U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131 - Page 2

rabiiiiiiiiii sweety tu yahaa and an ff of yours, god you didn't even pm'ed mee for this hmm , anyways i caught it

HEY SWEETY ,

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

looks gr88

do continue

plezzzzz pm me

hey tehzeeb thank u dear
i 'll surelly pm u

Originally posted by: Tapoor

It's sounds interesting. nice concept. pls continiue and pls add me ur pm list

hey tapoor thank u so much 4 ur comment
i m happy that u like it
i'll pm u when update

😆🤢

Originally posted by: simi2

rabiiiiiiiiii sweety tu yahaa and an ff of yours, god you didn't even pm'ed mee for this hmm , anyways i caught it abhi tak intro nahi padda will tell you later kaisa lagga,

ok bye for now , i will be back soon

love you lots

simi

hey simi tu ne kyon parha ye character sketch🤢
main ne waise kisi ko bi pm nahi kiya
agar krti bi na to tmhe nahi krti........
arry yaar tm khud itna acha likhti ho....... u r a great writer yaar to main ne socha k meri ff tm kyon parho gi
bcoz i know k yeh ff kaisi ho gi😆...... aur waise bi ye meri pehli ff hai to tm khud imagin kr sakti ho
mujy to sach main ff writing ki abc bi nahi pata
chalo ab tm ne parh hi li hai to main zaror pm karon gi tmhe
bt plz 1st part jab parho gi na to bila jijak tm burai kr sakti ho ok
i'll definietly appritiate ur criticism😆

Originally posted by: simi2

HEY SWEETY ,

FIRST OF ALL

SEE THIS

LOVE YOU

HOPE YOU ROCK THIS FF

FROM MY SIDE

AND

as per the intro , it was fab , really loved it , wolud love to read it ahead

please update soon , and haa please kripa karke mujhe pm kar deenaa got that , otherwise , main tujhee , hmmm sochkar bataongee kya karungee

bye for now

love you lots

simi

thank u sooooooooooooooooo much 4 this dear
u know i m feeling very proud that u like character sketch
aur iss bar main pm zaror karon gi kyonki mujy apni jaan buhat pyari hai
anyways thanks dear. thank u so much
love u

Hey hun

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Hey hun

CS are really nice!

cont soon

would love to read more!

plz pm me!

x x

hey dear thank u sooo much 4 ur comment
i m glad that u like CS as u urself r a great writer n i mean it.
ur ff is one of best ffs i have read till date mine will not so good
bt still i will pm u😊

hi nice character sketch!!! sounds very good!!!! plz do pm me jaan!!!!!!!!!!!
Love
Ashna😳

hi dear