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Ivy

@Ivy9

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

@Ratika- thanks so much! m glad u liked it!

@Radz-Thanks! And ur right the interns r going to make it a lot more interesting!!!😉

@Fahi-Thanks so much for ur comments! enjoyed reading them!!!! and m glad ur enjoying the story so much!

@Mishu-thanks so much!!! glad u liked it! and yup...the plan is finally starting to take effect!

@Diya- thanks so much for reading it!! i'm glad ur enjoying it so much!!!

@Prietha- thanks so much!! m glad ur liking them so much!!! its addicting writing this story too!!!

@Zainab-thanks so much!!! and yup i miss the old AN just as much!!!

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Ditto100

@Ditto100

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Hey Ivy! 😊

Originally posted by: Erutan99

Niki: uh-huh sure...*brushes some straw out of Abhi's hair*

Abhi: *stares at Niki in surprise*
Niki: *looks up and freezes as she gets lost in his eyes*

I really love this picture! I can't remember who pointed this out - but I absolutely how both Abhi and Nikki are so caring towards each other, and it's just so natural 😳

Muskaan: Haha Niki, it landed on you.

Niki: *thinks to herself* Dang it! And the other end just had to stop on Armaan...he always picks the most horrible dares...and even worse truths!

Have to admit, when I read this my first thought was that Nikki would somehow be tricked into picking truth and then Armaan would ask her how she really feels about Abhi - but I'm so glad that didn't happen! Nikki and Abhi haven't realised (or if they have, then they aren't acknowledging it! 😆) their feelings towards each other. It would have been too fast and besides - we can't skip Nikki's sexy dance! 😉

Abhi: *stares back mesmerized*
Niki: *realizes the others r watching and pulls away* What? not sexy enough for u, Dr. Modi!

Loved this exchange in DMG and love it here too 😳. Nikki's retort = 👏

Great work. 😃

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Ivy

@Ivy9

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

@Ditto-thanks so much! I love reading ur comments; they make me really happy!!!

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Ivy

@Ivy9

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

~Back at Sanjeevani~

Armaan: *happily* So I convinced Dr. Modi to give Niki a ride home just now!
Atul: Really! That's great! But didn't she drive here hereself today?
Armaan: *indifferently* She did...so I helped her out by letting the air out of her tires.

Niki: *teasingly* Oh, come on! You know it was hilarious the way Sr. Lovely was flirting with u!
Abhi: *rolls his eyes and focuses on the road ahead*

Niki: *reaches over and tries to force Abhi to smile* Smile...smile...u know u want to!
Abhi: *annoyed* Stop it, Nikita!

*******

Niki: *shocked* Oh My God!
Abhi: *just as shocked* Wha-Niki!

Abhi: *quickly pulls on his shirt and starts buttoning it* Can't u knock?!
Niki: *blushes and looks away* S-sorry...

Muskaan: *excitedly* So I spilled coffee on Dr. Modi and convinced him to go into the supply room to change!
Anjali: Umm....and this is interesting because...?
Muskaan: I sent Niki into the room as well to go get some extra medicine!
Atul: Really...what happend?
Muskaan: Err...I'm not too sure....Dr. Keerti stopped me to ask about a patient and I couldn't follow....But I think it worked...cause a few minutes later Niki rushed past me and she was blushing really hard and looking extremely flustered!

*****

Abhi: Dr. Nikita...u know full well that calls are not allowed to be made during duty hours! *reaches to take the phone from Niki*
Niki: ...sigh....*mutters* Sadhu!

Abhi: *accidentally grabs her hand while taking the phone*

Niki: *freezes and stares in shock as electricity runs through her arm*

Niki: I need u to check this file for me, Abhimanyu.

Abhi: *reaches to take the file from Niki but freezes when their hands touch*
Niki: *freezes at the touch of his hand and becomes lost in his eyes*

Atul: U should have seen them! The two were totally lost in each others eyes for a good five minutes before Niki finally pulled away and Dr. Modi put down the phone!
Dr. Shubankar: Ahh, but u didn't see the way they were staring at each other while passing that file! For a second I thought Dr. Modi was going to pull Niki into his arms!
Anjali: This is great! Wait till Armaan hears!

*******

Niki: Abhi! Abhi, come on, quit it! Give it back! I was at the best part!
Abhi: One second...I want to see what's so interesting about this book too...u've been glued to it all day!

Niki: And....? *smirks coyly and takes a step closer to Abhi* ...not jealous are u Dr. Modi?
Abhi: *gulps in surprise as Niki slowly runs her hand up his shoulder*

Niki: *seductively* Don't be...*presses herself close to Abhi and slowly begins to reach for the book as she distracts Abhi with her nearness*
Abhi: *stares utterly mesmerized at the girl pressed up against him*
Niki: *whispers* ...but u know...u should really...give me my book back! *snatches the book and jumps back with a triumphant cry of victory*

Guppo: I think they're flirting....
Wardboy: *turns to Umar Bhai and whispers* they're flirting...
Umar Bhai: Huh? They're firting???
Nurse: *turns to wardboy behind her* Errr? They're firting?
Wardboy: *puzzled whispers to patient behind him* They're hurting!
Patient: *confused* Hurling? No, no u must have misunderstood...*turns to Rahul* They're twirling!
Rahul: *blinks in confusion* Twirling?! What do u mean they're twirling?

*****

Abhi: *whispers huskily* Dr. Nikita, what are u doing over here, hmm...
Niki: *looks up startled* Huh...? Um...I'm just waiting for Sr. Lovely to bring me a file....Why?

Abhi: Oh...so ur not waiting here for me, then?
Niki: *grins in amusement* Why? Am I suppose to be?
Abhi: Of course...I've told u before girls are always chasing after me...for all I know u could have been standing around here waiting for me to show up so that u could pounce on me...
Niki: Well if that's the case then why did u come up behind me? Shouldn't u have gone in the other direction the minute u saw me?

Abhi: *flirtatiously* Well now who said I didn't want u pouncing on me?
Niki: *blushes and gapes in amused shock at Abhi openly flirting with her*

Muskaan: *gleefully* Did u see that?!

Atul: I don't believe it!

Anjali: He's flirting with her!

*****

Abhi: Right, so I think we should start by-

*the lights go out*
Niki: *frightened* Hey! Who turned off the lights?! *panicked* Abhi!
Abhi: I'm right here, Niki!

Niki: *lets out a sob and throws herself into Abhi's arms in fear*
Abhi: *stares at her startled before slowly wrapping his arms around her*

Abhi: *forgets about everything but the girl in his arms and tightens his hold on her*
Niki: *calms down and relaxes feeling utterly safe*

Niki: *slowly pulls away and looks up into Abhi's eyes*
Abhi: *softly* u okay?
Niki: *just as softly* yeah....

Riddhima: *squeels* It worked!
Muskaan: Huh, really? I can't really see them...
Armaan: Well I can't see anything at all! Riddhima, whats going on in there?!

*****

Abhi: What's wrong, Niki? U've been fidgeting around all day.
Niki: Nothing...I'm just worried about the exams coming up...What if I don't pass? what if I have to repeat my internship?!
Abhi: *smiles reassuringly and slowly raises a hand to brush back Niki's hair and whispers* U'll pass...ur a better doctor then u realize...

Niki: *eyes flutter shut as she finds herself melting at his touch*

*******

Armaan: Part B of project SMN has been a total success...now its time to initiate Part C!
Atul: *looks confused* Part C? And there was a Part A?
Armaan: Stalking them was Part A.

******

Abhi: I know this may sound odd but have u been feeling watched lately?

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Edited by Erutan99 - 15 years ago

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

OMG IVY! That was hilarious! I loved it. Especially that last bit. I loved that last line of Abhi's. Something tells me they're going to find out, and play around with the interns.

Love,
Radz

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sweet-hiya

@sweet-hiya

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

well done.....
good job.........
keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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fahi

@fahi91

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Ivy i left then got ur pm so couldn't help but come back 2 read!! 😆

I love all the flirting and how close their getting!! 😃 This was so funny! 😆

I love this... its like chinese whispers!! 🤣 the answer is never the same at the end!! 😆😆 well done!! 👏

Abhi: *flirtatiously* Well now who said I didn't want u pouncing on me?
Niki: *blushes and gapes in amused shock at Abhi openly flirting with her*

Muskaan: *gleefully* Did u see that?!

Atul: I don't believe it!

Anjali: He's flirting with her!

this is defintely my favourite part!! 😃😃😃 fantastic!! and the caps match so well!! 👏 this is best part!! 👍🏼 oh and the fliritng bit with the chinese whispers!! 😆😆😆

Armaan: Part B of project SMN has been a total success...now its time to initiate Part C!
Atul: *looks confused* Part C? And there was a Part A?
Armaan: Stalking them was Part A.

So where is part B?? 😆😆😆

Abhi: I know this may sound odd but have u been feeling watched lately?

Oh no!!! Abhi is gonna figure it out? 😲 Ab kya hoga?? Hope he don't think Nikki is in on the plan....

Great job as usual Ivy!! 👏👏👏 Can't wait for ur next update.. thanks for doing it so quick!! 😃😃😃

btw.. do u make ur own caps?? cz they match perfectly with ur dialogues!! 👍🏼

ok am off nw!! goodnyt!! 😃

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fahi

@fahi91

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
OMG IVY! That was hilarious! I loved it. Especially that last bit. I loved that last line of Abhi's. Something tells me they're going to find out, and play around with the interns.

Love,
Radz

😲 is this whats gonna happen Ivy?? 😲😲 would love 2 see this!! 😃