U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131 - Page 6

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

its really nice and awesome update

Keep updating and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hi
now i m waiting 4 ur next part.
plz update next part asap.

Originally posted by: dolly18

awsome blosum trueosom

lovely yaar tune do aaj dil ka orchestra bja diya

u r reeally such a good writer ....

congo to me on getting chance to read this ff...

lov

dolly

ps=== jaldi upadate karo varna i'll murder u

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

loved the part!
ur r good at writing
keep it up
continue soon

Originally posted by: hgrhr

hey

really great start.!!

do continue soon..!

i'd love to read more...

plz PM me when you update...

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was awesome

Originally posted by: sana866

nice start

lovelyy

Originally posted by: simi2

heyaa hi rabi sweety ,hiiii simiiiii

first of all, ujhe patta hai ki is tme aapka face kuch aisa hooga😡, i knew i m late for the comment , sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyykoi baat nahi yaar chalta hai😉

well as per the part ,

🤣 ye kyatha yaar,🤣 , god bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut achaa tha , one minute kisne kahha tujhe you r a bad writter , you were osm , you knew i soo loved this no actually i waslaughting over this ,u know wat i m on the 7th sky right now.........itni tareef......haye main mar jawaan........bt seriously mujy pata hai main kitni achi writer hun😆......anyways i think i have done my job successfully...... mujy lag raha tha sab ache khase bore hun gay ye sarre hoye jokes parh k......... bt thank god k itne bure bi nahi thy

hmm , samrat and his cooking🤣 kya allo ke paraanthee banne , i mean ek daala and vo 4 hoo gaayye , hehe that was the best ,hmmm thanks

hyee alhaa , mayank window ke bahar staring kar rahha hai , to wahaa khoobsoorat girl koo nahi , aloo ke paraanthoo ko ghoor rahha tha 🤣 itana gone case hai mayank , lord , 😆

and then benji bhi aaya , kyadahi laaya tha vo aate hi seedha floor ki shobha badaaye jisnee 😆😆 , loved that , and "amma ke daheej ki paraat" , god bas ab main aur nahi hasongee , warna aapko lageega ki main tujheper kuchjyada hi hass rahe hu ,i m soo happy tha u like it yaar..... really.........

hyee nupur to sweet , kitne pyaar se paraanthee bejhee gayye the loved itwo too baad main hi pata chaly ga k nupur kitni sweet hai😉

ok ok now on serious note 😆 , main kabhi serious honge , can you imagine that of course not..... agar tm serious ho gai to phir kya ho ga..........no one knows😆

absolutely fab part , loved it , very nice start , end jyada better tha , 😆😆mayank ne nupur ka dil nahi to kya , atleast show peaice to tod hi diyya hai abhi , lets see nupur iska badlaa kaise leete hai , 😆waitinggggggggg

waiting to read ahead , till then take care and thanks for the pm ,thank u sooooooooooo much 4 such a lovely comment dear........main next jald hi post karon gi........
main soch rahi thi k main cont nahi karon gi as no one is going to like this part as this is horrible.........bt ab soch rahi hun next post karon gi........pata kya yahan almost sab emotional ff hain to main ne socha hoi funny type ff bi honi chahiye... hai na????..... so thats why i post this one

love you lots

simi