It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#301

Always i hate u Armaan nooooooooo i mean i Luv him how can i hate so cute so sweet jada hogaya sorry actually I luv Karan nah Ritu mar dalagi now stop all this

really rocking update di just came to check Ritu's pm and see ur one update so decided to read it and also replied coz den i don't get time but simple one reply no gift this time but di don't u think this time i too need a gift coz i have replied see i have 127PM including ur one but i have replied so sweet one di Armaan is rocling and Ridhima is too Nice so touching and so patience in her just love her from core of heart plz continue it soon actually after 6th so that i can't miss i know i m selfish even that's not possible coz i m afraid of sea den how thanks for the pm but i give u my new poetry

From Armaan "Sapno mein roaz aati hai woh,
Jane fir kahan chup jati hai woh,
Is Jism ki rooh hai woh,
Jane fir door hai kyun,
Is dil ko dhakhati hai woh,
Jane kyu sharmati hai woh,
Mujhe itna chahati hai woh,
Jane fir kyo chupati hai woh........" To Ridhima

From Ridhima "Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Chahe mera Pass nahi hai woh,
Fir bhi mera Saath hai woh,
Chahe main uski khwahish nahi ,
Fir bhi mera Jeena ki Aas hai woh.....

Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Chahe mujhse Door hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Rooh hai woh,
Chahai meri dhakhan nahi hai woh ,
Fir bhi mera jeevan hai woh,
chahe mera humsafar nahin hai woh,
phir be har lamha saath hai woh....

Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Bas mera dil ka ek Armaan hai woh,
Bas meri Jaan hai woh....." To Armaan

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Nina

@-Nina-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#302

I just soooooo loooved It

you decribe everything sooo welll 👏

Those small moments and all were just so cute i mean their moments i mean their teenager "moment" LOL

that chess and camera was just SUPERB

OMG he said that only because of tha stupid friend awww poor riddz 😭

And he HAD to choose between his rep and her ??!!!!!!!and he went wid his "cool dude rep" 😭

Poor riidz , I sooo looved this udpate its just soo brilliant 👏

Will be waititng for the next udpate 😉😃

Just hope that you'll update sooon 😳

Love, Nina ^^

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zeebo

@thatsroughbuddy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#303

Loveddd the update Bheegi! I love the emotions you put into each and everyone of your FFs! Especially the changes a teen goes through, you've explained that SO WELL! I hate when people think of their image as the most important thing in the world, now because of that...Riddhima's hurt. I can't wait to see what's next! Thank you so much for the PM! Continue soon!

Love,
Zaynah

Edited by Zaynoo2320 - 15 years ago

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@ammy-ridz

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#304

*EDIT*

(Flashback)

The Judge -Your Honour Bheegi shahiba arrives at the Court.

(The proceedings begin shortly)

(Ok so this case is against Defendent Shraddha.

Charges- Always reporting Late to comment on the latest ff by bheegi di.)

My Lord aka Bheegi di: Defendent! Do you want to say any thing in your defence?

Shraddha: Yes your honour.

Bheegi di: Permission granted.You may proceed.

Shraddha: Thank you your honour.*sniff*sniff* I have notthing much to speak in my defence BUT..... just some things.

Your Honour aap hi socho ek toh mujhe meri padhi troubling, uspar se Screen awards mein Shahid ke Anchoring, upar se flu ka mujhe attacking , baki bacha time kaha for commenting......for commenting....ea holding...asking for forgiving!!!!

The court room went silent for a few minutes after the confession.Shraddhas heartbeats doubled the rate. Every one was waiting for the Final Verdict and then...........

Bheegi di: Shraddha you will have to comment first and then I will decide what to do about u? Mar diya jaye ke Chod diya jaye Bol tere saath kya saluk kiya jaye???

(Flashback Ends)

So here I m to deliver my comment-

First of all

Hi di !!!(Wow!!! ...Finally I can call her that..yayyyyy)

Wonderful part di. Just adorable. Loved the way you showed the progress in their life and the changes and challenges they came across in growing years. Some things here have been described so aptly by u, that I don't feel the need to talk any more.

About Armaan-Riddhima having rekindled their friendship, who could be more happy than me And the whole A- story….I too have an optimist in me just like Armaan who wants to think what he wants to be the scenario.

"I know," you were annoyed, "I..I just don't like the teacher!" Your first sign of rebellion against your dad or did the math teacher remind you of what happened between us? Did you start hating your math teacher because he kicked me out of the school? I have always wondered, but perhaps will never know the truth. I bet you don't even remember it any more.

But , Alas! Things again Back to square one.

Like a game of chess, the battle lines had been drawn. Unfortunately, at that age, my image, popularity and reputation were under checkmate and like a traitor, I blurted out the most hurtful words from my mouth that day,

And Here I wanted to confess how much I have fallen in Love with Riddhima in this part specifically. I Just Loved the fact that she even after being a daddy's daughter can stand up for something she truly believes in…and secondly for her being an 'Indian Nerdy' as others claim her to be… here I think this is the place I have found where she Excels Armaan again. I can say that cauz I have always been a bit different in my life and a bit reserved and as a child and even through my initial college years I have always maintained my stance irrespective of the results good or bad. But what I always had with me is my 'Real Identity' which I still do and have managed to get every happiness in life. What I really want to say here is that 'If you want You to respect Your-self Let your-self, be the commander-in-chief (in Armaans language 'Take the charge') and follow your heart rather than adjusting your life and masking your identity to others wishes for the sake of fear of loosing something or greed of gaining something.' I know I m boring you with my jumbling..but I don't know I so strongly felt for this part that my fingers just itched to project the thoughts going on in my mind.

Ok Apart from this I wanted to mention some lines I loved here -

Surrounded by other 'bad boys' or 'troublemakers,' made my parents appreciate what a gem of a kid they had given birth to! (bade badahi na kare,bade na bole bol
rahiman hera kab kahe,lakh taka mero mol…I don't know why but this doha of Rahim was something which came to my mind after going through initial paras)

Somewhere deep down, my 10 year old heart was expecting gratitude from you, but instead you were back in my house after six months, just to call me a liar!

A lesson I learnt early in my life- have no expectations especially when you expect them the most (Although I don't completely agree with Armaan here..but still it is the best thing to do 'Some-times')

I know an A- was like failure for you and your dad, but to me your A- had in a weird way, made a connection with me that only an imperfect guy like me could relate to.

Attention seeker that I was, I cherished each moment of this hollow admiration (yeah hollow- although it took me years to realize how phony those licentious looks were from the opposite sex.) As my fan following exploded, so did my ego and over confidence

Overall a very Delightful part and again a Sutli bomb. Plzz continue soon.

Thanx and Love

Sai.(Awating for your verdict)

P.s- Plzzzzz di Maaf kar dio haan. Mein toh abhi nanhi muni rahi hoon sacchi...jyada nahi bas kuch das-gyara saal badi hoon mein apni 11 saal ke cousin se. 😛

Edited by ammy-ridz - 15 years ago

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#305

Oh god u shudve warned me about da puberty part lol. the last part had to be the best part... im beginning to like Ridz more nw she really has changed as in shes more confident nw i like dat.

Plz mke the nxt part longer and tnx for the pm.

Tahmina😉

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blessing-beauty

@blessing-beauty

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#306

Teenage boys and their mentality. Gosh. Im so much in love whe this FF dat i feel like reading it again n again. U described everything so nicely. Pls cont soon

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JAZZ_ACUA

@JAZZ_ACUA

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: Zaynoo2320
Loveddd the update Bheegi! I love the emotions you put into each and everyone of your FFs! Especially the changes a teen goes through, you've explained that SO WELL! I hate when people think of their image as the most important thing in the world, now because of that...Riddhima's hurt. I can't wait to see what's next! Thank you so much for the PM! Continue soon!<br><br>Love, <br> Zaynah<br>

I TOTALLY AGREE.
T JUST LOVED THE PART.
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON AND ADD ME IN YOUR PM LIST. PLEASE PM ME WHEN U UPDATE NEXT.

LOVE JIA

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riddhan

@riddhan

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#308

hey the part was fantastic have no words to describe but felt sad as wenever ar become friends something happens n one gets hurt n plzzzzzzzzzzzupdate soon the next part as m already anxious to know wat happens next

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ambreen

@-Amby-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#309

hey u r a amazing writer

veyr well written

i just hope ridhima understand armaan one day

he truly loves her from long

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sweetaddiction

@sweetaddiction

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#310

OMG-- this is like the first thing i've been cheking EVERY day for the last couple of days and today wen i cheked i was SOOO happyyyy (for obvious reason, ie the update)

soo good-- i loved the whole thing except for the last part-- bt well as u proved with the changing skls thing and with armaan's fall bad things lead to good ones so hopefully this one will too !

totally enjoying this whole ''from wen i was a kid til now thing'' and esp coz its from armaan's POV--

looking forward to the nxt update !!
take care. til nxt time =)

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