~^Tera He Pyaar^~ *Part 7 Pg 14* 2-7-10 PM'S sent - Page 9

o wowowowowow...This is soooo sweeet.......Rahul is already falling bt trying hard not be stilll...o god....Loved the way u handle every couple so perfectly.....awesum........

Hi Imane... have just read all parts of ur FF so far... awesome! 👏

Hey Dost! I'm so sorry I was late. I didn't even know when you updated part 4. So read both parts now. Poor Muskaan! Yeh Rahul bhi naa! men! Do they EVER think before doing/saying something? I don't like her Chachi! what a *&%$#!

The second part, I'm so glad they worked things out. Although I'm feeling bad about her foot, at least they'll have a peaceful (hopefully?) ride back home.


Yaar I got your PM and I sent you a long reply, but it didn't go through because YOUR INBOX IS FULL! empty it. It said the PM couldn't be delivered because you received the maximum amount of PMs. empty it! I was asking about the scenes. I have them downloaded on my PC so I can e-mail them to you if you'd like. If you're not comfortable with that, then I can surely upload them. I'm not going to Punjab anymore. Not until June (inshAllah in June). I gave you an explanation to that as well, but like I said, didn't go through. Everything is so messed up in my life right now. I'll tell you through PM. let me know when you empty it out.


love you!

komz

Scene 1 : aww the car scene was soo cute specially loved it when she was correcting him "purey hak se " and he was quite all the while ...awwwww 😳😍😍

Lovely promo,Imane!!!

Part 6

~Scene One~

*Rahul's Car*

Muskaan: Yeh tum kahaan laykay jarahay hoon…mera ghar toh uss taraf hain na…?

Rahul: Haan haan jaanta hoon tumhara ghar iss jagah kay subse mehengay area mein hain per wahaan koi acha caf nahi hain…

Muskaan: (makes a face) Caf?

Rahul: haan coffee kay liye…

Muskaan: Per maine tum se coffee pilanay kay liye toh nahi kaha…

Rahul: Haan per mujhay peeni hain…

Muskaan: Oye! Itni garmi mein tum coffee kyun perahay hoon…?

Rahul: acha toh ajj garmi hain?

Muskaan: (Rolls her eyes at his stupidity) Gari mein AC full per hain toh janab ko garmi mein bhi sardi he lagni hain…Rahul tum aik number kay nikamme ho…kuch pata he nahi hain kub garmi hain aur kub sardi! Pagal…(she laughs at him and as he glances over to her to say something back he ends up laughing as well. Rahul really didn't care about his surroundings when he was with her, he was changing but didn't know how or why…) Oye! Tum apnay app per hans rahay hoon meray saath ya phir mujh per hans rahay ho?

Rahul: (coming out of his trance) Huh?...i mean haan voh main yunhi…choro…batao itni garmi coffee nahi toh phir kya…

Muskaan: Ice Cream! Garmi loog ice cream kahtey hain Mr.Rahul…per pehlay app mujhay ghar chor dijejay mujhay tution…

Rahul: Tution? App kyun tution parahti hain…app ko toh…

Muskaan: (bites her tounge) Nahi nahi…parahti nahi hoon…voh actually apni friends kay saath tution jaati hoon..you know help ho jatai hain kafi…ghar per sub kehtay hain kay mujhay tution ki zaroraat nahi hain vaisay bhi medical school ki toppers mein se hoon…

Rahul: Ohh…acha…acha…(he wasn't fully convinced but agreed anyways as he pulled in to the nearest ice cream shop's parking lot)

Muskaan: Arrey gari kyun rok di…

Rahul: Ice cream kay liye…

Muskaan: per…

Rahul: Please…tution thori daie se chali jaana…vaisay bhi tum toh toppers mein se ho na?

Muskaan: (chuckles) hmm…okay per flavor meri pasand ka…

Rahul: okay madam…! (he opened the door for her and they both walked in to the ice cream shop together.)

~Scene two~

*Ridzi and Ammaji in the living room as Ridzi discusses Abhi's concern about Nikki with her*

Ammaji: Hmm….vaisay kuch galat toh keh nahi raha hain Abhi….uska gilla bhi durr hojayeka kay Nikkita kum phari huyi hain…

Ridzi: Lakin Ammaji usko samjhaye ga kuan..parhai se uski utni he jaan jaati hain jitni Abhi ki daily soaps se.. aap toh jaanti hain…

Ammaji: Hmmm toh kuch aur kar lay na phir… dekho Abhi theek kehta hain kay khali rehnay se insaan khud ko fazool kaamoon mein daal layta hain…masroof rahay ge toh yeh fazool shauq bhi khatam hojaye gay aur subah saveray uthnay ki addat bhi paray ge ussay…

Ridzi: main toh sooch rahi thi kay voh..uhh.. koi computer course kar lay…

Ammaji: Arrey hato "computer course kar lay ge"…yeh bhi koi baat hui…dekho koi sillai kharai…kahnay pakana…macram…Croatia…

Ridzi: Macrame? Voh yeh sub seekh lay ge?

Ammaji: bahi macram, Croatia, aur kharai sub kuch main sikhao ge toh voh seekh he lay ge…(she smiles proudly stating her creative abilities and Ridzi agreed with her plan and lightly hugged her friendly and traditional mother in law)

Ridzi: Vah Ammaji! App toh bahut achay ideas dayti hain!

Ammaji: (smiles and lovingly kisses her forhead) hmmm dekho bahi jub bari bahu itni pyaari aur samjhdaar ho toh mujhay bhi achay ideas mill he jaatay hain.

~Scene 3 ~

Ice Cream Shop

Rahul: Toh chocolate tumhara favorite falvor hain? (he asked as he watched her enjoy her ice cream)

Muskaan: (looks up) Nahi…depend karta hain meray mood per kay kuan sa flavor pasand hain…chocolate…vanilla…cookies and cream…anyone…haan butterscotch bhi bahut acha hota hain…

Rahul: (laughs) Lagta hain ice cream ko khoob achi tarah se research kiya hua hain tum ne…

Muskaan: Oye! Main Mithu hoon aur Mithu na ice cream aur insaanoon dono ko achay se research kar lay ti hain kyunki agar flavor ya kissi ki personality baad mein kharaab nikkli toh sara mood kharaab hojata hain…(she was eating her ice cream while talking as Rahul was simply busy listening to her talk)

Rahul: Acha toh meray baaray mein kitni research ki hain Mithu nay? Kitni kharaabiyaan hain mujh mein…

Muskaan: (looks up from her ice cream cup and thinks) Tum itnay bhi buray nahi ho…

Rahul: (leans forward on the table) Toh main kitna bura ho?

Muskaan: (thinks again ) ummm…tum..na…tum bilqual chocolate ice cream ki tarah sweet se hoon per kabhi kabhi ghussay mein strawberry ice cream jaisay laal ho jatey hoon…aur as a friend tum vanilla jaisay clam aur kafi considering hoon…lakin haan butterscotch jitnay achay nahi hoon…uss kay liye thori aur research kar ni paray ge…(she smiled finishing up her ice cream)

Rahul: (thinking in his head) Kitni sweet hain…kyun mujhay iss saath hameesha yunhi baatein karnay ka dil chahta hain…Mithu jaisa naam vaisi he personality…kuch bhi galat nahi hain iss mein…sub kuch perfect…

Muskaan: (snaps her fingers in front of his face)Oye! Kya mera analysis acha nahi laga?

Rahul: Na…nahi..bahut acha tha…Ice Cream aur Rahul Garewal kafi milltay jhultay hain…

Muskaan: (smiles) haan mithu ko bhi aisa he kuch lagta hain…abb mujhay gahr chor do gay kafi late hogaya hain…

Rahul: Yeah…chalo… (they both get up and leave)

~Rahul dropped Muskaan off in front of the same beautiful house in the richest neighborhood and Muskaan waited for him to drive off before she could go back to her reality which was a total opposite of what she had fooled herself and Rahul into believing. She quickly walks to the main street and finds herself an auto so that she could rush back home as she is running late today.~

Muskaan: Bahiyya please jaldi chaliyay na…

Auti driver: Traffic bahut hain…issay zaayda jaldi nahi chal sakta…

Muskaan: (sighs and thinks to herself as she could do nothing but wait for the traffic to be cleared) Mitthu tu yeh kya kar rahi hain? Rahul aik acha larka hain…itna bara jhoot bol diya…agar ussay yeh sub saach pata chal gaya aur…aur voh teri dosti se…nahi…Muskaan toh kub tak bholi Mitthu ban kar yeh sub karti rahay ge…duniya toh kal bhi teray bachpnay ka mazaak banarahi thi aur ajj bhi…kub bari hogi Mitthu kub?? Aur Rahul voh toh itna acha hain…Sanjay bahiyya nay uska saach bata kay mujhay realize karaya kay voh kitna majboor hain…maa baap se bichra hua…akela…voh toh jhoot nahi bol raha…phir tu kyun? Lakin main toh sirf issi liye jhoot bol rahi hoon kay usski kuch maddad kar sako…kuch paiso se…kuch apni dosti se... Per main bhi kay kar sakti hoon…Chachi aur unkay bacho ka pura expense bhi mujhay utha na hain…tution phara kay bhi sirf itnay he paisay hotay hain kay aik mahena sahi se ghuzar jaye…Rahul ko toh apni savings se saaray paisay day diye thay…kal aggar ussay aur zaroorat pari toh kya kaho ge…? Kya karo main… arrey haan voh jis company mein maine apply kiya tha…kya naam tha..haan voh Garewal and Sons…vahaan se interview call toh aaya hain…kal he jaoge…college se half day lay kay…kya pata iss secretary ki job mein kuch achi salaray mill jaye…Chachi ko bhi sukoon millay ga aur mujahy rooz taanay kah kay bhooka nahi sona paray ga…per abb toh bhooka soonay ki bhi addat hogaye hain…kahair choro…Mitthu toh bus sub ko khush dekhna chahti hain…abb chahay voh Chachi he kyun na hoon…

~Scene Four~

**Late at Night Abhi-Nikki's Room**

Nikki: (singing while ironing her chiffon and filmy saris) "Sajna hain mujhay…sajna kay liye…sajna hain.."

Abhi: (tossing and turning in his bed as he is trying to sleep) Uff oh! Ghawd! Nikkita please iss gannay ko gana band kardo aur yeh lights off kardo…Mujhay neend arahai hain

Nikki: (looks up at him and continues ironing) App ko neend kay illawa kuch aur aata hain?

Abhi: (turns around and looks at her) kya matlab…iss waqt aur kya aana chahiyay?

Nikki: (turns off the iron and shyly smiles looking at Abhi) Mujhpe pyaar aur kya?

Abhi: (rolls his eyes) Hmmph! Iss waqt toh ghussa araha hain tum per…tum mujhay soonay nahi de rahi hoon..!

Nikki: Yeh bhi koi sonay ka waqt hain?

Abhi: Nikkita…adhi raat horahi hain shareefoon kay sonay ka waqt yahi hota hain…

Nikki: Lakin aggar shareefoon ko kal dinner outing per jana hoon toh iron aur yeh sub tayaari abhi se kar lay ni chiyay na?

Abhi: Nikkita dinner kal raat ko hain tum aaj ki raat se tayaariyaam kyun kar rahi ho?

Nikki: Appkay friend kay saath dinner hain mujhay sub se acha lagna hain....after all app bhi toh bilqual Ekta Kapoor kay dramo kay heroes jay jaisay tayaar ho kar jaatey hain…per main bhi kum nahi hoon… kumkum se toh lakh behtair hoon main…hmm..

Abhi: (Shakes his head and looks disappointed) Nikkita…tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta…

Nikki: Abb aur kya hona hain…app se shaadi hogaye bus kafi hain…

Abhi: (lays back down on his bed and covers his face with the pillows so Nikki's voice and the annoying light is not so bad to endure because only God knows when he'll be able to sleep tonight)

~Scene Five~

**Next Morning Muskaan goes for her Interview at "Garewal and Sons". She doesn't know that this is one of many Abbaji's offices and that Rahul is also visiting the same office at about the same time as her today, he'll be joining the office as the new Financial Managing Director of Garewal and Sons, and so he'll be meeting the staff and observing as Abbaji has ordered him to do so before giving official orders as the boss.**

Interviewer: App ka naam?

Muskaan: Muskaan..Muskaan Chadda…

Interviewer: (looks up with a weird smile and a creepy look) Aap ka naam bhi aap ki tarah muskurata hua sa hain…kafi pyaara naam hain...hmmm

Muskaan: (nervously smiles as she tries to avoid any eye contact with the creepy looking interviewer who was practically staring at her eversince she stepped in to his office cubicle)

Interviewer: (looking at Muskaan's file) Hmmm…toh sari education toh medicine based hain…science focus raha hain…phir yeh accounting or secretary ki job ki application…aisa kya hain iss resume mein jis ki wajah se app ko yeh job millay? Na koi business ki degree ya experience…?

Muskaan: (thinks for a convincing idea and puts on a worried faial expression) voh…actually… sir…meray na dus chotey behn bahi hain…aur unn sub ki zimaydaari na mujh per hain sir…

Interviewer: Acha…aisa hain…

Muskaan: Jee…

Interviwer: App ki umar kya hain phir?

Muskaan: Meri umar…voh.. Voh sir larkiyoon se unki umar thori poochtay hain…

Interviewer: interview mein poochi jaati hain… (he smiles creepily)

Muskaan: Acha…(thinks a bit then puts on her melodramatic face once again) toh phir yahi koi attahra saal saath mahinay…(18 yrs and 7 months) subse choota bahi mera aik saal ka hain sir…maine sub ko aik maa ki tarah paala hain aur raat ko bhi jaagi hoon unhi ki kahtir…(she looks down as if getting emotional)

Interviewer: kyun? app ki maa?

Muskaan: Sir..meri maa kit oh bachpan mein he death hogaye thi…

Interviwer: Bachpan mein?!

Muskaan: Jee..

Interviewer: Toh yeh aik saal pehlay bahi kaisay hogaya?

Muskaan: (stammers a bit) umm voh…haan…voh meray papa ne doosri shaadi kar li aur ussi say teen sautaylay bahi behn hain…sir lakin sautaylay honay say kya hota hain…insaaniyaat bhi koi cheez hoti hain na…

Interviewer: haan haan bilqual… acha yeh batai app kay papa kya kartay hain?

Muskaan: Sir aggar voh kuch kartay hotay toh main thori job dhoondti…unki bhi 4 saal pehlay death hogaye…

Interviewer: 4 saal phelay?!?!

Muskaan: Jee sir…

Interviewer: Per yeh jo aik saal pehlay bahi hua hain…

Muskaan: oh voh…voh..sir..haan meri doosri maa nay bhi doosri shaadi karli…(she sobs as if crying)

Interviewer: Oh I see…family problem…hmm…

Muskaan: (looks up wiping her "tears") Jee…

Interviewer: (closes the file and smirks) Toh app kay iraaday kya hain…

Muskaan: Kis silsilay mein sir…?

Interviewer: (hands her the file and in the process grabs Muskaan's hand in a creepy way) Vahi silsila jo aapkaya ur meray beech ho sakta hain…

Muskaan: (fumes with anger upon his disgusting looks and touch, she quickly takes her hand back and gets up) Tharki buhhday! Tumhay sharam nahi aati! Apni beyti…nahi pooti ki umar ki larki per line martay ho..! hmmmph! Abhi bata ti hoon..!

Interviewer: dekhay app ko galat fehmi ho rahi hain! App..

Muskaan: Galat Fehmi! My Foot…! Abhi bata ti hoon tujhay main…yeh batameezi tujhay bahut mhengi paray gi bhudhay! (She rolls up her seeleves and grabs the old man's collar making him regret everything he had thought about doing to Muskaan in past hour)

~While Muskaan in busy physically abusing and verbally bashing the embarassed petafile Interviewer in front of other workers at Garewal and Sons, Rahul is making his way around the same area of the building where all the commotion is coming from. Although Muskaan's loud verbal abuses could easily be heard and recognized from a mile away, Rahul completely ignored his instincts as he had been dreaming and hearing Muskaan's voice randomly for quite some time now due to his constant day dreaming about Mithu and her sweetness.~

Rahul: Mr. Sharma…yeh shor kaisa?

Mr.Sharma: I don't know sir…lagta hain kuch hua hain…

Rahul: hmmm…chaliye chalk ay dekhtay hain…

Mr.Sharma: Sir app…main dekhleta hoon app ko takleef…

Rahul: Nahi, Mr.Sharma…main bhi chalta hoon…saara working enviorment dirput hua hain, I have to control this isse pehlay kay Armaan ya Abhi bahiyya ajaye…

Mr.Sharma: Okay sir... aapki job lagta hain aaj se he start…

Rahul: (smiles ) Jee…chailyay…

~Mr.Sharma leads Rahul exactly where Muskaan is making the sinner interviewer pay for his sins in the middle of the office and as Muskaan's back is facing Rahul, he is completely oblivious to the fact that he is about to approach the girl who knows him as a mear driver not as the new Financial Managing Director of Garewal and Sons.~

Worker one: (gathered around the choas) Arrey yeh kya ho raha hain…yeh larki toh…

Secretary: (Supporting Muskaan aggressivly) Sahi kar rahi hain..! yeh Buddha kub se har larki ko preshaan karta rehta tha…kissi ko nahi choorta tha!

Worker two: Per yeh office mein..?

Secretary: Haan! Aur maaro…khudus ko! Kameena! Ullu!

Interviewer: Yeh kya batameezi…(trying to run from Muskaan but in vain)

Muskaan: (pulld him by hid collar harder and wacks him with her interview file) Batameezi!!? Toh tu kya ander meri mehmaandaari kar raha tha! Ullu!ghaaday!! apnay galay mein na aik collar band kar rakh!....

Mr.Sharma: Excuse me..! Pardon please… Jagah banaiyay Sir kay liye…Excuse us…(making way for Rahul through the crowd so he could approach the girl with "to-go" verbal abuses at hand.)

Rahul: (Reaching out his arm to tap her shoulder and stop the women who is facing her back to him yet contiously bashing an employer he is not at all fond of) Excuse me..?!

Muskaan: Oye! Baad mein aana abhi busy hoon dikh nahi raha! (carelessly shrugs off his hand and continues to create a scene)

Rahul: (goes a bit closer and tries again) Maam…aap please yeh tamasha na karay…job hi baat ho ge voh aap management se kahay…

Muskaan: (turns around and is utterly shocked to find a suited and well dressed Rahul in front of her. The petafile interviewer quickly runs out as Muskaan's grip on his collar instantly dropped just like her jaw. She stared at Rahul in disbelief for a while.) tt….t…Dri…Driver?....T…Tum!?! Ra... R…Rahul…?????????

Rahul: (shocked and guilty facial expression)

Mr.Sharma: Sir app theek hain na?

Rahul: (looks at Mr. Sharma confused and guilty, he is looking everywhere else except at Muskaan who is eager for an explanation to what she has witnessed)

Muskaan: (confused) Ss…Sir..? Tum..Sir…?

Precap:

Rahul: Muskaan meri baat toh

Awesome one,Imane!!

Awesome part!!!

Imane that was an awesome part totally luved it
OMG luved how muskaan was making up those lies abt her family
and hate that interviewer, he touched muskaan,
par mithu kisse kam nahi hai, OMG she is never going to change
awwwww muski is going to find out rahul's truth
so want to knw what happens next
thanx for the pm
luv
pari😊