It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 15 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: bheegi

Hi Nruti. I had a great vacation...thanks dear.

I understand ur feelings about SId but don't worry,my ff is an AR ff, Sid will just be there to make armaan realize his feelings. I have no intention of starting a SR track here...yup DMG track is intolerable these days...i just watch it for armaan😆
Yeah, Indian parents still want their kids to be docs and engineers...hopefully this trend is changing now. In this ff, no one is a real villain like Pehchan....it's all about how armaan perceives them😊

ya i agree with that.......on having no vilans but after re redding this part agine i felt that its seems to me that armaan is writing a book or a dieary for ridhima...............to let her know what had happend in their life and what he was feeling from the they were lil.........got a tell you that chocking game did not do anything bed for armaan actuly made his memory far more stronger so that u can rember each and everything................and thats helping him in writing this book or whatever it is....😆😆

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#812

wow di it was an awesome part srsly loved it i practically have no words i can so imagine Armaan working hard so so cute of him

thanks a ton for the update n the pm

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desire_20

@desire_20

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Posted: 15 years ago

#813

loooooved it!!! armaan is adorable, he did so much to get those tickets and i liked him being jealous, gr8 update..... n prom! now im excited for that, i really hope shashank lets armaan take riddhima n that she agrees..

btw bheegi, ur ff makes me happy like no other.... as soon as i came on IF n saw that u had updarted, i got relle excited, yeah ur ffs are jst awesome, n i was hoping that maybe u could write an AR version of another AK ff of yours, i would LOVE to read it, especially becuz the updates would be sooner since it's already written

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Laila.N

@Laila.N

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Posted: 15 years ago

#814

AH!!
Oh god, so so so so so so so so SWEET!!
I loved it, teh best part till date.
I'm sorry, it's really late and I have school tomorrow, don't have time to comment well.
I will edit it tomorrow and tell you what i think. I was just so eager to read the part, that i couldn't wait :)

THANKS for updating.

Edit :

This update was definitely one of the best if not the best.
Seriously I love all the aspect of your stories.
The concept is appreciated because everyone had once a little Armaan in their younger years, so we can easily indentify ourselves to the sweet character of Riddhima and of cours we love Armaan's character who's just as sweet as loving. The SWEETEST LITTLE BAD BOY ! (l)
And what makes your story as real as reality is your description.
You describe Armaan's feelings so well that i find myself crying, hurt and laughing with him. I hate the one he hates and love the one he loves. It's incredible, you're such a good writter. You really should expose your talent to the whole world !!!
All the characters are so attaching.

I will not write a comment as long as your story lol so in short : I LOVE YOUR STORIES, PLEASE DO CONTINUE TO WRITE AS YOU ARE DOING IT SO WELL!!! 😊

Love, Laila😃

Edited by Laila.N - 15 years ago

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#815

U updated!!!! and such a wonderful part....i love ur ff. i dnt have any words to tel u how much i love dis ff and especially dis part probably bcoz it was a much awaited update after ur vacation but also bcoz we also got a lil look at Ridz feelings jus frm her actions and wat she sed about him.

tnx for the pm...its good to av u bck. update soon

Tahmina😉

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Amna

@squishyhugs

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#816

OMG...that was amazing...seriously...your work is amazing...totally awesome!!!
That was a great part!!
loved it!!
...can't wait for the next part!!

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sanju

@Sanju_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#817

awww sangeeta di, i'm once agin speechless and totally in awestruck like armaan was on seeing riddhima. It was such an aweosme update...full of feelings, and love. I jsut want to find out how and when will armaan express his true feelings..and how will ridhdima react? and what about Riddhima's feelings? i guess, i'm getting over excited...hehee

i truly enjoyed reading it di..plzz update asap.

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noe23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#818

Hi Bheegi,

So sorry for not commenting on last two parts.

Coming to this part, Armaan..Armaan..what a character you have created! You want to hug him and smack him on the head at the same time! How can someone be so dense and how can someone be so giving? Again, Riddhima brings the best out of him.

This part seems to have hints about future.

"Imagine him at the prom'.ha ha'."

"No girl would say yes to him."

Armaan beta..you better hurry..verna Sid will trump you. You know I cannot guess anything about who will go with who in Prom, as Armaan is completely unpredictable.

Riddhima was kind of nonchalant in this part. Her ignoring Armaan's flings is due to the confidence ki laut ke buddhu ghar aayega..or is she drifting apart? Even while talking about Sid riding with her, she was giving gol-gol answers, instead of giving straightforward answer like he rides with me because... which would be her style. And, she knows Armaan enough to know where he was going with all those questions. Also, she didn't say anything about her knowing the fact that Armaan got the concert tickets till quite late. She even didn't inquire about him being absent from school for whole week 😕.

Hmm..Riddhima and journalism - interesting! Do I see them working for the same press - a journalist and a photographer?

So, now we know for sure that Armaan is writing these memories. His writing skills sure have improved since his middle school days 😉! May be, thanks to working with tough critique, Riddhima!

These two sometimes remind me of Landon and Jamie from 'A Walk to Remember' - my favourite Nicholas Sparks book. May be, because it is the only other teenage love-story that I have read. But, Landon was a lot quicker to understand and accept his feelings.

Wonderful update as always 👏! Thanks for the PM 😊.

Edited by noe23 - 15 years ago

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maanu

@maanu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#819

hi.....

after a long lon time.............

loved the the jay sean part...........

armaan seriously loves ridzi......... cant he see himsel doin so much for her......... and then also not realising...........

he seriously is totalu confused person.........

anji rihtly said..........

he is one confused person.................

i so liked sid oin with his sister........... that was too hilarious.................

prom........... going to br rocking..........

d0 continue soon......

thanks for thye pm

bye

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#820

hey di..nice part..

Armaan had started caring for Riddhima..n when he found out Sid was hanging out with her..he didn't like it..he talked to Anji n she told him to confess..but it wasn't that easy for him..

He worked really hard to get the tickets..n Shashank appreciated that..but when he asked Riddhima out..Shashank said no..aww..all is hard work for nothing!..

Sid had gone to the concert..n that had irritated Armaan a lot!..he banged his fist on the locker..n Ridz got worried..but he confirmed the truth from her..n was happy that she hadn't told her dad about the choking thing..

He needed good grades so he sat at home..n Ridz came to visit him..she helped him with the essay..n did at it such ease..im struck in the same situation as she is, about the education part!..i hope she finds a way out..Armaan took her to his room..n they just stared at each other for some time..how cute!..

Sid went to the concert with his sis?..lol..n Armaan thought they had gone together..lol.

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish