It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10 - Page 83

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Pebblez thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
And she makes a comeback, finally! :D Thank God for that bheegi, i was wondering if you had officially shifted base to the dmg forum and abandoned us midway here :P

The part was...hmmm. Wait, lemme ask you first, have you seen wake up sid? If you haven't, then you must know...Armaan in THIS part only reminded me of Sid from the movie...in the part where he works really damn hard and yet Riddhima refers to him as a 5 year old...the thing is, he's stuck in a phase where she still thinks he's a baby...maybe she's too mature for a 17 year old herself? I shouldnt be one to complain, I have always been told by too many people that i act and think way beyond my age...i wonder how it is, acting underage? But I believe Armaan is an impulsive 18 year old who learns the hard way...Riddhima is too cautious!

Arrghhh!! Shashank! He's this overprotective fiasco of a father I have witnessed too many times (read: one lives in my own house :P)...yet he should give Riddhima a little bit of a free hand...its annoying how he is with her...Armaan was, of course, my boy in the part...none other interests me more yet :D Waiting for the next update already bheegi!

Have I ever told you? This is my favorite fic of yours...yes yes! :D

Kiran
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Posted: 15 years ago
heya,
dat was an awesome update...
armaan getting jealous hehehehehhe.......
poor sid had to bear armaan's wrath 4 no apparent reason....
will b waiting 4 d prom..
i am soo excited...
update soon.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
You have really taken me back to my school life.....Really!!!

Hiiiiiiiii Di
Hope you enjoyed ur vacation. But i missed ur ff. 😊 Well, thats a great thing too! 😉

Sigh*** You can write stories for ANY age group...Just any.....is it ur strong natural and blessed imagination always....or do u have a strong memory that u remember all the fantasies of school life even after such a long time..??? Whatever it is, its YOU!!!

It was different. It was pleasant. It was thoughtful.
How to say it, its noth that here in this ff i like some particular parts or dialogues like in ur previous FFs...here the parts are simple and very balanced. You can either quote the whole episode or just write a word- excellent. It carries something unique with itself always.

I must say writing such a youthful story is not easy and its very commendable on your part. It often takes my mind to your rapport with your own kids...new age kids...!!! 😊

Say it filmy or say it true, armaan's money earnnig act was heavenly. His firmness and desperation in voice while conversing with shashank on the issue of money showed it all. Shashan only saw the reason behind Armaan's act but not the true purpose behind it. And the true purpose was to make his own daughter happy.

This part was a very well mixture of traditional and western thoughts. Armaan's thinking about kissing any other girl was modern but at the same time, his thoughtfulness of distinguishing between Riddhima and any other girl was traditional.

I liked their small interactions and gestures and believe me am happy that here unlike some other stories, hero is not a much paced and extra eagerly man.

The last incident left a genuine smile on my face. Armaan laughing at his
own insecurities and riddhima's indirectly shown respect towards Armaan's hard labor.....they were beautiful...!!! 😃

Some points of Riddhima reminds me so much of my own nature here. 😊

Loved the update!!! I think you can already sense that by my comment. 😉



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Posted: 15 years ago
haha thats so funny! he went with his sister!
and armaan was punching lockers cuz he was so mad lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
luved the part!!! it was so sweet of armmi to work for those concert tickets. I absolutely hate riddi's dad - but i totally understand him frm a parents perspective.

aww when is he going to confess????😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
reading it is like walking down the memry lane....to school.....careless period of life...wen the only tension were like wat if i miss my fav cartoon....or how to get money frm mom for ice cream....creating new games ...fighting ovr silly things....
i jst lov ur fanfic......
include me in ur pm list /\ plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
***Reserved***

Hey guys, I am really busy nowadays and I only come here to post my FFs, so I'll reserve posts which I probably won't edit but after three months I'll comment on every FF regularly, hopefully :D

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arlover_aditi

heyya di
hw was ur vacation????
i hpe u enjoyed it
nw coming back to the part
uffff!!! this idiot sid y the hell does he have to come here
humesha kidhar bhi tapak jaata hai
godddd i cant tolerate him even for a sec
coming back to AR
i loved every bit of it
u describe armaan's emotion juzz too well di
and thnk god riddhima didnt go with sid
loved this part
juzz one request
plz dnt let this sid come between AR
continue soon

loads of love
take care
aditi



Thanks aditi.I had a gr8 vacation. Yeah, Sid is now a part of DMG and has shown up here too but don't worry, I am not as ruthless as the DMG CVs😆

[quote=Nidha1983]woah Didi its really a sweet update so cute i just love it superb so he want to take her on date cool and here again SID ahh di do u like SR couple i know its out of FF question but excited to know ok back to update ahh Shahank don't let Armaan take her and he done so much to even do part time jobs so cute and touching one and Ridhima came to help him even and said him he look cool in messed hairs woh so she like him too di one more thing i want to say di ur signature is so cute spl the baby one plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm[/quote]

Thanks Nidha! No,I am not an SR fan😕. Sid is here for a purpose😉 Yeah, who wouldn't find armaan cute with ruffled hair?😳 Thanks to Aria for the cute siggy😊
Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: choco_pie92

sid here also...noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
yaar why did u put him in ur ff....
anyways coming to the part...i loved the last line sid went with his sis....😆
but it was our armaan's hardwork.....anjie is being a very good friend
hope armaan realizes soon his feelings for riddhima...
fantastic part....update soon

love
debadrita



thanks Deb.Sid is here to make armaan realize his feelings...don't worry, I am not like the CVs of DMG😆 Yeah, armaan had assumed a lot about SR,thank God it was not true😃

[quote=prernawaghray]hey di
great part
awesome AR moment
n then armaan manaofying shash was hialrious
but hate shashank ... feel that hes like the "virus" (of 3 idiots) in their love story... well not only AR but also in ridz's life.. hes presurizing her to take up mbbs while she wants to pursue journalism
dont like such dominance
my papa also wanted me to take up mbbs while i was at school but late he realized that i dont liek science so he said pursue what u want n im sooo happy doing engg
hes such an irritating fellow lolz
so the new entrant is sid hmmm
fed up of him in the show di
hope hes not a kabab mein haddi here ;)
but what i really liked was angie-armaan scene where she knocks some sense into him hehehe
that was needed di :)
hope ur vacation was good
update soon di :)[/quote]

Thanks Prerna! He he...shanky, the virus...I like that one😆 Don't worry Sid will not be a virus between AR here....wait and see what role he plays😉 I am glad ur dad realized what u really wnated to do, some parents don't😕 I had a gr8 vacation...thanks😊
Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: naureen_aly

fantastic part

finally u update
armaan and his insecurities
while reading this part
i was hating shanky but at the end when riddhima told armaan taht she dint went 4 the concert because her dad would not let her go with any other boy it felt good
riddhima is missing soooooo much of her fun (like me)
well dint get pm
u forgot me
not fair😕



sorry Naureen....i had so many Pms to send that sometimes I miss a few names..my mistake😕
yeah,shanky's over protectiveness helped armaan indirectly😆
Ridz will have fun in college...don't worry😉

😆

[quote=namita18]heyy di...........

welcum back..... 😊

as usual u r back wid a bang...... part was absolutely amazing.... it is worth of so much wait.... really fanatastic part 👏

The main highlight of dis part was armaan's insecurities.... now slowly he has started realising his feelings for ridhima.... i know ridhima also feel for him... as she cared so much abt him but do not showed to him.... but i didn't like shashank... he not only retrict ridhima from living life to d fullest but also imposes his ideas for her future also, as he want her to becum doctor or engineer but she want to becom journalist.... parents should always supprt their children in th choice of their aim......... but d best part was d evening....when she helped him in essay.... dat was beautifull... and now i m sure abt it dat she also love him and also know her feelings for him very well unlike him....



di u didn't pm me dis time...... 😭

luv u
tk[/quote]

Hi namita.I think a lot of u read the update before I sent the Pms😃 Yes, this part was written to make armaan get an idea of his feelings....but did he?? Yeah,a lot of parents like shanky put a lot of burden on their kids with their own choices...let's see how ridz will tackle this in future
Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago

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