Hi bheegi di,
I m genuinely delighted to have u back!...Hope you had a relaxing and fun filled vacation.
hi sai...it's good to be back too :) yeah,i had a gr8 vacation
And thank u for this update'I can't seem to express how much I missed this ff....But I did resist the temptations by going through some of ur AK and AR fics again!....Some how...I always find myself discover something new and inspiring whenever I read your fics. aww...ur so sweet😊
Well, now speaking about the current part, I have to admit..I read it immediately after I noticed it updated....but I thought..... I was really running out of words to comment. Believe me it WAS That much appealing and adorable. And this particular part somehow really brings the adolescence age out; how the whole 'Date' stuff which seems mundane to any adult is much more crucial than career or logic at that age, the parental -influence, interferance and dominance in the childs future, the uncertainity and confusion about life or what we want.....ETC.........It's all deftly portrayed here. Every situation or phase that one comes across during his/her progression and years of growth in life..... You have nailed it down here.(It was like I was reliving my past with every thing happening with me or people around to some extent)
i think we all remember our adolescent days well probably because of all the struggles which at that seemed more important than anything else
And OMG! Sid here too!!.Well..I had an intuition that the new guy may be sid.....but The Best part is he is NOT going to be coming between AR here(I know you are too sweet to make us suffer through the torture, Unlike the original writers and creatives of DMG!) It was nice to see him here especially when he turns out to be cupid in a way.
yeah, i am not as ruthless as the Cvs of DMG😆...i am curious how the Cvs are going to do damage control now
I loved Armaan in this part....very very very much!😳
when do we not like this character?😳
Whether its Armaans initial confusion+defiance and later lingering confusion about his feeling for Ridz, his silly insecurities about Sid, his hard attempts to make Ridz happy,his first job and salary, his agitation after getting insulted and rejected by shanky, his getting pissed on Ridz, Riddhima's concerns for Armaan, the AR moments, the eye-lock! And his pure intentions to just spend more time with her without any expectation, etc......I loved it all!😊 aww...thanks
Riddhima ..I have to say is a very lovable character overall.....Naive, Defiant, unperturbed and uncompromising on the grounds of her principles; who isn't easily influenced (unlike Armaan), having her own ideologies, a perfect friend, human-being, child and Daughter!!!.... YET!.... Even after being that defiant and rock-headed, she is still unable to raise her voice against her Father!......
yeah,our simple Ridz from good old days of DMG was like that too...na jaane ab kahan chali gayi wo😕
Her fathers happiness, his pleasure and pride and the need to please him is so important to her, that she willingly accepts his decisions, at the stake of her own happiness. Right now even her career is at the mercy of her dad!..I don't say it is wrong! To be frank each and everyone of us has once in a while always succumbed to our Parents wishes and still do!...I m myself one of them!...But there are some situations in life when we need to be selfish, think about our happiness. I m lukin fwd to see that side of Ridz if needed.
yes, we are def going to see some struggle in that department but Armaan hai na😉
But it is NOT Shanky or Sid, I really was concerned about affecting Armaan in this part, as Sid is an innocent participant and Shanky-A father; it is Armaan's parents who seem to blow my anger. I know they aren't even mentioned here much..BUT that is what the whole issue is for me!....Their ignorance and indifference to Armaan is so not justified!
maybe i should highlight his parents in next part..they have been neglected for quite sometime.they are not as bad as u think😆
😡....Shashank is dominant..but atleast he is there for Ridz!....But Armaan???
his parents are there but he is the kind of kid who is probably too independent and doesn't want interfernce from his parents....Ridz in that way is more under her parents control esp her dad
I agree with anji, he is a big bundle of Confusion.....but I seriously can't blame the guy for it. Afterall when was a time he had either of his parents helping him sought his life instead of complaining and comparing him with others!.....I hope they realize it soon!😭 i think it''s time for his parents to come out from hiding for sai😆
Ok TIme-out.....peace...i m not going to loathe further.......Time for my fav parts-
You probably never noticed that the roller coaster of emotions inside me were often a reflection of how I felt about you. Even I never made that connection then, but today, at the age of 28 years, when I am writing this piece, I can clearly state if there is anyone in this world, my feelings are a slave of, it's you.(I would like to think this will be a reciprocative statement by Ridz in a different way in future)
let's hope so😳
"Really? What kind of work?" I was pleasantly surprised to see Shashank uncle's interest in my life...he does have a heart.(haha....I don't know why but sometimes..I feel like I enjoy Armaan-Shashank more than AR...they remind me so mush of (Amol palekar and Uttpal dutt or make it Boman and Amir from 3 idiots......I love AS scenes)
he he...yeah those interactions were gr8 in DMG also
"Armaan Malik is not someone you can ignore that easily."(So True! *sighs*)
DI...I have always thought of you as an awesome writer....But I would like to see u more as a Director and Film-maker someday..I know you'll laugh at my imaginations....But.....I have always believed films influence a major audience and are more impactful than Books.....And your writings are unique and would really be inspirational to many!
aww...ur too sweet sai. Even i would love to direct a movie or write a script but it's not that easy....it's very cut throat there. I like my little world of ffs here...but thanks for this confidence in me
Great part!!!....Thanx for d pm. ur welcome and thanks for commenting on my posts on DMG forum
Love
-Sai.
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