ss(sajjan):THE STRANGER:the ending(pg-23)du c:-) - Page 16

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

gr88 prt

thanxxxx 4 d pm

Originally posted by: lucario

really nice parts......no words to say...........waiting for next means last one....continue soon

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

wow gr8 part waiting for another pls update soon

Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz

for PM

Originally posted by: princessyashika

Ok so meri pyaari dolly ji kah rahi hain ki don't come to kill me'but meri jaan u find yourself a place'coz I am coming to kill u!!! pehle to sadiyan laga di update karne mein aur phir aisjagah pe khatam kar diya..ki I just cant help but think what next!!!!now coming to your update...to dolly meri jaan the way u potrayed my jaanu was oh soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo'ahhhh'.feel like giving both him n u thousand tight wali hugs!!!! And oh god he looked sho sho sho cutie will blushing'ki main ab tak ye soch-soch kar lal ho rahi hoon'.☺️☺️☺️
aur phir main kya karoon iski dhadkanon ka'chashmish ko dekhte hi sky rocket ho jati hain'even I could hear them..loud n clear'ab itni zor se dhadkengi to sunai to dengi hi na''then again ye ohir se angry young man ban gaya'and this time the target is our sweet mayu'awwwwwwwwwww my poor mayu'but loved mayu for scolding this superhero for trying to get up'stupid boy!!!
n dolly tune bhi achcha tareeka nikala hai apne update ko mere dil mein basane ka'give pain to Sammy'n u have achieved it!...needle pricks'stitches'slap'beaten up'send to boarding'separated from his chashmish'.Ouch...😭 I was wincing with every pain of his yaar!!! but phir again dolly again u said something that I will remember ur update till my senses support me'Sammy feeling proud to help his chashmish'awwwwwwwwwwww'oh my good lord kya karoon mein apne romeo ka'kash main iski chashmish hoti!!! 😉 And then dolly while making me feel all this pain..love romance'pride....tune mujhe itna bada jhatka de diya'update khatam kar diya'par tu fikar mat kar'isliye hi to itna bada response likh rahi hoon..taki u become tired reading this and next time don't stop at this point'!!! And jaan number of updates ke bare mein worry not..jitne chahe likh le'main to hamesha aa jaungi apne lambe lambe replies se tujhe tang karne'.

ab itni jaldi khush hone ki no need'are yaar meri lines of the day rah gayi na'

So here r my lines of the day..shuruat of course from my sweetypie'

"I could never ever not recoganise that voice it had been the core of my existence 4 so long now!!!!!!!!!"

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww'what a diehard lover he is yaar..i wish god bless every girl of this universe with a samrat'.

"This was a stupid haywire connection in my body '' embarrassment caused my cheeks to go red '.."

Oh my jaanu u look sho sho sho cute'ur mom is damn right darling'.

"Ok there its slowing down ' great work samrat I am proud of u '."

Me too..proud of u jaana'kya baat hai'coz sweety if I would have been in ur place n u in gunji's place..the machine would have blasted'😆 😆 😆

"chashmish vaise to mujhe pata nahin k tum sharma kyun rahi ho '.. par zarra sharmana thoda band karo varna mera kamzor dil seh nahin payega"

oh my sweet chashmish'thoda sa to taras kar apne jaan pe'pls sweetheart try n be a bit less pretty'mayu bhi isi kamre mein hai'

"hmmmm badlana to chahta tha chashmish ' par phir socha k agar tum kabhi dubara milli aur tumne mujhko nahin pehchaana to???"

No words'just simply PERFECT'I felt this to the deepest'like pacific'.'are yaar abhi tak is se zyada deep ocean discover hi nahin hua''😛 😛 😛

"it looked as if they knew each other from eternity n 4 eternity'.."

are waah..nupz ne mayu ko bhi shayar bana dia'woh bhi angrezi shayar..

kya baat hai'but yaar i will remember this line till my eternity'.

"she hugged me their in front of everyone' I hugged her back ' not thinking of the consequences'"

oh my warrior lover'just PROUD OF U!!! 👏 👏 👏

"that evening my dad did caught hold of me n gave me a sound beating .. I didn't cry or even beg him to stop .. I just kept quiet ''"

but I cried'.so painful'OUCH!!! 😭 😭 😭

So my jaan these were my golden lines'no my diamond dtudded lines'jana aakhir kahan se itne keemati shabd chunkar lati hai'!!! Chal ab tujhe pakana band karti hoon'got to go..are yaar since the past half hour going all crazy over ur update'isliye pls ab agali baa raise pont pe kabhi mat chodna..ok! And for this so lovely'so awaited aur who update jisko padhne ke liye main mar rahi thi'I am gonna give u zillions of hugs n kisses!!!

DOLLY U R My ROCKSTAR'NO MY VOLCANO STAR'aur main yahaan tere volcanic eruption se ghayal padi hoon'pls someone call Dr. mayank'

Originally posted by: sushups

i am seriously gonna kill u
not fair yaar,i hate cliffhangers.plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.plz dont make me wait.

PS:besides ur stupid ending place
the update was very very very good😊

Originally posted by: aahana86

Hey doll that was great 👏

loved it aww poor Sammy he has a tough childhood here too

but gosh he's jealous of Mayu he thinks he is Gunjan' BF right

that's cute pls show a quick confession too

oh b4 i forget loved the whole crazy heartbeat thing ,

Dolly u a twilight fan too cause this is so like Bella & Edward in the hospital & here too he's focusing on her eyes , Gunjan does have really lovely eyes

oh how i wish 4 just 1 sajan scene where he kisses her eyes & we see Gunjan without specs that would be dreamy 😍

Originally posted by: maria_awan

really nice dear😉

Originally posted by: SanaHeartMayur

hey Dolly love this SS too much.

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowowow tht was cool