U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#911

wow Too good

Mayank ke dimag ki batti jali

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#912

Rabi.... I Love You... kya update diya hai.. dil khush kar diya tumne toh aaj... finally they are gonna confess and get married too... sachchi Mayank toh bewakoof hai... par superstar toh Dado nikle... aakir mein age ke saath experience bhi toh hota hai.... Dado ki JAI HO... and Rabi ki toh MAHA JAI HO.... itna achcha likhne ke liye....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 but srsly... tumhari itni pyaari si update ke liye... tumhare liye sitaare......⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Archana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#913

Awesome part Rabi.... you brought all the missing pieces together... anyways...I had a feeling that the girl his Dado is forcing him to get married is Nupur only... nice update... can't wait to read Mayank's confession...

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Angle.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#914

Rabi
amazing update yaar
to ye hai nups ka past
or wo bhi apna mayu
so sweet
tune to ekdum shocked kardiya hum sabko
but loved it to the core
i m waiting 4 the mayur confession
pls update the next part soon
love u

Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago

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Tasnim

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Posted: 15 years ago

#915

wow!! mayur engagement!!!!!!!!!!

thnkx rabi..

awesome..superb..rocking part..

finally the confession ..

plz update soon this time

cant wait

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#916

I almost jumped in the air

OMG
Nupur loves him too!

Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You have no idea

how big my smile is right now

I am loving this ff soooo much

but that Dado

going to punch him

like right now

grrr...

thanks Rabi

you really shocked us all there

I didn't think Nupur would love him

because it's been from third-person limited

meaning it mainly talked about Mayank

and yeah

that the only thing I have ever learned in

my stupid Reading class

and my teacher is sooo dumb

like litterally

(mentally retarded...)

okay,

I'm getting off topic

anyway

plzzzz don't end this ff

varna

oh no

phir se dhamki

LOL

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...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#917

wow......

i'm sooooooooo happy mayank and nupur are getting engaged.....

wonder what you have in store now!

continue soon!

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#918

awwwwwww Rabi you are ending this ff soon, well all good things come to an end and i am so glad that you are ending it on a positive note, this last part was very well written wrapping up many mysteries man. Keep it up!