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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys thank u so much 4 ur support. now i m going to update my 1st part. i just dont know whether u will like it or not. the main point of this ff is fun. i have got this idea 4rm a story which my cousin told me so here is it now.


PART 1
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Phone conversation

Mayank: Hello maa! kaisi ho tm. aur dado kaise hain?
Shilpa: Main thiek hon beta aur tere dado bi. un ka phone aaya hoa tha aur wo poch rahe thy tere bare main lekin main ne unhe kuch nahi bataya.
M: thanks maa...... aap janti ho na agar unhe pata chal gya to wo mujy kisi na kisis tarha dondh hi lain gay...
S: dekh mayu to janta hai k ye baat un se zyada dair nahi chupne wali aur main kab tak un se jhoot bolun gi? jab wo aik mahine baad wapis aayien gay to unhe to pata chal hi jaye ga na aur phir kya ho ga? tu un k gusse ko achi tarha janta hai.........
M: don't worry ma. tab tak main kuch soch lun ga. aap janti ho na k main ye family business nahi join krna chahta. main khud apni identity bana chahta hun. na k main dado k aklute waris k naam se jenna chahta hun. plz try to understand maa.
s:main samajti hun beta........ anyways tu bata tu wahan khush tu hai na........ samrat aur benji ko zyada tang to nahi krta..........
M: main bilkul thiek hun maa aur buhat khush bi hun
S: arry wah apni maa se door reh kr khush hai tu......... mayu tujhe apni maa ki bilkul yaad nahi aati........ kahin koi girl friend to nahi bana li tu ne.........
M: maa tm phir shuru ho gai......... tm achi tarha janti hi k meri koi girl friend nahi hai aur na hi ho sakti hai.........mere pass in faltoo kamoo k liye bilkul time nahi hai........ iss k ilawa aur buhat se faltooo kam hain krne ko....
S: han han bachu ye to waqt hi bataye ga......... khair ab main phone rakhti hun apna khyal rahna.......bye
M: bye maa......... love u
S: love u too beta
mayank disconnected the phone n started thinking abt that wat he wiil do when his dado will be back 4rm his business trip of one month. bt then
M: oh chill dude abi to pora aik mahina baki hai. so relax tab ki tab sochi jaye gi. abi tu relax kr....... by the way ye sammy aur beji kahan hain...... mujhy tu buhat bhuk lagi hai
after that he went toward sammy's room


M: hi buddy kya ho raha hai?
Samrat: kuch nahi bas office ki files dekh raha tha........
M: arry sammy tu bi kya har waqt kaam krta rehta hai............ khair chor aaj kya banaya hai ramo kaka ne. mujy buhat bhuk lagi hai..... subah se kuch nahi khaya maine......... (then he shouts)......RAMO KAKAAAAAAAAAAA......... jaldi se khana lagao
S: relax dudu ramo kaka ghar pe nahi hai......... unho ne aik hafte ki chutii li hai apne gaon(village) jaane k liye..... unhe kuch important kaam tha
M: tu phir khana kiss ne banaya hai
S:kisis ne nahi
M:tu phir ham khaien gay kya
S: actually na ab aik week tak apni madad aap k tehat kaam chalana pare ga.......
M: u mean hamme khud khana banana pare ga
S: arry wah tm to kafi intelligent ho
M: dekh samrat mujhy to chai tak banani nahi aati khana to door ki baat......
(benji enters the sammy's room)
B: hey guys wats up? kya ho raha hai
M: arry hona kya hai mujy buhat zyada bhook lagi hoi hai aur ramo kaka one week ki leave pa hain...........ab ham ye soch rahe hain khana kon banaye ga
s: guys wait........ mujy na aalo k parathe banane aate hain......i think so
M: arry wah sammy chalo shabash ab jaldi se bana k laao parathe
S: soory wo main abi nahi bana sakta bcoz kal tak kissi bi haal main mujy ye file complete krni hai warna mere boss se meri dhulaai ho jaye gi............ aur waise bi mujy aata gundna nahi aata..........
B: dont worry yaar aata main gund don ga..... aata gondna kon sa mushkil kaam hai
M" bt ye tu kal ki tyari hoi na abi ham kya karien gay......... mere pait main tu chuhe door rah hain
B: dekh dude abi to raat bi kafi ho gai hai isliye subah tak wait karo kynki aur koi rasta nahi hai
M: bt mujy neend nahi aaye gi
S: lekin abi kuch nahi ho sakta............. so wait ok...........ab tm log jao aur mujy mere kaam krne do

MORNING 6 AM

Samraat n benji woke up at 6 am as they knew that they r going to make aalao k parathas that too 4 the 1st time in their life. first of all beni kneaded the flour n went to market to bring the yogurt.
then after boiling the potatoes samrat started making parathas
after some time mayank comes to kitchen. today he woke up early in the morning that too at 6:30 as he was feling very hungry. he just cant wait anymore now
M: good morning saammmmmmmmmmm...... before completing his name he yelled.......... wat the hell r u doing man
S: arry iss tarha chilla kyon rahe ho..........kya ho gya hai
M: ye tm kya bana rahe ho
S: dekh nahi rahe kya parathe bana raha hun
M: beta itni jaldi kya hain tmhe aik sath char char parathe banane zarori hain kya.......
S: no dudu pata nahi kya ho raha hai.......... main tawe pe dalta to aik hi paratha hun pata nahi kaise char ban jate hain..........
M: oh god sammmy main ye parathe kabi nahi khaon ga( making face)
S: arry mayu relax main try krta hun shayad agla sahi ban jaye
M: agar next paratha sahi na bana na to phir dekhna main kya krta ...............by the way ye benji kahan hai
S: wo dahi lene gya hoa hai itna acha aata gondh k............... aane do usse dekhna kya haal krta main uska....
sammmy was tyring hard to make a paratha not at all round bt mere a whole paratha who atleast dont divide into four parathas bt bt bt
mayank was now boiling looking at his parathas
M: sammy just tell me one thing tujhy ye kaha kiss ne k tujhe parathe banane aate hain.......
S: wo actually na mujy laga k mujy parathe banane aate hain.........(making innocent face)
M: tere aise face banane se mujy tujh pe bilkul tarass nahi aana wala ok.............ab plz jaldi se koi kam se kam khane k kabil zyada nahi to aik hi paratha bana de.......

mayank was moving here n there in kitchen then at once he saw towards the window............ a beautful girl wearing a white shalwaar kameez lookin like an angle was busy in making delicious aalo k parathas.........mayank just get lost looking at her direction.......... wait wait guys he wasn't looking at her bt was looking at the parathas that she was making.........his mouth start watering looking at those delicious parathas......
M: (lost in his own world he said) wah kya parathe hain.........
S: (holding his own so called paratha having a big hole at the centre said) u r right mayur........ ye paratha sach main baki parathon se better hai...........
mayank at once turned towards sammy
M: beta tere in parathon ko paratha kehna parathon ki insult hai........... samja........ main tu un paratho ki tareef kr raha hun jo wo larki bana rahi hai dosre apartment main
he again lost looking at those parathas................ then suddenly girl saw him lookin like this towards her..........
then a little girl named piya of 9 yrs came to the girl
P: nupur di breakfast ready ho gya kia?
N: han piya jao jaldi se aanti aur uncle ki bula laao aur han pehle ye window band kr do............. pata nahi logon ko iss tarha dosron k gharon main jhank k kya milta hai
mayank felt very embarassed. he himself closed the windown came towards samrat n his so called parathas.........
M: lagta hai aaj mujy phir se bhuke pait hi offoce jana pare ga......... thanks to u n benji
pata nahi ye benji kahan reh gya atleast main dahi ki lassi hi bana k pii leta.........kyonki tere ye parathe khana mere bas ki baat nahi
S: arry dude kya hai na kabi kabi aise parathe bi khha lene chahiye.......... ye sehat k liye ache hote hain
mayank was abt to ans him when door bell rung
S: ye benji ho ga........... main iss ka ilaj krta hun abi............ye sab isske ghonde hove aate ka hi kamal hai
samrat opened the door........ benji came in holding a packet of yogurt...... bt before he could say anything.......sammy hold him 4rm his nape n dragged him to the kitchen............. he was abt to saplash his face in his kneaded flour bt benji saved his face 4rm being splashed by holing the sides of the large plate in which flour was kneaded........
B: totally confussed) sammy wat the hell r u doing yaar
S: (in anger) main kya kar raha hun............ pehle tu bata ye kya hai?
B: ye meri amma k jahaiz(dowry) ki parat( a large plate which people use to knead flour) hai........
S: (still angry) acha tu ye teri amma k jahaiz ki parat k ander kya hai?
B: lagta to aata hi hai
he somehow freed himself 4rm sammy's grip
S: tyjhy kaha kiss ne tha k tujhe aata gundna aata hai
B: jiss ne tujhe kaha tha k tujhe parathe banane aate hain
myank finally spoke
M: guys please ye jagra baad main krna. benji dahi kahan hai......do mujy.........atleast main lassi to pii lun
then his eyes fell on ground n then
M: nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
actually he saw that packet of dahi was splashed in the ground............... actually in the struggle of saving his face being splashed in flour benji left the packet of yogurt n it fell on ground
M: beji ye kya kia tm ne............ ye mera aakhri sahara tha....... how could u
B: iss main meri kya galti hai ye sab sammy ki wajjah se hoa hai
S: dahi ka packet main ne nahi tm ne giraya hai ok.......... iss main meri kya galti
B: tm logon ne jo krna hai karo. mujy office k liye late ho raha hai main ready hone ja raha hun
M: tujhy bhuk nahi lagi kya
B: wo kya hai na dude mujhy pata tha k kya hone wala hai issliye main bahar se hi breakfast kr k aaya hun
waise main na tm logon ko aik idea deta hun wo bi free main............. tm log na iss aate main aalo mix karo aur aaj aalo aur aate k pakorre khao.......... kyonki iss aate se parathe ban'na thora difficult hai. ok
ab main chalta hun..... bye guys
samrat n mayank were boiling now at benji then
S: waise mayank idea acha hai.... aaj aalo aur aate k pakore tyr krte hain...... wat say?
M: yeh tm hi khao .......... main ja raaha hun......... aaj meri kismat hi kharab hai....... pata nahi kiss ka chehra dekha tha subah........... dekha to apna hi tha...........then door bell rung
mayank went to open the door in anger............. bt piya was standing there holding a plate in his hand
P: hi mayank bhaiya....... kaise hain aap?
M: main thiek hun piya ........... tm yahan subah subah kia baat hai
P: ye ne nupur didi ne aap logon k liye parathe bejhe hain aur dahi bhi
mayank's happiness knew no bounds he kissed piya at her cheek n said
M: apni didi ko thanks kehna meri taraf se ok
piye left n mayank came in with plate of delicious aalo k parathas
S: yeh kya hai
M: yeh parathe hain aalo k................. jinne sirf main khane wala hun
S: mayu plz aik paratha mujy bi de na...........pleading to mayank
M: no dude these r 4 me.......... tm khao apne aate k pakore
main to ja raha hun
then mayank disappeared with parathas n samrat had to eat his own so called parathas............

after their breakfast they got ready 4 office
mayank was as usual late.......... so samrat n benji left n gave keys to mayank as he wasn't ready yet
mayank saw tthe time it was really getting late so he quickly locked the door n as lift was closed so he run through stairs with full speed bt ......................... bt he collided with nupur............... n nupur was holding a beautiful crystal decoration piece.............. which as a result of collision broke. n nupur became all red with anger n mayank was just shocked...........................
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precap: mayank n nupur's fights. n a lot of fun

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thats it....... this was 1st update. i dont know whether u like it or not.
ur comments means a lot to me. so guys do comment n plz tell me how was it. ur criticism is more than welcome
it was my ever first attempt to write anthing........... i have tried to make it funny n i dont know that whether i m succeded in it or not............ so let u decide n plz plz plz do comment
Angle. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
It's a nice update. awsome. keep it up
mjht_fan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
omg!
when i read this part
i just couldn't stop laughing
i was laughing the whole time
it was so funny
there attempt to make parathe really made me laugh
but how sweet of nupur to send them some
lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
nice part plz pm me d next part when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
hi dear
awwwwwwwwwwsome update
i loved the whole part
it was very funny nd cute
do continue soooon
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Heyyyy
It was really funny and awsome update
Really loved it
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
Hey forgot to ask wats ur name
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
hi,
Awesome update.
i just loved it.
it was full of fun.
enjoyed a lot.
Good job dear.
keep it up.
Thanx 4 ur pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Hey dear,
awesome upd8.....⭐️
nupur sent parathas for mayu...awwwww....😃😃😃
sooooo sweeet of her....😃😃😃
mayu was soooo embarrassed when she caught him staring...LOL...😆
verrry cute part dear....⭐️⭐️
waiting for the next part...😃😃
keep up the good work....😊😊
thnxxxxx 4 the pm.....
loads of love,
jigi..
rose.mn thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
😊

Originally posted by: Tapoor

It's a nice update. awsome. keep it up

hey dear thanks 4 ur comment
i m glad that u like it😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: mjht_fan

omg!

when i read this part
i just couldn't stop laughing
i was laughing the whole time
it was so funny
there attempt to make parathe really made me laugh
but how sweet of nupur to send them some
lol

thank u sooo much dear
i actually tried to make it funny
i m happy that u like it
keep tuned to see how sweet nupur will be in next part😉
thanks once again

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