finally dolly the page opened and how can i tell u that i tried nearly 100 times last night to open this page and felt so frustrated at that error message.... but somehow toaday mornig it opened....and i got a chance to read another masterpeice from your side.U r a good writer...u write very well...and so have become old lines yaar....so wont repeat them...pls i request always include these lines by default in my replies to your post.coming to your ss...i just cant help but say a million thank us 2 u for writing a story keeping my request in mind!!!! u r such a sweet friend dolly....that my one request and u wrote such a heart warming story on my fav. couple ever!!!! and what do i tell u....just similar to your ff this was equally touching...painful....captivating and so emotional!!!! especially the parts that describe samrat's pain...he being tormented on account of the needles n injections...was way too painful....but the way gunjan took care of him was really so sweet.and as u know i always include my lines of the day...so here goes those golden lines...
"He wasn't handsome… no handsome wasn't a word enough to describe his beauty ….
Even in his present condition,, with a bandage on his head ,, a plaster across his right hand n bruises everywhere , he looked angelic …."
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"I had never seen him before…
I would have remembered if I had ,,, as a matter of fact he was too devine to ever 4get ….."
these lines dolly again just stole the show....the way u always describe samrat's persona and beauty i am fida over that....
and the suspense in the story is really good...just waiting for sam to become concious so sajan can exchange a few of words....
seriously dolly since the past few months...that is the time i started reading your ff...i have become a huge fan of yours....so pls pls pls write the next part as soon as possible!!! i will be waiting for your next update.
and ya just forgot to mention....it was truely amazing to find mayank being sammy's doc!!!too good....so dear do complete the next part soon...is i always wait to hear it from u.
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