U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131 - Page 85

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow......superb update dear !!

lovely part.....

finally Mayank found Nupur......... but why the hell Nupur is behaving so weirdly.....n rudely to Mayank !!

What is his mistake...?? whatever happened....both of them are responsible for that.....so why our poor mayu is being punished !!!

and why nupur is marrying adhiraj....n that too so early !!!

I know that she does love mayank in some corner of her heart.....may due to her family she got ready ready to marry adhiraj....

Poor mayank....😭😭😭😭...... cant see him like this ..... so sad...lost...depressed !!

omg...omg....Nupur ki shaadi and Mayank ki engagement....ek hi din !!

wow....what a twist dear.....loved it to the core.....

now really cant wait to see how Mayur gets together......n confesses their love for each other.....n the reason why nupur got ready to marry Adhiraj.......

very nice part dear......

plz continue soon.....n dont forget to pm me...



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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey i loveddd how you described the street scene and how MN stood up for eachother, this little gesture showed so much care and concern man, i a still confused as to what mayank did to hurt her if at all and mayank getting engaged to someone else is all getting so tensed up but i am sure you have something really exciting in store for us.
Great work as usual.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Terrific update rabi dear.. cant wait to read the next part now...Too Good!!👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
rabiiii....it was fantabulous....wat a twist yaar....nupr ki shaadi adhi se...aur mayank ki eng sheena se....m very excited k aagey kia hoga....just loved it to the core....but at the same time feeling so sad 4 my heartbroken mayu....cant see him crying😭😭
plz next update mein mayur ko happy happy rakhna plz...n update it soon my dear....
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey rabiiiiii

sweet awsomeee

loving the twist but shocked also

nupur and adhi ..yuck nd' mayu and sheena - disgusting ----- sorry no offence yaar

pleasee updt soon, can't wait to know what happeenss nexxt pleaseeeeeeeeeee

but i felt for mayu yaar he is so heartbroken awwwwwww my sweetuu😭😭..wana hug him...wake up sanam and face the reality .....u can never hug him......😆..but its okay i have someone..😉

rabi awsoeme updt

con't soon

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
Rabi!!!!!!
Mein aapse bahot naraz hoon
tum kyun kiya?
this is not fair
mayank ki engagement
aur voh bhi Chiina se?
aww this ff ending...
this is not fair
At all!
cont. soon
varna...
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Posted: 15 years ago
reserved partz 11
12
13
14
pakka promise I will read it tomorrow
I just cant wait to read it
this FF is the best!!!!!!!
I really wish I could right now
but my dad home now
n he will get angry fo r I ahve been online for a long time
sorry Rabi
hope u understand
bye
-Lina-
Edited by rkmnsg - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 9
Awww this part is superb!!
sachi mein Rabi
wowoowoww
lol Uday is soooo cute n dumb
he closed the door saying weddings tomorrow
n then Gunjans parents left
n they had fun talking
nice
and then
the next day Gunjan's mehdi
Nupur putting mehdi on her
really cute
It remindz me of the part where
Ranaya were putting hannah on each other
just amazing part
I love it very very much!
lol
Mayu, Sam, Uday, and Benji fighting like 5 years olds
just love the way u describe everything
u are an amazing writer
luvv uu sis
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 10
🤣🤣🤣
when Nupur breakes the vase to get their attention
lol
they are like
"Yeh kya kiya tumne Nupur?"
"Iss tarah cheezo ko torna achi baat nahi hai"
ROFL I really really love this part
n everyone blaming each other
and when Sam says I love you to Mayu
Mayu is like "U knwo mein bhi tumse bohat pyar karta hoon"
🤣
this FF is the Best Rabii
sachi mein
Ufffff the Mayur scenes are soooooo😍
n love it when she says
"Loori keh ke sullaoon"
lol
amazing part
just waiting for him to tell her I Luv U
sahci mein Rabi I love this part to the core!!!!
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago

Ur an amzing writer!!!!!!!

Do pm me!
And upload soon bcuz i cant searously wait
MayUr sad :'(
-Sniffs-

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