fan fic of after that kripa knows abt.... - Page 2

salamm ///namestay///hello
gyuss lagta hay aap logon ko mairi story achi nahin lag rahii......agar aisa hay to plz tell me main apni story ka theem change kar don 😭
issi leay main agay likh k post nahin kar rahiii

nice story Noor!!!

ur story is kinda sad but I like it

wow really nice con soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hi guyzzzz main thora diss hard ho gai thi but its ok main jari rakhon gi 😊
In next scene
kripa directer ko kahti hay i'll have 2 go bcz dadi ka phon aya hay
d:- ok u my go now hum bad main reharsal kar lain gay
kripa :- ok byeee c u again
angad(zaib):- yah kahan gai ??
d:- dadi ka phon tha ghar say
a:-ok
In dadi house
kripa inter the house and say:- kia hoa dadi r u all right itna achanak phon kia app nay??
dadi:- iam ok bayta ,agaraik baat kahna hay tum say main chahti hon k angad ko baykasoor sabit kia jay
k:-who kaisay dadi main bhi yahhi chahti hon....but how can it poosible??
d:-baita hum JOSH murdercase phir say reopen karain gay main nay shabeer say baat kar li hay...hi is agree wid me
k:-ok dadi main bhi yahi chahti hom main shabeer say baat karti hon abhi ja kar
d:- ok baita
kripa reached shabeer house
k:- hi shabeer
s:-tum yahn kia kar rahy ho?? 😡
k:- 😕 i know main galat thi magar main bhi chahti hon k angad pay laga yah ilzam dhul jay
s:-tum aisa kab say chahnay lagin ....infect tum nay hi to ussay phansaya tha 😡
k:- plz shabeer hum who bat nahin karain gay ab main bohat sharminda ho.....kash angad mujhay muaff kar day...or tum bhi plz
s:-main yah case sirf dadi k kahnay pay laron ga or han pahlay ki tarhan apna bayan badal na dayna
k:-look at him wid teary eyez n say ohh shabeer plz forgive me
s:-its ok main aaj hi cort say bat karta hon do din tak humain tareekh mil jay gi
k:-thnx alots shabeer
s:-who maira bhi dost tha kripa...khair tum apna khyal rakho
k:-ok byee...n leave.....after that kripa calling dadi k dadi kam ho gaya hay 2 din tak date mil jay gi
d:- ok tum ghar kab aa rahi ho?/
k:-1 houre tak
d:-ok n take care ur self
k:-ok...n off her mobile....phir kripa beach pay jati hay
wahan rait pay baith kar soochti hay angad k baray main k kiss tarhan hum milay thay....at the moment who daikhti hay.....samnay aik couple hay jo gola icecreem kha rahy hain same like kripa angad...who apnay guzray hoay lamhon ko yah kar k muskurati hay...magar achanak usay khyal ata hay k angad is no more who phir say udaas ho jati hay ,,,ankhain band kar k kahti hay kashhh angad tum wapiss aa jao......or jaisay hi apni ankhain kholti hay samnay daikhti hay k zaib aa raha hay aik pal k leay samjhti hay angad hay phir dosray hi pal she is weeping 😭 ......
zaib us kay pass ata hay....kripa usay kahti hay
k:-tumhain chain nahin hay tum maira peecha kion nahin chrtay
z:- 😡 mujhay koi shook nahin hay magar tum apna perss reharsal haal main bhool aai thi ....main tumhara peecha kartay kartay yahan tak aa gaya
k:- thnx....or uth k jany lagti hay
z:- main tumhain drop kar don
k:-no thnx...i'll be maneged mairay pass gari hay
z:- ok as u wish 😊
now leave after that 15 min kripa kahti hay mujhay bhi chalna chaeay.....who apni gari k paas aati hay magar daikhti hay k tyre punkture hay....kripa think ohh God ab kia karonn???...samnay say zaib ata hay or apni gari main baith k chala jata ahy
k:-ab kia karon gi main khair taxi laytai hon...kripa taxi ko awaz dayti hay magar koi taxi nahin atii...aik gari aa kar kripa k pass rukti hay.....uss main zaib hota hay
z:-akhri bar pooch raha hon drop kar don kahin
k:-no thnx
z:-kia masla hay tumharay sath??...baith jao foren
k:- 😕 kripa confused but gari main baith jati hay...or sochti hay ary kion baith gai main
z:-kahan drop kana hay???
k:-main btati hon
z:-ok
kripa zaib ko rasta btatti hay..after that reached dadis house...kripa says thnxxxx....or jab utarnay lagti hay to uss ka dopata seat main atak jata hay
kripa :-yah kia harkat hay zaib..leave my dupata...zaib i sad leave..magar yah kia aib uss k braber main khra hota hay
z:-kitni selfwsh ho ander any ko nahin kaho gi??
k:-ohh God aik lift kia lay li ..hay peechay hi par gaya....iss say pahlay kripa kuch bolay zaib says ok main chalto hon...or gari main baith k us ka dupata nikalta ahy.....n sayz byeeeee... and leave
k;-pata nahin kia samjhta hay khud ko 😡
kripainter the house
d:-baita itni dair kaha laga di main pareshan ho gai thi??
k:-dadi main beach pay chali gai thi...pata hay dadi main or angad aksar wahan jayah kartay thay...say n weep 😭
d:-huuh baita choro yah sab chaloo khana kha loo...phir dawai lay k soo jao..bcz subha reharsalz pay jana hay.
k:-ok dadi....at the moment kripa k mobile ki bell hoti hay...
k:-hello
iam ur directer vicky here
k:-yeh mr vicky
v:-aap k ley aik buru khabar hay
k:-what???
ok dearz i'll have 2 goo now main inshaallah cont.karon gi kal
privew:-kripaz talking wid zaib ...
ok guyzz byeeeee
take carez luv u allll
from noor zahrahh 😊

noor .................gr8 ....... 👏

THEN WUT HAPPENED? 😕

where r u me waiting for next part ji! 😉

Hey Zahrah that was too good..pls cont soon....I wanna read more.................pls write soon............ur story is so much better than the show............. 😛 😛

HI GUYZ:-
H R U ALL???HOPE U ARE ALL FI9...AIK BAAT BATAON AAP LOGON KO MAIN BOHAT ZEADA DISHEARD HO GAI THI MAIN LIKHNA NAHIN CHAHRAHI THI MAGR THX TO CUTI_FACE..AND ALL OF U K AAP LOGON KO MAIRA YAH FAN FIC ACHA LAGA THXXXX ALOTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.....OK NOW I WRITING THE NEXT PART HOPE AAP SAB KO PASAND AEY 😊 😳
NEXT PART......
kripa recived the phone n say :- hello
vicky kripaz directer:- hello kripa
k:-kia hoa vicky iss waqt phon kia tum nay??
v:-aik buri khabar hay??
k:-what??
v:- hamray orgniserz nay kaha hay k agar kripa ka show zaib k sath nahin hoa to yah show nahin ho ga...main nay un say kaha hay k tum aik pop singer rahg chuki ho..yahan tak k winning comiption bhi...magar unhon nay kaha....k kripa nay beech main gana chor dea tha agar ab who zaib k sath gay gi to show zeada hit ho ga
k:-tum nay kia kaha????
v:-main nay kia kahna hay main nay kaha k main kripa say bat kar lon..
at the moment dadi come in the kripaz room
d:-kia hoa kiss ka phon hay
k:-vicky main abhi tumhian dobara phon karti hon ok and disconect the phon......dadi aik buri khabar hay
d:-kia hoa baita??
k:-dadi vicky ka phon tha ...n kripa say aal of the thing jo vicky nay kaha.
d:-ab kia karo gi??
k:-main mana kar don gi dadi
d:-kion ??
k:-dadi who mujhay angad ki yad dilata hay 😒
d:-baita daikho yah tumharay carear ka sawal hay
k:- but dadi!!!!
d:-baita kia tum angad ka khwab poora nahin karo giii??
k:-theek hay dadi jaisa app chahain...and hug to the dadi.....and dialthe vickyz no.........and say unn orgnisorz ko han kar dooo..or zaib say mairi meeting rakhoo kal subha ki.
v:-ok
k:- disconect the phon and think about angad...who haseen yadainn....and backgound music is start....
who lamhay who batain koi na janay
thin kaisi yadain..hooooooooo
barsatain...who bheegi bheegi yadainnn.......
after that kripa realised gilt on her self....she weeping n saying angad plz forgive me....and say main tumharay name par say yah khonni honay ka dhba utrwa kar raho giiii....and she take medesen and sleep
In the Morning
kripa getup and take shawar....she wair lose shalwar & kameez...aur neechy aa kay kahti hay dadi main shabeer say milnay ja rahi hon
d:-magar baita yah breakfast to kar looo..
k:-nahin dadi bohat dair ho gai hay mujhay reharsal pay bhi jana hay main wahan hi kuch kha loon gii and says byee n take catrez
d:-ary kripaaa suno to
k:- no dadi byeee 😛
kripa reached shabeer house
s:-kripa aik good news hay hamain date mil gai hay..kal faisla ho jay ga
k:-look at the shabeer wid teary eyez and say...thnx shabeeerrrr..ur such a tru frnd..ok main kal pohanch jaoon gi
s:-ok byee and take care
kripa says byee and leave
Next scene
dadi angad ko phon karti hay or kahtin hay :-baita kripa pohanchi???
a:-no dadi abhi nahin
d:-ok who kuch kha k nahin aai usay kuch khila dayna
a:-aap fiker na karainnn
d:-ok byee and take carez
a:-love u dadi byee 😊
kripa inter the reharsal halll
k:-vickyy meeting kahan fix ki hay??
v:-yahan hi abhi
k:-zaib kahan hay??
v:-who room main hay u can goo
k:- ok n leave
she inter the room and says:-heloo
z:-hi 😡 ....main yahan noker baitha hon kia tumhara itna farigh time nahin hay mairay pass ok itna late ohh God
k:-sorry mujhay kuch impotent kaam tha isi leay dair hoo gaiii
z:-itss ok....kia kahna tha tum nay??
k:-who tum jantay ho na k humaray show ko ab zeada din nahin hay isi leay main cahti hon k hum work hard karainn
z:-i know
k:-ok chaloo
z:-kahan?? 😕
k:- reharsal karnay or kahan? 😡 ..abhi to kaha tha
z:-han magar mujhay to bohat bohat bhook lagi hay pahlay kuch kha lainn 😕
k:-uuuu.....ok tum khaoo main ja rahi hon
z:-aisay nahin ja sakti agar tum mairi partner ban hi gai ho to chaloo ab khanay main bhi maira sath dooo 😆
k:- 😕 kia??..mujhay bhook nahin hay
z:-khana to paray ga madem 😊
k:- 😲 ary yah to roab hi jama raha hay???
z:-zeada mat soochgo dair ho rahi hay
k:-ok...n take jouse
z:- 😛 hahahhaha
k:-kia masla hay?? 😕
z:- main nay dodh ki monchain to daikhi then magar tumhari to dodh ki monchain nikal aai hain 😃
k:- 😊 iss main hansnay ki kon si bat hay ....chup chap khaooo
z:- 😃 ok
k:- hahahha 😆
z:- ab tumhain kia hoa hay??
k:-mujhay to bara kah rahy thay aaenay main apni skakal daikhoo...mairi to khali moonchain thin tumhari to darhi bhi sath hay 😛
z:- 😕 iss main hansnay ki kia baat hay ...sath sath khud bhi hans parta hay 😃 ...n thiking main tumhain aisay hi hansatay hoay daikhna chahta ho kripa
k:- while laguing kripa aik dam say chup ho jaty hay ...or angad ko yad karti hay
z:-kia hoa ab chaloo bhi
k:-han chaloo
zaib and kripa perform on sholon si shlon si
the music start
sholon si sholon si.....tayri ankhon ki yah rooshni
kiss k leay hay..kiss k leay hay??....
zaib same ngad waly steps layta hay...kripa is shocked 😲
k:-yah tum iss tarhan perfom!!!!!
z:-han main janta hon kay tum kia sooch rahi hooo....main nay angad ka video daikha tha...and yah maira bhi fav rocking song hay
k:-look at zaib ...and think mujhay kion lagta hay yah abgad hay????
now shoting is finished....they both r leave the reharsal haull
k:-mairi gari kahan hay
gatekeeper:-who aap ki dadi aai thin who lay gaii hain
k:-dadi yahan aai thin or mujhay milin bhi nahin
z:-koi bat nahin chaloo main tumhain drop kar don
k:-nahin main chali jaon gi
z:-raat bohat ho gai hay baat man loooo
k:-hmmmm.....ok chaloo
zaib drop her on dadiz house
dadi gate pay hi hoti hain
d:-ander aaao baita zaib tum kal bhi chalay gay thay aa jao
z:-nahin ajj nahin bohat rat ho gai hay anty
d:-tum bhi mujhay dadi kah saktay hoo......and look at the kripaz sad face
z:-ok dadi ab main chalta hon......dadi may i kiss u on ur forhead??
d:-ab grandson kaha hay to y not?
z:- ok...he kiss on dadiz forhead....and say byee and leave
Next scene in Morning
kripa get up....n take shawer or neechay aa kar kahti hay k dadi chalin aaj angad k case ki sunwai hay
d:-ok..
they both r reached court...after that some time....kuch gawioon k bad court apna faisla angad k hak main sunati ahy....aur us say moafi magti ahy
kripa and dadi they both r happy
kripa think:-kash koi miss understanding na hoi hoti tum aaj mairay sath hotay angad
d:-kripa kiss soch main par gai chaloo sahbeer wait kar raha ho ga
they r reached of shabeer
k:-thnx shabeeer
s:-yah maira farz tha kripa
In next scene
damini is reaced mumbai and think ab tumhain main zaib k sath badname kar doon gi
phir tumhain uss k sath shadi karni paray gi or mujhay bohat khushi ho gi k tum apnay pyar k hamshakal k sath ho gi magar usay apna nahin kah sakoo gi kabhi 😈
In next scene
vicky ka phon ata hay
v:-kripa abhi isi waqt reharsal hall main aao
k:-ok i'll be there
kripa reached reharsal hall and see zaib wahan pahlay say mojood hay
k:-kia hoa itna urgent bulaya
v:-tum dono ko abhi k abhi Goa k leay nikalna paray ga
k:-magar is waqt 😕
z:-han iss waqt??? 😊
v:-han bcz tum dono ki photo shoting abhi baqi hay jo hamain parsoo tak chaeay
k:-ok
z:-ok....main 15 min main tumhain pik karta hon dadi k ghar say
k:-ok
after taht when thay both r leave...vicky k pass phon ata hay
v:-han kam ho gay maim 😊
d:-hmm Good
to be conti.....................
OK GUYSS YAH tha next part umeed hay aap sab ko pasand aey ga
previw:- damini apnay maqsad main kamyab ho jati hay...un dono ka scandle ban jata hay...magar kripa zaib ko kasooor war tahrati hay...magar sachai jannay k badd uss say sorry karti hay....dadi in dono ko shadi karnay ka kahti hain....kia kripa razi ho gi?????????
ok dearz byeee and take carez all of u......and i luv u allllll
byeeee
from NOOR ZARHAH 😊

very nice 👏 👏 👏