U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#331

Hi Rabi,
Awesome update.
loved mayur a lotttttt
specially the lift scene.
it was toooooo good.
so cute and lovely.
now waiting 4 mayur confession.
update soon.
thanx 4 pm

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 15 years ago

#332

superb part dear.

loved this part.

aww,mayur stuck on the lift.

continue soon dear.thanks for the pm.

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#333

Hey sweet part jana Loved Mayur in lift Than the way Ben and Sam explained Mayu pyaar ke side effects and all The way Mayu called Gun she kknocked Ben's nose All thgs loved all thgs

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samira

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Posted: 15 years ago

#334

THANK U SO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH RABI

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#335

hey man that was soooooooo well written and i lovedddd it esp the mayank and nupur bits in the elevator and later on when they are going back to the apartment.

You have expressed mayank and nupur feelings so well but this part had more to do with mayank and his realisation and acceptance of love for nupur i guess na. Hayeeeeeeee this song khuda jaane has been ringing in my ears after i saw the interview and it seems forvever hehe.

loved it all totally.

keep it up!

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_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#336

hey hun really interesting FF.plzz continue soon and add me in ur pm list.😊

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Priyanka

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Posted: 15 years ago

#337

awesome part yaar!!!!.....i missed all the parts from part no.4.......i just read it.......benji uday mayu sam talks were hilarious.....truly awesome!!!!.....i just loved all the mayur scenes!!!.....mayu anuty scenes....benji sam(first aid box) scene was soooo funny!!!......i was laughing like hell!!....hats off to yaar!!!....i can imagine them saying and doing those actions......please update soon.can't wait.please pm me😳

Edited by AMMY LUVS RIDZ - 15 years ago