It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10 - Page 84

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ShipraP thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx for the pm Di.Hope you enjoyed your spring break 😃

First of all,why did you bring Sid here 😆
Anyways,loved the part and as usual hated Shashank 🤣

Feel bad for Riddhima,she cannot decide her own future and ambitions.

I really loved the way you portrayed Anjie-Armaan relationship.Armaan went out of his way to do something special for Riddhima,this is so Armaanish 😳

The locker room and Riddhima helping Armaan with college apps part is very beautiful.

Loved it completely Di,update soon! 🤗
Edited by ShipraP - 15 years ago
khahani thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Di, welcome back and thank you for such an amazing update

I am making a habit of gracing this FF with my late latif comments *holding ear*

I enjoyed this part immensely! Finally Armaan may have started to accpet his feelings for Ridz (my wishful thinking)! Shanky well there's nothing to say about him apart from the fact I absolutely loathe him! What is wrong with that man?

When Armaan asked his permission to take Ridz out and Shanky purposely said those things about the hanging game to hurt him, I actually stated thinking about the Armaan in DMG as your Armaan's feeling would be the exact (if not worse) feeling of betrayal for the other Armaan when he gets to know the truth! I had a feeling that you may bring in Sid here as you hinted in the previous update. But I hope Sid doesn't in any way become the love interest here!

This part was SO adorable and I don't have the right words to express my appreciations apart from the fact that every time I read something from you makes me feel more enlightened!

Take care and loads of love xx
Edited by khahani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Updated reserved post on pg 105
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Posted: 15 years ago
i loved it. i loved it. i loved it!!!!! plz plz plz pm me too!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

Awesome-- poor siddy went with his sister :P
lolll !! cant wait for the prom !
are sid and his sister gonna be prominent features in the FF ? if they are i tink u shud bring in tamanna for sid ! =)



thanks sweetoo....I don't know how prominent Sid's role will be in this ff....but don't worry, this is an AR story😊

[quote=ankita.m]Awesome part Bheegi di 😃
Insecure and Jealous Armaan is very adorable shows his love for Riddhima.😳
I was so impressed with the amount of work he did to get those tickets for her birthday ,he may not confess to himself but he would have never done the same for anyone but Riddhima.
Armaans already started to think of ways to impress Shashank and its going to be difficult 😉
The moment when Riddhima is home with Armaan showed how before anything else they are friends and both matter to each other.
However different their thoughts might be but their destiny and their bond always gets them together.I was surprised to see Ridhima paying so much attention to Armaans hair..😆
Loved the part ❤️[/quote]

Thanks ankita. UR right,armaan would have probably not worked hard for anyone else like this😳
Yes, their friendship is just getting stronger as they are getting older. Yeah, i can just imagine armaan's cute look with all boyish messy hair😆

[quote=dipu]

hey!!!

coolest update dear,,

armaan manaofying shash was hialrious and ya agreed with armaan shanky is a heartless.......

and sid man.....loved to see jelous armaan...

conti.,..soon...

and plz pm me[/quote]


Thanks dipu! Shanky is just being a protective dad😃 Yeah, jealousy is hard to ignore esp when it comes to love😳


[quote=riddhan]the part was mindblowing so finally armaan is realising he is in love with ridzs n here also sid came but i know here armaan will get ridzs for sure i felt bad for armaan he did so much to take ridzs to the concert but ridzs dad became a villian here too but m happy at the end all things became well between armaan n ridzs[/quote]


thanks riddhan.Shanky is a regular,over protective dad but that helped armaan because she couldn't go with Sid either😉


[quote=coolvini4u]Hey di,

thank god u finally updated...😊

Newaz,it was a nice part ...
I luvd Armaan's insecurities ...lol...😆... poor ammy...😆

Btw,it was really touching as armaan worked so hard to get those tickets... 😳 😳 😳 ..i wonder if such types of guys still exist or r extinct!! 😆 😕 😆

Ridz is, as usual, a sweetheart! 😛

thanx 4 d pm... i wish u continue soon this tym ... 😊

luv
vini[/quote]


thanks vini! I think guys willdo anything to impress a girl...that's real but hard to find😉 I will continue next part at a regular interval now

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

hey di welcome back finally we got the update

it was superb upsdate love armaan in this part
he is so lovely and caring toward ridz
i hope both of them realize their love for each other soon
i hate shashank he is really mean to armaan but i guess he is dad
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal



thanks mittal.yeah,shanky is a typical indian dad. well, it will take timeto confess in this one...right now their friendship is getting stronger by the day😊

[quote=pebo]ey bheegi di!!!!!

i love thiss ff of yours

its too good

i just read all th parts now

though am not an ar fan

i really loved this

it was awesome

plz keep pming me

love pebbzzyy[/quote]

Thanks pebo...welcome aboard! so which couple do u like? I am honored that u like this ff despite not being an AR fan

[quote=ssh57]Hey Bheegi,
It was as awesome as ever. But I only wish it were a book which I could read without putting it down at one go. This waiting is killing. Can't seem to get enough of this ff. Though you post such long parts it feels very disappointing to come to the end of it but you usually leave us with a happy feeling as you did this time, Armaan knowing that Riddhima didn't accompany Sid to the concert.
Coming to this part it was so cruel of Shashank. Inspite of knowing how much Armaan had worked hard he was so cruel to him. I can appreciate that as a parent he was right, but since the boy in question Is ARMAAN can't help empathizing with him.Love, ssh57[/quote]

thanks ssh...u know i have sometimes wondered if i should write a complete ff and then post it but i always come to the conclusion that it would be hard as i depend a lot on reader's comments...my readers write my ffs so to speak.Yes, i know as a parent we would be on shanky's 😃 side but when it comes to armaan, all bets are off😆

[quote=lailayazkhan]
Oh my God! I was reading the AK version yesterday and I hadnt finished so I decided I'll come back today and read the rest...........but somehow I didnt realize before but then at the end I realized it said AR and just wanted to say GREAT story...............I just finished reading and seriously its a great concept...........I seriously like how you describe Armaan's feelings and all.............I was probably in the same state you described Armaan in when Ridz said 'his sister' please continue soon.........[/quote]

thanks laila! So ru an AK or AR fan? I post the same story in both versions...ur welcome to join either. Thanks again😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks ssh...u know i have sometimes wondered if i should write a complete ff and then post it but i always come to the conclusion that it would be hard as i depend a lot on reader's comments...my readers write my ffs so to speak.

Yes bheegi,
I agree with you 100%. As I started with my ff as a mini one and posted the 55th part today. We write for the readers' satisfaction rather than ours. Our basic story would be insipid without the mirch, masala provided by the readers through their comments. tc. Love, ssh57
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz

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Hi bheegi di,

I m genuinely delighted to have u back!...Hope you had a relaxing and fun filled vacation.


hi sai...it's good to be back too :) yeah,i had a gr8 vacation

And thank u for this update'I can't seem to express how much I missed this ff....But I did resist the temptations by going through some of ur AK and AR fics again!....Some how...I always find myself discover something new and inspiring whenever I read your fics. aww...ur so sweet😊

Well, now speaking about the current part, I have to admit..I read it immediately after I noticed it updated....but I thought..... I was really running out of words to comment. Believe me it WAS That much appealing and adorable. And this particular part somehow really brings the adolescence age out; how the whole 'Date' stuff which seems mundane to any adult is much more crucial than career or logic at that age, the parental -influence, interferance and dominance in the childs future, the uncertainity and confusion about life or what we want.....ETC.........It's all deftly portrayed here. Every situation or phase that one comes across during his/her progression and years of growth in life..... You have nailed it down here.(It was like I was reliving my past with every thing happening with me or people around to some extent)

i think we all remember our adolescent days well probably because of all the struggles which at that seemed more important than anything else

And OMG! Sid here too!!.Well..I had an intuition that the new guy may be sid.....but The Best part is he is NOT going to be coming between AR here(I know you are too sweet to make us suffer through the torture, Unlike the original writers and creatives of DMG!) It was nice to see him here especially when he turns out to be cupid in a way.

yeah, i am not as ruthless as the Cvs of DMG😆...i am curious how the Cvs are going to do damage control now

I loved Armaan in this part....very very very much!😳

when do we not like this character?😳

Whether its Armaans initial confusion+defiance and later lingering confusion about his feeling for Ridz, his silly insecurities about Sid, his hard attempts to make Ridz happy,his first job and salary, his agitation after getting insulted and rejected by shanky, his getting pissed on Ridz, Riddhima's concerns for Armaan, the AR moments, the eye-lock! And his pure intentions to just spend more time with her without any expectation, etc......I loved it all!😊 aww...thanks

Riddhima ..I have to say is a very lovable character overall.....Naive, Defiant, unperturbed and uncompromising on the grounds of her principles; who isn't easily influenced (unlike Armaan), having her own ideologies, a perfect friend, human-being, child and Daughter!!!.... YET!.... Even after being that defiant and rock-headed, she is still unable to raise her voice against her Father!......

yeah,our simple Ridz from good old days of DMG was like that too...na jaane ab kahan chali gayi wo😕


Her fathers happiness, his pleasure and pride and the need to please him is so important to her, that she willingly accepts his decisions, at the stake of her own happiness. Right now even her career is at the mercy of her dad!..I don't say it is wrong! To be frank each and everyone of us has once in a while always succumbed to our Parents wishes and still do!...I m myself one of them!...But there are some situations in life when we need to be selfish, think about our happiness. I m lukin fwd to see that side of Ridz if needed.

yes, we are def going to see some struggle in that department but Armaan hai na😉

But it is NOT Shanky or Sid, I really was concerned about affecting Armaan in this part, as Sid is an innocent participant and Shanky-A father; it is Armaan's parents who seem to blow my anger. I know they aren't even mentioned here much..BUT that is what the whole issue is for me!....Their ignorance and indifference to Armaan is so not justified!

maybe i should highlight his parents in next part..they have been neglected for quite sometime.they are not as bad as u think😆


😡....Shashank is dominant..but atleast he is there for Ridz!....But Armaan???

his parents are there but he is the kind of kid who is probably too independent and doesn't want interfernce from his parents....Ridz in that way is more under her parents control esp her dad

I agree with anji, he is a big bundle of Confusion.....but I seriously can't blame the guy for it. Afterall when was a time he had either of his parents helping him sought his life instead of complaining and comparing him with others!.....I hope they realize it soon!😭 i think it''s time for his parents to come out from hiding for sai😆

Ok TIme-out.....peace...i m not going to loathe further.......Time for my fav parts-

You probably never noticed that the roller coaster of emotions inside me were often a reflection of how I felt about you. Even I never made that connection then, but today, at the age of 28 years, when I am writing this piece, I can clearly state if there is anyone in this world, my feelings are a slave of, it's you.(I would like to think this will be a reciprocative statement by Ridz in a different way in future)

let's hope so😳

"Really? What kind of work?" I was pleasantly surprised to see Shashank uncle's interest in my life...he does have a heart.(haha....I don't know why but sometimes..I feel like I enjoy Armaan-Shashank more than AR...they remind me so mush of (Amol palekar and Uttpal dutt or make it Boman and Amir from 3 idiots......I love AS scenes)

he he...yeah those interactions were gr8 in DMG also

"Armaan Malik is not someone you can ignore that easily."(So True! *sighs*)

DI...I have always thought of you as an awesome writer....But I would like to see u more as a Director and Film-maker someday..I know you'll laugh at my imaginations....But.....I have always believed films influence a major audience and are more impactful than Books.....And your writings are unique and would really be inspirational to many!
aww...ur too sweet sai. Even i would love to direct a movie or write a script but it's not that easy....it's very cut throat there. I like my little world of ffs here...but thanks for this confidence in me

Great part!!!....Thanx for d pm. ur welcome and thanks for commenting on my posts on DMG forum

Love

-Sai.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks...

@ blessing beauty.....i am glad u liked this part. Yeah, Sid helped armaan indirectly

@chahat....yeah armaan hurting himself is so typical. UR right, love is too complicated a thing for a guy like armaan...at least right now

@amritafan..thanks

@Rav...thanks for ur lovely words Rav :)

@Ritu....loved reading ur comments. UR right, one can sense romance in the most subtle scenes esp when it comes to AR...just being in the same room can do that for them. Don't worry, I want make Sid Ridz relationship like the one in DMG. Sid is here for a purpose...wait and see:)

@Devu....to me writing is a stressbuster and it's heartening to know that it helps my readers in the same way too. Yeah, armaan is always a sweetheart in most of my ffs as I can't make him otherwise. Even if he has some bad traits, he will always be the good hearted guy like he is in DMG. Well,the prom will be interesting for sure....let's see if Armaan goes with Ridz or not

@Sneha....loved reading ur wonderful comment. Tera mera rishta was my first ever ff....it's still close to my heart.I am glad u liked it.Yeah,Sid is here too but will not be a negative character here....just will help armaan sort out his feelings
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey!
This part was amazing di..totally.
I loved the way you portrayed Armaan's growing sense of responsibility,his drive to get something great for Riddhima on her birthday,his jealousy over Sid with "His Riddhima"...and every other shade of his character you bought out in this one.
It was beautiful..And cute too,specially apparent where Riddhima complimented Armaan on his dishevelled hair,and they had the eyelock.

Personally,I like KSG with downright messy hair too. 😆

Also,I love the romance factor betw
een AR that your FF brings out,which somehow..somewhere DMG has lost completely. It helps me remember the Good Ol' Days,where complications were so little,and DMG was like a complete stressbuster which was enjoyable to watch. Thank You!
Anyway,am eagerly awaiting the next part..though I'm sorry i couldn't reply with a longer and much better comment for the wonderfully nice chapter you wrote this time.
Will def make it up next time around.
Update soon!
Love,
Pragati😊

Edited by ArmaansGirl.. - 15 years ago

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