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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: dolly18

mein bhi yehi soch ri thi

vaise i want to strangle pari can u pls beg or frustrate her enough too cum n read this ss plssssssssss..
bui=i'll lock her in her own tabela///
banji n uday== un dono ki shaadi ho jayegi
mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale

Hahahahahahahahaha !!!!! Waise maine pari ko abhi abhi apni charro ki siggie ke liye request bheji hai !!!!!
Hope so ke jaldi poori ho jaye !!!!!
mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale . . . Intelligent question yet again doll :- Rest of the remaining gharwale hain kaun ???????? saynak ka ram nam satya karva diya , gunur would probably in asylum , benji uday ek dusre ko jjhel lenge > To bcha kaun ??????????
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
lovedd it!!! keep continuing dear....u rock in writing!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
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ok isse pehele main kuch bhi kahu.............A BIG SORRY............to u jaan.................................couldn't come here for some reason................ask simi why...........And A BIG THANK to her................woh bhi usse hi pucho why!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
ok dolly....................this left me in shock and in inner happiness.....somewhat proud and somewhere excitement!!!!!! m telling u reason for everything!!!!!!
SHOCK-
this come as a total surprise for me!!!...........................u r an such a fab writer.............awsome towsome bloosome..................tumne esa kaise kiya????? no plzzzz tell me na!!!!!!!! tu sich rahi hogi....................hamare itni lambi frnship main muje ab pata chala......................how fantastic u r!!!!!!!!!!...............he na ha ha !!!
but this is my first time .......reading ur FF...................tera kya reading any FF on IF.................isse pehele I never read any!!........................aur pata chala .....I missed a lot!!!.......................tune kitna kaha tha na muje...............par m not a good writer nor a good reader!!!............
I hate reading ...................but while reading urs .......I was like............OMG...............the most intresting reading I have ever done............whitout blinking my eye.............I was just starring at my comp..........................the above pic can define me perfactly!!!!!! so I m in shock!!!
now inner happiness and excitement.................
let me come to the story.......pehele yeh kaho............when r u going to post next...........nahi yeh kaho...............how did u think of this????? plzzzz tell me.............I mean that symbolization and all that.....sorry dont know much about writing but still........................like when I was reading it..........I was actually feeling it!!.............I felt like its me lmao...hasna mat but sach main................every scene were coming infront of my eyes!!!.....................I didn't read it here..................simi pmed me............so I never expected it to be a SAJAN FF!!!..............aur jese hi maine sammy ka naam padha....................I was like😍....now ofcourse...........I was not imagin my self.............it was gunjan instead of me infront of my eyes lmao....mera sapne tut gaya🤣.............par sacchi main...................then I felt like m waiching MJHT.............but with a very improved story line ha ha .........and after reading Mayank's name I was like😲............maine toh socha hi nahi tha......the docter could be mayank😆..................aur phir tune muje bahut hurt kiye................wahan par stop karke..............ab main kaise soungi??????......plzzzz jaldi update karrrrrrrrrrrrrr............bagging u!!!!!!!!!!
PROUD
that u r mine..................and ofcourse simi's and sayank's also.....................we all r so pround to have u......................and ya ur lappie also lmao.............nahi par sachhi................m feeling like.............yeh meri best frnd hai!!!!!!! love u so much meri jaan............want to say sorry.........muje pata chala main kya miss kar rahi thi...................simmi....................the credit goes to u!!!...........thanx a lot meri jaan.............tum nahi hoti to muje kabhi pata nahi chalata....................a big hug to u!!!
dolly............................hugs and kiss.............love u meri jaan..............proud of u ............................and waiting for the next part eagerly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by --Pari-- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: simar456

Hahahahahahahahaha !!!!! Waise maine pari ko abhi abhi apni charro ki siggie ke liye request bheji hai !!!!!
Hope so ke jaldi poori ho jaye !!!!!
mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale . . . Intelligent question yet again doll :- Rest of the remaining gharwale hain kaun ???????? saynak ka ram nam satya karva diya , gunur would probably in asylum , benji uday ek dusre ko jjhel lenge > To bcha kaun ??????????

😲😲oohhho
so tumne hi kaha tha usse.............🤣...........thanks to u to dolly😆...........mere kaan pakd kar muje read karne k liye kahan tum dono ne.....phir jaake maine padha.....aur padha to esa ki............ab tu dekh.............tu dekh.................me tuje kitna torture karti hu........waise when will u going to undate next part???🤣🤣🤣
OMG u guys hillirious🤣...............woh diya, mayu ki mom, and woh uday benji🤣🤣
ha ha love u guys!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Dolly...i dont know u much...but dear...from wat i heard from yashi..then ur comments on posts..i knew u as a true sajan fan!! and a great commentor...then i wanted to so read ur ff...as yashi had mde me so excited...i couldnt read as error was coming..then i finally read it freom yash's pm...my god!! dolly who are u...i mean wher were u!!! Such beautiful and mindblowing talent was hidden in u...was never known to me..by god as nup wll say...i was so touched and hyper by reading it..was so natural and magical...it was so mysticall!! Loved it to the core!! Please personally pm wen u do to yashi the second part and the remaining ones...by the way am adding u as my frend!!!please do see my new mix..will be trying to upload soon !!

hats off to u my jaan for such grand and mersmerzing story on sajan..please continue!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
@pari
hey pari first of all if dolly is an amazing writer u too r no less...ur creations completely fida over them...i just wanted to ask that r all of us allowed to use your creations...i find them really nice!!! and second thing i know u n dolly r great frnds but want to tell u she has an ff on india forum..."mumbai blasts"....u may be knowing ofcourse....i tell u pari if u wanna experience something that hasn't been experienced so far....pls do read it...u know just like u i am such a bad reader...i never read ffs completely...just browse through them but that one ff...i tell u it will take u to another world....waise mujhe lagta hai ki main dolly ke us ff ki registered promotor ban gayi hoon...first i told my jaan anjali abt it and now u....pls pari go and try that ff...i tell u u will have an experience of a lifetime...dolly is a real magician!!! and u know a secret...it was me only who demanded a nursing scene on sajan from dolly...the kinda one u read in the short story...since the cvs were not showing the nursing scene in real...me dieing to see one ....thought of asking the best writer ever to write it...and dolly came up with this...a story to ponder over...to become mad over...thinking that how it can be so good....so pls all ppl who r sajan/mayur fans...
and loved this story do try dolly's ff....i am not doing her publicity but telling you from the bottom of your heart...i can just say that the way dolly has shown sajan n mayur in that ff even the cvs cant show!!!
for all u ppl...here is the link..of dolly's ff....n dolly sorry meri jaan i said so much abt your ff without asking permission....but seriously dont want even a single mjht fan who has not read your that ff...coz its that good!!!.
link:
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sorry guys forgot to say...if this short story is a trailer the picture isa hiden inside this link....
u would have never seen gunjan so pure...samrat so angelic....mayank so peircing and nupur so lovely
as in dolly's "mumbai blasts" ff...and let me warn u after reading this ff u will become dolly's diehard fan forever...whether u r a mayurian or a sajanian...that ff will cut straight through your heart...so just go and have a try....i cam just say it is better than even a shahrukh or aamir film....
Edited by princessyashika - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
oh god oh god oph god oh god oh god
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
i wont be able to reply now
2 reasons
don't have time
after reading all this imy hands r shaking literalluy
bye but i'll cuddle sim ,pari n mallika to death tomarrow
pakka promise
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
very nice first part .....sorry for late comments........as i read it in hurry as i was leaving for my exam from home.....aftr tht i didnt got time to comment......but waiting for the second part.......continue soon.

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