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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Hi nice update.thanks!
i loved nidhi so much.
she is sooooo cute. but has a sharp tongue... like Nupur 😆
loved the whole part. thank you!
thanx 4 ur fantastic part. welcome
keep updating

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: rkmnkp
Awsome update desi girl
the song sequence waz fab thanks Lina!

and wow

Nupur still thinks about Mayu and her marraige

awwwww

so cute I know na!

and when Mayu almost hit Nidhi by his car

and their talking

was described so well. thank you!

Hah

I hate tests too same

lol

Nidhi is very mature you know

mein toh usse 1 sal bari hoon mein bhi, yet I still act like a 5 year old

but agar aasa mere saath hota

mein toh roh roh ke pagal ho jati. same

She is a very sweet.

Ok I do admit that this waz a little longer than others I know, worked on it so hard to make it long

but not long enough.

You know whatever you do

it won't be huge for me. of course it won't

lol

Just kidding

Hope you are feeling better now. thanks! still sick though

Awsome part

jab bhi free ho toh plez do update more you know my rule, but I'll be changing it around a little soon

totally love this part. thanks!

Mayur's marriage is awsome

like I imagine it would be. We think so alike 😆

;p

Miss talking to ya

Nikki. I know, I will come on the cc when I see you online or pm you

Hope you feel well soon. thanks!

-Lina-

-Desi girl-

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-Aicha-

@-Aicha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#163

@Nikki-yay! she will realize her mistake..and jaana, OF course i will like the part! hehe

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

Hey guys I really want to know your thoughts about this ff as it is my first ff and I just wanted to say that if you guys hate Nupur right now, you'll be feeling sorry for her after the next two parts. By the way, I might not make this ff as long as I thought it would. Also I'm really sorry if you think I'm dragging it too much but I'm just trying to make the fan-fiction a little longer but today is the premiere of Nupur's movie. Anyways enjoy!

Part 9- Today was the day. This was it. I knew that today was the day that I'm going to become a successful actress in the Bollywood industry. Tonight was the premiere of my first movie. Nothing was more important to me than that.

The premiere was at 7 p.m., sharp. I started to get ready at 5:30 p.m. My make-up artist came over and did my hair and make-up. She made my hair wavy and put on the usual make-up. One thing I didn't like was putting on way too much make-up; and my make-up/hair artist knew that so she put on enough, but not way too much. I had already put on the dress that Manish gave me and when I looked in the mirror, I felt like I was on the top of the world.

Nupur: Driver chalo

Driver: Okay, Nupur ji

Nupur: Arre hai, aap chale jao aur mere liye rukhna maat

Driver: Kyun?

Nupur: Mein thode dost ke saath hongi aur mere dost pe gari mein aa gati hu

Driver: Okay Nupurji

We arrive there and I come in, looking stunning, or at least what Karan told me. The reporters took pictures of me on the red carpet. Mayank was wrong. I'm going to be successful in life, and not alone. There are people asking for autographs on the sides and the security trying to block them away. I did sign a couple of people's papers. Then I saw a familiar face on the sides. It was Gunjan. I noticed that she had a diamond ring on, guessing that Samrat and Gunjan were already engaged.

Nupur: Gunjan?

Akshay and Twinkle come up to me.

Akshay: Nupur, tum yaha kyun rukh gayi chalo andar

Nupur: Ha chalo

I started walking and saw her trying to get through the crowd but I still walked in, feeling a little happy that Gunjan was there at my premiere. Then I remembered a time when we were little.

Flashback= Purple

I was playing with my little dolls with me being one of them, as a famous star when Gunjan came in. I was 6 and she was 4

N: Haan, mein Nupur, mein Shah Rukh Khan ke saath ek picture kaar rehi hoon

G: Di…

N: Hi meri ladli younger sister, when did you come here

G: Abhi di

N: Pata hai Gunjan, meri sirf do sapno hai

G: What are they?

N: That you get married and I become a movie star

G: But what about your wedding?

N: My wedding will happen, but I always want my sister to be happy, and never sad

G: If you're with me at my wedding, then I'm definately coming to your first premiere

N: Promise?

G: Promise.

***Flashback ends***

I got back into reality and took my special seat reserved for me at the premiere. Everyone had loved the movie and after it ended, they came up to me and congratulated me. People who I became friends with and I all went to celebrate.

We soon left and I wasn't that far away from my house so I told them to stop the car and I'll walk the rest of the way. While I was walking, someone grabbed me.

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

Edit down😆

Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#166

Nikki Nikki Nikki

OMG

this part waz fablous

and waz too good yaar

and about the flashbacks when they were kids😭

Wow Gunjan promised that if Nupzs comes to her wedding

then she will come to her premire.😭

I can't believe what Nupzs has become.😭

And did you say

that we will think that you are dragging this??????????

No you are not

this part waz mind-blowing.

Plez do update soon.

Can't wait for the next part

and I'm wondering who is the person who grabbed her hand in the end,

Yaar

too much going in my head right now.

plez do continue soon.

Wil be waiting

and yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I am the first to comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

Nikki Nikki Nikki

OMG

this part waz fablous

and waz too good yaar thanks!

and about the flashbacks when they were kids😭

Wow Gunjan promised that if Nupzs comes to her wedding

then she will come to her premire.😭A promise is a promise

I can't believe what Nupzs has become.😭agree

And did you say

that we will think that you are dragging this??????????

No you are not Okay, thanks I wanted to know

this part waz mind-blowing.

Plez do update soon.

Can't wait for the next part I'm updating Monday cause the end for this is a cliff hanger

and I'm wondering who is the person who grabbed her hand in the end,

Yaar

too much going in my head right now. I know

plez do continue soon.

Wil be waiting on Monday

and yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I am the first to comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!We should party now for your achievement 😆

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

I know na

we should party

I feel so proud right now🤣

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#169

hi nikkie

hmm it was an FABULAS update as usuall and c'mon nikkie i love ur fan fiction like anything so y r u asking again if u want to here it comes UR FANFICTION IS FABULAS AMAZING AWESOME LOVELY INTERTING DRAMATIC REALITY LOVELY POTARTED AND AT LAST this words too small to describe ur fanfiction 😃 well today part was small but i loved it to the core hmm aww u fan fiction is on end oh no 😭 😭 😭 plz yeh fac fiction ho jaye toh nayi shuru karna par sajan par as u know im sajan die hard fan lol 😆 anyways tum jo chaiya us par fan fiction likhna par as soon as this ff get finish start new one as u r a greatest ff writter hmm bas fil waqt ka liye itna hi next update mai bataungi aur kya kehna chati hoon kyun ki abhi yaad nahi aa raha 😆 😆 😆 ok than plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon and atlast thanxxxxxxxxx for the pm aur waise nupur ka haath kisna pakda last mai anyways if u dont want to revel its ok as i can understand 😊 ok byeeeeeeeeee kuch zyada hi bol diya hai ok ok byeeeeeeeeeeee tc.

with love!!!!!!!!!

sana!!!!! 😃 😉 😳

Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#170

hi nikki,
awesome update as usual.
loved it so much.
flash back part was so cute.
but who grabbed nupurs hand?
hope it could b mayank.
thanx 4 ur nice update
u r fabulous, amazing writer dear.
u should continue it and write more ff.

love u and ur ff.

take care

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