

"kuch nahi?" Mayank again spoke and "Mujhy to kissi ne bataya k tum mujh se pehle se hi....." he trailed off, not wanting to complete as he wanted to hear this from Nupur. He himself wanted to listen those three magical words from Nupur.

"han...." Nupur nodded with whisper looking down.

"kya han?" Mayank asked. He knew what Nupur was talking about but still wanted to listen.

"Maine wo allu k parathey aise hi to nahi bejhe thy" Nupur spoke suppressing her chuckle, "ajnabi logon main mujhy apne hath ki banayi hoi koi cheez bantney ka koi shok nahi hai"

"oh to wo allu k parathey Mere liiye thy special, but yaad hai tum ne kaha tha k wo aunty ne baije hain?" Mayank asked smiling mischiviously.

"tu main yeh kehti k maine baijhe hain, but kyon? Yeh batana parta na agar koi pochta to......" Nupur said smiling shyly as she noticed Mayank narrowing his eyes at her.

"oh to iss liye nahi bataya tha" Mayank said amused at her answer, "but ab to bata sakti ho na, kyon?" Mayank asked raising his brows.

Nupur shook her head in refusal, causing Mayank to spoke out, "lekin yeh to cheating hai na, maine to tumhe bola hai na, so tum bi kaho" Mayank almost ordered in stern voice but Nupur, after all she was Nupur.

"kya kahon.....??" Nupur asked hiding her smile in confused exprassion's disguise.

"Nupur!" Mayank spoke disapprovingly.

Nupur smiled in reponse causing Mayank to smile widely, he was so happy after being with Nupur, she was still so close to him, Mayank was still holding her tight by waist and Nupur's hands on his shoulders.

Mayank spoke looking into her eyes, lost in them "Nupur.... You know what, I always wan......"

"I love you, Mayank" Nupur finally said cutting Mayank in, Mayank was stunned for a second, trying to fathom what he head was right or just his imagination.

"I really love you, Mayank" Nupur spoke again as she placed her head on mayank's broad chest, closed her eyes feeling herself so close to Mayank. Mayank smiled whole heartedly and with so much contentment. He was about to say something but forgot as he heard those words finally from Nupur. Mayank slowly wrapped his arms around her, while saying nothing at all. He closed his eyes, inhaled deeply, feeling so much peace after such a long time. Both Mayank and Nupur were quiet, silence was filled in air, but as it is said sometimes silence speaks louder than words. Mayank and Nupur were so close feeling eachother's hear beat. They were feeling complete today.

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"Hey beautiful" Mayank whispered near Nupur's ear, causing her shiver. Nupur slowly opened her eyes and from the blur image, her love's clear image appeared. She smiled as she appreceived Mayank. She was confused, and was still in after affects of her beautiful dream with Mayank of course, looking Mayank staring at her lovingly, she yawned and spoke still in confusion.

"Itni jaldi subah ho gayyi?" She asked while stretching herself a little bit on bed and Mayank was laying at her side resting his head with the support of his hand and looking at Nupur smiling slightly.

"No, Mrs. Mayank Sharma, abi subah nahi hoi." Mayank told love of his life, his wife, Nupur Mayank Sharma.

Nupur got up with a start while her face glowing now and eyes twinkling with the idea which suddenly struck her. She turned to look at wall clock and as it struck 12 turned back to Mayank while smiling broadly.

"Happy First Month Anniversary" Both Mayank and Nupur spoke in union, and burst out laughing after that. Mayank moved farward and kissed Nupur's forehead lingering his lips there for longer. He wished her again, "Happy 1st month anniversary Nupur" He said while moving back to his original position. Nupur smiled slightly feeling so blessed. She was complete after marrying Mayank one moth ago. Their marriage was held with all pomp, magnificence and splendour with all traditions, after all Mayank's grandfather wanted everything perfect for the marriage of his only grandson. Moreover Aditya Bushan, Nupur's father left nothing in the preparations of marriage. From haldi to reception their friends were with Mayank and Nupur, making Mayank's life hell by their constant tricks and mocking sessions. But everyone was beyond the happy for the marriage of Mayank and Nupur.

Their love was increasing with each passing moment and they shared an amazing bond of understanding and love. Mayank was now trying to be a responsible grandson, son and husband for Nupur and was pleasently succeed in it. They were complete now, their love made them complete. Leading a perfect life, their love and moreover respect was increasing but at the same time their cute fights were still there adding exciting flavour to their marriage making them a heavenly blessed couple.

"Mayank, mera gift kahan hai?" Nupur pouted straching her hand farward expecting Mayank would gift her something special as it was the 1st month anniversary of their marriage.

"Ooopppsss sorry Nups I forgot'." Mayank told her making a puppy face.

"what?" Nupur asked with her eyes wide open as she got up from bed and sat on it on her knees with hands on her hips. "Tum sach main bhol gayye?" she asked once again expecting him to say no, he was kidding.

"I'm sorry but next month anniversary per zaror laon ga" Mayank told her making innocent face, and and promising that he won't forget next time.

"But iss dafa to bhol gayye na, jao main tum se baat nahi karon gi." Nupur told him, laid on bed again and turned her face to other side and pulled blanket over her face faking to be angry.

"I'm sorry Nupur" Mayank apologized as he pulled blanket off her face.

"I won't talk to you ever." Nupur again tried to pull blanket over her but Mayank was holding that strongly, after trying hard when she was not able to snatch, she let it go and tried to get up, while Mayank caught hold of her wrist and pulled her towards him. Nupur was on the top of him now but trying to get up and free herself from Mayank's clutches but he was far stronger. Looking her resisting Mayank smiled and took a turn now he was above her. Nupur looked at him furiously while saying with eyes to let her go, and Mayank just smiled in response.

"gussa aa raha hai?" Mayank asked mocking her, adding oil to fire.

"I hate you" Nupur turned her face sideways ingnoring Mayank and Mayank shook his face smiling slightly.

"really?" Mayank asked inching close to her face.

"Ma......yank" Nupur shivered as he nuzzled in her neck. Mayank looked her tightly closing her eyes, he continued looking her lovingly, looking her as if was seeing her for the first time, noticing each division of her face form her chin, to forehead to cheeks to her lips.

"Stop staring" Nupur snapped still her eyes closed, she could easily feel him, she hadn't any need of eyes to see the love of her life, her Mayank who was only hers, whom she love even more than her life, who was her everything.

"I love you!" Mayank said causing Nupur open her eyes and look at Mayank who already was staring her. "I love you, Nupur" Mayank said again with so much intensity and love in his voice, which was only for Nupur. Nupur looked him with her eyes welling up with tears of happiness seeing her dream coming true, her Mayank with her, for whom she has always prayed and with out wasting even a second she hugged him tightly still laying on bed, Mayank too tightened his grip around her and caressing her back reassuringly as he heard her sniffing. After a while they broke apart and Mayank noticed her teary eyes. And spoke mischiviously.

"Nupur, maine tumhien gift nahi diya na, I'm really sorry, lekin iss k liye rone ki kya zarorat hai."

Nupur who was firstly listening him carefully expecting him to say something about their love and life and all but after hearing this she hit him playfully on chest and hiding her smile got up pushing him away.

"Nupur, kahan ja rahi ho?" Mayank asked following her after jumping off the bed as he saw her going away.

Nupur said without turning "main ghar chor k jaa rahi hun, mujhy tumhare sath aur nahi rehna" Nupur said mischiviously taking sweet revenge now. Mayank stopped her there and sit before her on knees.

"What, Please Nupur, mujhy chor kar mat jaon, tumhare bina main marr jaon ga, hamari shaadi ki one moth anniversary per tum mujhy itna bara gham kaise de sakti ho." Mayank was full on with his melodrama which he often use to make her laugh.

"Stop your falto nautanki, Mr Sharma." Nupur said him little bit loudly to stop his annoying drama.

"Nupur, tum mujhy dant rahi ho?" Mayank pouted making puppy face as he got up to his feet.

"Main kyon dantney lagi tumhien?"

"iss ka matlab tum mujh se naraz nahi ho?" Mayank asked smiling broadly.

"of course.....hun naraz, main jaa rahi ho waise bi mujhy tum se koi baat nahi karni" Nupur said heading towards door. Mayank again held her wrist, almost dragged her and made her stand before mirror. He reached the drawer of dressing table and drew a beautiful pendant, simple but elegant. Nupur looked at Mayank's image in mirror and smiled whole heartedly looking the pendant. Mayank moved her hair aside, brushing his finger against her skin, sending shiveres ran down her spine. He slowly made her wore pendant. And looked her image in mirror, she was wearing nightgown of light pink colour, with hair open, looking absolutely gorgeous. Mayank made her face him turning her around and pulled her closer, held her hand and started swaying on the rhythm of their humming heart beats while their hearts promising for being always there for each other.

Wada Rahaa
Wada raha pyar se pyar ka
Ab ham na hon gay juda
Yeh meri darkanien sun raha hai khuda (Mayank looked at Nupur with so much love in his eyes for her and with the promise he will always be there for her now, today, tomorrow, forever.

Chahe tumhien kiss kadar mera dill tum ko nahi hai pata (Nupur swayed with him with the flow of their heartbeats, and and stared deep in his eyes drowning, where was only and only love for her)
yeh meri darkanien sun raha hai khuda (she placed her head on his chest and closed her eyes feeling him closely)
kWada Raha

Dono Jahan ko bula hon main
aisi lagi hai tujh se lagan
Chahey kaho isse dewangi
Chahe kaho isse dewanapan (Mayank tilted her head and made her look into his eyes again, he inched near her face and kissed her eyes passionately cupping her face, and caressed her cheeks, moved ahead finishing distance between their lips, Nupur could feel his breath over her face and held him tightly, Mayank kissed her near her lips, moved back and looked at her, inching near her ear he mumbled "I love you, Nupur" Nupur smiled slightly with her eyes closed, everytime Mayank said her this she felt an unknown happiness and contentment as if hearing this for the first time.)

Dill ne kaha dill ne suna
Maine tumhien dilbar chuna (Nupur cupped his face and kissed his forehead while closing her eyes, "I love you too, Mayank" she whispered still lost in him.)

Ab duriyan na rahien darmiyan
kya rang laayi wafa (Mayank embraced her, tightening his grip around her and pulling her closer to him, he caressed her waist exotically making Nupur gasp.)

yeh meri darkanien sun raha hai
khuda

Wada raha pyaar se pyaar ka
Ab ham nah on gay juda

Mayank picked her up in his arms and made her lay on bed, himself laid beside her, Nupur placed her face on his shoulder and smiled at him. Mayank draped his arm around her and pulled blanket over them, both dozed off snuggled up in each other arms, looking each other.

Mayank took Nupur out for the dinner next day to celebrate their sepecial day, a kind of date on beach, Nupur's favourite place, a romantic candle light dinner, only two of them, enjoying each other's company and adoring each other. After having dinner a lot of sweet talks and not to forget cute fights still, Mayank held her hand and walked along the shore, feeling the cold water touching their feet, cool breeze blowing and flying Nupur's long hair, which Mayank loved most, irritating her a bit. Nupur suddenly bent down and starting splashing water over Mayank.

"Nupur......yeh kya kar rahi ho?" Kapre giley ho jaien gay" Mayank was trying to move back and telling her not to throw water over him but she was Nupur after all. Being almost drenched fully he looked at Nupur faking to be angry who was laughing like anything looking Mayank like this. His fake anger was over took by the love he had for Nupur, looking her laughing he couldn't help but smile back showing her his dimples. Nupur moved towards him still smiling and kissed right at his dimples,

"Have I told you earlier that I looooooooove your dimples." Nupur told him pulling his cheeks. Mayank smiled even broadly and lifted her up in his arms.

"Now I'm gonna throw you in water, tum ne mere kapre giley kar diya thy na." Nupur mouth hung open with shock and immediately stopped laughing,

"No Mayank, please" she pleaded helplessly. Mayank smiled broadly looking her pleading but he started counting

"one''.........tick tick Two" Mayank was counting while Nupur was constantly pleading him not to throw her in water. But Mayank was not listening her, "Tick tick three and......" He threw her in water finally, completely drenched she got up and looked at him moving her hair aside from her face while trying to pick her dupatta up which had fell in water.

"I won't leave you now, Monkey Sharma" Nupur shouted and ran towards him to beat him well, Mayank too started running to save his life with Nupur following him.

"Nupur, yeh cheating hai, tum ne bi mujh per pani phainka tha, maine just equalize liya hai" Mayank said in between his laugh still running.

"I didn't throw you in water, now I will kill you." Nupur replied still running behind him breathing heavily, moreover it was getting difficult for them to run in water that too over sand, their feet were sinking in it. Mayank suddenly stopped and turned around feeling Nupur must be tired now. Nupur who was running with full speed of hers couldn't stopped herself immediately and bumped into Mayank. Mayank quickly circled his arms around her waist. Nupur looked at him and then hit him playfully on chest.

"choro mujhy." Nupur said while trying to be free from his grip but he was too strong for her. Helplessly she looked at him who was smiling at her futile efforts to get free.
"jab tum kar nahi sakti to try kyon karti ho." Mayank spoke making her boil in anger.

"leave me'"she said sternly once again hitting him on chest.

"never" Mayank replied shaking his head in no.

"to mat choro aisehi pakre rakho........ I don't care" Nupur said looking sideways carelessly pretending to ignore him.

"jab tum gussa hoti ho na to aur bi achi lagti ho." Mayank said making her smile slightly though she was trying hard not to smile. Mayank too grinned victoriously looking her smiling.

"tum smile kartey waqt aur bi pyaari lagti ho." Mayank again commented making Nupur blush with a beautiful smile, a smile to die for. Mayank always loved the way Nupur blushed. Mayank always knew how to make her smile and made her forgot her anger by his cute acts.
Nupur looked at Mayank and kissed his cheek again, a quick peck to say thanks to him, Mayank smiled broadly at her. Nupur was his life, he always wished her, but difference was firstly it was just image of a girl but after meeting Nupur that image got colors. She was his everything. Nupur has always loved Mayank, and had always prayed for him, to be with him. And now her all prayers were accepted, and had turned into a beautiful reality and Mayank was standing there infront of her with love visible in his eyes for her. What else she could wish for her life more than Mayank's love.

Daikha tumhien to aisa laga
Mujh ko mila manzil ka pata
Chalna hai ab ham ko sath main
tum se juda mera rasta

Maine to li hai kasam
paon tumhien janmo janam

Sajday kiye maine sham o sahar
manga hai tum ko sada
yeh meri darkanien sun raha hai Khuda

Wada raha pyaar se pyaar ka
Ab ham nah hon gay juda
meri darkanien sun raha hai khuda
Ab ham nah on ge juda

Wada raha yeh wada raha
Pyaar se pyaar ka
Wada raha yeh wada raha
Pyaar se pyaar ka
pyaar se pyaar ka

They were sitting on the sand with Nupur resting her head over Mayank's shoulder. After having spent a beutifull and full of masti and romance time they were sitting together feeling each other's presence and saying a lot of word through the serene silence but still there are some words who seems more meaning full when said. Mayank spoke looking at Nupur who was placing his head peacefull on his shouder while looking at the layers of water in sea, in night time the drizzling of moon light over layers was making scene worth to watch.

"Nupur....." Mayan initiated breaking the silence between them.

"Hmm?" Nupur said while still in same postion.

"I can't tell you how much blissful I feel." Mayank said looking at layers of sea, Nupur raised her head from his shoulder and looked at him questioningly. Mayank too looked back at her and continued.

"I'm the most luckiest person in the whole universe, because, because........ You Are Mine, my other half, that makes me complete."

Mayank said looking towards Nupur with unconditional pure love and respect for her, these were simple words but still with millions hidden meanings in it, which were conveyed through his eyes. There was no need of any further flowery words. Nupur smiled at him and again placed her head over his shoulder shifting towards him almost snuggling up with him while burrying her head in his chest replying to his words by her simple gestures. Mayank wraped his arm around her pulling her even closer to pretect her from everyone, to hide her in his arms which was the best place for her, kissed over her head and turned to look the layers rising in the sea.

This is not the end, just start of endless journey and love of Mayank and Nupur who are meant to be together, who are Mayur, whose love is composed of one soul inhabiting two bodies.

Hey friends finally the journey of this ff ends, it has been so pleasure writing this ff. It was my first ever ff, i have learned a lot with this, when u will read the first part and then this one you yourself will find the difference.
I started this ff just for the sake of fun and thought to end it in 8 parts only but it has become douple.....look its was 16th part 😆. Well thanks tou all of you who commented in this ff and encouraged me to write more. Thnaks to all my friends from the bottom of my heart. Love you all guys.

This part was most difficult update i have ever written, i wanted to make it special, i don't know i have succeeded in it or not, so let u decide this.

Do comment guys and tell me about this part and ff. I request you all to comment, all silent readers do comment once and for the last time. As it is end.

This part is dedicated to all die hard Mayurians, who are depressed right now actually. Any ways this is for u all guys.

I think speech kafi lambi ho gayyi hai........😆😆😆
I'm ending it here.
Love you all and do comment......... and don't forget to press like tab......it helps me to rate my update....

Rabi...😊

Edited by rose.mn - 14 years ago

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#933

Hey Rabi.. This was just AWESOME... FANTASTIC, SUPERB, EXCELLENT and all the adjectives you deserve.. It was just teeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiffffffffffffiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccccccccccccc....

I totally loved the way you have expressed and written each and every feeling of Mayank and Nupur... His reluctance in talking to her, her fear that what if she gets rejected again... beautifully written...

The engagement and the small talk in the garden was just fantastic... the way they confess to each other and the capacity to speak a thousand words with silence .. was just amazing...

The way he wishes her their first month anniversary and the clebration in the beach... just toooo good and mindblowing.

once again, congratulations for writing so beautifully... and the way you ended it with the title of the FF.. U R MINE... says it all... Way to GO!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

and so sorry for the late comment..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#934

Rabi......

Awwwsome part......Perfect ending......

Loved the whole part to bits......right from Mayank's confession to their date.....Superb..!!!!!!!

The bond you showed after their marriage...the understanding, the love......this is what I always wanted to see

Song you used was perfect "Wada raha pyaar se pyaar ka ab hum na honge Juda"

Their beach date was simple & beautiful.........

Jitna kahu kam hai ....this update touched my heart ........I'm reallly feeling better now............

It was a pleasure to read your FF...........

This was one of my favorite FF.....I'm sad it ended...........

You are an amazing writer Rabi ..you should keep writing more.............

Thankyou for giving us such a beautiful story........

Love you
Nidzy~

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#935

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Shamsa aka Sam

@Shamsaaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#936

OMG Rabi u dont know how much i love this ff god i am crying right now as u are ending it😭😭😭 i really love this ff gosh cant imagine this the end of it😭😭😭:)))

Gosh Awesome part MayUr are really meant to be for eachothers & ForEver:)))

the first part Mayuu came to Nups and gosh gosh finally he said it😳😳😳 ke i love u Nups god god i was damn happy at that momment😳😳 and that hug haye😳😳😳 and i too didnt want to be end but what we will do😆😆😆 it most end😆😆😆

Their Engagement to their garden talk gosh and she too said to him i love u mayuu haye rabba me to pakka mar jawa😳😳😳😳

First Month Anniversery haye lots of cute romantic and cute fight that would never end😳😳Mayuu in his full mood natukani teasing her 😳😳 & finally he gift her a gift and they went out for adate of their one month anniversery😍😍😍

Gosh Gosh Nups said to him that he have the cutest dimple ever and what he did throw her 😆😆😆and starts her filmy anger😆

Rabi u really light up my moood after reading it gosh what to tell more:::::

Awesome Fabulous Terrific Marvellous Fantabulous Great Loved it from bottom of my heart i wished that u contiune though i am happy😳😳😳

Love u Rabi🤗I know na i talk to much hai na:))))

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#937

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This is going to get really long...

Rabi!!!!

Yeh ff katam ho gaya?

Nahiiiii!!!!!!

Okay, me being too filmly

LOL 😆

I love this ff sooo much

it was too good

actually no

too brilliant

I can't tell you enough how much amazing it was

so from me to you

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Sachi mein

kya ending

kya story

kya writing

I can't believe that this was your first ff!

I mean

it was sooo awesome

that I loved it loads and loads

I mean really

the whole concept was different

than the other I have read

Okay,

this isn't that long

I think

See,

I'm not sure

I'm trying my best

to make it really long

see?

this is how I make it longer

but really

Mayank's story

of falling in love

was amazing

you surprised me

when you said Nupur loved him too

but the ending was soo sweet

awww I wish you never ended this ff

but there's always an end,

to something

but it's also

a new beginning

so you better write more ffs

then I will too

even though you are much better at it

LOL

I'm always saying bad things

about myself

then praise other people

okay,

I think this is long enough

cause yeah

I should shut up now

but....

So my shyest Mayurian

and sister 😉

You better start writing more ffs

varna...

LOL, me and my dhamkis 😆

But definately start another one soon!

so should I shut up?

I think I should now😆

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#938

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*******

Hey. Rabi, Fabulos update

You really made it special...

Everything was so perfect... Their confession...

Then first month anniversary...

Cute tiff for gift

Romantic scene...

Then beach... And the trust and love for each other

Silence really speak...

Ab, update soon to keh nahi sakti... Because it was last part

Koi baat nahi... Ab Mera Intezar Karna jaldi se jldi update karna...

Love you,
$hrey@

Edited by mayurlovers - 15 years ago