U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131 - Page 32

Originally posted by: zummi03

hey dear wonderful update..
loved the last part ..
continue soon..
next time write a long update..

Originally posted by: Princess.Preity

.... nice part dear... but thispart did not include many funss... i miss that masti and all funssssss from previous partsss. update soon.............

Originally posted by: ghtk1

thats a really nice update yaar.really loved it.😃but plz next time make a bit longer one.

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey thank you dear
ya in this i haven't included that much fun........
actually slowly this fun will reduce....n also i think some were not liking that much fun here so
ab waise bi story progress kare gi na....thats why
bt i will try to add it now.....

Originally posted by: Princess.Preity

yeah i know dear, you have to progress the story and thanks ke tum try karogi. thank you so much.

Hey amazingggggggggg work, i loved the whole update esp the MN bit in the rain, awwwww so romantic and adorable.

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey amazingggggggggg work, i loved the whole update esp the MN bit in the rain, awwwww so romantic and adorable.

So excited to read ahead, update soon.

God bless.

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

Rabia

love this part to the core thank u soooooo much lina

sacchi mein

it waz awsome thanks dear 4 liking it

and love that song

and Benji is sooo funny

love the jogging scene very much

sachi Mayur scene waz awsome i too loved that.......

love raining me too love raining😉

and the precape

lOvE iT!!!!!!!!!!

Mayur alone

ufff mein toh marne wali hoon arry na na lina gar tum mar gayi to next part pe comment kon kare ga....😆😆😆

plezzzzzzzzzzzz update soon i'll update soon............

me waiting for it sooooooooooooooooooo much

-Lina-