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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
ok dear naya fan fic....naya story bariya hai.... 😉

lakin aaaaaaa 😡 ya wala boolna jana.... 😆 😆 so plzzzzz continue.... 😛

ooooooooo....comment danahi too bhool gaya....noor di...u r supperb ⭐️ ⭐️ ..mashallah u write gr8 story 👍🏼 ...lov ur fan fic 😎 👏 ...ya kaho ki mujhe asa laga ki main sach main hi kyph serial ka updates para hai tha.... 😆 u r rock dear 👏 ....luuuuuuu ❤️ uuuuuuuuuvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuu 🤗 ...n ur story.... 👏 so plzzzzzzzz continueeeeeeeeee
........ 😉 sara expressions lakar bathi hoooo.....post next part.... 😆 😆 ok dear nice 2 meet wid u noor di....bio dakha.....gr8 shaadi ka baat kara.....i hav a praaaa.....shuld i call him n set wid u......😆j/kiddin.....plzzzz don't mind.....😳😆
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Edited by farahrabbi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
SALAM GUYS....hi ....hope ur r all fi9...iam come back after 2 days ....i was in fever isi leay continude nahin kar saki.....thnx thnx thnx thnxthnx alotzzzz 4 commint ok now iam write next part of taht fan fic
NEXT PART
kripa or angad dono reharsal hall say bhir atay hain.....angad says
a:-kripa main tumhain 15 min main pik karta hon dadi k ghar say um tayar rahna
k:-ok i'll be ready....n leav
a:-love u kripa alotssssss
IN DADIZ HOUSE
k:-dadiiiiiiiiiiii
d:- han baita??
k:- dadi i'll have to go goa wid zaib
d:-abhi??
k:- g dadi abhi
d:-ok apna khyal rakhna
k:-ok dadi.....and kripa go in her room...
kripa is ready n waiting 4 angad(zaib)
k:- 😡 15 min ka kaha tha adha ghanta ho gaya ahy
d:-baita chkar kion laga rahi ho??
k:-kuch nahin dadi itni dair ho gai hay magar zaib ka kuch pata hi nahin
itnay main hi door bell bajti hay
d:-loo agay
k:-open da door... 😡 itni dair say tumhara intazar kar rahi hon kahan rah gay thay???
z:- maira 😛
k:- 😕 nahin chaloo ab dair ho rahi hay
d:- 😃 kripa bayta main nay tum dono k leay chocolate cacke banaya tha sath hi lay jao rastay main kha layna
k:-dadi iss ki kia zarorat thi>>
z:-kion nahin mujhay to bhok lagi hay
k:-tum to har waqt kuch na kuch khatay hi rahtay ho
z:-ab dair nahin ho rahi kia???
k:- chaloo
k-z:- ok dadi byeeeee
d:-byee apna khyal rakhna ...and thay both r leave
dadi think hameesha aisay hi khush rahooo 😊
IN CAR
z:-kripa cacke kahan hay iam just hungry
k:-peechay para hay
z:- plz mujhay day doo
k:-ok...kripa serve the cacke
z:-main khaonn kaisay i swair bohat bhook lagi hay
k:-hathon say orr kaisay
z:-phir gari kon chaly ga....aik kam karo tum aik aik bite mairay moonh main dall do plzzzzz
k:-hain?????? 😡 damgh khrab hay kia??
z:-plz kripa iam soo hungry
k:-think kia karoon???? and she is so nervous 😕 ...
z:- plz jaldi karoo warna main mar jaon ga ...aik dafa aisay hi mairay dost k sath hoa tha
k:-kia hoa tha??
z:-who or us ki wife goa ja rahy thay...isi rastay pay usay bhook lagi ....us nay apni wife say kaha mujhay bhook lagi hay plzzz mujhay khila doo....us ki wife us say naraz thi us nay nahin khuilaya...
k:-phir(kripa dar rahi hay)
z:-phir kia beechara yahin mar gaya bhook say
k:-uss ki biwi??
z:-uss ki rooh nay usi time usay bhi yah kahtay hoay mar dea k......tum nay mujhay bhoka mara hay tum bhi maroo....zaib aik dam gari rokta hay or pait paker layta hay...or kahta hay..........kripa muhy kia ho raha hay??..kahainmain bhi apbay dost ki tarhan ohh God
k:-plz zaibb kia ho raha hay 😭
z:- 😉 main mar raha hon shyad bhook say...plz jaldi say mujhay khila do bcz mairay hathon pairoon main say jan nikal rahi ahy
k:-ok main tumhain kuch nahin honay don gi ..or usay cacke khilati hay
z:- 😆 kripa tum bohat immoshional ho
k:- 😡 yah drama karnay ki kea zarorat thi??.....agar tumhain kuch jata to main zinda kaisay rahti angad ...kripa ko khyal ata hayyah angad nahin zaib hay...she look at him eid teary eyez....sory
z:-its ok
they r reached goa
IN HOTAL
kripa n zaib reseption say roomz ki key laytay hain
r:-soory maim aik room hi availible hay
k:-kia matlab hay???tumhain vicky nay phon pay nahion kaha kia?
r:-no main
k:-look at the zaib..ab kia karain??
z:-chalo ab kia ho sakta hay???aik hi room main adjust kartay hain
k:-nahin aisa nahin ho ga 😡
z:- ok tum jaoooooo
k:-main janti hon tumnay hi vicky ko msg karnay nahin dea
z:-miss muhay koi shok nahin hay aisa kam karnay ka....tum kia samjhti ho apnay app ko???tum kia samjhti ho main tumharay sath aik hi room share karon ga ??
k:-go too hell
z:-u2
kripa room main jati hay..usay khayal ata hay k main galat kar rahi hon who pata nahin kahan ho ga kuch nahin hota ...kripa room say bahir ati hay..resption main ati hay..or kahti hay...mr.zaib kahan hain???
r:-who bahir hain
k:- ok .....who bhir ati hay.......or daikhti hay k..zaib barish main bheeg rha ahy.
k:-tum yahan kia kar rahy ho????
z:-kuch nahin tumhain kia hay
k:-andar chalooo
z:-nahin
k:-chaloo ab
z:-kia hay tumharay sath masla????ok chalooo
z:- aaachoonn...aaachhoonn
k:-daikha kitni chenkain aa rahi hain
z:-tumhari wajha say
k:-tum aisa karoo tum thora brandy pee looo
z:- 😛 kia???tum larki ho kar aisi batain kar rahi hoo??? 😆
k:- 😡 main tumhain kia kahon ab????chaloo pee looo shabashh......
z:-ummmm ok
k:- 😊 good..ary tumhain bukhar hay...kripa ussay litati hay...uss ka dopata zaib k caim main atak jata hay
or koi pikss layta hay un dono ki
IN MORNING
kripa chaloo uthoo breakfast kar lo
z:-umm abhi uthta honn
k:-dair ho rahi hay jaldi utho main nokar nahin hon
z:- phir yah kion kia hay??? 😊
k:-pata nahin...look at the zaib wid tereay eyyez
z:-acha chaloo
knock knock
k:-kon??
waiter:-maim yah newzpaper
k:-ok....she open the door.....and take newzpaper
z:-dekhao mujhay
k:-yah lo mujya parhnay ka koi shok nhaihn hay
zaib newzpaper main daikhta hay..
z:-kripa yahan aoo
k:-kionn tumhari tangay nahin hain hain kia?
z:-ian seriuos yah daikho iss main kia hay
k:-see n shocked 😲 ....yah tum nay kia hay na???
z:-g nahin
itnay mian dadi ka phon ata hay
d:-hello kripa yah kia hay newzpaper main
k:-i dont know 😭
d:-jo bhi hoa bohat bura hoa ab tum zain say bat karaoo
k:-ok
z:-hello dadi
d:-baita jo hoa achanahin hoa..ab tum logon ko shadi karnai hay
z:-nahin kripa yah nahin chahay gii ..ok byeeee
kripa:- kia kaha dadi nay
z:-unhon nay kaha hum dono ko shadi karni chaeay
k:-zaib ko thapar marti hay...yah tumhara[plain thana
z:-nayhin tum mujhay galat samjh rahi ho
k:-leave the room....mandir jati hay
z;-us k peechay aata hay.........kripa??
IN MANDHIR
kripa ko daikh k sab tarhan tarhan ki batain kartay hain peechay say aajata hay
z:-kripa ko dait=khta hay she is weeping......zain gusay main aa kar sindor kripa ki mangg main laga dayta hayy
k:-is shoked 😲
privew:- kripa n zaib reached mumbaii
to be continude............
ok guysss its long part of taht story here... 😊 hope aap logon ko pasand aey gi ok mairay paper honay walay hain plz mairay leay dua keejeay ga....main kal iss ka next part likhon gi innshallah
ok guyzz byeee...take carezzzzzz
luv u allllllllllllllllllllllll...and thnx 4 the riviewz
luv u alllll
byeeeee
take carezzzzz
FROM:- NOOR ZAHRAH 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
hi dear guyzzzzz.....hope u r all fi9 plz yar read my fan fic plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😊
luv u alllllll
FROM :- NOOR ZAHRAH-
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
i'm waitingg and now i'm tired so plz continue soon🥱


love you laiba 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
wow...can't wait for the next part noor...plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
slamm.....hii.....namestay
hope u all guyz are fi9
main apnay fan fic ka next part continue kar rahi hon plz plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzz raed it .....or agaer koi kami hay to plz tell me....ok i write the next part
IN MANDER
kripa is shocked to see k zaib nay uss ki mang main sindoor bhar dea.....zaib leave the mandir....and calling dadi
z:-dadi main nay kripa say shadi kar li
d:- what????
z:-han dadi yahan halaat bohat biger gay thay
d:-jo hoa acha hoa tum kripa ko lay k wapis mumbai aooo..main yahan tamam tayari kar k rakhti hon yahan tum dono ki shadi ho gi wid full swing
z:-ok dadi hum mumbay pohanchtay hain...ok byee
in mandir
kripa is shoked n think yah kia ho gaya????????aisa nahin hona chaeay tha.......yah kia ho gaya...ohh angad kash tum hotay to yah sab na hota and weep 😭
z:-come in mandir....and say....chaloo kripa main nay dadi ko phon kia tha chaloo wapis...and take her sholderz
k:-dont touch meeeeee.......plz dont touch me
z:-plz kripa chaloo yahan say
k:-look at zaib wid teary eyezz..ok chalooo
they both r reached mumbaiii....and also reached daddiz house
IN DADDI HOUSE
dadizz house is ful decorated....zaib and kripa inter the house
dadii:-ary aa gay tum logg 😊
k:-dadi yah sab kia ho gaya 😭
d:-baita jo hota hay achay k leay hota hay ab main ajj sari dunya kay samnay tum dono ki shadi karoon gi
k:-shocked ..magar dadi yah sab 😕
dadii:- bayta mujhay zaib nay phon pay sab kuch bata dea tha.....kripa and daddi hug each other
z:-ok dadi ab main chalta hon
d:-ary ary tum kahan ja rahy ho tumhari to ajj shadi hay
z:- 😊 ha daddi laykin us k leay tayari bhi to karni hay
d:-uss ki fiker tum nahin karoo....kripa ko room main lay jaoo
z:-g daddi
IN EVENING
kripa dulhan ban k ghasab ki haseen lag rahi hay.....aaahan magar hamara angad o o angad nahin zaib bhi kam nahin lag raha 😊
pandit says:- dulha or dulhan ko bulain
k-z(a):-they both r sit
mantar has been start
khairoo afeat say dono ki shadi ho gaiiiii
dadi and angad (zaib) both r raely happy...but kripa is sad
IN ANGAD KRIPAZ ROOM
zaib come on the room wid smily face 😊
z:-kripa kabhi nahin soocha tha k tum say shadii yoon iss tarhan ho gi...but jo hota hay achay k leay hota hay
k:- plz zaib main abhi .......
z:-han main samjh gaya ...koi bat nahinnn main intazar karoon ga
k:-sorry zaib main nay tumhain galat samjha
z:-its ok tum bed pay soo jao main soofay pay soo jata hon
IN MORNING
kripa is wake up early in the morning and go to bath room.......she looked sindoor on her her forhead in mirror...she think kash angad tum hotay
kripa take shower and come in her room
kripa :- ohh God yah ab tak soo raha hay.....zaibb uthooo
recording pay jana hay uth jaooo
z:-sonay do na kripa plzzzzz
k:-no way jaldi uth jaoooo.....main abhi ati hon jab tak tum uthoo
z:-ok
kripa leave the room and go to kitchen and prepeard tea
of 2 cups after that she inter the room and look zaib is sleping
k:-scream OHHHH God zaib uth jaoo itni dair ho gai hay mujhay aadat nahin hay bar bar main kisi ko uthaonn uth jao ab plz ....agar tumhari chaeay thandi ho gai too main dobara gram karnay nahin jaon gi ok
z:- open his eyez and look kripa wid noughty style..
ohh God kripa tum nay mairay leay chayy banaiii...jaldi say ambulance ko phon karoo...bcz isay peenay k bad pata nahin main zinda bhi rahon ya nahin 😆 😉
k:- 😡 dafa ho jao tum mat peena ab yah chaeyy
z:- 😃 ary main to mazak kar raha tha..say and take tea
kripa apni warddroob main say kapray select kar rahi hoti hay..zaib is k pass ata hay and say kia ker rahi hoo
k:-din main dikhai nahin daita kapray nikal rahi hon bcz recording pay jana hay dair ho rahi hay
z:-mairay bhi nikall do na plzzzzzzzzzz 😳
k:-kion khud nahin nikal saktay kia:?
z:-mujhay dair ho rahi hay
k;-kia main farigh hon
z:-plzzzzzzzzz yar nikal do na itnay nakhray kion kar rahi ho
k:-ok...or apnay kpray nikalnay lagti hay
z:-aik baat kahonn
k:-han bolo
z:-plz apnay leay kapray mujhay nikalnay do
k:- 😕 😡 khud k kapray nikalnay ka waqt to nahin tha tumharay pass
z:-plzzzzzzz
k:-ok
zaib kripa k leay red and golden combination ki sarri select karta hay or kahta hay
z:-yah tum pay bohat sout karay ga
k:-mujhay nahin pahnna yah
z:-feeling sad 😒 .....ok as u like and he leane
IN NEXT SCENE
they both r reached studio....all r happy to see zaib and kripa togahter
in dono ko song gana hay (ben jaeay isss dil k mahman ban jaey from movie silsly)
NOW SHOTING IS START
z(a):- har taraf rawan aap ka hi nasha
choo gai dill ko aap ki her ada
k:- ban jaeay iss dil k mahman mahman ban jaey
ban jaeay in sansoon k arman arman ban jaeay
z(a):- hay hay hay hay hay...
ban jaeay iss dil k mahman mahaman ban jaeay...................................
ok guysssss i'll have 2 goo bcz its my tution time dearz
plz pray 4 me
privew :- on beach kripa try to suside aur zaib usay thapar marta hay or he tell her k he is not zaib he iss angad........and kripa is shocked 😲
ok guysss take carez all of u
luv u allllll
byeeee
FROM NOOR ZAHRAH 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
😃 finalyy i'm so happy shaadi ho gayi
Laiba
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
YO YO NOOR ...GOING GR8 ........ 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
please continue fast. I want to know what happens next. Please. 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
oooohhhh god sis u r amaizing tumhain to award milna chahy 👏

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