It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10 - Page 90

Armaan - no acceptions, no rejections - wait listed everywhere. That must be some kind of record. Just this morning, I happened to read an article in NY times about how many unis, even ivy leagues are putting more and more students on wait list, thinking that in current economic situation, some of the accepted students may not take admission. And, our Armaan seems just one of those waiting students. You sure are weaving present times in your FF. Siddy boy in Yale - that surely is surprising. I hope Riddhima doesn't join Yale next year, otherwise Armaan will be left "yelling" 😉.

Razor incident - he again proves he is a jerk with capital J. Prom night was okay. Now, we know that he cares but is confused and Riddhima has noticed it multiple times. Errmm..Each chapter is good in episodic terms and is an enjoyable read, but somehow it feels that story as a whole isn't progressing very smoothly. I know..I know..AR are growing up and each of this incident is a building block of their relationship, and so they are necessary.

Now, waiting for Armaan's acceptance to uni. and the time when Riddhima makes decision about her career.

Wow

Love it! Love it! LOVE IT!

Can you please PM me about the updates... :)

Update soon!

how i wish to not have exams or not trapped in this stupid slow computer of mines which is giving me a lot of head ache just to comment in big on ur great update
my dad said nothing doing till my exams season completed
razor scene,innovative and completely new sense of scene which is really common in normal life,u cant keep on making heroine a beauty from birth though she is naturally
prom was great and how i wish armaan dirty thought to turn true,lol i cant help it but i think it would just be like treating riddhima as any other girl which she is not,i really wish both go to same college,i know it would be out of character but still ppl get bonded when they are with each other rather than far from each other,i really dont much believe in long distance relation ships,cause i see my friends hanging around the phone some times getting dissapointeed if the wont talk nicely n dont know the person there is doing whether still holding the same feelings or not
well i really hope the best from u,u should really give credit to this reply and the one in ur post bcoz this one took 15 minutes to type and that one nearly 45 minutes with break in every 5 minutes,lol
waiting for next update soon again
swetha

omg awesome loved the way armaan didn't let sid and ridz together... i just hope ridz never finds it was armi who was the hooligan ... and poor ridz, i was so angry at armaan (which is very hard to do mind you) for being a jerk to ridz i mean how could he shove a razor in her hands argh... aww n loved (all anger melted) when he wanted her as a date.

loved it update soon
Pari

wow the part was fantastic armaan not getting admission n his fellings for ridzs which he is not sure is love or not n the prom was too gud

YAYYYYYYYYYYYY.
A wonderful UPDATE at Last.

It was Fun But I wanted to see more of AR in Prom Night but u made d story more interesting & goody good that I have to say I like the story ur way.

Oh My GOD!
Bheegii Di,This was...Stupendous.
I swear,I have entirely no words to express the way you've written this part,It was so good.
Moving to the part,
Giving her the razor was offensive,but still..I think Riddhima wouldn't have been offended anyway,If you know what i mean! 😉
The Prom
Armaan was Amazing,Sid was Stupid.
Thought somewhere,I guess Sid isn't all that dumb that you portray him to be,because I keep getting this feeling that you know,he might just be the much needed catalyst to AR's relationship moving forward.

"My eyes caressed your lips as we danced together. At that moment, if there was a genie granting wishes, I would have just asked his permission to kiss your flowery lips. "
I absolutely loved this. How I was hoping that "Oh Bheegi,Please send a Genie to him right now!" 😆
I could just picturise them with so much absolute clarity in my mind,it was like they were dancing right in front of me. Again,how I love Armaan and his inability to refuse challenges!

"It's those silent moments, when the music stopped, the dancers paused in their steps,that I still remember vividly. My eyes were as if caught in a magnetic field, unrelenting and unwavering in their attraction for you."
Again I say..this is why we love AR. The effortless charm,the magical romance and the amazing chemistry,whose absence has made me begin to absolutely detest the actual show. And here,you bring out that charm and magic so easily,it seriously annoys me no end to compare your writing(which is brilliant) to the "contrived DMG plot",as you so aptly put it.Anway,that's a sensitive corner. Moving On,

"I still feel that if Sid had not spilled the coke on his pants, we could have stayed glued to each other all night."
Silly Sid. Why did he have to DO that! Clumsy of him,to destroy a moment like that!😆 How i would have enjoyed having AR stay glued to each other all night!

Anyway,I have so many more instances that I could highlight in the part that I feel you'll just skip over my comment because of it's length,so I'll just keep it short and say..You're brilliant di,seriously.
I loved every word you wrote to bits. Totally.
But I still have a couple of more things to say about Armaan,I'll edit in a while and be back with them.
Love,
Pragy =)
P.S. I know the comment is a little confusing and dissconnected this time,but please put up with it,I'll edit soon.

wow
loved it
too good
so sweet of armaan
jealous armaan!