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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
hey i too had commented..........
i had commented when no one had commented........
and i said that i loved it
and to continue soon......
god knows how it is not there???
kya "back" dabane se comment erase ho jaata hai???
anyways.......
now plz continue soon
and pm me...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
wowow tht was amazingg plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dolly yaar kya part hai

gunjan ne na jante hue bhi usse samrat kaha

very touchy part
soon update the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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finally dolly the page opened and how can i tell u that i tried nearly 100 times last night to open this page and felt so frustrated at that error message.... but somehow toaday mornig it opened....and i got a chance to read another masterpeice from your side.U r a good writer...u write very well...and so have become old lines yaar....so wont repeat them...pls i request always include these lines by default in my replies to your post.coming to your ss...i just cant help but say a million thank us 2 u for writing a story keeping my request in mind!!!! u r such a sweet friend dolly....that my one request and u wrote such a heart warming story on my fav. couple ever!!!! and what do i tell u....just similar to your ff this was equally touching...painful....captivating and so emotional!!!! especially the parts that describe samrat's pain...he being tormented on account of the needles n injections...was way too painful....but the way gunjan took care of him was really so sweet.and as u know i always include my lines of the day...so here goes those golden lines...
"He wasn't handsome… no handsome wasn't a word enough to describe his beauty ….
Even in his present condition,, with a bandage on his head ,, a plaster across his right hand n bruises everywhere , he looked angelic …."
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
"I had never seen him before…
I would have remembered if I had ,,, as a matter of fact he was too devine to ever 4get ….."
these lines dolly again just stole the show....the way u always describe samrat's persona and beauty i am fida over that....
and the suspense in the story is really good...just waiting for sam to become concious so sajan can exchange a few of words....
seriously dolly since the past few months...that is the time i started reading your ff...i have become a huge fan of yours....so pls pls pls write the next part as soon as possible!!! i will be waiting for your next update.
and ya just forgot to mention....it was truely amazing to find mayank being sammy's doc!!!too good....so dear do complete the next part soon...is i always wait to hear it from u.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it dear
thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
nice update dolly 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Terrific Part! I am really eager to know what happens next? Thanx for the PM and continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I have an intelligent question dolly ???????
Mayu aur gunji school main kab sath the ??????????
Anyways awesome tha yaar !!!!!!!!! Pta na ho ke bhi pta tha ke vo samrat hai !!!!!!! wah wah wah wah wah wah !!!!!!!!
A great suspense thriller dolly !!!!!! Atleast iska part update karne main der mat karna !!!!!!!! Loved it !!!!! Hats off to you !!!!!
Officially likhna shuru kar de !!!!!! Waise ek suggestion hai !!!!!!
MJHT ki story tu hi pen down kar de zyada acchhhi likhegi tu !!!!!
Love
Simmu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushups

that was so lovely yaar,felt bad for sammys pain,but how come gunjan know his name if she doesnt know him.do continue soooon.😊

i felt about bad with his pain tooo. sorry if i hurt u with it...
i am really happy that u liked this update
love
dolly
thanks 4 replying dear!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: simar456

I have an intelligent question dolly ???????

Mayu aur gunji school main kab sath the ??????????
Anyways awesome tha yaar !!!!!!!!! Pta na ho ke bhi pta tha ke vo samrat hai !!!!!!! wah wah wah wah wah wah !!!!!!!!
A great suspense thriller dolly !!!!!! Atleast iska part update karne main der mat karna !!!!!!!! Loved it !!!!! Hats off to you !!!!!
Officially likhna shuru kar de !!!!!! Waise ek suggestion hai !!!!!!
MJHT ki story tu hi pen down kar de zyada acchhhi likhegi tu !!!!!
Love
Simmu

he he he
mein ppen down karun mjht ki story...
beta phir do dino mein samrat aur mayu ka ram naam satya ho jayega ...
adhiraj ko unke khoon mein umarkaid ho jayegi
aur gunur apni premiyon ki yaad mein paagal ho jayengi
u know na how sadistic i am ??????

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