New ff *UNEXPECTED LOVE*[Mayur]-upd8 part 14 pg 51 - Page 35

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

I loved this part...........bt the accident😭........................and the the way u didnt pm me.......😭😭😭...............
😭

Originally posted by: mjht_fan

nice update

but wat the hell just happened

im scared now

anyways plz update soon

Originally posted by: mayur.forever

part 11- just loved the way nupur enjoyed d house even though d house was not so gud....nupur is a chocolate pie😆 and mayank is not bad too.....he is an apple pie.....at d end i mean that they both r soo sweet....lol..mayank is just awesome .......he really loves nupur....mayank scolding nupur when she got her hand cut was d best part............ awwwwwwww gladdd u liked it....seriously, mayur are tooooo cute...love them always....

part12-awesome work jigi....this part was just awesome......especially that kiss😳😳thanxxxxx dear, glad u liked it...i wanted to put some romance in it....soo i came up with the kiss...😆

nupur saving mayank from that iron poker and she getting all teary eyed on his narrow escape was totally great.....awwwwww thanxxxxx

part13-d convo btw mayur was hilarious😆 poor mayank....he thought she was asking him about d kiss....yup...mayu is absolutely crazy after nups...😆😆

but d ending seems so damn interesting.....thanxxxxxxxxx

wat will happen to mayur....i hope d twist is nothing too serious.....u will see that soon...*evil grin*

u r making me curious now jigi!!!! plsss update sooooon........whenever possible.....sure dear, i am upd8in 2moro..

ps-sorry for d late comment....these damn exams r d culprits😆

Originally posted by: shaaranya

hey! loved the whole fan fic update soon cant stand the suspense

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

Hey whr r u????Y rnt u updating????Its been ages nw............

Originally posted by: tshq2623

hey...
ur ff is v nice...really liked it...
continue soon...n plz pm me